Ahh you make me hate Pansy SO much!
I am so excited to see Lucius's reaction!
Loving the tension between the two girls, poor Hermione can't win today. I'm also excited to see if Pansy carries through with her 'hexing you later' threat. I'm excited to see how Ginny warms up to Draco... if she does ;)

Author's Response: I always really hated Pansy in the books, and i wanted her portrayed the way i always imagined her to be haha.
and you'll be the first to know where the story goes ;)
Thank-you lovely!

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this is so good! keep up with the fast uploads please? your story is an original storyline ive first come accrossed. absolutely brilliant. cant wait to read what happens next. thanks for the long chapter!!

Author's Response: Gosh, thank-you so much, the 7th chapter is already in the making! :)
Im so glad you like it :)

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OMG not Lucius! D:
If I were Hermione, I would totally be FREAKING OUT!!

Author's Response: Just wait and see, she might just ;)

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Aww :') I always thought Malfoy would be an amazing person without the connections with the Death Eaters. They always said he was the boy to make all the worng choices, but i think he was the boy who never HAD a choice.

Author's Response: I love that so much, that is so true :)
Thank-you for reviewing!

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Wow! This is a really good fanfic!! I really like the way the houses blended! Good Job!

Author's Response: Thank-you so much

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A challenge to write a change of heart convincingly. I like how you describe the mix of emotions on Draco's face. You know that he is going through his own hell just as Hermione is. This seems like a great start to an involving story.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!
im so happy that you understood where i was going with my descriptions!
:)

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Again you have held my interest and the flow of the story unfolding is realitci and could be written by JK herself. I find each action has it's own peg, a piece of a puzzel revealing more to the characteres involved. especially the fact Draco is not withh out the predjudices of past and gives hope to many who could do just that, erase their own predjudices. the fact ron tried his little scribble to appeease Hermione was a comic relief.. Please finish soon. I will wait a few months to check back to read. I do not like soap operas and must have a story from start to finish. yours I know will be worth it. I might sneak in an see if you finished occassionally. thanks you for the time spendt and for your excellent story telling. ps my last review did not take and knocked me off line. sorry you did not get it. I do not know wjy this happens..

Author's Response: Oh how you flatter me!
A review like yours always makes me feel so happy :)
I have almost finished chapter six and i promise it will be up really soon ! :)
thank-you so much!

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you brought action up fast and then emotions that where like quicksilver, then to being again at Hogwarts.. enjoyed the first 2 chapters, feel this is going to be a very enjoyable adventure. two main characters first..

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This is a very great story.There are a few spelling mistakes though.I cant remember them but there were some.Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Yes, im aware of the mistakes :) I been reading it over and discovered them, but i promise to go over them and fix them when i have a chance :)

thank-you!

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cheeky professor McGonagall Very cheeky and i love Draco Hes so lush :'D

Author's Response: haha he is :P
thank-you for reviewing!

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bloody brilliant! update soon

Author's Response: Thankyou so much, will do :)

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this is absolutely bloody brilliant. loving it so far... can't believe he lost all his memories :)

Author's Response: Yay, im really glad you like it :)

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I absolutely love the concept of completely cleansing Malfoy of his trained hatred. This is such a creative story! Can't wait to read te next chapter!

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Very good chapter!!! I'm actually shocked that Malfoy Was going to
Use the cruciatus curse!! And I love being shocked!

Author's Response: Yay! shock was what I was going for ;)

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This is a great chapter! I like that you are doing your own thing with it, and all the changes to Hogwarts. I hope you don't mind that I'm adding constructive critiscm in my reviews, I just know I would rather if someone noticed something to tell me :)! So here it is, try and use different descriptive words. Too many of the same one can give it a redundant feeling, I struggle with that also and combat it by reading what I write out loud. That makes a repeated word stand out to me so I can try and replace it :)!
Again I really love how many subplots you have created! It's keeping my attention completely captivated!

Author's Response: Yeah! ill definitely go through it soon with a thesaurus ;) haha
Im really glad you are liking it :D

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You are really setting yourself up for excellent plots! I love it! Draco is head boy, saved Hermione then angrily dismisses her, makes remarks to him being a different person, Ron ditches out without even a word to Hermione so not only is there relationship struggling but he's not attempting to fix it.. You have created so many subplots in just 2 chapters, it's great! It means you are going to keep us hooked :)! Again some grammar errors, whenever you have a lazy Sunday maybe just go through and edit your chapters :)!

Author's Response: Will do, yeah my idea was to excite the readers in the first few and then get right into it :)

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This is a great start! When you have spare time I would go through and double check some spelling, nothing huge just some minor words :) I move how many possibilities you left open for your story with this chapter!

Author's Response: Haha, yeah spelling always gets me, its so hard to see mistakes that you have made!
Thanks!

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I loved iit :) it was great and its cool and nooow im just trying to get more then 20 characters so i can post this thing.

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There were several great moments in this chapter! I especially liked the bit with Snape's portrait--I always liked that part of JKR's story line, that past headmasters were 'preserved' or what not as a portrait; it always made parting with characters so much easier.

Also--the rooming situations, I feel like you are setting something up here! On to the next chapter to figure it out!

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Wow! So an absent Ron is going to really make things interesting! Personally... I've never been too much of a Ron fan, so the more absent he is the better :)

You work in subtle effects of the war nicely -- I liked the bit about the thestrals. It was a sad moment but one that I think really hit home the extent of the war's impact on Hermione.

Also 'H' as a nickname was cute--haven't really seen that one used before!

Author's Response: Thanks :)
I agree about Ron ! He'll still be in the story though, but ill be portraying him as more of the villain in this, i hope it works though :)
x

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Ohhh what an interesting start! I wonder what made Draco save her?! What has changed about him... This has a lot of potential! Looking forward to seeing where you take this!

-ffleur

Author's Response: Thankyou :)

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Awesome. I love it!
can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank-you!
I so badly wish i wasn't so busy, i hate that i still haven't finished the next chapter!
I promise i will though ! x

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Woah. This story really blew me away. I wonder what is going to happen next and I think Draco is very sweet
10/10
~dramionedrunadrinny

Author's Response: Thankyou :) x

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I like how you allow Draco to become his pure self. please keep writing - I am very much intrigued

Author's Response: Thanks so much :-) the next chapter should be up tomorrow x

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A Breath of Fresh Air. How can you possibly have a writers block when you are working with a clean slate. They can be and do anything with the material you have written so far. Get Harry involved, have him help Draco with Quidditch. Get Ginny involved with Potions, Nevil can help with Horticulture, even Luna can be a help with Magical creatures, Hermione can do her part with charms and astronomy. Put a little conflict in there with Draco's closest friends. I'm sure it won't go over well at the beginning with so many people from other houses helping their lost friend, there could be sabotage or they might attempt an intervention of some sort to try to bring Draco back to the dark side lol I know, that sounded like star wars. anyway, just trying to get that wall to come down and stop blocking your path. It's a wonderful story so far, you really should take just 5 minutes a day and just keep some flow going. You just might have a future in doing this for a living. Just don't stop. I give you a 10 and the Best of luck for a swift and satisfying ending :) ta ta!

Author's Response: Wow. Thank-you so much, your comments made me feel truly happy about this, i think that perhaps that was where my writers block was coming from, the fact that i wasnt sure whether my writing was any good. Thanks so much for your input and you should know that im halfway through chapter six :-) xoxo

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