This was good! I can't wait for the next chapter! But, a quote from the Princess Bride must be used... "I hate waiting." (If you haven't seen that movie, you must). Please update soon! XD
-waves back-Author's Response: Thank you! It means a lot to hear this! And no, I haven't seen that film, but I will sure try to watch it. ^_^ Report Review
I absolutly loved this chapter. It made me laugh and ofcourse the kiss was the absolute highlight, anyway please update soon cant wait to find out what happens next.Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing again! I'm delighted to see that you found it funny. I will be updating Maybe Not Just That One Dance first, as I've only got a few more chapters left. After that, when that's out of the way, I will have my full attention on Connection With A Mudblood! ^_^ Report Review
Its Amazing!! Are you going to write some more?? I hope you do because its really interesting. Please write more!! I Love It!!Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! And yes, I will write more, the next chapter is up for validation; should be up soon. ^_^ Report Review
ha-larius! love the parts where draco gets freaked out by the ipod & bangs his head. also the luggage part to funny ttfn!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I loved writing that part! ^_^ Report Review
This chapter had me laughing the whole way can t wait to find out what happens next, so please update soon.Author's Response: Thank you for another lovely review. When I was reading through, I found it slighty funny too. The next chapter will be updated soon. Look out for it. ^_^ Report Review
Just started reading this one today, and it's written really well! Grammar, spelling, and descriptions are all there.
However, I'm speculating that you're younger than most writers because the characters are acting much like twelve to fifteen-year-olds in certain situations (ex. breaking out into hysterical laughter, or turning somebody else into a clown for amusement). This is common in a lot of young writers' works, and it's understandable because most young people think that way, but twenty-year-old men and women don't act like that very often whatsoever.
I am thoroughly enjoying this so far, though. I don't know how much writing experience you have, but this is rather impressive! Keep up the good work; I look forward to reading the rest of this fanficiton.(:Author's Response: Yes, your speculation is correct, I am younger than most writers on this website. I guess I couldn't have made it more obvious with some of things I've written in this fanfic. To be honest, this is my first time writing fanfics, I had just started last year, and I'm still trying to work on the little kinks of this story as well as my other ones. However, I am delighted to hear that you enjoyed reading this fanfiction so far and I hope to see you again. Thank you for the review! I really appreciate it! Thanks for the crit, too! It will help me improve my future chapters. ^_^ Report Review
I LOVE YOUR STORY IT IS FUNNEYAuthor's Response: Thank you very much for the review. Glad you found it funny. Some more funny things coming up in the next chapter, which is up for validation now, so brace yourself. ^_^ Hope to hear from you again! Report Review
Hey! Told you I'd check your story out ;) Going good (Y) I love the mind reading thing :D xAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for reading my story! Really appreciate it. I'm glad you like the mind reading thing. I hope to hear from you soon! ^_^ Report Review
Superb. Enjoyed the last part of the story very much.
Waiting eagerly for the next chapters.Author's Response: Thank you very much. It means a lot to hear that. I hope to hear from you again. :) Report Review
Yes!yes! Jake is finally in askaban where he deserves to be. I can see dracos and hermiones relation ship escalating from here. I loved this chapter cant wait to find out what happens next.Author's Response: I am so glad that Jake is in Azkaban now, too. Soon you'll see just how much Draco and Hermione's relationship escalates in future chapters. ^_^. Thank you very much for the review! :D Report Review
A very hppy new yr to u :)))
the most awataied chpt. validated at last :D
well omg! i think we r soon gonna know bout the connecetinion i guess..well i loved ur chpt.it was so so so damn gud! I L O V E D I T!
plz plz plz plz plz update soon !
dramoine rockz! ( nd u rock as well as ur storyy )Author's Response: Thank you again for the review! You're so sweet! :') I will try to update as soon as possible. :D.
