OH MY GOD! ITS FINISHED!
I LOVE IT SO MUCH! ITS SO WON'ERFUL AND CUTE AND ADORABLE AND JUST SO LOVELY!

I really love your writing styles and the way that you portray your characters! Awesome job! I think this chapter ended really well and that it was the right place to stop (does that make sense?)

I love Phoebe and Louis and Ellie and Matt and Susan and everyone else! Great work and thank you for writing this:D I really enjoyed reading this!

I'm going to start reading Unplanned eventually, it's just that I'm pretty busy with school and all that...anyway great job once again and epic story!

Love,
iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: Yes, it's finished! But there is a sequel in case you're wondering! :D

I'm glad you liked it, and the ending. You make complete sense, don't worry! I understand you! :p

Thanks for all your amazing reviews, you are too nice! ♥

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I LOVE IT! Lol the part at the end about practice makes perfect was funny :D

LOVE Burito! Awesome name! Hope Louis' alright though! Hahaha:)

I really liked the meeting the family part. And Ellie, omg, she's hilarious! And when Pheebs' dad said he wants to show them his ass, I cracked up laughing and I had tears in my eyes! T_T :L

Love,
iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: ahahaha glad you liked it!

When I wrote that scene, I actually had to take a break. I couldn't stop laughing and it was my own imagination! :p

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Aw! That was so cute!

Love Phoebe and Louis so much! I haven't really read any Louis/OC fanfics, but this one was certainly very good! Awesome in fact!

I really liked their date. And I understand the issue with sweaty palms haha:)

"Er...Pheebs? You okay?"
"Yeah, I'm fine. I just don't want to move. You're comfy."

That part was sweet:D

Won'erful chapter once again!

Love,
iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! :D

I've never been on a date but I've held hands with people (cousins, friends, parents etc.) and I always feel so gross when one of us has sweaty hands. :p

Thanks for another review, you're far too kind! ♥

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Haahahahaha! Omg this story never fails to make me laugh! :'D

Loved how Phoebe beat the hell out of Cameron. He deserved it. And I think he still likes her...but she totally deserves better...like Louis for example ;)

I love how Matt is protective! And I love Ellie!

I take naps too! But I'm 14.anyway...
Loved the auror part, I would've imagined it to go something like that too! :) Can't wait to see how their date goes and how they go meeting Phoebe's parents haha

Love,
iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: ahaha I made this full of fluff and humour, I didn't want any drama in it. :p

hehe, Cameron was just there so I could beat someone up. :p I wasn't having the greatest year when I was writing this ahaha. :p

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Naww! Loved this chapter.
It's so cute. Hahaha i had a feeling that Louis had cheated...typical Louis haha:)

Oooh! Where are they going? Is it a water park? Or a beach?

Gotta love Freddy! Can make an situation awkward :D

I live in the southern hemisphere too and i know how you feel :(

Won'erful chapter (like the americans say) and Keep writing! I love your work!

Love,
iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: ahaha glad you liked it! :D

Yeah, it's getting cold again. :'( I hate winter. :'(

Thanks for the lovely review! :D

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ACK! This chapter was so cute! I ship Phoebe and Louis. What would their ship name be? Phouis? Loebe? idk.

I like how this story is pretty fast paced. And the bit at the end about seeing each other if the universe decides was nice:) its not cliched:)

I imagined Louis like this ! Maybe not as crazy, but he was still pretty crazy in my eyes. And everything else about him I pretty much imagined:)

Well done on an awesome chapter!

Love,
iatevoldysnose

Author's Response: Aw thank you! :)

For the ship name, someone came up with "Phlouis" but I agree, they don't have a very good ship name. :p So whatever you want, m'dear!

I've always pictured Louis to be a little bit of a loon, growing up with two sisters ahaha. :p Im glad you agree with me! :p

Thanks for another amazing review! :D

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OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS STORY, AND IVE ONLY READ THE FIRST CHAPTER!

I really like it. Well done! Keep writing!

Love,
iatevoldysnose

P.S. sorry for the short review, but I'm going on to read the next one so dont have time hehe:)

Author's Response: ahaha thank you!

