Reading Reviews for Letters to Lily
  
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Review #26, by Stella Note 8

28th June 2012:
Cute and fluffy is right! c;

I'll be very as when this ends though. ):

Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you approve! Sadly, there's only two more chapters left but they're longish :)
Thanks for the review!


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Review #27, by Natalieeee Note 7

25th June 2012:
oh this story is so sweet! You're a really good writer. I think you've characterised all of the marauders really well and I can see Lily being like this with her friends too =) and don't worry about this chapter it is good, I liked the fact that James showed Sirius the notes because you know they're so close and everything. And Lily figured it out! The story is so unpredictable! I thought she wouldn't figure it out till the end...

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're liking the story and my characterisations :D
Yeah, I thought that eventually James would shows Sirius the notes because they're as close as brothers and he'd want someone to confide in. Haha, Lily does think it's James but her friends don't so we'll see what happens.
Thanks for the review :)


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Review #28, by Stella Note 7

23rd June 2012:
Amazing! And I have a question. You aren't going to end at note 10, right?! D;

Author's Response: Thank you! Ahah, yeah I am going to end on note 10, sorry!!

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Review #29, by harrypotterfan12345 Note 7

22nd June 2012:
Well just want to let you know, that I didn't dislike this chapter, so don't worry :) I just thought it was kind of short, like not a lot happened. But writers block happens to everyone so it's not a big deal. I'm glad she starting to think it's James though :) I really hope he doesn't mess it up and hurt her. I got kinda concerned when her friends were warning her not to get her hopes up. Thank you for updating :)

Author's Response: Oh good!! I really, really don't like it so it's reassuring to know that people do :)
I've thankfully got over my writers block so hopefully the last few chapters should be more eventful. James won't hurt her any more, he's already learnt from that! Yeah, her friends really don't think it's him so we'll see what happens..
Thank you for the review :)


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Review #30, by Opalpixiechick Note 7

22nd June 2012:
I love your story. I so can not wait to see what happens when she finds out it is James. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like it! You'll find out soon - only three chapters to go!
Thanks for the review :)


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Review #31, by harrypotterfan12345 Note 6

18th June 2012:
I thought this was a great update :) Lily and James are so cute together at the end. I can't wait until she finds out!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked this chapter! Lily will find out eventually ;D
Thank you for the review :)


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Review #32, by Opalpixiechick Note 6

18th June 2012:
I love this chapter. :) Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read the next chapter. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I really enjoyed writing this chapter and the next chapter should be in the queue by tomorrow.
Thanks for the review :)


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Review #33, by Stella Note 6

17th June 2012:
It was really good. I just wish your would have written abot the food fight. Haha. (:

Author's Response: Thank you! I was going to write about the food fight, but it seemed like a good way to end it haha :)
Thanks for the review!


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Review #34, by Haley Note 5

15th June 2012:
This is a great story! More soon please!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter is in the queue and should be out soon :)

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Review #35, by dracolover96 Note 5

13th June 2012:
Very well written. The character of Snape was well written. And I loved how protective James was of Lily :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I wasn't sure how to write Snape so I'm glad you think he's well written. Yeah, James is a softie deep down :)
Thanks for the review!


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Review #36, by Opalpixiechick Note 5

13th June 2012:
I love your story. :) I can't wait to read the next one. Please keep up the great work. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter should be in the queue tomorrow :)
Thanks for the review!!


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Review #37, by Rose_Red6 Note 2

8th June 2012:
"`Potter would never write something so corny and send it to someone. That wouldn't be good for his image`"
Maybe thats why they are anonymous.

Author's Response: Yes, but she doesn't think James would write something like that because he isn't the type of person to do that sort of thing. :)

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Review #38, by Pottergirl7 Note 5

8th June 2012:
i've been following this from the start and i think it's awesome. Everytime i see you've updated a new chapter i get all excited! Please keep them coming! I'd love to read a longer chapter but if it means you update quicker short is okay too!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! My chapters are getting a bit longer, this one is the longest so far and the next one is even longer! Though it's only a short story so they'll never be more than around 2000 words :/
I've already written the next chapter so it should be in the queue in the next few days :)
Thanks for the review!


