awesome as always! i am definitely looking forward to the next chapter.:)Author's Response: Thanks so much. Yeah the next chapter is pretty interesting. Nearly finished so should be with you very soon.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing again. x Report Review
write more!!! and fast!!!Author's Response: Working on it. Chapter 16 is on it's way.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. x Report Review
This is def by far the best dramione fanfic I have ever read. I really like the plot and how it is still very realistic when it comes to the relationships with Ron and Harry. I am def stuck on this fanfic and I hope I don't have to wait too long for the next one!
P.s I sent you a review already but I figured a second one wouldn't hurt hahaAuthor's Response: You can write two reviews for each and every chapter as far I'm concerned. I love reading what people are thinking and I love getting reviews. Makes me smile so much.
Anyway thanks so much for your great reviews. I'm glad you think it's realistic and like things with Harry and Ron. I've read too many stories where Hermione chooses Draco over them which I don't think she would do after everything they've been through. Anyway thanks so much for reviewing and please keep on reviewing and reading. x Report Review
Next chapter wowww... Someone seems to be over reactingAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing and for being my 100th review. Actually can't believe I have 100 reviews. Its so amazing.
Anyway the next chapter is coming soon hopefully. I'm working away on it. Do you mean Ron or Hermione is over reacting? I hope you mean Ron's reaction to Draco, cause I think Hermione'e reaction is kind of justified but is explained more in the next chapter. As for Ron, well he's always been a bit of a drama queen.
Anyway please keep reading and please review again. x Report Review
Amazing!!! Yet again! You truly are amazing at writing this story, and I can't wait for more. But take your time also, don't want it to be rushed. So, well to be honest I dont really like Ron that much, he's much too.. cocky for my taste. I don't know. I like Malfoy though (despite the fact that I hated his guts throughout the first six books xD). There's just something about him here in the story that hits close to home.. but anyway great story so far! Keep smiling :).Author's Response: I have been doing a bit of editing to try and make some of the chapters a bit better. I'm never happy with any of the chapters so could edit them forever, so sometimes I just post it because I'm fed up with changing bits and making the whole thing worse.
As for Ron, well he's got his taste of the limelight which he always wanted and he's enjoying it. The war changed him too, although not necessarily for the better. There's still a lot to see of Draco, but he's far from perfect either as Hermione will undoubtedly find out.
Thanks for reviewing again. It's the reviews that keep me smiling and give me the passion to write more and more. x Report Review
PLEASE FINISH THE STORY OMG THIS IS THE BEST FANFIC I HAVE EVER READAuthor's Response: Wow, thank you very much. Very high praise becuase I know how amazing so many of the stories on here are. I love writing it and getting all the feedback, so thank you so much for reading and taking the time to review. Chapter 16 hopefully won't be too long. x Report Review
I think Ron needs to get over himself and try and actually see Draco for who he really is. :P I'm a huge shipper of Draco & Hermione, and I absolutely love your story! Your chapters are so long and that's a good thing! You describe everything so well and have the right details in there, it's just great! Keep writing!!! :)Author's Response: Thanks so much. I know my chapters are long, I just can't stop myself once I get started. There's so much going on in my head that I have to get it all out. Yeah it's surprisingly easy to write Ron as an idiot, but I guess he has to be that way so that Hermione can stop loving him. As for Ron seeing Draco for who he really is, I'm not entirely sure that will happen. Especially not if Draco and Hermione end up together. Like I said in the chapter, Ron is designed to hate Draco.
Anyway thanks so much for reviewing and I will keep on writing so long as people keep reading. So much more to come. x Report Review
it was awsome! please update soon! i cant wait!Author's Response: Thanks so much. I should hopefully upload the new chapter this week. I had a little bit of writers block, but I would say it's about two thirds done. I've just got a small scene left to write and then editing, so hopefully should be finished this week and with you all by next week. Please bear with me. I will be uploading soon.
Oh and thanks for reading and reviewing again. It really means so much that you're sticking with this story and taking the time to review. x Report Review
Amazing story so far! I hope something happens over christmas. Great characterizations and keep up the intense scenes!Author's Response: Yeah I know it is pretty intense. I guess I enjoy writing them more than the light and fluffy stuff.
Funny you should mention Christmas. I'm actually working on that chapter now. I don't really write in order of what happens and I recently had a great idea and so I wrote it down while I remembered it so that chapter is actually about half done. Hopefully you like it.
Once again thanks for your great review and thanks for reading. Hopefully chapter 15 won't take too long to do. x Report Review
that was great,when is the next chapter coming,just cant wait to read it,its just so interesting,god,i dont think i have read such a story before,but wow,14 chapters and its still not finished!just a question that popped into my head,isnt lavender dead,like,didnt a death eater kill her?just out of curiosity.all in all,LOVED IT!!!Author's Response: Yeah lots more to come. Probably not even half way through the story. I have lots more planned.
With Lavender, again I honestly have no idea if she did die or not. In the film she does, but in the book she is attacked by Fenrir and Hermione hexes him off of her and it says that Lavender was still moving. I don't think it says outright that she dies and so for the purpose of this story I like to think that she lived. I probably will go abck when editing and add in a bit more of information about Lavender and why she's back there.
