Haha I thought that Danielle name thing was really funny. xD
As ever I loved this chapter! :D I look forward to the next one!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on the next one whenever I get bored of English, so it should be up soon :D
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ahhh! -- that's all i can say! and i guess you're thinking, ''bad 'ahhh' or good 'ahhh'?'' > bloody good, i tell you! i tried to write a review on the first chapter, but got too carried away and had to move on to the second... ooh it's addictive! anyway, i'm sorry for my babbling-- my friends usually tell me to zip it. grreat friends they are! -- so basically, i love pheebs! you've done amazingly at keeping her funny and cute(?), whilst still keeping the loved (cough) british trait of sarcasm. (sarcasm is the highest form of intelligence, you know? *nods* ooh yeah. i should be a 'claw!) also... i never thought i'd love a fictional character's abs as much as i do for your louis. yum! --- this is why i'm a nerd... i fall in love with fictional characters, simples. okayy. i guess i'll save you from my motor mouth now. i don't want to kill you and then find you're incapable of updating! -legasp- sooo. keep writing, stay cool, eat noodles. x

Author's Response: oh thank you so much :D
don't worry, I always mean to write reviews on each chapter but I get so excited to get to the end so I never do... woops :p
I always ramble, and when my friends tell me to zip it I usually speak louder :p
I'm a great friend, really :D
I love Phoebe too, she's probably my favourite character to write :D
I'm glad that she sounds British! I'm Australian so I'm trying to make her sound less bogan-ish :D
Oh wow, I also love too many fictional characters but hearing that you love Louis the best, makes me go all warm and fuzzy inside :D
We're all nerds, don't worry. WE ARE UNITED :D
I'll update as soon as possible, I currently have HEAPS of homework so I only have about half of the next chapter written :(
But as soon as I get a break, I'll write it straight away :D
Thank you for reviewing :D

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omigod you are hilarious and need to write more. if you dont i wiil come over where ever you are and hex you into oblivation because this stroy rocks everything. EVERYTHING!! its sooo good and i absolutely love this chappiebecause of course was just hilarious and you remind me of me and my bestfriend! you need to continue and i will be checking everyday!

Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH :D
I wish I could write more but I have sooo much school work, so I haven't finished the chapter yet :'( I'm sorry!
BUT I PROMISE AS SOON AS I GET A BREAK I'LL WRITE IT FOR YOU :D
You and your friend sound awesome ;D
Thank you for reviewing :D

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Story is good so far! However, in this case, "alors" is probably more appropriate than "bien." Bien means "well" as in "good."

Author's Response: Thank you!
Oh thanks for the tips, I did French for three years but I was never really good at it, I'll change it later ;)
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hahahahaha
i loved this.
and the scenes with harry and ron were hilarious xD
ahhh, harry. his secretive sarcastic and witty sides always surprises people.

i love this!
and i know what u mean about the name thing.
i dont know anyone name danielle (except danielle peazer whom i love) but i know what u mean. there are some girls with similar names and whenever i hear that name, i just think of THOSE people so my mind automatically jumps to negative thoughts haha

ah. cameron. arsehole. - -

Author's Response: AHH ANOTHER ONE DIRECTION FAN NEW BESTIE RIGHT HERE :D
Yes, I've always had Harry with a witty side, I feel like after the war, he took everything a lot less seriously :p
Yes, Danielle is a very popular name with quite nasty people, it's not very good :( It's always takes just one person to ruin that name for you :p
Ew... Cameron, I really don't like writing him as a character but he keeps popping up :p
Thank you for this lovely review :D

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Sorry i dont understand french.what did you say anyway?

Author's Response: I'm sorry, I don't speak English

No problem. What's your name? I'm Louis and I'm French, well... my mother is... But she taught me.

hope that helped you :)

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A-mazing capter once again. Ellie is fantastic. I just ove her character and Rachel's reaction to Louis was awesome. Amazing job!

Author's Response: thank you so much! :D

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I love how this story started and how they have a crazy lady roster :) Also when Phoebe gets approached by some hot guy she talks french , who then talks french back. Totally something I would do :) I like how even though she's training to be an Auror shes still a waitress which gives the possibility for interesting encounters. I'm definitely reading on :)

Author's Response: thank you for this lovely review :D

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Hi there! Back again!

I really enjoyed this chapter because it was all cute and adorable and snarky!

I do think it may have been a touch heavy on the dialogue in comparison to scenic details of the surroundings and body language that would have complimented it great. But it was great!

FAVORITE line:

"Oh, sorry. I'm ever so sorry Miss Mouse, please find it in your stuffing to forgive me?"

I love the 'find it in your stuffing.' So funny!

