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Review #26, by RelentlessFire The Art of Colliding with Arrogant Crumbums Whilst Thrift Shopping (Or Rapping About It)

30th November 2013:
I totally loved it! HAHAHAHA still laughing, every time I fell like I'd just want Rose to grow some balls and replay to the darn Malfoy idiot with an incredibly witty and snarky comment!
Please update soon :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Rose growing balls might be slightly too graphic to write about, but I'll definitely consider it.. ;) bahaa (I apologize for my lame sense of humor.) But, yeah, I think that there might be some retaliation in order... :D Just so you know, your reviews always make me laugh RelentlessFire. :D Thanks!

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Review #27, by RelentlessFire The Art of Fraternizing with Puppy-Kicking, Child-Punting, Owl-Punching Ruffians

30th November 2013:
Seriously?! This chapter just made me laugh sooo hard!! Oh my god! You must be one of the best writers in the history of Fanfiction. yeah I actually loooved the awkwardness, the sarcasm and it was just amazingly hilarious. Am I the only one who thinks Malfoy and Weasley are weirdly perfect for each other?
Update soon, in the meantime I'll happily read the other chapters.

Author's Response: Yay! I love when people say I made them laugh! And you're comment about me being one of the best writers in the history of fanfiction is probably going to make me smile for the next few days, at least. :D Haha, I'll try to update soon! Chapter 7 is definitely in the works! Prepare for A LOT of awkward. :o Thanks for the amazeballs review!

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Review #28, by Lucinda The Art of Colliding with Arrogant Crumbums Whilst Thrift Shopping (Or Rapping About It)

30th November 2013:
Yayyy!!! So glad you updated, please put up the next chapter asap. I love the comedy as usual, Malfoy is not an arrogant crumbum, he's just trying to teach Rose a lesson. If only she would grow a backbone and punt anyone she feels like. Looking forward to your next chapter, keep up the awesome work :)

Author's Response: Thanks! :D I'm working on the next chapter now - so hopefully it won't be a dreadfully long wait. I wish I could just write all day instead of spending my hours getting suckerpunched by calculus haha. Yeah, Rose definitely needs a little spine. She just hasn't realized her inner Gryffindor... yet. :) Thank you for your lovely review!

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Review #29, by WithLove The Art of Colliding with Arrogant Crumbums Whilst Thrift Shopping (Or Rapping About It)

27th November 2013:
I think Rose might be my spirit animal... or possibly Harold. I like to think I'm endearingly awkward like Rose, but I'm probably just creepy and uncomfortable like Harold.

I seriously love this story. I threw out my voice laughing at this chapter and had to lie to everyone telling them I was developing a cold. Worth it.

Author's Response: Oh my goodness, I'm in love with your review. I think you're probably the first person that didn't utterly and entirely loathe Harold! haha. That being said, I'm sure you're not like Harold because you use terms like 'spirit animal' and make me smile and that just makes you supermegafoxyawesomeamazing, unlike Harold. :) Thank you so much for your review! I'm sorry that you laughed hard enough to throw off your voice, but I also feel really accomplished... :)

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Review #30, by anneh The Art of Colliding with Arrogant Crumbums Whilst Thrift Shopping (Or Rapping About It)

21st November 2013:
b-b-best scorose humor! fic ever.
i'm cra cking up.
please update soon!

Author's Response: WOW, thank you! Its the absolute best when people tell me I made them crack up! I feel more accomplished now!

I will REALLY try! :) Thanks!

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Review #31, by AlexFan The Art of Colliding with Arrogant Crumbums Whilst Thrift Shopping (Or Rapping About It)

20th November 2013:
I feel like Rose is the definition of tumblr in the wizarding world. I relate to her on a spiritual level, you feel me? I totally feel you about the school overloading thing. It's a pain but you gotta do it.

I feel really bad for Rose though because she just lets everyone walk all over her. She never says no, she never stands up to people, she just lets everyone push her around. And now that I think about it, I don't think Malfoy is going to teach Rose how to be bad, I think he's just going to show her that she doesn't have to be the welcome mat for people to wipe their feet on.

