I LOVE HOW SHE ALWAYS DIGRESSES. That's another thing that I do too!
I love the whole way that everyone seems to be naming their children after loved ones. :)
What DO dirigible plums taste like? (I know you said don't a...that's why I asked. I know I'm badass hehe)
Awww! She can relate to the story of Alice and Frank Longbottom. That's really sad:(
Tyrique is probably one of the retardedest names I have ever heard.
Rose is funny. Just had to put that out there.
OK. So towards the end of the chapter it was really funny! I just couldn't stop myself from smiling and laughing (a bit like Dom :p) Wonderful chapter! Loved it!
Keep writing and Well done!
iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: I KNOW SHE'S HOPELESS :) I do that too, it's hilarious!
Yep, that's actually pretty canon so how could I not? I love that :)
I know, we'll find more about that later on, only IF you keep reading... ;)
Yes, it is. I genuinely googled "weird names" to get it! It's fabulously odd.
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That was basically my whole reaction to this chapter. No cause it was bad or anything, because the SAME THING (being asked out them running away) happened to me last year! So I feel Kat's pain, I really do.
I'm glad Milla got Kat out of there before she did something stupid, but I can't help but feel sorry for James seeing as they did abandon him. But James and all of the Wotters have been so horrible...
YAY! Milla and Scorp are finally together!
Good chapter, thanks for updating again! I was worried you'd abandoned.
Update soon, yeah?
Miss Moneypenny :-)Author's Response: Haha! That was mine to writing it :D Ouch, I feel for you girl, I do. That must've been awkward. How did it go afterwards?
Yeah, I can so see Katrina doing some incredibly idiotic but I decided to save her from any more embarrassment!
Glad you like them!
Thanks :) Thrilled you liked it! Don't worry, I'd always let everyone know if I was abandoning it and the reason why. I've just been drowning under coursework and writer's block :(
Thanks for the lovely review and sticking with! Sorry for the late reply- I didn't realise you'd left a review D: Keep reading! Report Review
... What?! I pick Albus. Kat and Albus are going to get married, have children (Katbus and Altrina) and life happily ever after. I was so sure Kat was going to be Godmother, then BAM!! No. Kat should just stay with Camilla. They will be best friends. They will both be bridesmaids at each others weddings. Anyway, this was a fandiddlytastic chapter, and I can't wait for the next one. I love Albus. Julie xxAuthor's Response: Least you're decided! Shame you're not in Kat's position ;) Well, I can't tell you anything, you'll just have to read on and see who she chooses! I'm glad you like Camilla- I love her too, a very spur of the moment character!
So glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the fabby review, keep reading!xx Report Review
HAHAHA Your hilarious! Katrina's hilarious!
Loved the flachback! Epic.
Katrina reminds me of myself in a way. I'm short (unfotunately) and am a bit of a retard (retards are awesome I tell you) too.
iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Thanks! Shame no-one sat school thinks that... (Well, I make myself laugh and that's the most important thing).
Hey fellow shortie! *high fives iatevoldysnose*. Agreed, no worries.
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the lovely review, keep reading :) Report Review
WOAH! Nice chapter! Well done!
Certainly grabbed my attention! I'm going to be reading this story for sure!
iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Hey there! Welcome to my story, make yourself at home! Grab a cuppa and read on ;)
Great, glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for the lovely review, keep reading! Report Review
YOU DID NOT JUST MAKE JAMES AND AL BOTH ASK KAT TO HOGSMEDE ON THE SAME DAY.
IT DIDN'T HAPPEN.
SCORPIUS AND MILLA.
WHAT IS THAT.
I'M VERY CONFUSED.
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: I
I KNOW I DON'T KNOW WHAT CAME OVER ME
IT WASN'T EVEN PLANNED EXACTLY LIKE THIS
I'M JUST GOING TO ROLE WITH IT
SO AM I DON'T WORRY.
Thanks for this hilarious review! All will become clear (I hope!), keep reading :) Report Review
CLIFFHANGER! Why are there so many of them lately? So...Albus or James? Or neither? Is she just going to be like 'forget this, I'm becoming a nun' or something? That chapter better be soon because I'm practically dying from that ending- it should be a punishable act leaving your reader stuck like that!Anyway, glad you're better and the exams didn't fry your brain. That would have been serious bad luck.Author's Response: I KNOW. I just love cliffhangers ;) I can't tell you anything but actually the nun idea is brilliant...
