Hello!

Back again! I'm sorry that I immediately come back to this yesterday but I was busy and tired and just plain mush. (I'm sick) Anyway! We're back with the girls and I really enjoyed how you started this chapter, we really got a sense of who Rowena was with it. She doesn't seem particularly kind either and I was really worried about how she would receive the girls, especially Bea (I can't blame her for burying that hideous brooch) and I know that its not easy for the girls at all.
Once again though I really loved all of the sisters and how they were interacting. The play on all of their personalities was very entertaining and I just love Bea! She's hilarious and I can't blame her for wanting Rowena to leave. -_-
I'm curious to see how Dezzy's relationship with Godric spans out and its funny that everyone is dressing up their talks with romance and flowers and elopements. Hahha. Girls. :D
I'm not sure if Rowena would approve of course but I think you're going to put that in somewhere in the future chapters right? :D Hopefully? And Salazar! When are we going to see that creepy bloke again? I'm wondering about that while they'll be suffering with Rowena and her stuffy haughtiness!
I didn't see any grammar things and I really liked your pacing and flow, it was really easy to follow and didn't branch off topic or into other areas that weren't important to the chapter just then. :) Very great read and I'm really excited for more! Inform me immediately!
Uhm, like I said on the forums, expect Albus later today or tomorrow and after that its Abandon! So, until then I'll be looking forward to more of your work! Darcy and Louis? Hehehe.
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hello Gabbie!
I'm finally getting a free moment to answer your lovely reviews! Woohoo!
I loved writing Rowena. I picture as very tall and stately, and the fact that she has a colder disposition also adds to that. She's ver no-nonsense as you can probably tell!
I ADORED writing the sisters in this chapter!!! They all have such different personalities, and so sometimes they clash, and it's funny to see how they react to each other. Also, while I was writing this chapter I learned that Ettie was definitely the drama queen of the family! She can be worse than Bea! Haha.
Don't you worry about Godric! He'll be back, and Rowena will have quite a strong reaction to him. And Salazar will be back soon, too! Probably in the next chapter, so get excited to see him again!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!!
Cassie :)

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Another thank you! Woo! That was awesome!

Another wonderful chapter, Cassie! Fantastic in every way! I love how you write all the sisters, they're awesome! And the letter, I'll say again was so harsh, and I hate that he's so mean!
Yay, Ravenclaw's comeing to visit! Awesome! Then we'll have all the founders! I'm really excited to see where this story goes. Pwease update soon!
And I'm really excited for your one-shot! I really would love to see you write in first person, so that'll be a real treat!
And also, the story for my challenge! I CAN NOT WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU COME UP WITH!
10/10

Talk to you soon,
Eilidh :) x

Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed this chapter! I loved writing a chapter where the sisters all got along, because they really do love each other, even if it doesn't always seem like it. I'm excited for the mysterious Aunt Rowena, and hope she surprises you when you meet her character! And her father is hard to write because he's so harsh to his own daughters. There's nothing personal in his letter, and he doesn't even acknowledge that they miss him. I can't wait for you to read my one-shot, and I hope you enjoy it!
Cassie :)

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Hello!