Malfoy can be a little bit of a jerk, but I think that he might actually, really want to help Rose out because he sees how her family treats her. And if that's the case, I've just become loads more fond of Malfoy.

And I like the relationship that he and Rose have going on. They're not necessarily friends but they're not completely uncivilized. They're like two people that have been best friends with each other for a long time and like to push each others buttons.

And I was just done with Dom, she was just really annoying, I can understand how Rose doesn't like her sometimes. The part about how Dom pushes her out of bed though really saddened me. I don't know man, I just feel really bad for Rose and the way that her family treats her. And the sad thing is, I'm fairly certain that Scorpius is going to end up treating Rose better than her cousins.

Speaking of Rose, she was a lot funnier this time and she just seemed really realistic and relatable. She sounds like someone that I would be friends with and overprotective of. I just really want to give her a hug.

But anyway, awesome chapter!

Author's Response: Bahaha I love the tumblr reference! As a tumblr addict myself, I totally feel you. You're right though, she really does encompass tumblr users... unhealthy lack of self-esteem, bipolarity, hyperactivity, nonsensical cognitive process... ;) And thanks for your sympathy about school; i'm literally drowning under piles of work. Ugh. :p

Yeah, Rose definitely needs to reexamine herself and the people she surrounds herself with. I haven't really allowed her to interact with her family during the story so far though. So hopefully after I introduce some of her other cousins, it will become apparent that their relationship isn't completely parasitic. Of course, Rose and Dom's 'friendship' is toxic. While Rose DOES allow her other cousins to walk over her, however, their relationship isn't at all like the dynamic between Rose and Dom. I'll try to expound upon Rose's other relationships in later chapters though. :) Because Albus and James, for instance, aren't completely detestable (like Dom). :)

I'm glad you're warming up to her! She would appreciate your virtual hug haha.

Thank you for the thoughtful review. It means a lot when readers leave a comment, let alone provide an analysis of the story. A reader's perspective really helps when I'm writing. Plus, I LOVE hearing feedback in general. Thank you so so much! :D

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Review #32, by Lyd The Art of Colliding with Arrogant Crumbums Whilst Thrift Shopping (Or Rapping About It)

20th November 2013:

P.S. It was great :D

Author's Response: ... But I was trying to portray him in an adorable light. :( #failed author

Thanks for the review, "Slydia" ;) ;)

PS- Ringo. 16. *wink wink*

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Review #33, by Nell The Art of Colliding with Arrogant Crumbums Whilst Thrift Shopping (Or Rapping About It)

20th November 2013:
Cute!! Update soon :D

Author's Response: Dawww thank you! I will try! :)

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Review #34, by Calendula The Art of Colliding with Arrogant Crumbums Whilst Thrift Shopping (Or Rapping About It)

20th November 2013:
This story is fun and I like it! It needs more Scorpius though, he's the best! Looking forward to the next update!

Author's Response: Yay! :) I can personally guarantee a CHAPTER FULL of Scorpius for #7! Yeah, I do kind of like him myself. :P Thank you for the review!

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Review #35, by rwsm The Art of Fraternizing with Puppy-Kicking, Child-Punting, Owl-Punching Ruffians

17th August 2013:
Your story is brilliant!

I was a little put off at first by Rose's over-thinking and her being taken advantage of but I kept reading. I'm really glad I did!

This chapter finished to convince me that the story is simply brilliant: I laughed so much --in the middle of the night -- my neighbors are going to hate me--

In the end, I really like Rose (even with her craziness or maybe because of that precisely, as Malfoy would say! lol). Also, it's not until this chapter that I realized I was more like her than I thought I was.

As for Malfoy, just one word: W-O-W!

Author's Response: Aww! Thank you so much!

So I won you over!? Yay! It makes me feel like I've accomplished something lol. I'm glad you decided to give it a chance though! I feel like I shouldn't be though because now I probably jinxed it and now the next chapter is going to drive you away... And there I go with my overthinking again. I'm glad you're at least enjoying it for now though! haha :) Hopefully we have a future together though!

