{reviewid: 2745234, reviewer: 'noori'}
| Review #51, by noori | Alone |
10th October 2012:
great!you should write a book:pjust a suggestion
;D
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I would love to write a book some day. It's always been a dream of mine, I just need to come up with an original idea first. But in the mean time, this is keeping me more than occupied. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. x
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{reviewid: 2744337, reviewer: 'It%20is%20Simply%20Magical%20'}
6th October 2012:
What an awesome turn of events! I can not wait for what you have planned with Draco and Hermione! Great writing , keep it up!
Author's Response: Me neither. I have been planning this since January and I can't wait to just get what's in my head written and posted. So glad you like the story and hope you like what's to come even more. x
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{reviewid: 2743719, reviewer: 'Meg%20%3A%29'}
2nd October 2012:
I love this story! I know you just updated, but please write more! :D
Author's Response: Working on it! Just trying to iron a few things out in the early chapters but I'm working on new chapters as well. I am so happy you like it and please keep reading. x
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{reviewid: 2743417, reviewer: 'aguyonnet'}
1st October 2012:
This is amazing! You're a fantastic writer and you HAVE to put more up soon!! I'm dying to know what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Trust me I am working on it. I have so many ideas popping into my head I just need to work out an order for everything. More will definitely be coming shortly. Thanks for reviewing and please keep reading. It's going to get even more interesting very soon. x
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{reviewid: 2743308, reviewer: 'Anonymous'}
30th September 2012:
OH. MY. GOD. Your writing truly does not disappoint and it really isn't worth the wait. It was gloriously wonderful as always and the chapters just keep getting better and better. Usually when I read any fanfiction the first two chapters are really good and then the author just gets lazy and the rest goes downhill eventually, but that did not happen here. They just got better and better and I swear my face is redder than a tomato, xP . Take your time writing the next one, it's no rush. Keep smiling :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Trust me I am defintely smiling. Loving your review so much and I am so glad that you like the story. Personally I agree that the story is getting better. The first few chapters were setting the scene but the story has well and truly started. Please keep reading and thank you so much for reviewing. x
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{reviewid: 2740920, reviewer: 'Theresa'}
18th September 2012:
I hope you write the next chapter REALLY REALLY soon because I'm obsessed with this fic. Love it!
Author's Response: In the process of writing it and it's maybe 80% done. Hopefully it will be with everyone really soon because I know I have kept everyone waiting a very long time and I am so, so sorry, but I am back with everyone and working hard to get it written.
Thanks so much for your great review. x
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{reviewid: 2729725, reviewer: 'griffindorechicky101'}
9th August 2012:
it was awwsssommmee! i cant wait to read more! i cant wait for hermione and draco to get together! i hope you have fun in florida
Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah I know I am desperate for them to be together. I just want to write some of them together. But hopefully it will be very soon. x
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{reviewid: 2721054, reviewer: 'granger_'}
17th July 2012:
Good story things are getting quite intreasting please update soon
Author's Response: Yep they are getting interesting and the next chapter is even more so. I'm about half way there with the chapter but I write in a really strange way so I have the dialogue in the middle part of the chapter written and now I need to go back and add in the detail and the start and the end of the chapter. I'm not an overly logical person but hey it seems to have worked so far.
please keep and eye out for chapter 14 and plese review again to let me know what you think. x
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{reviewid: 2720824, reviewer: 'Meg'}
16th July 2012:
I really enjoyed this story, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you. More will be coming up as soon as I can get it written.
I'm glad you're enjoying it, so please keep reading and reviewing. x
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{reviewid: 2720603, reviewer: 'tragicYETmagic'}
16th July 2012:
I am loving this book more and more. It's amazing. Hey it's Tragic, i just wanted to say how well this book is written and how exact you have gotten the personalities of the characters, hit that right on the nail if i do say so myself. Well done and hope you write more soon.
May the magic be with you.