I told you I would hop on this very quickly and so, here I am! I got your other message on the forums but I thought I'd just leave you a great review instead! :D
So, we're back with all the girls and I was glad that Dezzy's relationships with her sisters was cleared up a little and that she's been given permission to have Godric as a friend. I'm wondering how that will last though with this mysterious aunt of theirs coming to stay. I'm not sure how she'll be in a household filled to the brim with young girls and it worries me just a little (This is experience from my own aunts, who hate kids, hahaha) so I hope she goes easy on them!
Now, as for the letter she received from her father! Wow, that was pretty harsh, in an overly polite kind of way! What sort of business is he up to anyway? D:
I want to know and poor Dezzy! I was reminded of how Astoria felt when her dad asked her to uhm, get to know Malfoy! I'm not sure if their relationship is going to go in a good direction after this but I'm curious to see what you do with it. And no Salazar in this chapter?! That surprised me, I was getting used to him but you're probably up to something naughty (I hope so, hehehe) where he's concerned and I can't wait to see where else you go with this! :D
I had nothing to complain about at all, I loved all the girl's interactions and I really enjoyed the pace of it, though it was so short! D: How could you? Hahaha.
No grammar mistakes or anything and I enjoyed it right till the end, I was really glad that Dezzy was able to enjoy herself and forget about her mean papa. Hahahaha. I shall be back and awaiting the next chapter of course!
P.S.: "Not even a little fun?" was my favorite quote because I have a feeling that someone is going to be pretty bad regardless when their aunt arrives. Hahaha.
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hi Gabbie! It's great to hear from you again!!!
I really wanted to fix the sisters relationship to show that it isn't strained all the time, even if it seems like it. They really do love each other, and have to watch out for one another, because they don't have parents to do that for them. And as for Aunt Rowena... I can tell you now that a house full of girls will have really interesting dynamics with her character. But I don't think she is going to be how people expect her to turn out, and hopefully I'll surprise you! The letter from her father was weird for me to write, because there was a certain quality to it that I really wanted to achieve. He's very cold towards his daughters, and that's part of the reason that it seems overly polite. It makes it less personal in a way. That's why he calls Dezzy Desiya, and doesn't acknowledge that the girls miss him or anything. There's no Salazar because after what happened last time Dezzy was in the pavilion, no one wants to go right back. I know it was short, but I just wanted a peaceful ending after so much craziness! And yay! "Not even a little fun" was definitely something Bea would say, and that part of the chapter was written around that quote. I had fun making up their Uncle Byron and Great-aunt Eudora, too :) I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter, and can't wait to see what you think of my one-shot that's coming next! Thank you so much Gabbie!!!
Cassie :)

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Hello!

Argh, I am so late on this! There was no way for you to tell me that you had updated this (Except for on the forums which I am never on. :p) but here I am! And Merlin, Dezzy's sister's are sort of annoying but when it comes to their feelings about Salazar and what he might want...I can understand. That bloke freaks me out and I can't quite be sure of what you're making him out to be. Hero or misunderstood villain? Makes me so curious. (Blaise is in my head! Get out, you! Hahah.) Anyway, I will be back and I can't wait to see what happens between her and the family, Godric and Salazar. Her sister's are really nosy though.hahahahah.
P.S.: As you may have noted, my laptop is still dead but it should be back up (Hopefully) by next month. A long time, I know but I've decided that I'll update all of my chapters by at least three so you all can have plenty to read.
Much love and sorry for the lack of reviews from me!
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hi Gabbie! It's totally fine that you didn't read this right away, because I definitely didn't respond to your awesome review as soon as I should have! I was away on holiday, so I couldn't answer it! I love writing all of the Ravenclaw sisters, because they are just so different from each other, and I can experiment with personalities. Especially with Bea and Addie, who are both very strong-willed and opinionated, but Bea is much more vocal about it. But in the end they do want to watch out for Dezzy, because she really doesn't know how cruel people can be. I think her sisters are going to back off for a while, though, because Dezzy finally has gotten her point across that she can be on her own and not be getting involved in any shenanigans! Haha. And I love writing Godric and Salazar because they're so different, and Dezzy reacts to them in such different ways. LMT is next from me, but I still have quite a bit to go on that (sorry!!!) then I'll be back to this! I can't wait for updates from you, because your stories are fabulous!!! Thank you so much for this lovely review Gabbie!
Cassie :)

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Great chapter! I love the Godric/Salazar choice and i'm really looking foward to seeing who she chooses in the future if she has to. Fab grammer and everything, can't wait for an update. Titch95 x

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I loved how this chapter turned out, and am glad you like it, too! I hope you keep coming back to both this story and LMT!
Cassie :)

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Cassie this chapter was totaly awesome! AND I was the first reviewer, unlike LMT, whick I took ages to getting round to reading it and I was like the 100th reviewer! HAHA!
Anyway, this was such a sweet chapter and I love Godric, he's so sweet.
I can not wait for the next chapter! Update ASAP!! AND LMT! I can't wait to see what the letter from her father said.
Oh, and you'll be glad to know that I have thought about where you can come back into Love Story, I don't want to give away to much though...
The next chapter should be up tomorrow, as long as it doesn't get regected AGAIN!!!
Amzing chapter, keep up the brilliant writing!! 10/10 as always.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Im so happy that you gave me my 100th review! Woohoo! I never thought I'd make it this far, so thank you so so so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed this chapter, I had tons of fun with it. I love Godric's character, too, because he's really different from Salazar in a lot of ways. I'm working on the next chapter of LMT, and hope you like it once it's up! Thanks again for all of your sweet reviews!
Cassie :)