Thank you for your wonderful review! Its the absolute BEST feeling when people tell me I made them laugh! :D

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Review #36, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVER The Art of Fraternizing with Puppy-Kicking, Child-Punting, Owl-Punching Ruffians

17th August 2013:
This chapter had me laughing so much I honestly started crying at one point xD I love Rose's border-line insanity and it is brilliantly done, even so much as you start to understand her insanity :D
I also love the way you wrote Scorpius and I love the relationship they're starting to develop :) I hope you can update soon because I am becoming addicted to this story :3

Author's Response: Oh my God, that makes me so happy to hear!! Unless, of course, you had places to be and were wearing makeup and had mascara running down your face. Then that actually makes me feel guilty. But, still, yay!

Thank you! I'm really glad you like it! Sorry for the long wait, but the next chap is in the queue as of now! :) (Sorry for my terrible updating skills :( ) But thank you for the sweet review!

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Review #37, by :) The Art of Eluding the Scooching Game

17th August 2013:

Author's Response: Thank you?

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Review #38, by eclipse The Art of Fraternizing with Puppy-Kicking, Child-Punting, Owl-Punching Ruffians

16th August 2013:
I love Malfoy. I enjoyed his sarcasm and love how he mostly acknowledges her by saying "love" or "little red". I am really looking forward to reading their interactions during their art of being bad lessons.

Author's Response: Haha thank you! I'm elated about the positive feedback on Malfoy. And, just so you know, the official badness lessons are going to be pretty insane. So prepare... ;)

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Review #39, by Albus Potter's Woman The Art of Fraternizing with Puppy-Kicking, Child-Punting, Owl-Punching Ruffians

16th August 2013:
UPDATE WOMAN OR I WILL GO MAD!!! Excellent chapter btw, I probably looked like Rose because of my excessive laughter. I really like this potrayal of Rose and the exaggeration of her innocence. BUT I'd like it even more if you updated ygm? Wink wink, nudge nudge. Great work! :)
-Albus Potter's Woman

Author's Response: I'M SORRY! DON'T PUNCH ME! Actually, that would probably be good reinforcement for updating, so proceed (with caution.) :) Thank you! I'm also sorry about the long wait. :( Next chapter is in the queue as of today though!

... Yeah a three month wait isn't very good is it? At least its half the time it usually takes, eh? CUE THE CELEBRATION! :D

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Review #40, by Anna The Art of Fraternizing with Puppy-Kicking, Child-Punting, Owl-Punching Ruffians

15th August 2013:
Malfoy is perfect.
Lysander is perfect.
Rose makes me double over in laughter.
Please. Please. Please. Please Update.

Author's Response: You, Anna, are perfect.
Your review is perfect.
You make me smile.

Oh my Gosh I feel like that sounded really creepy but I meant it though and I hope you're not scared. Anyway, the next chappie is in the queue! :) Thank you for your review!

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Review #41, by Midnight Spark The Art of Fraternizing with Puppy-Kicking, Child-Punting, Owl-Punching Ruffians

15th August 2013:
I LOVE SCORPIUS MALFOY! HE'S SUCH A BADASS! Oh, I wish I could write stories like you! Mine has 2 chaps and people just read and don't find it important to review.. :(

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you! Aww that's so nice! I'm sure if you keep writing, you'll build up a fanbase someday. Captivating banners and popular pairings attract a lot of readers and potential reviewers. As far as banners are concerned, everyone at The Dark Arts is EXTREMELY talented. If you don't have a banner already I would check it out. :) Also, I'm not sure if links are allowed, but if you provided a link -- or if you reviewed from your logged in hpff account -- I'd love to check out your story! :)

Thank you for the sweet review, love. :)

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Review #42, by eatmycupcakes The Art of Fraternizing with Puppy-Kicking, Child-Punting, Owl-Punching Ruffians

14th August 2013:
I absolutely fucking love this. I was in stiches the entire time I was reading this. Please, please,please write more. I want to see what she does next.

