Yay! New chapter! Rose and Dom are absolutely hilarious, and I actually feel sorry for the McLaggens, Harold is so... Bleh! Can't wait for the next chapter, finally we can see Scorpius! When do we meet Lysander though? Update soon please!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm currently rewriting chapter trois now! :) Don't worry, there will be oodles of Lysander in Chapter 3! :D Report Review
Love it. You're a very humorous writer and I can't waaiit for Scorpius. Please update soonnn! xAuthor's Response: Aw thanks! :) Unfortunately, I had chapter 3 mostly written and my personal laptop crashed. urgh. i'm trying to rewrite it now though, but im a bit frustrated that i lost everything. :( Thanks for the review though! :) Report Review
Even I'm cringing in horror at the thought of Harold and he's fictional! Poor guyAuthor's Response: Ugh, I know he's so repulsive! Just wait until chapter 3! muahahaha :)
I really like it, it's hilarious! The character's are interesting, and I can't wait for Scorpius' appearance. Update soon :)Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter is partially written and hopefully i can get that done today or tomorrow! :) :) Report Review
Hahaha! love it! Great to see a different version of Rose.
Harold is so creepy it made me laugh and Dom is such a bitch but doesn't even realise it! xD
Can't wait to meet a certain Malfoy ;) and too see Rose get some confidence! Update soon!Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you like it! :D I can assure you that there will be /a lot/ more of Harold's creepiness in the next chapter... :) Thanks so much for the review - I lurve them so much! :) :) Report Review
Weird to see a Rose who isn't super firey and snarky but I'm warming up to her. Looking forward to updates!Author's Response: yeah, it must be kind of weird to read rose's opposite personality. i'm glad you're warming up to it though haha. :) thanks for the review and the next chappie should be out soon! :) Report Review
Dom is a bitchhh. I'm sorry, but I don't even think it's in a funny or endearing way. Rose needs to stand up for herself!
I will patiently await Scorpius's sexiness :)Author's Response: haha :) just so you know, i wasn't aiming for her to be likeable, so she's not supposed to be an awesome bitch, she's supposed to be a slutty cantankerous bitch. :) Rose just doesn't know any better than taking Dom's crap... don't worry, she'll find out soon enough with the help of a certain blonde hottie... ;) Report Review
I feel so bad for Rose!!! She needs to get her Gryffindor on and tell Dom off!! With cousins like that, no wonder she doesn't try getting new friends!! Is she the pushover of the family?? I'm assuming she is, since she does everybody's essays for them. That's just sad :(
Also, I keep picturing Emma Stone in my head instead of Emma Roberts. Physically Roberts fits the description more, but the way you've written her, the awkward way she acts and thinks is pure Emma Stone in my mind. Especially when she sings Pocketful of Sunshine :P
I'm so excited to get to see what Scorpius is like!! You're doing an awesome job with this story so far!! I can't wait to read the next chapter :DAuthor's Response: That's so crazy that you mentioned Emma Stone being Rose! After I wrote the second chapter, I pictured her as Stone too! Maybe thats why I had her sing Pocketful of Sunshine. haha :) I first pictured her as Emma R. though... so my mental image flips a lot. :)
And sadly, Rose is a mega pushover pants in desperate need of an attitude adjustment. Malfoy style. :)
Thanks for the review! :) (i enjoy using the smiley sign) Report Review
suuuper good chapter! you definitely got me excited for whats to come! please update soon! xxAuthor's Response: Aww thanks! And thank you also for adding me as a favorite author. :) Report Review
Harold = Oh god just murder me now. He sounds appropriately horrible/disgusting.
Dom = Whatta slut. Her bitchiness is funny, try not to overdo it though.
Rose = Hilarious. Her singing, big words, etc. just make her so likable!