Hope you enjoy the rest! :)

Thanks for the lovely review! :D

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No! you can't be finished!!! I love this story so much!

This was so good! Seriously, it was so funny and cute and ARHRHRHRH... I can't believe it's over!!!

I laughed so much while reading this. Especially the part at the dinner table when Susan wanted Louis to say grace. That was hilarious! Their relationship (i mean between Louis and Phoebs) is so perfect. It's exactly what everone would want in a relationship. He is so sweet and funny... arhrhrhrh i loved it!

I wish you hadn't ended it there though and continued on at least until Ellie's wedding or something... where he could have proposed or something! . nahhh maybe that would have been too soon but i don't know! I just want more of this story! And Jack... what a wonderful addition at the end!

Thank you so much for having made my afternoon such a good one! I can't wait to read more from you! You have a great talent and imagination, and thank you for sharing it with us!

a slightly obsessed fan :P

100 /10

Author's Response: ahahaha thank you so much! ♥

I'm glad you liked it! A lot of people wish I ended it after Ellie's wedding, but I felt more comfortable ending it here. *shrugs*

Thank you for all your lovely comments and for this AMAZING review!! :D

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Okay, the story is really good. I have enjoyed reading it.

However, this last chapter is WEIRD. I was hoping that maybe Phoebe would formally be introduced to the Potter/Weasley clan, and they'd test her... no?

Maybe they could get engaged if you were to another chapter? I would like that very much... :)!!!

Overall, I like your story! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Well, I mentioned meeting the family a bit... With the backflip thing? And I just wanted to wrap it all up briefly, instead of dragging it out. The whole story is weird, though. :p

I have a sequel for it! It's called 'Surprises in Spring' if you want to take a look. If you just click my author's page you'll see it. :)

Thanks for the review!

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Is there to be a sequel?

Author's Response: Yes there is. It's currently in the queue, it's called, "Surprises in Spring". :D

Hopefully you enjoy it and thanks for leaving me a review! :D

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I love this fic, it's really entertaining and I love how there's no weird drama and angst : ) Louis is awesome and Phoebe, too.
"Sir? I like this one. It's nice to meet you too, Louis. Sit down, sit down." Am I crazy, or did you take that from Dobby in DH1? I almost burst into tears, poor Dobby... And I really liked Phoebes father, by the way. He's just so awkward, he reminds me a bit of Arthur and his muggle obsession.

"I'd like to show you my ass." Oh My Godric, the thought of their faces made me crack up and I kept silently laughing, because I'm supposed to be sleeping, for far too long.

Author's Response: Aww thanks!

This fic was purely intended to be light-hearted, no angst or drama, just a little fun side project. :p

I actually didn't even think of that, but my subconscious probably thought of that! Good pick!

And I didn't even realise the Mark/Arthur parallel! You're absolutely right! Obviously my subconscious forgot to tell me these things ahaha. :p

I had read a donkey fact somewhere and that's where THAT idea came from. I'm actually very proud of that scene, every time I think of it I start to laugh ahaha. :p

Thank you for the lovely review! :D

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what?? the end?? just like that? no happily-ever-after wedding? what about Ellie's wedding?? aaahh...nooo...I can't believe that this is "the end"!! are you going to write a sequel??

Author's Response: Yeahhh, sorry about that! I didn't want to have a cheesy romance ending because this was anything BUT cheesy. :p

(Note my sarcasm here ahaha)

I am THINKING about writing a one-shot but I'm not too sure. I have an idea but I have limited time to write it. I think I might, but I'm not 100% sure.

Anyway, thanks for all the lovely reviews you left me and I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

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yup, a burrito sounds good right about now :P

Author's Response: Now that you've mentioned it, I want a burrito too! ahahaha :p

Thanks for the review! :)

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a waterbed??? lol best surprise ever!! :)

Author's Response: ahahah yeah, my brain comes up with weird things. :p

Thanks for the review! :)

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lol this story never ceases to entertain me. next chapter, here I come! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

I'm so glad you're enjoying it, I like reading the reviews you've left me! :)

Thanks for the review! :D

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hah, the "Just keep swimming" really cracked me up ;) ...but how could you end this chap with a cliffie? it's too cruel...I can't wait to find out where Louis' taking her!