Author's Response: Well I absolutely effing love you, eatmycupcakes. Haha that's awesome! I consider a day I made a person laugh a successful day. Of course, the day I made you laugh was about three months ago. And I'm probably not that funny in real life -- I use puns a lot -- so I haven't spent a day well in awhile. Anyway, the next chappie is in the queue!

Thanks for the review!! :)

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Review #43, by AgentGalini The Art of Fraternizing with Puppy-Kicking, Child-Punting, Owl-Punching Ruffians

11th August 2013:
I think I'm going to fucking cry if you don't update this SOON! Rose is so goodamne crazy, I just end up in tears while laughing at her actions or/and thoughts. Scorpious, well frankly, is awesome. They both have a very.strange kind of relationship. Probably better than with the nutter she went on a date with. I'm still laughing at this tragic moment. God, you have SO FUCKIN' GOOD writig skills, I can't even describe it.
Please update soon. I'm dying here.

Author's Response: ... I hope three months classifies as soon?

Probably not. I'm sorry. :( I hope you didn't cry. :( I'm just a terrible updater. I'm glad you're fond of the story and my characters though.

Haha thank you so much! You have literally broughteth a smile uponeth my faceth. (Sorry I've been watching too many movies with Shakespeare roots lately, namely 10 things I hate about you which is pretty much the most adorable film.)

But anyway, thank you again for your amazesauce review! :)

Also your reviewer name is cool.

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Review #44, by Laura The Art of Fraternizing with Puppy-Kicking, Child-Punting, Owl-Punching Ruffians

5th August 2013:
OMG! I absolutely love your fanfic! I am so glad that you FINALLY wrote your next chapter :) I love how horribly awkward Rose is... sort of like me, or any antisocial teenage girl for that matter! I'm sorry you were sick and stressed, but you definitely made up for lost time with this chapter! Cheers, and I can't wait for your next chapter.

Author's Response: Hi! :) I am glad I finally wrote my next chapter as well. Sorry about the long wait. Yeah... half a year. Oops. :/ Thank you for your concern about my health though, you're so sweet! Rose is sort of like me also so we should be awkward, antisocial teenage girls together! haha :) Thank you so much for the review! :D

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Review #45, by Rose Routh The Art of Fraternizing with Puppy-Kicking, Child-Punting, Owl-Punching Ruffians

5th August 2013:
And Rose.
And your story.
I wish I could have Puppy-Kicking, Child-Punting, Owl-Punching Malfoy all to myself.
I hope you update soon, I'm really excited to know what happens.

Author's Response: YAY! You have no idea how excited I am about the positive response to Malfoy!
I wish that as well bahaha
Thank you for the review and hugs to you! :)

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Review #46, by Serendipity1234 The Art of Fraternizing with Puppy-Kicking, Child-Punting, Owl-Punching Ruffians

5th August 2013:
THIS MAKES ME SO HAPPY. I loved all of it! Your chapters are always hilarious and original and well worth the wait :) In most stories when the author doesn't update frequently, you kind of forget the particular traits of the characters because most hpff are sort of similar, but your Rose is one of a few I never forget because she's so fabulously unique and awesome. She's also one of my all-time favorite characters.

When I saw that you updated I just freaked out. I was so excited and you didn't disappoint! I adore Malfoy already. He seems like kind of a bad boy but he's also sweet. I get the feeling that he doesn't really want other people to know that though. I think he has a crush on Rose and that's why he's helping her (which makes sense because that's sort of the plot you've been hinting at this whole time haha). I could tell because of all the winking, brushing her hair out of her face, teasing, and getting jealous over her crush on Lysander. I like that you didn't make it too obvious right away though. I mean there were a lot of hints, but it's not like slapping-you-in-the-face obvious. It's the first interaction between the two of them and an excellent introduction of Scorpius.