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Ooohhh. a twist Godric and Salazar! Again another great chapter, I can't decide who I like more. Will her father be making an appearance any time soon. It would be good to see if he has changed as is more loving towards his kids :) x FAB

Author's Response: Thank you! I can tell you that her father will respond to her letter, but won't be there in person for a little while. There is a one-shot of mine up called Pure Imagination, so you have something to read while you're waiting for updates! LMT is next, and I uploaded it last night, so it should be vaildated by the end of this week or early next week. Then comes a Lily/James one-shot! Thanks again!
Cassie :)

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Hello!

Argh, I'm so sorry that its been so long, I had no idea that this was up. And plus, I haven't updated for any of my stories in so long that its ridiculous and I'm sorry! Anyway, I didn't mind that this chapter was short, it gave me a taste of what the next few chapters might bring. And how dare everyone think Dezzy is going out being scandalous! I know how much that might have upset her of course and I don't blame her for running off in a huff. Now, I think I squee'd a bit when I saw Godric Gryffindor's name in this! Amazing job, I didn't know who he was and that was not what I was thinking at all. I'm curious to know more about her reaction to him and what he might do in the future, he seems rather amusing. I'm not so sure if I like her being out alone with Salazar though, I've got a nasty feeling about that bloke, to be honest. You must update soon!
Up next for me, hopefully is "A Force of Wills" and I'd like your honest opinion on it, I'm not sure if its a good chapter or not. :p
After that its my Misfits and then you get some Benjamin Malfoy action! Hope to hear from you soon!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hi Gabbie!
That's good that you didn't mind, because I was worried that people would be annoyed that the chapter was short! I just really wanted to put it up, and leave a cliffhanger for you guys! I thought it was really important that Bea accuses Dezzy of something scadalous, because Bea is actually the sister who is most likely to get involved in something like that. And also, Dezzy is really sweet and innocent, which I'm really trying to get across. That's something that makes her different from Jane, I think. Jane is sweet and kind, but she isn't naive, whereas Dezzy really doesn't know what people can really be like, and is very sheltered and in her own little world. That's why she is so embarassed when Bea accuses her of a scandal, because she is too innocent to even think of being involved in something like that. And Dezzy alone with Salazar! Who knows what might hapen... I just uploaded a one-shot last night, that's another next generation one-shot, so after that is validated and I update LMT, I'll continue with this story. I can't wait for A Force of Wills! I reread the entire story the other night because I love it SO MUCH. and the Misfits and Benjamin Malfoy! YAY! I'm so excited! I'll keep checking back for more from you!
Cassie :)

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Yay, I'm the first reviewer! :D
Cassie, this was so amazing! The writing was beautiful, as always, and the whole chapter was just...AMAZING! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, I can't wait to find out what happens at the pavillion!
I knew it would be Godric when you told me we would be meeting someone very improtant! You wrote him very well, alothough very different from how I imagined him, but still very well. I like the discripion of him, I can picture him very cleraly. :)
I just LOVED the writing in this. I kept stopping to read over lines and paragraphs, because it was so good, I just had to read it twice! That's what writing a lot does to you, you can't read anything without going over in your head whether the words are put together right, or if it should be written another way or...well, you get the picture :) But there was nothing I would say agaist this chapter :) It was brilliant :) And guess what, 10/10 :) xx

Author's Response: Yay! I'm happy that you are the first one too! I have some interesting ideas for the next chapter, and I can't wait to try them out and see what people think! But I'm going to update LMT first, and also write a one-shot about James and Lily :) I know that Godric isn't how most people would think of him, but I wanted someone normal, who Dezzy would be intrigued by, and also someone who is REALLY different from Salazar. I'm so honored that you think I write beautifully! I still have a long way to go, and a lot of improving to do until I get to where I'd like to be, but your support for what I'm writing now is astounding! Thank you so much!
Cassie :)

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Hi Cassie. This chapter was beautifully written and just so AMAZING!!! I really love this story, I hope you update soon.
You did a brilliant job writing the dance and I could understand it perfectly. I love Dezzy, she is such a good main charcter and I love how all the sisters have such different personalities but I love them all.
Thanks for all the reviews on my stories and for writing this, it was really amazing. can't wait for more!! 10/10 :)

