Reading Reviews for The Truth About the Marauders
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Review #26, by Sundowner First Year: Part II

1st September 2012:
Aww, poor Jen. I think we all can relate to her. I think Jen and I will get along just fine - if she was, you know, a real human being - cause we're both kind of dramatic. I love your writing style and I love how you didn't make Jen absolutely abhor Sirius. It's something fresh. The formating is good but it'll get better when you don't have to skip so many things.

I like how you made Lily and Jen friends. It's really realistic. Girl power! I can list all of the things I love in this story, but I think it will take less space if I just told you that I love your story as a whole. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: yay! im so glad that Jen is relatable!
i figured that it was time that there is a change from a girl who "hates" sirius like how lily "hates" and then they get together.
that storyline is a little old for me, and considering Jen is James's cousin, I didn't think that would quite fit in so well.

im so glad that you like it!
the next update is in the process of being editted, which shld be in the queue very soon!

thanks so much for R+R! (:

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Review #27, by ginnympotter First Year: Part II

29th August 2012:
i love it! i think the formatting is fine like that! It will get better later on when there isn't any bits being skipped :) x

Author's Response: awww yay! thanks (:
yeah, im writing third year right right now and im already finding less things to skip!
thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Review #28, by ginnympotter First Year: Part I

29th August 2012:
I love how you have portrayed all the characters, can't wait for more chapters!! x

Author's Response: awww thanks so much! im glad you like my portrayal of the characters because its the most important to me (aside from the actual writing itself). thanks for R+R! (:

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