Scorpius = WHERE IS HE!? D:Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for letting me know what you think about the characters! Its uber helpful. :)
Oh, and Scorpius is lurking in Chapter 3... and outside your window. ;) Report Review
Yeek! (That's a term of excitement) Please, your afterword/not thingy has made me extremely hyper. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update son!Author's Response: YEEK! I'm so happy you like it! :) :) Spring break starts soon so hopefully I'll be able to get oodles of writing done! XD Report Review
I better get a hot serving of Scorpius Malfoy! Or I might even ditch this fic!*GASP* I know I can be pretty bad***. You can probably tell because I put stars over the last three letters in that word. Any whoo, your fic is amazingly written and the characters are spot on! I know I'm such a cool-cat huh. I used the term "any whoo".Author's Response: OH NO! :O MALFOY IS COMING! HANG ON! haha thanks! also, just saying "any whoo" and leaving me an awesome review makes you a cool cat. :) Report Review
Seems to me like a pretty decent attempt! I will, however, reserve my judgement till I read the next few chapters. Don't worry though. You've definitely got me intrigued! :DAuthor's Response: good! :) i'm apprehensive/excited for your upcoming judgement! hahaha Report Review
This is a good start, and I adore Rose, who's a charming sweetheart. I just wish it could have been just a little bit longer, but otherwise the plot seems really promising. I like how Rose is different from all the other Roses we already have, and how realistic she seems to be. Please update soon, I really want to find out what happens next!Author's Response: Aww, thanks! :) Don't worry, the next chapter is UBER long, like 3500+ words, and its waiting to be validated! ;D Report Review
Good job this is really good and I like it and I think you should write moreAuthor's Response: Why, thank you! I like your name by the way, although it is slightly morbid. ;) Report Review
:) do you know who this is? Yeah, it's me! Wow! This is underlying fantastic and strangely familiar in a way, haha! I feel like I know someone just like this, or maybe it's myself that this reminds me if... Or it could just be the two of us together everyday doing creepy, strange, out of proportion things! I can't wait to read the other ones when you post them up. Love ya sista!Author's Response: WHO ARE YOU, YOU CREEPING CREEPER!? LEAVE ME ALONE! :)
Bahahaha thank you. :) Just so you know the 'SlushieMix' made me giggle. It was like you figured I might be too daft to figure out the review was from you so you had to put an obvious nickname to reassure me. lol :) I'm just kidding. XD But thanks for the lovely review and I love ya too sista! :) Report Review
Yey, I have found another interesting story!! I really wonder where this will go! I am loving it!Author's Response: Thanks! :) I am really happy that you are enjoying it and hopefully the next chapter will be out very soon (like in the next week) unfortunately i have had some personal difficulties getting the next chapter in :( but, i'll try and update super speedily next time. thanks again! :) Report Review
Jealousy at the sheer awesomeness so far despite it only being one chapter! I really love your interpretation of Rose because it's refreshing from normal characterisation of her. So magical pixie/ fairy dust brownie points to you, you giant flapjack! (Sorry I give stuff ratings with food. For example if its good it will be something like a flapjack or chocolate fudge cake. If something is bad it's brussel sprouts or mushrooms. Not at all weird I think you'll find)
Anyways I'm so excited for the next chapter and see what Scorpius is like. This is really good so update soon.
10/10Author's Response: Haha, thanks! Your review left me smiling like an idiot! XD And its so funny you mentioned brussels sprouts considering I had an entire chapter written out with a small monologue sort of deal on brussels sprouts. I am completely serious! That chapter got sent to the recycling bin haha! But the next chapter is in the queue! Not sure how I feel about it, but I can assure this one doesn't include a two paragraph ramble about veggies. :) Report Review
so good! please write more, its amazing so far! :)Author's Response: Thank you! :) The next chapter is partially written and will be submitted by Sunday. I don't know when it will be validated though... But thanks :) Report Review
Great into :)
It sounds really interesting and unique. I like how Rose is humble and ridiculous. I like how she fell in love with his smile and brains even though he's incredibly attractive. I'm especially looking forward to finding out why Scorpius is her enemy and why he decided to help her.
And I like how you didn't cram all that into the intro -it's a little mystery that makes us curious about the next chapter and prevents us from getting too bogged down with the background info all at once.
Sorry for the mixup..lol :)
Please update soon!Author's Response: Thank you! And don't feel bad about the mixup in the least. It actually made me laugh a little because I was like, "Wow, she can't possibly be talking about my story..." and I was really confuzzled. But I am always getting random people on here mixed up too. haha. :) Report Review
This was a great start!! Looking forward to the next chapter :)Author's Response: Thank you! It's getting there. I was planning on having the next chapter done this week, but my French teacher went mad and decided to burden my class with about five projects this week. :p But this weekend I will get it done and submitted! :) Report Review
Wow I was surprised when I saw that it was Rose. She is so different to all of the others that I've read! Which is a good thing ;) And pairing her with Lysander...interesting! Very original! I can't wait to meet Scorpius though ;) And for him to teach his naughtiness ;P Awesome story :)Author's Response: Hahaha! Yeah, I realized that a snappy, firey Rose was sort of the cliche, so I thought it would be fun to give her a softie, nice girl personality. :) Thank you! Report Review
I really like the concept :) it's original and it's good to see something unique rather than the overused stories. Your writing is also really good, grammatically correct and shit
Update, yeah?Author's Response: Aww thanks! :D I am so sorry this hasn't been updated yet. This weekend I will be writing and submitting the next chapter for sure. And possibly watching a few cheezy movies. But, other than that, writing. Yep. :) Report Review
Good work!! Looking reading to hearing more :)Author's Response: I'm really glad you guys like it! :) Report Review
This sounds like a great story! Keep it up :)Author's Response: Thank you! I am ecstatic this is being received so well! :) Report Review
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