Author's Response: thank you so much!!! I love writing Dezzy with all of her sisters, because they are all so different. And, of course, that means they will bump heads pretty often! Which is always fun to write, especially because I don't have any sisters of my own, and now I can make them up :) Thanks again for reading this story, its really fun for me to write! I'm going to update after the next chapter of my other story, Love Me Tender, gets validated.
Cassie :)

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Hi Cassie! I love, love, love this story! Brilliant chapter, I love all the characters and I really wasn't expecting the whole
Salazar thing!! You wrote him really well and I hope we see a lot more of him. Beautifully written, well done! 10/10 :) xx
~Eilidh~ xx

Author's Response: Thank you! I loved writing this chapter, because I got to introduce Salazar and his creepiness :) It's really fun to write, actually! And I love how Dezzy reacts to him. I hope you enjoy reading more of the story, and I'll be on the lookout for more of yours!
Cassie :)

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Hi Cassie, I'm so sorry this took so long, I've just been so busy but here I am now!
This is amazing. Really, really amazing. I am already obsessed. I love the charcters and it's so different from all the other stuff on this site. It's good to get away from Dramione, Hinny, Romione and all the rest. I love how it's so fairytale like. I love fairytales but it's good to get a HP one and this one is really amazing!
I've been looking for another novel to read since the last one I was following (Breakeven by lily_ginny47) finished and I think I've found one, well done! It's beautifully written, well done! 10/10
I should have my next fic out by tomorrow ('Love Story') feel free to have a look!
I have to go out now but I'll read the next chapters later on today. I can't wait to find out who was watching them!! :)

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! You really don't know what this means to me. I'm really excited for this story, and the fact that you think it's beautifully written... wow. I wanted to do something a little different, and the Twelve Dancing Princesses has always been one of my favorite fairytales, so I thought why not? I'll definitely check out Love Story, and can't wait to read it!
Thanks again!!!
Cassie :)

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this is very interesting! you did a nice job explaining the fan dance, i understood it perfectly! cant wait to know more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was worried about the dance, but based on the feedback I've gotten, it went pretty smoothly! I hope you check back for more, I'll be updating after I add another chapter to Love Me Tender, my other story, so check that out if you want something a little different from me, as well as this story. Thanks again for the sweet review!
Cassie :)

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That was so cute, I love the detailing of the dance it is very good1 I also think Dezzy and Bea's reactions are really good and the sisters interaction is accurate and also so cute! Thank's for the wonderful reviews and this chapter was adorable!! Update soon :) Titch95

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I LOVE Bea, and she is pulled mainly from a best friend of mine, who I think of as a sister, so she's fun to write. And Dezzy is adorable. She's a lot more naive than Jane, I think, which is fun to experiment with! I'll check back for more of The Doe and The Dog, so I hope you update soon! I promise to review every chapter, even if it takes me a little while to have time to sit down and read it before reviewing :) Thanks again!
Cassie :)

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Hello!

I told you I would be back really soon to read this and so, here I am! Thanks for your awesome review for "Growth"! I think I have some Benjamin Malfoy fans because that latest chapter shot up alot since two days ago! You guys are great!
Anyway, I have nothing to say about your pacing or grammar, only that I love how you've mixed the Grimms brother's tale so nicely with the wizarding world we all know, even if its just in their names. I enjoyed meeting Sebastian and I hope we see him again, maybe something will bloom there between he and Dezzy? But she seems totally into Salazar and I can't begin to tell you how worried I am for that! :D
I loved the sisters interaction and because I have none of my own, it makes me wish I did, just so I could stick out my tongue and be completely unladylike! Haha.
Oh, I was able to follow the fan dance really well, so no fears! It was very nicely done and I can't wait for LMT! Will be on the lookout for that!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: I loved that chapter of Growth, and it deserved a good thorough review! And you can count me in as a Benjamin Malfoy fan! I loved Sebastian too, and really wasn't anticipating him as a character, but he just kind of showed up. Sadly, he and Dezzy don't really go anywhere romantically, but there will be some more mysterious gentlemen coming along later! And Salazar definitely has something going on behind those creepy yellow-green eyes of his. I abslutely love writing all of the sisters, and it's super fun for me, because I don't have any either. At least blood related anyway. I consider all of my best friends to be like sisters, so that's where I pull a lot of them from :) I'm glad you could follow the dance, I was worried it wouldn'y be clear! I'm working on LMT, and am planning out a new story about Felicity McDell, who will return to the LMT plot soon! I can't wait for more updates from you, and will check for This Is Adurey Tang tomorrow!
Cassie :)

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Hello!

