{reviewid: 2760032, reviewer: 'Jordan'}
26th December 2012:
The feels! Great story i loved every minute of it
Author's Response: I am glad you enjoyed the story!
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{reviewid: 2760028, reviewer: 'jordan'}
26th December 2012:
Its so cute and fluffy! Stupid female side lol. I loved it
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{reviewid: 2760023, reviewer: 'Jordan'}
26th December 2012:
Definately not the standard prefect dramione very refreshing
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{reviewid: 2754387, reviewer: 'LadyMalfoy10141920'}
24th November 2012:
OMG I love this story!!! The ending was so sweet that it made me cry
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
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{reviewid: 2752689, reviewer: 'Whit'}
14th November 2012:
Should included more details but I lived it!
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{reviewid: 2752487, reviewer: 'Wylloe'}
13th November 2012:
So I read your whole story and I;m going to be BRUTALLY honest. I think your writing style needs development and your dialogue needs work too. You can tell you're an amateur. I know, however, how hard writing a complete story is, and I loved the concept. You really are a talented writer, and I think with more practice you are going to be an AMAZING writer and maybe go on to get published someday. But it needs work. I'm not trying to be a complete arse though; I just thought you might want some constructive criticism.
Author's Response: I totally want constructive criticism. At least the way you've chosen to do it is constructive as opposed to mean. You are correct; I have never written anything until this year when I discovered fanfiction. Thank you for reading my story though!
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{reviewid: 2750189, reviewer: 'LIzzie%20Anstion'}
3rd November 2012:
I love it!!! This ending brought tears to my eyes. I can't wait for you to write more.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!
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{reviewid: 2748832, reviewer: 'DraMione82'}
28th October 2012:
Hi clumsydolphin
I just finished reading your novel "I'm a What? He's My What? Well Hell". I am very impressed at how you covered their entire lifetime and had a lot of detail in just 17 chapters. I really liked the plot and it was a very good read. Thank you :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I loved this story myself as I was telling it and it became my favorite story of the 11 I have written!
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{reviewid: 2747633, reviewer: 'granger_'}
22nd October 2012:
aaawh LOVE this story... this chapter was soo sweet
Author's Response: Thank you so much. You've always been so supportive with your reviews and it means a lot!
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{reviewid: 2747305, reviewer: 'N'}
20th October 2012:
Truly beautiful.I almost cried. Please keep on writing wonderful stories like this one.
Author's Response: I have so many more stories finished! Google my pen name clumsydolphin and you will find all of them.
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{reviewid: 2747283, reviewer: 'LadyOrobourus'}
20th October 2012:
I absolutely love your story. I'm super sad to see it end.
Author's Response: Thanks, if you google my penname clumsydolphin you will find I have a lot more stories finished.
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{reviewid: 2746566, reviewer: 'MiSTY_VoLPe'}
16th October 2012:
oh its over... sadface
thanks for writing such a great story though! it was fun and enjoyable to read!
keen to see more of your stories in the future!
Author's Response: I have a total of 11 published now. Google me!
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{reviewid: 2746515, reviewer: 'Dramoine%204eva'}
16th October 2012:
OMG!!!
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR STORYY!!!
ITS AMAZING! YOUR AMAZING!!
Please please please continue writing more for Dramione!! please
p.s your AMAZING! :D
Author's Response: lol thanks so much! I am not done writing, I'm done posting at this site. For my other stories google my name!
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{reviewid: 2746402, reviewer: 'Opalpixiechick'}
15th October 2012:
Love this chapter. :) I can't wait to read more
Author's Response: Thanks! and thanks for taking the time to review!
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{reviewid: 2746400, reviewer: 'Opalpixiechick'}
15th October 2012:
Love your story. i can't wait to read the next chapter. :)
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{reviewid: 2746339, reviewer: 'dracos%20lover'}
15th October 2012:
Aw that was such a beautiful ending and it brought tears to my eyes. I loved your book so much please write more.
Author's Response: I already have a lot more but I am not posting here anymore; but you can google me.
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{reviewid: 2746312, reviewer: 'pottermaster97'}
15th October 2012:
awww shame it's over :( xx
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it!
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{reviewid: 2746307, reviewer: 'MsJacksonFeltonMellark'}
| Review #43, by MsJacksonFeltonMellark | Epilogue |
15th October 2012:
I loved this story so much! It's really sad that you are not going to write on this site anymore! :'( Why. oh, why?! ...Anyways, I've absolutely adored your writing for this story. I easpecially loved the ending of this! So sweet! :D
MsJacksonMalfoyMellark
Author's Response: It just takes so long to get a story through here. If you want you can Google my name, I have a total of ten stories already!
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{reviewid: 2746280, reviewer: 'RowlingsGirls_22'}
15th October 2012:
No! Don't stop writing, everyday that I go on here I always look forward to reading yet another chapter in one of your stories. You are one of the most wonderful and consistant writers I have ever had the pleasure of reading. Don't leave please! Or at the very least post on another site and tell us what site!
- DracosCookie
Author's Response: Oh, I'm not going to quit writing. Just google my name, you'll find me!
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{reviewid: 2746182, reviewer: 'MiSTY_VoLPe'}
14th October 2012:
oh yay! love the name!
thanks for updating! great chapter! cant wait to read the epilogue!
keen to see more stories from you in the future! thanks for being such a great and dedicated author!
Author's Response: You have been one of my favorite readers Misty! The epilogue is up but this is my last story at this site. So sorry, and thank you for reading and reviewing all my stories! Google my name for other work of mine.
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{reviewid: 2746055, reviewer: 'dracos%20lover'}
14th October 2012:
An absolutly amazing chapter and book. This book was awsome and so different, i remember cheaking everyday to see if it had been updated and now its finished. Please write more storys.
Author's Response: It happens to be my very favorite story I wrote. I purposely left it open so I could do a sequel if I chose to, so the epilogue is written in such a way that I can pick the story back up. The epilogue is in validation now, but if you want to read more of my stories you must do so on other sites because this is the last I am going to submit here, sadly. All you have to do is google my pen name.
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{reviewid: 2745986, reviewer: 'beautifulweasley'}
14th October 2012:
I definitely love this story its so beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you, it's my favorite of all that I've written.
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{reviewid: 2745933, reviewer: 'pottermaster97'}
13th October 2012:
loved this story from the very beginning such a shame its over
:'( x
Author's Response: It's one of my favorite that I've written. There is still the epilogue coming though!
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{reviewid: 2745884, reviewer: 'granger_'}
13th October 2012:
Haha that was HILARIOUS when she grabbed
his face... Good job loved that chapter made Me
laugh a lot 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks! I had fun with that part myself!
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{reviewid: 2745382, reviewer: 'Emma_Felton4Ever'}
10th October 2012:
That's the end.! NO!
Author's Response: No it's not the end, but close.
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