A nice start to your story. This twin sister of Harry's sounds like an interesting character. I see you kept Ron to form where food was concerned. 9/10 and moving on.Author's Response: Thanks, I have a lot of stuff planned for this story. I might make a short story out of the minor characters. I hope you keep reading! Report Review
its really good you should keep writing. its waaay better then any other fanfictions i've read in the past. keep writing :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! I just got this idea from a dream of mine. I'm actually on chapter six right now. And getting chapter two validated! Keep reading! Report Review
Very intriging beginning. I look forward to reading more. Keep writing. I love you. Your MommaAuthor's Response: Momma, thank you. Report Review
navigation
home
search HPFF read stories write stories login/register get help site links forums podcasts Terms of Service Site Rules contact us
categories & genres
Genre: - crossover - drama - fluff - general - horror/dark - humor - mystery - romance - action/adventure - angst - au - young adult
Popular Pairings: - harry/ginny - ron/hermione - james/lily - draco/hermione - more...
Format: - one-shot - short story - novella - novel - short story collection - songfic
quick links
my account ToS random story site rules help merchandise
fanfictionworld.net