I'll try my best! I've got lots of free time after exams so of course my French teacher decides to give us LOADS of coursework. I'm a pro procrastinator, not worries, so I'll do the next chapter first ;)
My exams didn't quite fry my brain fortunately! Anyways, thanks for the lovely review! Keep reading. Report Review
Get Scorpius and Rose back together! They're meant to be!Author's Response: Spoilers! I can't tell you anything, just keep reading and you'll find out about them ;) I promise!
Sorry for the late reply- I don't know why I didn't see this :L Thanks for reviewing, keep reading! Report Review
It!! PLEASE 🙀Author's Response: You're on the first chapter! Got lots to go- I've updated another 29 chapters :) Glad you're enjoying it! Report Review
Saw this story and couldn't resist found the summary tres fascinating, and I've spent yesterday and today reading it- have thoroughly enjoyed!!!
Rose and all the Wotters (excluding Al, of course) are being absolutely bitches. Even know she's left the team they're being horrible. Suggesting this Connie as godmother is a really low blow, and I'm glad Scorpius broke up with Rose because, frankly, she doesn't deserve him.
I'm glad Kat's made friends with Milla, she seems amazing. Yes, her language is foul, but she's a lot, lot LOT nicer than Rose and she obviously really cares about Kat.
I think Scorpius is falling for her!
I loved the scene where Kat quit the Quidditch team; that was epic. I really hate the Wotters right now. (Merlin, I'm talking about this as if it actually happened! Speaking of which, I like it when Kat argues with Merlin.)
10/10 for a brilliant story, please update soon!
P.S I'm intrigued to find out more about Kat's past.Author's Response: Hi there!
Thank you! I'm glad you like the summary; I was actually thinking of updating it but if you like it, I shall keep it!
Well, they can be yes! I've always wanted to explore their darker side but I was worried I'd overdone it. I've been getting pretty positive feedback so I think that means I got it right.
Yeah, Milla is a little rude! I must excuse her language but her epicness makes up for that, I think! You may be right about Scorpius, but I'm not saying anything! Wait, I just did... I have no idea where that is coming: I just came up with that just before I was about to submit the last few chapters and decided to add it in. So I'm just going to see where it goes, like you guys!
I'm so glad you liked that scene, thank you. Haha, I love writing her arguments with Merlin- I tend to argue with myself a lot so that's a bit of me in Kat.
Thank you so, so, so much for such a lovely review! Please keep reading!
P.S You'll be finding out more, I promise. It'll be good. Report Review
ah When will Rose realise how much of a selfish brat she was and beg for forgiveness?!? I really love the story, but it is getting into the danger zone of monotony. Maybe spice it up a little?Author's Response: Haha I know! She will soon, don't worry. And yep, some dramatic chapters coming up, though I thought the last couple were pretty action packed. About as action packed as I get mostly :L
Anyways, there will be some twists and turns coming up, I promise! Some sad ones in the near future, actually!
Thanks for reviewing, keep reading! I'll try and spice it up ;) Report Review
Can I please rugby tackle Rose and Dom and break their noses. I beg. They mean.
Aw Scorpius is adorable can I have him.
PLOT TWIST DIFFERENT DADS. I can honestly say I did not see that coming. I congradulate you.
Well I hope you have a fantabulous time on your vacation! I have break in two weeks and I am proud to say I am doing absolutely nothing :) :) :)
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: I love you. No, seriously. Your reviews make my day!
I know they mean but we will get revenge, my lovely, I promise.
You make me weird.
ANYWAYS, I know! That is one of the plots I've had planned since the beginning of the story but I kept forgetting to add it in. I'm glad you like it :)
I did thank you so much! The weather was so amazing and I'm sad now I'm back to cold, rainy (and snowy!) England. Least it means I can update ASAP ;) You go girl, doing nothing rocks.
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Aww I think Scorpius fancies Milla! Normally I would hate the idea of Scorp being with anyone other than Rose, but Rose is being really horrible at the moment and she's not doing much to deserve Scorpius here, who is being very sweet. It's like he has a thing for fancying Kat's best friends, though...if she makes up with Rose, will he fancy her again?
Rose is really annoying me at the moment. Does she ever stop going on about stupid Connie? Talking about making Connie the godmother is a low blow - Scorpius should choose Kat to be godmother anyway, just to annoy her! I'm not liking most of the Weasleys/Potters right now (except for Albus, but we don't see him in this chapter) because they seem to overreact. A lot. I know that Kat shouldn't have kissed Al, but she still feels sorry for it and it's not like she wasn't hurt in the process. The Weasleys (particularly Rose) are acting much worse than Kat right now. She doesn't deserve that treatment!
