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Review #26, by ginerva_molly_weasley Tracey Davis

3rd February 2012:
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Hey! I really like the idea of this story as I think you have so much licence with the characters as they're so unknown and you can basically mould them to be your own. The plot idea that has been introduced too is also very interesting.

The fact she has a daughter will make the relationship between nott and davis harder which I hope you get to show in the later chapters because you could really build on the relationship. Also the fact that she has a daughter but hasn't told us as of yet who the father is makes me intrigued to see whether it is Nott or not!

The only thing I was a little concerned about was the major use of muggle appliences (such as the TV/Hairdryer within their home. We know from Hogwarts that magic makes them go haywire so you may want to change those things into something a bit more magical although it is not essential.

Nevertheless, well done. A well written chapter and I would love to read on!

Author's Response: Hello! I'm really glad you find this story interesting! I don't know what it was that made me decide to have her have a daughter and such but I love the relationship that i've built between them! I'm really glad that you enjoyed this and that you thought it was well written. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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Review #27, by AC_rules Theodore Nott

10th January 2012:
Hey there! Ac here for our review swap/getting me to have written 400 reviews. I read the first chapter of this on another review swap so I thought I'd stop by and read the second.

Although I think I liked hearing from Tracey's point of view first (and I miss Audrey) I really liked this chapter too. Theo seems sort of cute, and nice and NORMAL actually. I think what I like about them is neither of them are particuarlly extraordinary people, they're just... two nice people. I'm excited to see how their date turns out :)

A lovely chapter two!

-AC

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you like hearing from both points of view. I felt that this would work best in bringing the story together. Yeah I tried not making Tracey and Theo these absolutley amazing people. I wanted them to be real, go through real life and real drama. I'm glad your enjoying this! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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Review #28, by daliha Tracey Davis

5th January 2012:
I've never read anything about this pairing so it was nice to see someone write about them. I like Tracey's interactions wit Audrey they're adorable! I just wish there was a flashback or something showing us Tracey's school days. Other than that I loved it. :)

Author's Response: I'm a huge fan of Tracey/Theo I'm not really sure why but I am. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for taking the time to read and review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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Review #29, by the midnight avenger Tracey Davis

5th January 2012:
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So, that was REALLY well written. The beginning with Audrey was so convincing and I got a great sense of their relationship, as well as a good introduction to Tracey's relationship with her parents. You also seem to have your characters figured out very well, so they come off as convincing. I also like how you have some Slytherins who aren't total jerks. It always frustrates me because the qualites of being in slytherin aren't "bad" or "mean", but that's how they seem to be taken. Overall, a very great start to a story with a lot of potential!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! I'm so glad that you like this chapte and feel that I have my characters all figured out! I also dont think that slytherins are all mean, i feel that some can be nice but that they have the underlaying factor of being sly in some way. thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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Review #30, by AC_rules Tracey Davis

4th January 2012:
Hey there! I thought this was really cute - I loved the way Tracey is a single mum and I thought you brought that across really well whilst avoiding all the cliches and things. Audrey seemed really cute (and you've made me like the name a little more too) and all of it was essentially adorable.

I thought it was a really lovely start and I'm glad I had the chance to read it - its such an unusual pairing but you've pulled it off really well :)

-AC

Author's Response: Helen! this review makes my day! Tracey/Theo isn't a well heard of or read pairing so it really makes me happy that you took the time to read this and that you enjoyed my Tracey and Audrey! I'm so glad you like it! thank you for taking the time to read and review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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Review #31, by ariellem Tracey Davis

13th December 2011:
Hello!

You may want to break down the paragraphs, because the story is good, but it's easier to read when you break it down, you know? However so far so good! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the advice! Sry about not reviewing your story yet i will hopefully get on that really soon i was hoping to have time before christmas but i was super busy finishing up gifts that i didn't have any time to review so hopefully some time in the next few days i will get that review up!

~Slytherinchica08~


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