28 Reviews Found

Review #26, by ScorpiusRose17 Where It All Started

21st May 2012:
Hi there!

So I was cruising through the Archives when I stumbled across your story and thought I would give it a read.

I really like the plot line. I think it is interesting and full of wonder. I like how the story opens and gives you a flashback quickly into the memory of Rose. I thought that the way you described it was quite appealing and so was the rest of the chapter. I also liked how you characterized both her and Albus. I could totally believe that Albus would do this just for Rose.

I can't wait to see how she does with being pregnant not with just one, but with two. I mean this is Rose we are talking about and she is usually smarter than the average person. Hopefully she tells the father and I can't wait to fnd out who it is although I think I may already know. It keeps up the mystery pretty well.

Keep up the awesome writing! =)


Recenseo 2012

Author's Response: hey
This just totally made my night :D

Thank you for reviewing and i'm glad you like it so far.
There are a lot of surpirses along the way and you will find out who the daddy is in chapter 3 which is currently in the que
-potterfan310 :)

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Review #27, by rainstormsatnighttime An Emergency Shopping Trip

19th May 2012:
I really like this story =) I think I know who the Dad is. Phoebe is absolutely brilliant, but I LOVE Al. Can't wait to see what happens next chapter! Update soon! xx

Author's Response: thank you :D
I love Al, he's such a brilliant cousin and best mate to Rose. Pheobe is just mad and i love writing her :)
next chapter should be up within the next week.

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Review #28, by Aria Where It All Started

23rd April 2012:
The father is Scorpius, right?

Author's Response: ahh you'll have to wait and see, it's a mystery

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