So the next chapter. Who knows when it will be ready. Having a little bit of a writers block. I know what I want to happen in the next two chapters i just don't know what order I want them to happen in and I keep changing my mind. Literally sat on my laptop for two hours last night and did nothing. Hopefully I will be able to sort things out soon. x Report Review
i like your style, it's really nice
your story is well-thought and i like the insight from Hermione's mind. I remember reading DH and stopping at the thing with Hermione's parents and Australia, and i thought it was heart-breaking and it would be so very interesting to explore that in fanfiction. You did that beautifuly.Author's Response: Thanks. There is more to come with Hermione and her parents so hopefully you'll see it explored some more. Thanks so much for your wonderful comments. I've said before a lot in answering reviews i just really didn't think that things would just go abck to normal straight after the war and I didn't think that Hermione's parents would take too well to having their memories wiped and sent half way round the world, so I hope I've done it justice.
Thanks for reading and please keep reviewing. x Report Review
AMAZING!THE MOST AMAZING STORY EVER!!!Author's Response: Thanks. I did like this chapter. My favourite by far so far. Once again thanks so much for reading and reviewing again. x Report Review
LOVE IT!though,it is a bit gross,sorry!Author's Response: Em thanks I think. Not sure which bit is gross, the Cormac bit maybe. If that's it then yes I totally agree, but then it's meant to be disgusting. Thanks for reading and reviewing and I'm glad you're liking it. x Report Review
Such a good story, when's the next chapter coming?Author's Response: Thanks for your review. As for the next chapter, it is totally getting the better if me. I have most of a chapter written, I just don't know if it will be chapter 15 or if it will be 16. I just need to get my ideas sorted. I don't want to take forever and keep everyone waiting, but I'm a bit of a perfectionist as well and I want it to be good. Please stay with me, but I promise it will shouldn't be too long. x Report Review
is there going to be more?Author's Response: Yes there is definetely going to be more. I would say I am probably not even half way through yet. Maybe 40% or something. Lots more exciting things still to come.
Please keep on reading and reviewing. I promise their is lots of good stuff to come. x Report Review
I honestly think highly of this. Your wording and grammar are superb. If you were to get this published, even if it is a fan. fic. I'd love to buy it.Author's Response: Ok wow. Very high praise. I will make a confession though, I am a primary school teacher so I would hope that my grammar is ok. It's good to know that all my teaching about using good adjectives and descriptive phrases are paying off.
I do always go through my chapters a million times before I post them because I am obsessed with the spelling and grammar being right. It can be quite annoying when the grammar is bad in a story and it can put you off, although I know that I totally overuse commas. I tend to go by if in doubt chuck one in, which I do not teach to my kids by the way.
Thanks so much for reading and please keep on reviewing. I love to know what people think. x Report Review
Found this story today and had to read it from the beginning straight through. I love it!!! Can't wait to read more.Author's Response: Thanks so much. I can't wait to write more and I am so glad that people are loving it. Really gives me the motivation to keep on writing.
Hope you keep on reading and please keep reviewing. x Report Review
awesome!though,isnt lavender dead?Author's Response: Yeah to be honest I'm not entirely sure. The film implies that yes she is, but the book is a bit more vague. We know she was attacked by Fenrir and it says that after Hermione fires a curse at him, Lavender was still moving and I don't think it actually says one way or the other that she did die.
In this story I like to think she survived and will be in a similar situation to Bill. I do plan to go back and edit earlier chapters so will add in an explanation about Lavender.
Thanks for reviewing and glad you like it. x Report Review
Brilliant characterisation! I think Draco and Hermione are written so well :) The exploration of the effects of war is also very realistic and the reactions of the characters and wizarding society in the aftermath of war is wonderfully handled in this story. :) I haven't seen these issues explored so sensitively and in-character in any other fanfiction before. Bravo!Author's Response: Wow. Amazing review. Yeah I've said before that I love the idea of Draco and Hermione together and I have read a fair few fanfictions about them, but I always felt that everyone was just too forgiving. I didn't think that they would just see each other again and suddenly realise that they liked each other. I felt it had to be slower and they had to get to know each other first. I also didn't think that life would just return to normal only a few months after the war ended and everyone would still have a lot to deal with, which hopefully I'm covering properly.
I'm seriously glad you like it and thanks for reviewing. x Report Review
I love this chapter! You're a really good writer. :DAuthor's Response: Yeah I loved writing this chapter. It was fun to write and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it too.
Thanks for reviewing. x Report Review
Hello! I think you're a great author, and I really hope that it won't be too long before the next chapter is ready ;)
I can't wait to see what happens next time!Author's Response: Yeah I hope it's not going to be too long either. I know what I want to happen, I'm just having a bit of a hard time putting it into words. As for the story, the next few chapters will be very exiting I hope. I can't wait to write them. I just need to get this one done first. x
P.S thanks for reviewing and for reading and also for your lovely comments. Report Review
This is so good I can't wait for the next chapter. I just read the whole thing in one night and now that it's 12.30am i think i should go to bed
Please update soon I can't wait to read more!Author's Response: Oh my god that's amazing!!! I have been hooked by so many stories on here where I stay up till ungodly hours becuase I just have to know what happens next so it's pretty amazing that someone is doing the same to me. Not that I encourage staying up late of course. I am seriously trying my best to get an update soon. Hopefully it won't be too long. Thanks so much for reading and even more so for reviewing. I love hearing these comments. x Report Review
Great Job! This is pretty awesome.Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks so much for reviewing and as always please keep reading. x Report Review
First chapter and I'm already hooked :DAuthor's Response: Well hopefully I'm keeping you hooked with the rest of it. Just wait for Draco to come into it. Thanks so much for reviewing and please keep on reading. x Report Review
not bad as you say it isAuthor's Response: Yeah I just thought it was a little dull and kind of slow, but it set the scene nicely. Before I edited and made changes it was just over 2000 words so it's a bit longer now with a bit more detail so improved a bit. Still not a favourite of mine, but thanks for making me feel a bit better about it. x Report Review
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