Author's Response: Every novel/novella/short story needs a cliffhanger! We wouldn't survive without them! :p

Luckily for you all the chapters are there and ready! :D

Thanks for the review! :)

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Simply brilliant!! I love it!! They're just perfect together!! :) .now, onto the next chapter :D yay!

Author's Response: Thank you again! They are quite cute together, aren't they? ;)

Thanks for the review! :)

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hahahaha! thank you for making me laugh so much!! This is such an awesome chapter and I can't wait to read the next chappie :) I have a feeling this story's going to be one of my new faves!! :D

Author's Response: Awh, you're welcome! :D

I'm so glad you liked it! I love when I get reviews on this, it's been completed for a while now. :')

Thanks for the review! :)

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Hahahahah I loved your story...!!
Especially the donkey obsessed father lol :P
My favourite part had to be when burrito ( love the name) kicked poor Louis!

Author's Response: Aw thanks, I still get so excited when I see people leaving reviews for this story! :D
I know, the donkey-loving Mark just came out of NOWHERE and I got so carried away with it! I'm glad to see that people liked him though! :p
Ahahaha, I'm glad you liked that part! :p
Anyway, thanks for the review! :D

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A very good ff, for once it wasn't about Albus or times at hogwarts. Maybe a bit too crazy?? But I loved the story all the way.

Author's Response: At first I thought you said, "A very good ff for once."
And I wanted to be like 'EX-CUUUSE ME!"
But then I saw what you REALLY wrote and I smiled! :D
Yeah, Albus Potter stories and stories at Hogwarts are very popular, so I thought I'd write something a bit different. :)
Pfft, there is never a limit on the amount of crazyness a story has! :p Ahaha, nahh I intended it to be crazy and so unrealistic - that's why I loved writing it! :p
Anyway, thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked it! :D

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ILHBGXOLIS BYHJBDVGNMG
That was like sooo awesome!!! Poor Phoebe having to put up with McBitchyFace and crabby old women!! But she is a good samaritan and doesn't pour soup over old lady's heads. ;)
It was really sweet that Phoebe and Louis got their own apartment and they got a little puppy and they called it Jack and ... and ... and ... and ...
IT WAS JUST PERFECT!!!
If you wrote a sequel then I would love you like, so much and I would like, cry because I'd be so happy. So yeah. PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL! Or I COULD WRITE IT FOR YOU!!
We could be like, co-writers or something
OMG THAT WOULD BE SO COOL!
I LOVE YOU!!!
(but not like that because I'm not like that O_O)
10/10 KEEP IT UP
LILYLUNA
XOXOXOXOXOX

Author's Response: udhfvngskjdfnkdjfv
Aww thank you! She is a good samaritan, isn't she? ;)
I'm glad you think that they're perfect! :3
I don't think I will write a sequel, sorry! I don't have enough time or motivation! D:
Maybe one day, though! If I ever do, I'll let you know. :)
Thank you so much for leaving me this lovely review! :D

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All I felt missing from this chapter was a comment on the fact that little Burrito would mean little little donkey. Other than that, swell story!

Author's Response: Er... I guess it would - but his name is Burrito, not 'little donkey' that was just the meaning...
Maybe I'm misunderstanding you, but yeah... they don't call him little donkey, they call him Burrito...
I'm sorry - I'm just really confused... :/
I'm glad you liked the story though! Thanks for the review! :D

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BOOM.
& then complete chaos ensued.

I am now completely utterly freaking out because this story is finished, and there is not going to be any more of Louis to keep me company here in this lonely world, where every second I wish I was a fictional character in every novel I read.

I just found out through desperate means, that one of my favourite authors on this site, is sadly not going to continue writing ff anymore. I nearly cried. Right then and there, where my dad is currently researching travel destinations and terminally asking me how to use the ipad, and where my mum is watching cheesy and funny soap operas on the tele. Thank god I didn't, otherwise they probably would send me to a doctor, and ask what is wrong with me.

Just a few days previously, I read the last chapters of several stories that have made my heart melt. I dissolved into a puddle.

