I am really liking the story so far and can't wait to see where you go with it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review!!! I've actually sort of figured out where I want to go with this story so I'm super excited! I changed the first part of this chapter so you should go check it out!

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Great chapter!! Building up the tension necessary for a good narrative :). I wait eagerly for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I suppose I should've responded to this review with my response to your chapter 3 review, but I didn't. Whatevs. So yeah. Chapter 5 is on its way. And you are my favourite person for constantly reviewing! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! You do not know how much this means to me! And again, Abby Finnigan will waltz across the lovely page in Chapter 5!

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WILLOW LUVS AL! I know it. Anyway... love how it's coming along and can't wait for the next chapters. :)

Author's Response: Chapter 5 is waiting! And I am not revealing anything about the plot just yet! However, thank you for the prediction! BTW, Abby Finnigan makes her entrance in the next chapter! She is wonderful!

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omigoodness! love it! hope there will soon be another chapter soon!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Chapter 3 is now up and Chapter 4 is on its way! Happy reading! :)

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Hee hee! yay for me! (Abby is the right name) I'm so excited to be in a story thats not my own. (Yeah, it's a little sad but I put myself into one of my stories. I wasn't feeling very creative so I didn't even change my name) anyway... that was already too much about me. So now to the story. Great continuation! She's a bit of a b***h for not considering Al's feelings in her little feel-muscles-but-don't-be-friends plan but I think it was appropriate for her character at this stage. There were a couple of awkward sentences in there but you can't expect stories in here to be perfect (and I'm kind of a harsh critic when it comes to grammar and sentence construction stuff) and the great story you're building still showed through! Keep up the good work. :)

Author's Response: Understandably you named a character after yourself! Abby is a great name! Also, Rose is a bit weird with the muscles but it was so cheesy and so Rose it was a must! She's sort of confused about everything right now about life...(more about that in Chapter 3 which will be up any day!!!) Also, I would MUCH prefer criticism to praise so I know how to improve so thank you for that! I know that the grammar stuff isn't quite there and I am basically queen of awkwardly worded sentences! I hope that actually writing and having to edit will improve that! Thank you so much for reviewing! You actually make my day...no matter how cheesy it sounds! :)

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I hope you continue this story! I love Rose/Scorpius fics and you have done some great character development so far.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! Chapter 2 should be validated any day now! Also, in my authors note for Chapter 2 (not up yet) I said I would name a character after the first reviewer...Abby or something different?

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