Aaaah!!! That was so so good! Please keep writing!!!Author's Response: i've got my semester finals this next week but i'll type up a few chapters over chrimbo hols so i can update quickly once the que is open again from the hols... Report Review
Oh my. Thts really sad!!Author's Response: i agree :( Report Review
Wow. That's . . . not what I pictured Becky looking like, but then again, I'm not sure exactly how I /did/ picture her.
I don't have much else to say, other than that this was a nice bit of fluff (kind of fluff, really) that's probably meant to cushion us for the awful bits when everyone dies. And... baby Amelia! Aw :3
P.S. What purpose do the ratings even serve, anyway? Where can you see what a story's rated?Author's Response: i will after the holidays, i have a bunch of exams coming up! sorry!
and YES, i was ridiculously happy when i found that picture. i always described amelia as looking "very like" her mother in old photos, and when i found the model in this pic that looks SO much like the model i used for amelia in the banners, it made me squee with joy!! yes, i am a nerd, i know...
ratings... pshhh... heck if i know. Report Review
SUCH a sad chapter :( Still great, just sad. All your chapters are quite lovely, thought I've missed them, but yes, that's about all I can say about them (:
Oh. My. Word. I CANNOT believe that this has had 78 chapters already! It sure doesn't seem like that many. That's pretty amazing, ha.Author's Response: I do agree with that, yes, rather a tear-jerker. It does, unfortunately, get a bit worse... *hides under a rock*
I know!! And to think that it's not done. It's turning out to be as much of a monster as my "Full Fledged Auror"... Report Review
Amazing!!! Please keep writing! I love your story!! Can't wait to read more!Author's Response: thank you, and it'll be up soon :) Report Review
FINALLY. an update. i've been waiting so long for one
it was a good chapter, very cute and sad at the same time
i hope nothing happens to Becky D:
xoxo ~Author's Response: I'm about to go load up the next chapter... Sorry about the long wait, college is crazy Report Review
I've been kind of lurking on the site without actually reviewing anything/using my account, but I just wanted to say I love how your writing has matured throughout the story and how you tie all the events in with both the Auror series and JKR's series. I also wanted to tell you to hurry your ass up and finish this so you can write a sequel to the Auror series!
Hugs, AlAuthor's Response: OH MY GOD YOU'RE BACK! I literally just squealed aloud in my room!!! AH!!! I have missed you so :D I've been distracted because of my failing grades *coughanatomysucks* and I've been writing a new Lily/James fic which I'm trying to write as accurately as possible to the timelines and events JKR describes... anyways yes I will go right NOW and post a chapter, but what with my continued ban from trusted author-hood (which I point out I still don't know why it was taken from me) it might be a bit before it actually gets published...
/rant lol Report Review
Me'n Sirius decided to wait. Are they really gay? :D
Adore Lily and Sirius the most.
Love this fic so far!
Keep up the VERY good work!
124/10Author's Response: haha 124/10 that made me giggle. glad youre enjoying the humour Report Review
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY TO LIKE. OMG THAT WAS AMAZING.
lol like that was amazing. you HAVE HAVE HAVE to update, you hear me? i came home at 3 in the afternoon, read until 7, finished it, but i didnt have enough time to review until now. it was like. AMAAAZINGGG. :o I LOVE SIRIUS, I LOVE JAMES, I LOVE LUPIN, AND I CERTAINLY LOVE LILY !Author's Response: I cant believe you read it all that fast!! wow!! I'm gonna try to get an update on here before I'm off out of state for a few days... sorry in advance for that. Report Review
ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL I LOVE SIRIUS SO MUCH IT IS NOT FUNNY.
omg i cant stop laughing.
omg that was the best way to end that chapter OMG ROFL !Author's Response: Well im glad you are enjoying it thusfar :D Report Review
If...I...were...gay...I...would...fancy...you... (but only if you.BLOODY GET WELL!!)
OMG OMG YOU ARE HILARIOUS. i love sirius black :D
lol i just had to review this chapter.
but one thing; THERE BETTER BE SOME LILY/JAMES going on soon before i go nuttersAuthor's Response: There will, I promise Report Review
`No, Jamsie, if I were gay I am quite sure I`d fancy you,` Sirius said, rolling his eyes. `In fact, I think I do right now and I`m not even gay. Damn, mate, how do I resist you?!` James made an alarmed face, and Sirius glared at him. `I WAS JOKING!`
`Seriously, you would fancy me if you were gay, right?`
OMG ROFL THAT WAS LIKE HILARIOUS . omg i cant stop laughing. hahahahhaa.
but uhm, i just needed to let that out. i'll write my actual review at the end ;) but so far, its a total 10/10Author's Response: That is literally one of my favorite conversations between James and Sirius. James being egotistical, Sirius being sarcastic... love it :D Report Review
ON both sides.
Well, ya know what they say.
Wait, they don't say that.
Nice last line.Author's Response: indeed, unbridgeypoo was there. makes you shudder a bit, nah? but yes, yes, evil minds do think alike XD Report Review
i thought she got, erm. well raped, and i know that if that happened to me i would not be able to easily joke about sex. I mean you just feel violated... anyway. i like your writing immensly.Author's Response: I do understand your point... I dont know, different people, different reactions. Ive had something similar happen to me and talk about it sometimes... I also talk about my sister offing herself without much problem. I think it doesn't bother me because the shock value is pretty good, being able to see other people get upset by it (almost) entertains me. It's always nice to actually see people feel some emotion in reaction to the things I say... Report Review
I LOVED it!
It was great!!!
Especially near the ending, when Sirius was babbling, as Lily stood there.Author's Response: I just am certain on all deep levels within me that awkward moments such as that one would occur pretty much daiily with a bloke like Sirius running about... Report Review
Still as fantastic as ever :)Author's Response: I'm glad you are enjoying it :) Report Review
Great second Chapter... I am really liking the plot.
JessAuthor's Response: Hurrah!! :D Report Review
ohhh great first chapter
This should be a great read [:
JessAuthor's Response: I think you'll enjoy it :) Report Review
YAY! thank you sooo much for updating! i Author's Response: no problemo! the server fix was killing me, i wasnt able to post it when i got finished with it... Report Review
awwiee yayy thier good boyss!
hahah i loved the mad scientiest and his little minion ;)Author's Response: Deep down they are, yea XD
and yes wasnt that entertaining? I thought so!! Report Review
it took me four days but i've finally read it
what a fabulous story! update soon, its so addictive :)Author's Response: am working on the netxt chapter, but as the submissions are down for the next few days due to server maintenence... *le sigh* asap though. Report Review
Lily laughed, smiling fondly down at her goofball of a husband. Grinning, he rubbed a hand under her belly button, and kissed it. “And hey, don’t worry about things goin’ on out here. Your daddy’s gonna make it all right for you.”
that's beautiful. your story is wonderful :)Author's Response: Isn't that the most adorable thing you've ever read? GOD do I wish men were actually like this. Kudos to any men out there who are. Report Review
this is one of my favvvorite stories! luv it!!! add mor soon :)Author's Response: I know, I really need to. I've got the next few days off work so I'll be able to get around to it. Report Review
haha. loved itt! I liked how he's really only concerned about quidditch. =]Author's Response: glad you liked it. i thought it would add in some much-needed humor :P Report Review
Nice story. I don't know what else to say. Kinda incomplete tho, but, still, nice and sweet.Author's Response: it is incomplete. Report Review
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