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Reading Reviews for What Will Happen?
29 Reviews Found

Review #26, by kira lovegood And So it Begins...

26th October 2011:
Hey! That's nice story by you..Suggestions- well, try to keep your chapters longer, a bit longer, yes.Also, see that the story progresses at a steady pace- so that you give the reader enough time to understand the plot.This chapter was quick, a little shorter..other than that this is okay with me.I loved it so far:) I'll be eager to read how you continue this.Good luck!
P.S. I'm a huge draco/hermione shipper too and check out my new story called 'I hate love stories' on this site.

Author's Response: Thank you, someone to finally give me advice! Chapter two is a lot longer than this one (still not extreemly long though) and chapter three is a bit longer than that one... But what do you mean by 'slower'? Should I have more paragraphs rather than dialogue? Thanks, again :)

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Review #27, by haporulzfoevs And So it Begins...

23rd October 2011:
hey personn, this story is so cuwl, its like a really good like story line you need to write like, more plz!

Author's Response: Why, thank you :D Chapter two is in validation right now, and I still have to think of what to do for chapter three... and advice at all for the story?

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Review #28, by Holla And So it Begins...

23rd October 2011:
Great work!! Update!! :D
i'll be waiting! :) I LOVE bets! 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks! I already have chapter two, I need to just type it up and send it for validation (might take a while...) But I'm a bit stuck on what to write for chapter 3!

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Review #29, by giannaaaaa malfoyyyyy And So it Begins...

22nd October 2011:
awesome story! but honestly i think that i would be better for draco than hermione... but still good story.

Author's Response: Thanks! Any advice for me, at all?
And I know, I think we all want Draco for our selves, but like I said, I'm a huuuge Dramoine shipper so Hermione can take him I guess :)

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