Along with this information, 8 other stories I have favourited (and I only favourite stories that are worth favouriting) and are obsessed with are ending, and are in their last chapters before completion.
After dissolving to the puddle, my existence is now asking to be buried deep deep deep into the ground.

Im just so sad, it's.sad.

But I thank you for such a captivating and gorgeous story. You've made me laugh hysterically, giggle, and nearly wet myself in aws in nearly every chapter that you've written.

And I will end by saying that every great thing has an end, though we don't want it to, it will, and that is what makes us appreciate it more.

Thank you.
♥

Author's Response: BOOM.
Naw, don't freak out! I always have other stories! :p (Shameless self-promoting). I'm quite sad that I'm not going to be able to write Louis any more, he was so much fun! :( But I had a good run with him. :p
I hope everything goes better for you! I think I know the author you're talking about. I freaked out about it as well - I was like NO THERE'S TOO MANY WIPS!
Ah well, it was their choice. *shrugs* what are we going to do about it?
I'm so glad I made you laugh, that's so happy to hear! :)
*Starts singing 'All Good things Come to an End'*.
I'll miss your lovely reviews too. ♥
Thank you for reviewing (for the last time *sniff*). ♥

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Oh! It's over!!! Why does it have to end?! I want to read more! It's so nice to see that they're together like they should be though, and Jack seems like an adorable little crup!

This was by far one of my favorite romances I've read, and I liked the pacing throughout the whole story. It wasn't too drawn out, but there wasn't any gaping holes to it. It was perfect! And as much as I wish there was more to the ending, I guess I can suck it up and deal with it, because it was awesome anyways! I guess I'm just dissapointed that its over and there's no more chapters to swoon over.

Anyways, thank you for the spifftacular read! I don't know if I mentioned it already, but I have this favorite'd, and it's one that I would definately come back to read time to time, especially on my dreary days. You have no clue how much this story has put a smile on my face. Pure excellence!

Author's Response: It is over. :( It had to end eventually and this was the only way I could have ended this. Jack is adorable, I based him on my cousins' mini-foxie cross jack russel! Although their dog is a girl and isn't magical... sadly. :p
I'm so happy that this was one of your favourite romances! :D Occasionally I thought the pacing was too fast but to hear that I pulled it off, makes me happy! :) I kinda wanted more to the ending but I didn't want to do the cliche have kids/have a wedding/etc. ending, so this was really the only choice! :/
I'm glad you thought it was awesome, though! :D
Spifftacular? I LOVE that word! I shall be using it from now on! :D
Hearing that this story puts a smile on your face makes me go all warm and fuzzy on the inside! All your lovely reviews have put a ridiculously big smile on my own face! :D
Thank you so much for reviewing and reading, I'm so glad you liked it! :D

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Okay, I changed my mind. This was by far my favorite chapter!

I love Phoebe's dad! He's so awkward when it comes to him and his donkeys. Why can't my dad be like that? Honestly, you killed me here with this:


Mum was bouncing excitedly and it made me wonder what they were up to. Matt looked at me confusedly and Dad announced proudly,
“I’d like to show you my ass.”
“DAD!” I said, outraged. Louis and Ellie both paled and Mum started shaking with laughter.
He chuckled heartily and then pulled the door of his shed to reveal a donkey.


That was honestly pure brilliance! And Burrito is such a cute little name as well! Doh', is it weird I have this urgency to pinch Phoebe's father's cheeks?

Anywho, I just can't put into words how much I loved this story so far, and honestly my originality in my reviews are coming to a drying halt. I just have nothing more to say. Everything is just so wonderfully written!

Author's Response: This was probably my favourite chapter, even just thinking about it I'm laughing. The whole time I was writing it, I was giggling like mad. Many of my family members asked what I was laughing about! :p
Oh Phoebe's dad, he's just hilarious. He was SO much fun to write!
I had actually never planned to write that but that day I'd read a donkey fact an I was just typing and that scene popped up. :p It makes me laugh like crazy - which is quite sad actually... :p
Burrito is a cute name, isn't it? Naw, I just want to pinch her dad's cheeks as well - he's just an adorable old man! :p
Don't worry about the lack or originality in your reviews, my responses are exactly the same as well! I'm just happy that you read and reviewed! :D

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