I love james's pov! And hahaha tbbt!

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AsdfghjklAsdfghjkl great job!

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Can't. Stop. Reading.

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Tongue smackin good!

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Ooooh things are getting spicy!!!

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Awesome! I'm glad she's starting to like hufflepuff, too :-)

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You did an amazing job writing this! I love the story and how you used so much detail and dialog!

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this story is so funny and i love it! please update soon! :) thanks

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OMG lol I nearly died at the end when she was all like MY PRECIOUS lol :D great story can't wait for the next bit

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You keep saying waste, but it should be 'waist'. Waste means rubbish, trash, garbage. Keeps on ruining the romantic feels I have while reading. :(

Also, a few other words like rollar coaster, should be roller coaster ride. Still I'm giving you a perfect 10 because so far I love the story. :)

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Best. Freaking. Story. Ever. Now all you have to do is hurry and finish the next chapter! :)

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I loved the new chapter!! Thank you so much for updating!

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I'm going to go with the refrence is the picture of James on tthe broom?

Author's Response: Yep! :) I thought it would be a fun little thing to throw in there.

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:'( all i have to say is that they HAVE to get together or i will die.

AMMAZING chapter as usual though! :) xx

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Awesome chapter!!! I hope Beth actually has the patience to listen to James soon.
Ps. The refrence to the seventh book is the picture of James. Everyone's in the same position as the one when Harry was younger.

Author's Response: Ten points to Gryffindor!! :)

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This was a really cool chapter!! I think you've pretty much answered everyones questions and you're right, i feel a teensy bit sorry for James. Although, I dont think you should have Beth go back to him straight away, I think you should give her another "love" interest...just a thought, maybe a muggle over the summer holidays! That'd be really cool! :)

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I don't like Adam, that basically sums up my feelings, and honestly James should just tell her the truth, he's a bit of an idiot. But overall a pretty awesome chapter! I've been following this story since the beggining and boy do I love it!!! :) thanks for updating

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I love love love this chapter! Beth is such a brilliant character! Please please write more soon, I can't wait to find out what happens!!!

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This was a really great chapter, I honestly didn't see this coming which is saying something because I can normally see new changes in stories from way off, or maybe I'm losing my touch. Anyways this was great, and please update soon :)

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Wow, I just lost respect for those three guys. They are way too misogynistic, thinking they can make all of Beth's decisions for her and not trusting her or caring about her feelings. So I say Beth ignores all of them and doesn't let any of them control her life as they don't deserve her trust or respect if they behave this way.

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I'm sorry but James's actions really made no sense. If he really didn't want to hurt Beth, he should have just told her what her brothers demanded and they could have been in on the plan together. And he definitely should have talked to her before he asked Rebecca out. And it's pretty messed up of Rebecca to go out with him since she is friends with Beth. I know you are going to have Beth and James end up together, but he is an idiot for letting her brothers interfere in their relationship. Their rational also didn't make sense as James fighting for Beth and willing to stay with her even against his friends' demands would prove a lot more that he liked her than just dumping her because they asked him to. So the guys in this story don't seem to really be that intelligent and I think it should take a lot for Beth to forgive or trust any of them again.

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NEXT CHAPTER! now please! i beg you! :( this chapter was horrible, i hate her brothers right now and i hate jjames for going along with it! :'(

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well that put a damper on my day.

Author's Response: I'm sorry! It'll def. get better. I promise! :)

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oh my goodness...next chapter please? *shrugs* worked last time. Anyway, poor James. Serves him right for making that stupid plan in the first place.

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Next chapter right now please :) Good story so far. Glad to hear there's maybe gonna be a shake up soon. Keep it up!

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