Argh, rant over now! I really like Milla's character, though. She's the sort of person I should really hate, but I can't help liking her! Yes, she's horrible, but at least she's honest about it! It would be interesting to see her and Scorpius together, too, since that blushing would suggest she likes him, too...maybe it would make Rose realise what she's losing.
And this plot with Kat's dad is very interesting! I'm curious to know how it's going to turn out and I'm glad Scorpius is being such a good friend to her!
Sorry for hating on Rose in this review (I realised I probably did that a bit more than necessary!) but this was a great chapter, and I hope you update soon!
nott theodore :)Author's Response: Ooh do you now? Well I can't give you any spoilers but you may be on to something ;) I know, I hate when Scorpius is with someone else, even though Rose/Scorp aren't canon, I can't imagine anyone else. However I came up with this on a whim so I'm rolling with it! I'm quite enjoying it :)
Yes Rose is a bit of a cow at the moment, I wasn't sure whether I was making her mean enough but everyone absolutely loathes her which is fab (well, not fab but you know what I mean).
I'm glad you like the whole "who the daddy" plot; I've been planning it from the start of the story but I was terrified everyone would hate it.
Haha no worries! Rose deserves it at the moment! So glad you enjoyed it, thank you for reviewing and keep reading! Report Review
I love this one as Katrina Isn't putting up with their giddy fits and silent treatments. WHOO, UPDATE SOON AS YOU CAN!!Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it ;) Haha, certainly not!
Updating this very moment!!
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Loved it!!! :)Milla is my hero i love her and its about time Kati grew a pairAuthor's Response: Haha thank you! Awh, glad you like Milla :)
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No no no no no no no!!!
Plz plz update quickly, coz I think I'm addicted to this story!!!
So please, before I go insane update!!!Author's Response: Haha I will try not! That's such an awesome compliment, I can't thank you enough :3 I'll do update in the next few days- I'm trying to pace myself with all the homework and exams.
Thank you for the lovely review, keep reading! Report Review
I honestly REALLY. Liked this chapter! Stupid Rose, what a fucking bitch. PLEASE PLEAS EASE update soon!Author's Response: Hey there! Sorry I'm replying so late- I didn't see this review (hmmm)... Anyways, I know, Rose can be a bit of a cow ;)
I will! Thank you so much for the lovely review, keep reading! Report Review
It's still brilliant. I think it was epic how she stood up to them. Can't wait for more drama! Update ASAP (please)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Awh, I didn't plan that at all- it just came to me and I wrote it down! That's how most of my good ideas come to me xD
I will do- though I think the next chapter is less drama filled. It gets very dramatic in a few chapters, possibly some tear jerkers.
Thank you for the review, keep reading! Report Review
Yes hi hello, I'm terribly sorry this is late. I've had play rehearsals everyday for about 6 hours and I'M DYING (we're doing Les Mis--lots of work).
Anywho, I am here now. And WHAT. GUH. HUH. WHAT. WHY.
SO KAT QUIT AND THEN ROSALINE QUIT AND THEN AL QUIT AND THEN JAMES PUNCHED AL AND THEN AL PUNCHED JAMES AND THEN I HAVE A HEART ATTACK.
And then Rose is still being witchy (no pun intended) and so is Dom and I just need to read the next chapter right now...or soon...either one. Preferably as soon as possible. But no rush. (writer's block is shiz).
Even though you say otherwise, I do believe it was a fantastic chapter. Update soon will ya?
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: No worries! I do apologize for the lateness of this review- I have not gone of my computer for three days.
THREE WHOLE DAYS.
I KNOW IT WAS WHAT WHERE DID THAT COME FROM? I SURE DON'T KNOW I MEAN I JUST WROTE IT AND IT HAPPENED D:
Yes, indeed she is. Although in two chapters time, everything might be in reverse (*le gasp* SPOILER ALERT!)
I've actually had the next chapter written (what is this? it is organisation I think. I have never experienced this.) so i'll get that out before I die under exam pressure! It's all heating up, and possibly about 7+ chapters left? I don't know :D
Anyways, thank you for the fabby review! Keep reading and reviewing- I'll update ASAP :) Report Review
I actually liked this chapter, even though you said you didn't like it!
