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Review #26, by Draco0797 Holidays

13th August 2014:
ah I've been waiting FOREVEr for this update and I'm thrilled to say it was worth the wait! this is so good hurry back from your Holiday so i can read more. you are a great writer and i can't wait to read what happens next. Maybe now they can finally be public??? Have fun in Mexico

Author's Response: You'll just have to wait and see, although not too much longer because the next chapter is on the way.
P.S. so sorry it took so long. I had an amazing time in Mexico which in unfortunately why I haven't updated. Jet lag took forever to get over. x

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Review #27, by Apatu Holidays

12th August 2014:
I LOVE THIS !! I love their interactions! I especially loved the part when Hermione sarcastically asked to go to Pudifoots and Draco was like 'OVER MY DEAD BODY!' I, no joke, laughed out loud at that. You're a brilliant writer, keep up the updates! Have fun in Mexico!

Author's Response: Aw that's brilliant. I am glad you are enjoying it.
I had way too much fun in Mexico and I'm afraid my updates have suffered. But I am officially back and the next chapter is on its way. Enjoy! x

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Review #28, by Anna Holidays

10th August 2014:
Is it over ! Omg please dont let it be what happens !

Author's Response: I can officially confirm that it is not over. Don't worry the next chapter is on it's way. Enjoy! x

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Review #29, by Josephine85 Holidays

8th August 2014:
Love the update, great gifts!! And the cliffhanger OMG, can't wait till the next update!!

Author's Response: I am a horrible person. I did not mean to leave the cliffhanger going for so long, but the next chapter is on it's way. Hope you enjoy. x

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Review #30, by Daniela Holidays

7th August 2014:
ah! the cliffhanger literally had me like :0
I cannot wait to see how Harry and Ron react to this (not so ) pleasant surprise. Cannot wait for the next chapter. As always, I will be waiting.

Have fun in Mexico. Be safe,

Daniela xx

Author's Response: I know and I feel so bad leaving it on a cliffhanger for so long. I'm a horrible person, but the next chapter is on it's way.

Mexico is amazing. Had too much fun and no wifi so my writing took a major hit, but I'm back on track.

Hope you enjoy the next chapter. x

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Review #31, by so_slytherin Holidays

7th August 2014:
I just found this story today, read it all and love it so far! I wanted to review every chapter, but just had to keep reading instead. Well paced, believable and lovely to read :D
Keep going x

Author's Response: Wow that's impressive. I love it when you find stories that you get hooked on, so I'm so happy that my story is one of those. The next chapter is on the way, so feel free to review as much as you want. ; ) x

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Review #32, by Loonylovegood67890 Holidays

7th August 2014:
OMG, this is brilliant. I love the story so far and I can't wait for the new chapter! :))

Author's Response: Aw thank you. The new chapter will be with you soon. Hope you enjoy it. x

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Review #33, by ΚΑΤΣ Dates

1st August 2014:
When will the next chapter be up?!?!?! This is driving me crazy!

Author's Response: The chapter has just been submitted. Had a bit of a disaster uploading. Went to Mexico last Saturday a ran out of time to post the chapter before I left. So I was planning to update at the hotel but we don't have wifi and then I've tried a couple of times and it wouldn't submit because of spacing because I'm trying to do this on my phone but finally it has worked. I'm hoping its with you soon. Thanks for the review and sorry for keeping you waiting. X

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Review #34, by 4annie7 Dates

29th July 2014:
Wow! I love your writing, so much. It's much more realistic than the average fanfic story. Thanks for writing, and please update soon!

P.S. Is the next chapter in for validation yet? :)

Author's Response: Aw thanks. Sorry for the slow reply. I've been away on holiday and had no wifi. The horror! Anyway I hope you enjoyed that chapter and like the new one that's on the way. Thanks for the great review. x

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Review #35, by DraconisScarlet3792 Apologies

29th July 2014:
I find this story interesting as that it is not the usual "8th"/"Return 7th" year story. It does not have the immediate throwing the characters together in a shared room with a shared bathroom and they fall madly in bed and live happily ever after until someone has a fit of jealousy or a tantrum then they fight and make up. The allowing for character study of the after effects of war coupled with different situations makes this a more realistic story and one that the reader prefers.

