I cant believe it...a SECOND CHAPTER?! HURRAH! for that. I waited so longgg for this...but the chapter was definitely worth it. My favourite part was Hailey's intro...finally Lily gets some sort of a friend, and we all know, friends are the best people to help us in these situations.
I also liked how, towards the end, Lily gets all those voices in her head, telling her of all the things they've 'Heard'. At first I thought it was the other sectionees, but it it became clear that it was Lily's own mind, taunting her...but the last line, It confuses me. Did Harry really say that (because I don't think he ever could've) or was it in her head as well?
Waiting for the next chapter, as well as your response...
Love,
-Dizzy.

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Hello!
Well that was a pretty good chapter. I'm curious to know what Lily has, it seems like she's hearing voices? Interesting and I can't wait for the next chapter!

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Wow. Great chapter! I really could see her insanity here. It was intense.
Shindig :D

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I am reading thus for what feels like the millionth time, and I still can't get over how absolutely, amazingly authentic it is. You have done a God-awesome job.
Just one thing, sonewhere in the chapter, necessary is spelt as 'nicessary'.
And one more thing, every time I see that this story has been updated, but there are no new chapters, I die a little. It is starting to get on my nerves, so please, add the next chapter. Fast.
When you say, not a Lily/OC fic, are you referring to a Lily/Scorpius pairing? Honestly speaking, I hate that ship, but I guess I could make an exeption for this story. It's too good to not read.
If you mean anything else, well, I might just have to kill you. It depends in what happens next. So once again, next time you update, give us Chapter Two.
Love,
-Dizzy.

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What a greaat begining! I'm honestly excited to see where you take this story. I love the dark plot just because its so different and there seems to be something special about it. I'm definitley going to keep reading and I think you've got a fantastic writing style. Brilliant(:

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I really like your story so far!
It's a new take on everything and I thought your description of her thoughts was excellent. Lilly's thoughts are warped and very self-influenced right now because of her state of mind, so I thought it was great how everyone seems to be against her but that may not be the case.
Post soon!

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Wow. That is an amazing start to the story. It's so, so realistic. I hope you never had to experience that. It's not nice. I had tears in my eyes. Just wow.
Shindig :D

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If try to deny that I came looking for a story that reminds me of me id be lying. If I said that i have not found a story that takes me back to all the times I had tried to end my life and remember how I had never been good enough Ide be lying. This first chapter is a window to how my world has been at times in my life
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I have tears in my eyes. Your descriptions are all perfect. I can follow Lily's train of thought and see how she feels. I can see how she thinks she isn't anything and her family aren't doing anything to help.

I'm surprised Harry didn't talk to her though. He seems like the kind of person to do something.

I'm interested to see what happens when Lily is put in St. Mungo's and who this boy will be. Please update soon so I can find out!

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Awesome. Amazing. You can actually feel her emotion and pain. As someone who suffers from depression, I can really connect with this story.

I absolutely love it and I look forward to more!

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Argh! I really want to like this story- it's very well written and quite poignant. But I just can't help thinking how Harry wouldn't ignore Lily like she says he has done. Just quite out of character of him for me.

It's a great idea though- very different. I'll keep reading. I'm just quite sad and skeptical of Harry and Lily's relationship- I just imagine him doting on her.

Just my opininion :) But hey ho, enjoying it. Will read on!

Author's Response: The fact that she see's Harry that way is a major part of the plot and it will be adressed later on in the story, don't worry. I hope you continue reading to find out what it's all about.

Thank you for reviewing, and thank you for the comments about the writing and the idea, they're much appreciated!

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