Author's Response: Thank you that is very sweet. Makes me know that I'm doing a good job and gives me the confidence to keep going. I have never done anything like this before and it feels really good to know people like what I'm doing. I love the characters that I'm writing and from reading the orginal books so much I think I know how would they would act and I'm trying to put that across.
Taking a quick break from writing as we speak, but chapter 14 is being written.
Oh and the magic is always with me ; ) x
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{reviewid: 2720592, reviewer: 'DwellonErised'}
16th July 2012:
This is amazing! How is this your first ever story? Its so well written!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. That is very high praise.
Yeah it's my first ever story and I was so nervous about posting it, but I took a shot and it paid off. I read a lot so I guess some of it has rubbed off. I know it's far from perfect and I will go back and edit at some point, particularly the early chapters, but for now I will keep going.
Thanks so much for choosing to read this story and please keep reviewing. x
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{reviewid: 2720554, reviewer: 'Ravenclaws%20Princess'}
| Review #62, by Ravenclaws Princess | Rage |
16th July 2012:
This is so good! I love hermione's outburst it was just so different!!!
Can't wait to find out what happens next!!! Keep writing
- Ravenclaws Princess
Author's Response: Thanks again for reviewing. Yeah that chapter was so much fun to write. Seems ages ago now that I wrote it but there will be lots more outbursts from Hermione to come.
Really glad you like it so please keep reading and I will keep on writing. x
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{reviewid: 2720536, reviewer: 'Ravenclaws%20Princess'}
16th July 2012:
i love how youve changed hermione from the "mighty cool, calm and oh so smart" to a hardened hermione
great start great writing - keep going
Author's Response: Thank you. Yeah I think she would have changed after the war. After everything she's been through I think she would have hardened.
Don't worry I'm still going and still writing away. Please keep reading and reviewing. x
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{reviewid: 2720516, reviewer: 'Alyssa'}
16th July 2012:
I Love It! :)
Pls do more.soon!
Author's Response: Thanks again. More is coming and will hopefully be on the way soon.
: ) x
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{reviewid: 2720512, reviewer: 'Shortie'}
16th July 2012:
Aw we love your story so of course we'll review :D And please don't hurry. Take your time and write :D always brings better results. Anyway I love this chapter like all the others :D Love Draco *Swoons* Hehe you're a great author.
*Hug*
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much. I know I totally love Draco too. I really hope that the Draco I have in my head is the one that's coming across in the story.
The next chapter is in the process of being written, maybe about half done and there is a lot of Draco, so I think you'll enjoy it.
Love the comments as always, so please keep them coming and keep an eye out for chapter 14. x
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{reviewid: 2720504, reviewer: 'dramione%204%20ever'}
16th July 2012:
awesome like always...i just love the way the story is going and thanks for not rushing things between draco and hermione.=)
Author's Response: Thanks I hope you like whats coming in the future. Yeah I've said before that I really don't think they would just suddenly see each other on the first day back and be like oh my god I love you. It's just not who they are. I think it needs time and I know some people will think it's taking too long but I want it to be as believable as possible, but please stick with me because it will happen soon.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing. x
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{reviewid: 2720400, reviewer: 'James'}
| Review #67, by James | Alone |
15th July 2012:
This is really good and shows the emotional effect of the characters directly after awards.
Author's Response: Thank you. I know it might be a bit depressing at the start but it will pick up later in the story. They have all been through so much that I wanted to show how it had affected them all, particularly Hermione and Draco.
Thanks for reviewing and please keep reviewing. x
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{reviewid: 2718851, reviewer: 'evie'}
11th July 2012:
Please comr back soon!!! I want the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Don't worry it should be with you in the next day or two. Posted it 2 days ago so just keep looking.
Hope you enjoy it and thanks for reviewing. x
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{reviewid: 2718061, reviewer: 'Sparxfly93'}
10th July 2012:
I'm gonna pull a Ginny Weasley and bat boogey hex you if you don't update as soon as possible :)
Author's Response: Eek!! Please store your wand safely away.