Huzzah! I remembered that you'd said you were adding the second chapter up to this and now, I am so happy that I've caught this! :D Ooh, I was not expecting Salazar at all! Love the play on characters by the way, I really love that and he's so spooky. I'm with Addie on him, he's a bit creepy and I commend you for making such a great male character that makes me think...hm...so excited for more! I have nothing to complain about pacing or grammar (Like I can talk...) and I'm curious to know where this goes. Dezzy might grow into more of a relationship with Salazar but I'm eager to know what the real issue with him is, he's hiding something and I'm dying to know what it is!
Also, before I completely forget: Our Misfits have another chapter tomorrow (I think...? And if you're wondering, I'm talking about Albus Potter and the Dark Lord's Prince). I so promised you guys "Growth" but I hit the most horrible block with it, wrote a chapter and hated the ending so I postponed on uploading it. It'll be corrected and changed as soon as Albus gets up there and then after that its "This is Audrey Tang: The Bad Taste" (I had a block with that too for some reason but got over it! :D) and after that is "A Force of Blaise--Wills" and I hope you stick with me! Dying for more of this and LMT!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hey Gabbie! I'm happy you picked up on Salazar! He's quite creepy, and trust me when I say you ain't seen nothin yet when it comes to him! Dezzy and Salazar's relationship will definitely grow, but I won't tell you how... and yay, I'm glad you realized that he is indeed hiding something, but you won't find out what that is for a little while. I uploaded the next chapter of LMT and it should be up later this week! Thank you so much for your amazing support! I can't wait for Growth and Albus and A Force of Wills and everything!
Cassie :)

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Awww. So cute, the grammer is as per usual amazing! I am starting to really like all the characters and get to know them better, I am really interested to see how the plot thinkens with Salazar! Please do more Salazar next time you write him really well, I always imaginied him to be quite sweet with a slight mysteriousness and edginess. Excellent. Please update soon

titch95

Author's Response: I'm glad the grammar is good, I really tried to proofread this story before uploading it! There will definitely be more Salazar to come! He's a really important character, and has some interesting traits that the princesses have yet to discover! haha I'm happy you're enjoying this, I love writing something based on a fairy tale.
Cassie :)

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Hello!

:D I just hopped on this after reading your lovely review for "A Force of Blaise--I mean, Wills" haha. And for a moment I thought that I was unaware of this story until you mentioned it was done by the Grimms Brothers and I went, "Ooh, now I recall this!" and yes, I got more than a little excited. I really liked this to be honest and true to you! That beginning was very smoothly done, I thought that she was really there and I was feeling sorry for her with that corset (Those seemed like they really hurt back then for women.) but then she woke up! I thought that Dezzy was the cutest name ever but I think she's a good leading lady so far, I'm curious to know where she goes and I love all the interaction with her sisters. All of them are different and I wonder, is that hard to do? So many people! Its like writing for those Wealsey's! But anyway, I liked the story that was around the kingdom, really curious to see if its true and I love that you weaved in Helga Hufflepuff so smoothly. I like the cross-over and I'm really, really eager to see who that creepy person at the end was! Staring isn't cool! :o But anyway, I'm glad that you posted this up, its really different from alot of other stuff out there. Keep it up! :D
But I totally lied about something: Because I've been so swamped, I haven't gotten around to even DARING to post a new chapter up. But I'll make it up to you! This brain can't fail me yet! :D
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: I liked starting out with a dream, because I wanted people to see what Dezzy wants, but can't have. I started out with Dezzy as a nickname and thought "hmmm what name could I create out of that?" and came up with Desiya! It's really fun writing so many sisters, because they have such different personalities (Addie and Bea *cough cough*) but someties it's hard to keep track of them all! I'm waiting for the second chapter to validate, so I hope you like that one! I'll keep checking back for updates on your stories, and I can't wait! You're one of my favorite authors on this site!
Cassie :)

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This is very well written. I am interested to see what is going to happen. I love the Brothers Grimm fairy tales so I can't wait to see where this is going.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm having fun with it, so I hope you stick with it and enjoy!
Cassie :)

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