Great job on this chapter!

Author's Response: Eep! You're reviewing again! :D
Thank you so much!
I'll probably go back and add in some details, thanks for the tips :)
And glad that was your favourite line, that was one of my personal favourites too ;)
Thank you so much for reviewing! :D

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Aw, Louis is absolutely charming! I love him. You did a great job portraying the members of the Wotter clan as well, especially the original Wotter clan (Arthur, Molly I, Hermione, Ron, etc.) I laughed at Mr. Weasley's (Arthur) deafness. I can definitely see him that way! I also really like Phoebe's overall attitude; like when Louis was giving her a piggy back ride to the theme park, and how she immediately drew a line, warning him not to reach farther up than he was supposed to (not that he would anyway, being the gentleman he is!) or she'd hex him. Good for her, it really shows that she has respect for herself! Can't wait to read more. Please update soon! :)

~ Jenny

Author's Response: thank you so much! i'm glad to hear i portrayed the original potter/weasleys well, i was quite nervous about that :p
yes, phoebe is very sensible ;)
never fear, i just put the next chapter is in the queue! :D
thank you for reviewing :D

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I think this is a great start to a story! It's so interesting and different because so many stories take place in Hogwarts and in a generation that places the characters at that age. I really like the start of this, especially the way that the entire story begins if that makes sense. The opening 3 paragraphs already had me snickering and I like Phoebe's snarky character and her internal dialogue.

I think Ells is going to take a bit of getting used to, but I like her as well. She seems a great fit for a best friend!

I wonder who this Louis is! How handsome :)

Great opening chapter!

Author's Response: hold on, I'm having an internal freak-out, you're reviewing my stories! ahh!
*fangirling*
okay, I'm done ;)
thank you so much! I agree, so many stories do take place at Hogwarts, but I just wanted to do something different :)
Yes, Ellie does take some time in getting used to, but she's loveable :D
read on and you'll see who Louis is ;)
thank you so much for reviewing :D

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Once again, absolutely hilarious. Louis's strangeness and Pheobe's... Pheobe-ness works very well together.

Author's Response: thank you :D

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Hahahahaha. This is great so far. Your characterization is wonderful and it isn't too slow or too fast which is something i find a lot on here. Great job!

Author's Response: thanks :)
i was worried it was a bit too fast but everyone seems to think its good :)
thanks for the review :D

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I wish I was freezing my backside off! It's 103 degrees here! Great chapter btw. I love this story

Author's Response: thank you!
wow! that's pretty warm (I had to convert it, but shh), but you can always go to the beach! :D
thanks for reviewing :D

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This is perfect, I love everything about it. Really hope you update very soon because I can't wait to read on!

Author's Response: thank you! I might not get the next chapter in before the queue closes, but I will definitely try!
thanks for reviewing :D

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You are correct! that is what it means...Congratulations!

Author's Response: yay! I did french for three years but I was never really good at it, and I know Goggle translate is basically always wrong, so I just wanted to double check!
thanks for the review :D

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Hehe good chapter! It made me laugh a lot!
Keen to read more soon!

Author's Response: thanks! next chapter is half-written! :D

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Haha brilliant idea for a story! Super keen to see where this goes!

Author's Response: thank you!! :D

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I really love this story so far! Your characters are all pretty fresh, and I love Louis/Phoebe already :D It's a pretty interesting combination to have an auror and a curse-breaker, but I love it! Oh, I so hope they meet up again in a really random spot, so that it's not too obvious :D

I loved all of the evening that you described, too, it was just a really lovely scene and it really made Louis and Phoebe seem a lot closer than anything otherwise. Great job! :)

Author's Response: thank you so much! :D

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Great story! I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: thank you!

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All I can focus on is indignation that you reckon 5'7 is tall :P I'm 5'9!

Ok over it. Really great start. I'm looking forward more about auror training. And they're going to meet again for sure! Yay!

I actually groaned when she pretended to be French in the last chapter. So funny but so painfully awkward! Love it, can't wait for more

Author's Response: I'm sorry! I measure things in centimetres and I'm really short, so to me, 5'7 is tall! but if you're tall you can be a model ;D
maybe they will meet, maybe they won't :p
and yes, it was painfully awkward, I actually cringed when writing it! thank you for the lovely review :D

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Awesome and hilarious pls update and love ur writing style !!! :)

Author's Response: thanks! I'm about halfway through the next chapter :)

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aww cute! and funny :D

Author's Response: thank you :D

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Love love love so far! :D

Author's Response: thank you!!! :D

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BRILLIANT!


I loved this, it's really funny and the end was hilarious! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, update soon!

Author's Response: thank you! the next chapter will be soon :)

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