Don't worry the next chapter is coming. I will definitely be posting before Friday. It just needs a few tweaks and then it will be ready, but it will be worth the wait. ; )
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{reviewid: 2717595, reviewer: 'Melinda'}
9th July 2012:
Ooh I lurve this story!!!
Author's Response: Hey I'm glad you're enjoying the story now. Your first review wasn't so great so I'm glad you're enjoying it now. I know it takes a while to get into it and it's a slow build up between Draco and Hermione, but I think (I hope) it will be better for it.
Please keep reading and reviewing to let me know what you think.
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{reviewid: 2717207, reviewer: 'nerdygirl411'}
8th July 2012:
This chapter is amazing! It gave me chills.
Author's Response: Ooh thanks. I think this has been my favourite chapter so far. I know what you mean, it's kind of intimate between the two of them and they are so open with each other for the first time.
Thanks for reviewing and please keep reading. It means a lot to know what people are thinking about the story.
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{reviewid: 2717150, reviewer: 'Melinda'}
8th July 2012:
Oh Gosh I never realised Draco's eyes were so gorgeous! Now I'm torn. He's bad but cute!!!
Author's Response: Yeah I kind of have a thing for eyes. I'm a total sucker for a gorgeous pair of eyes and blue/ green eyes are kind of my thing and although Draco's are grey I figured hey let's throw a bit of blue and green in anyway. It's so much easier to write if I can imagine them that way. I'm glad you think he's cute cos in my head he's pretty gorgeous so I'm glad it's coming across that way in my writing.
Thanks for reviewing again.
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{reviewid: 2717145, reviewer: 'Melinda'}
8th July 2012:
GOSH I LURVE THIS CHAPTER!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you're liking it a bit more now. Yeah this chapter was a bit more fun to write. It wasn't quite as intense as some of the others. Hope you enjoy what's coming up.
Thanks for still reading and reviewing. I'm glad you're sticking with the story.
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{reviewid: 2717136, reviewer: 'Melinda'}
| Review #74, by Melinda | Rage |
8th July 2012:
Oh God I'm so sorry but honestly I wish the romance could be mentioned earlier, man. I'm sick of the rivalries and want something different.
Author's Response: Well thanks for giving the story a shot and taking the time to review. I'm sorry you're not liking it but I wanted it to be as realistic as possible. I didn't think that they could really get together that soon in the story after hating each other for so long. It just didn't seem plausible to me. I've read other Dramione stories where they get together in chapter one or two and while they were great, it just didn't seem very realistic that two people who have hated each other for so long would just suddenly change their minds. I've tried to keep their personalities as close to the original's as possible and as we know there is a lot of hate and anger between the two of them and so that's why it will take a while for them to get together.
As for the rivalries I assume you're talking about Gryffindor and Slytherin and it's pretty much the same as above. We know they've been rivals for so long and I don't think that would have changed. We know that in the Deathly Hallows the Slytherins are all still very much for Voldemort and anti- Harry and as this story is set only 3 months after that I figure their attitudes would still be the same. The rivalries between the 2 houses and indeed the characters have been such a big part of the books that they really have to be included.
I hope this helps you to understand the story a bit better. Thanks for taking the time to review anyway and if you choose to keep reading I hope the rest of the story gets better for you.
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{reviewid: 2717131, reviewer: 'MajanMalfoy'}
8th July 2012:
I absolutely love everything; Malfoy's reactions and explanations, his mixed emotions; Hermione not wanting to listen, but she just has to. The plot is perfect!
Author's Response: Thank you. The plot has a lot of twists and turns to go, so I hope you like the way it goes. I'm glad you like the emotions, cos there is a lot more to come. They each have a lot to learn about each other.
Please keep reading and reviewing. The next chapter is on it's way.
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