Author's Response: Aw thanks. Yeah I've read a lot of stories and although I like them, it just not always believable to me that they fall in love so quickly. I know this has been slow, but hopefully it's been worth it. Thanks for the great review and I hope you enjoy the next chapter. x

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Review #36, by blackdiamond Dates

27th July 2014:
This story is Great-I am enjoying this so much. Extremely well written and great characterizations. The relationship is progressing at a nice slow realistic pace. I hope someone helps put Hermione's parents straight-they are so disappointing. For Draco's present -he said he has high expectations- so why not the Beauty and Beast book,some kind of neat necklace and a two way journal as days go by without them talking. With an instant write/read two way green leather with silver embosed dragon on cover for Draco and Hermione's a red leather with gold embosed lion on cover encrypted journals they could set up times for where to meet and talk each night before bedtime and only they could read it. It could help them to stay closer. Those three gifts don't have to cost that much. Looking forward to chapter next week. Terrific writting. Thanks so much.

Author's Response: Hey thanks for the great review. Yeah Hermione's parents are interesting and hopefully things will be resolved at some point. Thanks for the present idea. Hopefully you like what I settled for in the end. Thanks for the review and I hope you enjoy the next chapter. x

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Review #37, by SarahKrick Dates

26th July 2014:
I absolutely love this chapter! Sure, I do prefer th longer ones, by this one takes the cake! I appreciate the small details you put in, like how Hermione leans in and out on the couch, because a lot of authors forget about body language. I'm glad see your enjoying writing the story, because I think you should keep going.

Author's Response: Aw thanks. Yeah I do love this story but it's so hard to find the time to write. I feel I got a good run there and hopefully I can keep it up. It's all the details that mean I take forever to write a chapter, but hopefully you'll think it's worth it. Thanks for the review and hope you enjoy the next chapter. x

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Review #38, by Scarlett Lee Dates

25th July 2014:
You are a fabulous writer! I am in love with this story! The way you have portrayed Draco is absolutely fantastic! Please post the rest of the chapters as soon as you can! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Aw thanks. It's so hard to write Draco and keep him true to his character but also make him nicer so Hermione will actually want to be with him. Sorry for the chapter delay but the next chapter is in for validation. Thanks for the review. x

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Review #39, by ΚΑΤΣ Dates

25th July 2014:
Amazing! As usual:) when will the next chapter be up??

Author's Response: Thanks : )
The next chapter will be posted at the beginning of next week but validation is a couple of days at the moment, so should be with you at the end of the next week. Hopefully sooner.
Thanks for reading and let me know what you think of chapter 21. x

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Review #40, by Alicia Parkinson Dates

24th July 2014:
As usual I love this story but this chapter is kinda short don't you think? I hope the next chapter will be a bit longer than this, and more drama ;)

Author's Response: Em not really. This chapter is nearly 5000 words which is more than most authors on this site, but don't say I'm not good to you, the next chapter is over 7000. I know that chapter wasn't very dramatic, but Hermione and Draco need to have some moments where they are good together. Besides this chapter is kind of like the calm before the storm. A few pretty dramatic chapters are on the way. Thanks for reading and reviewing again. x

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Review #41, by Δnna Dates

23rd July 2014:
I'm seriously in LOVE with Draco. Oh my God. Please upload more! And soon:)

Author's Response: Aw thank you. Yeah Draco is pretty awesome. If only guys like that really existed. Hopefully you'll fall in love with him even more in the next chapter, which I am hoping to upload very soon. Thanks for reading and for another great review. x

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Review #42, by KiaRiddle Dates

22nd July 2014:
draco opens his pants!! not heart..althgh it wouldnt hurt if we get to know more about his feelings for hermione...u are an awesome writer.. :-)

Author's Response: Okay you have literally just made me choke whilst reading your review and now I can not stop laughing. Not sure if you're British or American, but pants has a totally different meaning in Britain. As much I think it would be hilarious for Draco to go around flashing people I think that might just scare Hermione off.
Thanks for the two reviews and the lovely comments. You are so amazing and you have definitely given me something to think about. But don't worry you will get to know a lot about Draco and his feelings in the next few chapters so please keep reading and let me know what you think. x

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Review #43, by KiaRiddle Dates

22nd July 2014:
pls pls hurry up with the next chapters..i am absolutely smitten with the way u portrayed draco..loving it..keep up the good work..u are an amazing writer

Author's Response: Aw thanks that is so sweet. I'm so glad that you like Draco, cause I love him too. The fact that people like him means I must be doing something right.
Writing chapter 21 at the moment. Maybe 100 words left to go. Hopefully you'll love Draco even more once you read the next chapter. I just want to give him a big hug.
So hopefully the next chapter will be with you soon, so let me know what you think of it. Once again thanks for the review and please keep reading. x

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Review #44, by Friega Kahlo Dates

22nd July 2014:
I'm thinking she gives him a Snitch pendant that opens up and reveals a picture of both of them, only visible to either Hermione or Draco, to keep their love secret. Love your story!

