Ooh, this sounds quite interesting - definitely can't wait to see where it is going! Arielle is a different type of character, but to be honest with you, I quite like her, as with all your other characters, too. This was just a little bit too short for my liking, but it was rather good for only the start of the story so I'll overlook it. Update soon, please?

Author's Response: Hi! I thought she was quite different too, but that's partly why I like her so much :) Yeah, it was short, but the next chapter is quite a bit longer so don't worry - I'll try and update soon! Thank you for your review, and for reviewing my other stories, they're always so nice! xx

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Hi! Great new story. I'm liking Arielle and her posh almost snootiness! I really really like that she let out a long phrase of curse words. Although I don't completely understand what happened with the champagne. Will we find out specifics later? At first I thought Hilary was into Albus, but by the end it seems that she is conspiring to get Arielle and him together. Really good first chapter. Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Hi! I'm really glad you like Arielle - I quite love her too. The champagne thing will be explained in the next chapter, as will any hints of a 'arielle + albus' thing! Thanks for the review :D

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