And as usual, Dramione Rocks! Report Review
Yay ^.^ I love it so much Author's Response: Thank you so much! ^_^ Report Review
I love the dramione in this chapter XD awAuthor's Response: Thank you very much for the review! I really loved writing this part of the story - with Draco being Hermione saviour and all. Anyways, I hope to hear from you soon! xx Report Review
Curious.I'm not sure what's going to happen and that is keeping me intrigued! Happy holidays and update soon after the break! :)Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Merry Christmas! I will update soon after the break! :D Report Review
I'm completely loving this so far !!! Please update soon. I also noticed that you made my story Witch Swap one of your favorites, thank you so much. I couldn't believe it when I saw your user name because I'm reading all of your stories and you're one of my favorite online authors :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! It really means a lot to me. And, yes, I do have Witch Swap as one of my favourite stories, because it's just that good and interesting; I haven't read a story like that. You are so sweet, thank you. :) Report Review
Oh that is perfectly okay we all mess up and I hope that the real chapter comes up soon!Author's Response: Thank you so much for being kind and telling me about the mistake I made, and I really am sorry for that mix up. The next chapter will be up in a few days! :D Report Review
Every time in this chapter Draco called Jake 'Cake' just made me smile. "He was going to teach Cake a lesson." and "The cafe Cake worked in." are just a few of my favourite quotes from this story so far. ^_^ It's nice to see that Hermione's and Draco's relationship is slowly but surely progressing and I can't wait to read the following chapters. You did a great job on this chapter again! :DAuthor's Response: I love that part, whenever Draco calls him 'Cake', it never fails to make me laugh. Also, yes, the relationship of Hermione and Draco is slowly strengthening and soon, they will together, but obviously, I can't tell you when. :P Thanks for the review! :D Report Review
Lol. Draco calling Jake "Cake Guy" totally cracked me up. xD I can't wait to read on and see Draco threaten him. I have feeling it will be immensely satisfying since Jake was just incredibly stupid to assume stuff. xD Another supermegafoxyawesomehot chapter! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you! I found that funny, too. 'Cake'! :P I had just thought of that when I was writing it up. :P Report Review
Draco's and Blaise's friendship dynamic is so funny I laugh all the time when they're interacting with eachother! xD Another great chapter yet again! Can't wait to read the wedding chapter! I believe it's going to be awesome! :PAuthor's Response: Yes, I am really enjoying writing about their interaction with each other, and I laugh, too, whenever I read back. :P Report Review
Great chapter! I can't wait for them both to become temporary aurors and go to Australia! (Providing that they both accept the opportunity of course. :P) It was also great to see Pansy. Another brilliant chapter! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you for reviewing yet again! I love reading them. You will find out soon as to what will happen when they go to Australia... Report Review
Oh my gosh! Can't wait to find out what spell Blaise put on Draco! What ever it is, I'm sure it will be hilarious! Another great and hilarious chapter! Thank you for the little shout out as well! That was really kind of you! ;)Author's Response: I am sorry about the spell part at the end. I will try to fix that as soon as I finish this story. Thanks for reviewing again, though! ^_^
And, you're welcome. ;) Report Review
Excellent chapter! The way you write Hermione and Draco fighting really does remind me of little children which is excellent because that's just how I picture them in my head! :D Another awesome chapter! ;)Author's Response: Thank you! Honestly, I loved writing their fight, and that is really how I portray them, too! :D Report Review
Great chapter! It's great to see that you're not rushing the Dramione relationship! I'm completely loving this story so far! I think it will be interesting to see how Hermione and Jake's relationship goes. ^_^Author's Response: Thank you once again! Yeah, I really don't want to rush, because my story would probably not turn out as good as it may be right now. Thanks again for reviewing. :D Report Review
I love how you write Blaise's character and the way you make him interact with Draco is hilarious. xD Also, when Draco was drunk and Blaise was "giggling like a girl" made me crack up. Another great chapter!Author's Response: Thank you again for reviewing. I love reading them. Yes, Blaise has been one of my favourite characters to write about, the others being Hermione and Draco. I'm happy you found Blaise's girly giggling funny. :D Report Review
Great chapter! It's interesting to see that the connection is somehow increasing in strength since Draco is recieving images of Hermione. Can't wait to read more about it! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it. :) Report Review
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