Author's Response: Thank you that is so sweet. That is a very good idea. I like it. Might steal a wee part of that idea but tweak it. ;)
Have a read at the next chapter and let me know what you think of the eventual chapter.
Thanks for the review and please let me know what you think. x

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Review #45, by peachgirlxo Dates

22nd July 2014:
Im so in love with this fanfic! Every chapter gets better and better. My only complaint is that they're not long enough haha, I can't get enough of Dramione. Please post another chapter up soon! :)

Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah I do like that Draco and Hermione are together. It definitely is making the story more interesting and I know I'm enjoying writing these chapters more, so I'm glad that you're enjoying reading them more.
As for them not being long enough, it's nearly 5000 words. My fingers get cramp from writing. But the next chapter is slightly longer, closer to 6000 words. Don't say I'm not good to you ; ) The next chapter is nearly done, so hopefully it'll be up next week. Let me know what you think. x

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Review #46, by Purple12600 Dates

21st July 2014:
She should get him some classic muggle books!

Author's Response: Yeah books of some sort would definitely fit with Hermione but then Draco has said that he doesn't like books. Shocking! I do like the idea that she gets him something muggle related. Hmm, I have to make a decision. I'll see what happens when I write.
So thanks for reading and reviewing. Let me know what you think of the presents. x

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Review #47, by theWICKEDone Dates

21st July 2014:
First of all I simply love this story and I cannot get enough of it! You're a fabulous writer by the way!

Second of all idea for Draco's present would be to give him a copy of Beauty and the Beast he seemed pretty interested in the story and its a book that means a lot to Hermione so maybe that would work. I don't know just an idea.

Again I love this story and can't wait to read more of it!
Until next chapter,

Author's Response: Aw thank you. That is very sweet.
Thanks for the present idea. The book does seem to be a popular one.
I'm really glad that you like this story and took the time to review. The next chapter should be with you soon, so please let me know what you think. x

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Review #48, by Josephine85 Dates

21st July 2014:
Great chapter again!
The christmas gift hmmm difficult. I think it should be something subtle, which shows her love for him. To big or to romantic doesn't fit their relationship yet. But it's hard because we don't really know Draco. Maybe something which involves a lion and a snake? To show that they can be a fit?
I am not a big help. But keep up the great writing, love it!

Author's Response: Yeah exactly. Draco's present isn't big but it is very meaningful. You've kind of got a bit of Draco's present for Hermione- it shows how they fit.
I think I have an idea- of sorts, I just need to see if I can fit it into what I've written so far.
Every little helps and gets me thinking about what to write. You're the second person who's pointed out to me that we don't really know Draco and that's actually given me an idea for later in the story, so thanks.
So thanks for reading and for reviewing. I hope you like the next chapter. Let me know what you think of the gifts. x

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Review #49, by London Dates

21st July 2014:
Hermione should get Draco Beauty and the Beast!!!:) love this chapter. I love how she opens up to Draco of all people and they still really don't know each other. I hope you update fast!:)

Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion. Yeah a book seems to be a popular suggestion. I know it's a very sweet relationship and it kind of shows how she can't feel like she can really open up to Harry or Ron and Draco's the one who's there for her, which helps to make them closer.
The next update should be with you next week. Hopefully. Thanks again for reading and for the review. x

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Review #50, by Dragon Dancer Dates

21st July 2014:
I don't know weather to say get him a very Serious present, or something that is an inside joke present that is also kind of serious cause it shows her love for him.
He mentions the spell where she gave him bat wings. On the day they got detention. What if she made him a pendant of a snake with bat wings on it? like made out of silver metal. o I got it, have her by something (anything) made of silver, then make her use her wand to makeshift it into a unique gift of the snake with bat wings.

I'll R&R next time.
-Dragon Dancer

P.S: I know my idea of the gift is absolutely ridiculous, but you asked so nicely and I really want the next chapter out, that I just had to give you some sort of "gift". I can't wait to see what she does give him.

Author's Response: Ha that is brilliant. I can just imagine Draco's face if that's what she gave him. I do like something made of silver though. I have a few ideas and I'm trying to see if I can try to combine them.

Thanks for another great review. I look forward to the next one. The next chapter is pretty cool. You will just love Draco. x

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