They haven't been treating Kat fairly, because even though what she did wasn't right, she wasn't the only one in the wrong. I'm surprised about Rose, as well, because a few chapters ago she was the one who realised that Kat loved both Al and James, so I don't really get why she did such a horrible thing and went to tell James before Kat got the chance to (as far as I'm concerned, the pregnancy hormones don't excuse that). Since this is the first review I've left for this story, I also have to say that I think Scorpius is great for standing up to Rose and not just putting up with her terrible attitude.
I like Rosaline - she's a cool character. It's pretty obvious why she's in Gryffindor - only a second year and already standing up to all the Weasleys and Potters, which is a pretty brave thing to do, considering they're the most popular people in the school!
Also, maybe on a slightly irrelevant note, have you read The Princess Diaries series by Meg Cabot? It's just that the character of Milla here reminds me a lot of Lana in the books, and I really love those books!
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, I hope you update soon!Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you've enjoyed it- I suppose I just found it very hard to write :L
The Wotters really haven't been treating Kat fairly, have they! I wanted to explore the darker side to them, which I knew they would have- I know a very large family and, from personal experience, if you get on the wrong side of them then they all hate you. They sort of inspired the Wotters :D They are lovely however!
I love Rosaline too, she was a very spur of the moment character, as was Milla. Milla was originally intended to be an evil character but I really didn't feel it and she turned into a completely different charcter!
I have indeed read the Princess Diaries (I went through a phase, about two years ago, of that being the only thing I read!). Yeah, I suddenly realised that the other day- Milla was very much inspired by Lana! I love those books...
I'll try- just need to get through the next week or two and I'll focus all my attention on this. Thank you for the lovely review- keep reading! Report Review
write more!!! I love this story! Its possitevely awesome! Though it would be nice if there were less spelling errors... it can be confusing.Author's Response: I will do! Thank you :) I do apologize for the spelling mistakes- I don't have a beta reader unfortunately. Just correct me on any that really irritate you and I'll try to make sure I spell them write ;) Report Review
AAH! oh my god, you need to update this like now. I must read more! I want to know how this ends! This is such a good story, so update update update! Ahh! Seriously. Because you're an amazing author! keep going!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've just got a couple of exams out of the way so I will be writing ASAP! That's so flattering *le blush* ;)
I will update soon. Thank you for the lovely review, keep reading! Report Review
So I thought I would leave you a review since i have read all of this in the last two days. I've actually started a little game with this story. Since there are always three events to the chapter title, I always try to guess what will happen in them. I'm mostly wrong, but its fun!
Anyways, I love this story so much! Its really well written, so keep writing! I will probably be finishing the next few chapters tomorrow, as long as I don't have to much homework that is. School sucks, let me tell you. Anyways, wow I feel like Kat, digressing haha. but yeah, your story rocks. I think that is all. Great job!Author's Response: Thank you! I love having reading rampages so I'm honoured you are with my story. Haha, that's a brilliant idea!
I'm so glad you're enjoying it, it's lovely to hear that :) School does suck, especially when it stops you from writing fanfiction! Thank for for the lovely review- keep reading! Report Review
OH MY FUDGING--
SCOROSE BROKE UP.
I WAS WATCHING RERUNS OF SPONGEBOB AND I SCREAMED AN THREW MY PHONE ACROSS THE ROOM BECAUSE I WASN'T READY FOR THAT.
I DON'T KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAY.
Oh yeah! Katbus. Considering Al was the one who kissed Kat in the first place, the entire family's cognative skills need a checkup. Okay. Yeah. I'm gunna go now. Have a nice day.
~harrypotterluver123Author's Response: I KNOW.
I FEEL SO AWFUL.
I DON'T KNOW WHAT CAME OVER ME.
I DIDN'T PLAN IT I SWEAR I JUST WROTE IT AND I WAS LIKE THAT WORKS.
I'LL STOP CAPS LOCKING NOW.
Yesyes you are correct! Silly Wotters, siding with their family... I am having a nice day now I have read this :) Same to you! Report Review
OMG "SHUT UP! JUST SHUT THE FUCK UP!" THAT'S a brave kid.
I'm glad Scorpius and Rose are OK now, I just laughed so much imagining how stupid he looked with the ginger hair, the fake freckles and Katrina's robes haha. And Neville is just awesome, by the way.
I'm happy Katrina is trying to improve her relationship with Albus, though I think he really doesn't deserve it. He's an idiot.Author's Response: Hello again ;)
I'm glad you liked this chapter- it was the funnest (?) chapter to write so far! Neville is a BAMF though, isn't he?!
Thanks again for the lovely review! Keep reading. Report Review
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