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Review #39, by Smarties421 Note 4

25th May 2012:
That was really good. You should do some more and finish the story. I really want to know what is going to happen. I have lots of questions going through my head and I need them answered. So please write another one and conutie it.

Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter should be in the queue by next week, so hopefully a couple of your questions will be answered by then.
Thanks for the review! :)


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Review #40, by Lily Evans Note 4

24th May 2012:
I love this! Please post more soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter should be up in about a week :)

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Review #41, by Opalpixiechick Note 4

14th May 2012:
Poor Lily. James is really messin with her head. I love your story. I can't wait to see her reaction when she realizes it is James sending the letters. :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like this story! You will see Lily's reaction at the end of the story.
Thanks for the review :)


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Review #42, by Natalieeee Note 4

13th May 2012:
Hi! oh my gosh this story is so cute!! so adorable I cant wait for the next note!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! The next chapter should be up in about 2 weeks.
Thanks for the review :)


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Review #43, by LilyLunaPotter17 Note 4

13th May 2012:
OMG this is sooo good! Write more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've already started writing chapter 6 so it should be up in about 2 weeks :)

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Review #44, by Opalpixiechick Note 3

11th May 2012:
Poor Lily. James is makin her cry. I love your story. I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, poor Lily. I'm so glad you like this story, the next chapter should be up tonight.
Thanks for the review! :)


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Review #45, by Opalpixiechick Note 2

11th May 2012:
Aww poor Lily. She is starting to like James and doesn't even realize it. :) I can't wait to read the next chapter and see what you have in store.

Author's Response: Yeah, hopefully she will soon xD. Thank you! :)

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Review #46, by Opalpixiechick Note 1

10th May 2012:
Love this chapter. :) Can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story, thanks! :)

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Review #47, by Opalpixiechick The Notes

10th May 2012:
Love how you started this story. The chapter was great. I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

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Review #48, by TheKikGeek Note 3

30th April 2012:
So I'm looking back at all my favorited stories and I see this one. I look at the reviews and think, "This person should have way more reviews than they have. I don't understand why they don't!" Then I think, "Um, maybe I should actually leave a review before I talk crap like that ..."

I think the idea of leaving little notes is really cute. I don't quite understand how that will get Lily to fall in love with James if she doesn't know it's him, you know?

Also, why would James be dating someone else. It's one thing if he is trying to get her jealous, but that would be really mean for the girl he is with to just use her like that and I'm determined to believe James Potter is not that kind of guy. Sirius, maybe. But James?

Anyways, I'm really enjoying this story. Please update soon!

TheKikGeek

Author's Response: Haha thank you! I guess because it's a new story and I'm not a well known author, but anyway, I'm glad you like the idea and you will find out how Lily will fall for him in future chapters.
You'll also find out why James is dating someone else in the next chapter, if they're even dating ;)
Thank you for the review and hopefully I'll update by the end of the week :)


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Review #49, by ewsoucf7 Note 2

9th April 2012:
Aww yay! The beginnings of a budding romance.

The only negative I have is the previous chapter Lily stated that she didn't think James liked her, and that he was only teasing, but in this one she says that he doesn't like her anymore.

However, I really like the direction this is taking. I love that Lily is starting to miss the company of James, even if it did annoy her. I think perhaps she is starting to realize that she liked the attention just a little?

Cannot wait to see what you come up with for the next note. Update soon? =]

Author's Response: Lily is confused about James, deep down she knows that James actually likes her but she says that he's just teasing her because she doesn't like him - I hope that clears it up!
Yeah, you'll find out how Lily feels about James ignoring her in the next chapters.
I'm currently looking through and editing chapter 4 so it should be up soon.
Thank you for the review :)


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Review #50, by ewsoucf7 Note 1

9th April 2012:
Im really enjoying this so far. I haven't read a Lily/James in sooo long. I used to ship them ages ago, so I'm glad I'm not disappointed with this.

One thing though, I am really confused as to why James denied sending the note? Was it to avoid a confrontation? To keep her guessing? Romance? Oww, I don't know. I do hope it becomes clearer though.

I honestly think you're doing a great job so far, and you should keep going. Have faith in your writing abilities because you are very good. =]

Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking this! You'll find out in the next chapter why James denied sending the note. Thank you so much, I'm quite new to writing fanfiction so I'm nervous about my writing style haha.
Thank you for the review :)


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