What I'm wondering now is why Scorpius doesn't like Lysander -if it's just because he's jealous or if he has some other reasoning for that. Also how long Scorpius has liked Rose -whether it's completely new and he hasn't quite figured it out himself yet or if he's liked her for a long time...or I suppose I could be wrong about his crush and maybe he just finds her endearing right now and is acting like a friend but will fall for her later...there are lots of possibilities...I kinda think he likes her though.

Anyway, I'm rambling, but I like Malfoy. I like him for Rose and I like how he seems to care about her well-being and what she has to say. And I like that he gives her good advice -to stand up for herself. I'm looking forward to seeing her do that :)

Update soon!! (Please...if you did make my day!!)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your fabulous review! You have no idea how much I look forward to your reviews and how smiley they make me. :) Also the fact that Rose is one of your all-time favorites makes me so happy since Rose is basically me... well her internal personality. I'm definitely not as much as a pushover. I also like to think I'm a little less mental but I know I'm equally as haha. :p

I'm also so sorry that my updates are so infrequent. I'm awful about updating, which is really unfair to all my readers. :( But thank you for sticking around and supplying me with such magically wonderful feedback when I don't deserve it. This sounds kind of weird but I always think of you as an ally, Serendipity1234. Which probably doesn't make any sense and also sounds kind of creepy, but I just feel like I can count on you... in my darkest moments when I haven't updated in 5 years... in my victories when I FINALLY have the courage to press the submit button... you're just so loyal through all of it. hahaha I apologize if that sounded really weird but I meant in in the most complimentary way. :)

I can't answer to a large part of your thoughts pertaining to the story because I don't want to give anything away, but I thoroughly enjoyed reading them. :) I wish I could respond to all of it because you're so perceptive and I absolutely love how deep you looked into all the character's actions. You're the type of person I would adore discussing literature with. ;)

Yay! I'm so relieved that you like Malfoy. Part of the reason for the lengthy wait was because I had trouble portraying Malfoy in the precise light I wanted to. I think I have him how I want him now, but I'm always figuring things out. :)

I'll try to update soon; I actually have a large part of chapter 6 done! SQUEE! Cross your fingers I won't let my perfectionist tendencies hinder my writing haha.

Thank you so much for the LOVELY LOVELY LOVELY review! It means so much to receive such thoughtful feedback. :)

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Review #47, by fizzingwizzbies The Art of Fraternizing with Puppy-Kicking, Child-Punting, Owl-Punching Ruffians

4th August 2013:
Oh my gosh, love this story! Rose is adorable, Dom is mean but funny, and Scorpius is just lovely! Can't wait to see where you take this story, its already having me in stitches! Haahaaha also looking forward to Rose's being bad lessons! Your characterisation is fab also!

Author's Response: Aw thank you so much! I'm so ecstatic you like Rose and Scorpius... and found a good quality in Dom haha. I can promise you that the badness lessons will be... interesting. ;) Thanks for the review!

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Review #48, by potterwife124 The Art of Fraternizing with Puppy-Kicking, Child-Punting, Owl-Punching Ruffians

1st August 2013:
i am in love with this story!!!

Author's Response: I'm in love with you, 60th reviewer! :D

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Review #49, by Lucinda The Art of Fraternizing with Puppy-Kicking, Child-Punting, Owl-Punching Ruffians

1st August 2013:
Hilarious, as usual. Hope you update again soon! Actually, I don't mind how soon it is, as long as you eventually finish this story because I love it so much! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) Also, thank you for the no-pressure on the next update haha. I'm really going to try to make it snappier this time. And I realize I say that everytime, but still! :) Thanks for the review!

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Review #50, by K_Bear The Art of Fraternizing with Puppy-Kicking, Child-Punting, Owl-Punching Ruffians

31st July 2013:
I loved this chapter! I laughed so hard and Malfoy is awesome and hysterical and attractive and- ah! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon? :)

Author's Response: Aww shmanks! I absolutely love when people tell me I made them laugh and when they like my characters. It makes me so excited. :D And about the update... as you wish. Hopefully. Given I don't fall into my lazy/perfectionist tendencies. bahaha Thanks for the review!

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