your such an amazing writer!!! this is the best fan fiction i have ever read
please keep on writing because i love it! :D

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it. Reviews like this just make me so happy and help me keep writing.

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This is one of my favourite stories, but as I have said before, when will they find out about being siblings?

Author's Response: Not for a good while I'm planning on taking her through her years at Hogwarts...the time frame is partially descibed in an earlier chapter

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I was so afraid she wouldn't tell anyone or that she would do something really stupid... Please please please update soon, hun!

Author's Response: Glad I had you hanging on my words...and I'll do my best! Promise, cross my heart and hope to die!

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This is really good. I love how you have kept true to the activities in the book

Author's Response: Thanks and glad you enjoyed it. Yeah I'm not trying to change the story too much, mostly just insert Ashley into Rowling's already genius events, but alas some things will definately be different.

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Yay! shes closer with Harry and Neville! I cant wait until she finds out about her real family! (she doesnt know yet right? i didnt miss somethin? lol) great chapter, cant wait for more

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed the chapter. And no you didn't miss anything as of now she is not aware that her and Harry are related, nor that she had blood related family still alive. Although her friends have in a way become her family.

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Best story ever :D
PLEASE Write again soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much and I'll do my best.

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This is really great, I love the main character.
(She is a bit like me, except for the magic)
This is by far my favorite piece of writing from this website!
You have real talent, so good luck :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much, and don't you just love it when you can connect to the characters like that? I know I do. Glad you're liking it and thanks for the good luck wishes.

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I like the whole idea of the book. Good Job

Author's Response: Thanks so much.

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I really enjoyed this chapter, even if it was about a funeral. I can't wait for you to post more, and good luck on your exam!

Author's Response: You liked it good? That means it wasn't creepy that I liked writing it. Thanks so much for the good luck wishes. :D

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Please please Please write more i absoulutely love this story!

Author's Response: Glad you like it, and you can bet your life on it.

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This story is cool, you should definately finish it, you should go on to third year when Remus teaches at Hogwarts

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I can't believe how great the response to my story is. And it will be finished, oh thrid year is going to be a good year... *insert evil plotting grin*

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Could I just say, this is REALLY good! I liked the way you didn't make her friends with Harry straight away :)

But, aren't her and Harry twins? So, her birthday would be July 31st?

Author's Response: Thanks...and their birthdays aren't the same because Dumbledore made her look a year older when he left her in America and in the letter said her birthday was November 29 vs. July 31. He did this to totally throw off anyone who managed to figure out the fact that the Potters had twins .

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Im crying rite now. Please update soon

Author's Response: Oh I'm so sorry that you're sad...I'm trying to get it up, keep getting rejected but I think I've fixed all the problems now so it should be up in two/three days.

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This is really good, so full of emotion, almost as good as the original story! You should keep on writing, we will keep on reading!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it, and I will keep on writing my insanity needs some outlet ;)

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That is. . . so sad. I mean, at least she has people there for her, but really, this is the second set of parents she has lost (and on a holiday too - not that she knows/remembers that about her birth parents just yet)

Author's Response: Yeah I know, I hate that I had to write such a sad chapter. And it was really hard to make Ashley lose two sets of parents, but I feel like it will let me make her character stronger.

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I have to say I don't understand why they had to die. Isn't it bad enough that her birth parents died? Why do her adopted parents have to die too? Now don't think I'm trying to criticize your writing. It is outstanding; I just don't understand the plot twist.

Author's Response: Yeah I was kind of mad at myself for writing it at all, but I feel like it's necessary. The "plot twist" is going to allow for some character development I want to happen and it just sort of happened. When I originally thought of this story Harry and Ashley both lived with the Dursleys, but that got cut. And a quote I saw pretty much sums this up "It bothers me when people confess that 'such and such a character didn't deserve to die'. The message of the Harry Potter book is that death is real, cruel, and unbiased. No one dies just because they "deserve" it or is spared because they don't. Death is coming for everyone, no matter how scared we are to die."

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I invite you to read "The Potter Years", keep writing..

Author's Response: Hey I read it and I love the idea! But it's a little hard to follow. And you can bet I'll keep writing, not even a raging Hippogriff could keep Ashley and I at bay, especially since she would just tell it to chill out.

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i guess she definitely won't allow malfoy to say anything about her parents now :(
i thought the blue glow might of been some protection spell on her, but now i'm thinking it's her magic being strong enough to see and cast without a wand or incantation?
so will she tell anyone what's happened or hide it from them? would she be able to hide it with her emotionless voice? where will she live? (i suppose i'll have to keep reading to find out right?)
anyway i still liked the chapter even though its sad, and thanks for not leaving the cliffhanger for ages ;) are you planning on taking Ashley through all the years then or just seeing how it goes? i'd probably read it still if you did as i like it, so keep going until you don't want to i guess is what i'm saying :)

Author's Response: Oh yeah I'm pretty sure if Malfoy said a single word about her parents she'd probably hex him into next tuesday. Good guess on the bluish glow and the way I see it now (and nothing's set in stone, Ashley is definately in charge of this story) it's a little bit of both, mostly the latter though. As for telling anyone and where she'll be living--keep reading. Glad you liked it, and I am planning on taking Ashley through her years at Hogwarts and likely after, because I have all these crazy half-formed schemes and things that will happen. And besides how could I leave this story knowing none of you know what happened when the world finds out who she really is?

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Ahhh! amazing! and i just have one question... is timmy mcgee the mcgee from ncis only younger, or is he his son? stupid question, but Im lazy and dont feel like looking back :P Great chapter, and I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: YEAH ANOTHER NCIS GEEK! And yes Timmy McGee is a younger version of our very own probie. In my world Zach McDonald and Admiral McGee are Navy buddies. I'm so glad you liked it and I'm going to try and get the next chapter up soon. And don't worry about being lazy, I'm lazy all the time. Like right now I should really be studying for an AP Exam, but instead I'm answering reviews and writing the next chapter. :D

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That was nice. What's up with the bluish glow coming from her hands though? Some sort of shield?

Author's Response: Yeah the bluish glow was some sort of shield, and we'll get back to that later. It's just wierd becuase she called up something with power beyond what her capabilities should allow and she didn't use her wand.

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That's nice, but it kind of sucks because that means one of the original chasers won't be on the team - probably Katie because I think she's the youngest :(

Author's Response: yeah I did regretably have to kick one player off the team, but it won't be Katie. It was so hard picking someone to kick off, but I'm hoping to still get them in the story somewhere.

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yay! I was kinda down before this chapter but now I feel happy! (i dont know why, i just am now) I love your witting, and I can't wait for more. I hope that hermione and ashley become really close friends!

Author's Response: Thanks I'm so glad my writing makes you feel that way. And as for the friendship of Hermione and Ashley...we'll see.

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Definetly Loved it
awesome

Author's Response: Thanks so much

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It's great so far! I love it, keep writing more! (:

Author's Response: Thanks glad you're liking it

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Great but please finish the story

Author's Response: sorry this promises to be a long one...and then I'm planning to continue it past year one

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