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Review #26, by RoseScorp57 If you have a hyperactive cubicle neighbour, kick her - lightly.

28th March 2013:
This may sound horrible, but I'm okay with Dan dying. Aimee deserves better than some guy who is going to make promises he can't keep. Plus I really think James likes her, but doesn't know how to tell her.

Author's Response: ahaha, nah, it doesn't sound horrible. dan's been hanging around aimee for too long when he's not wanted. i don't know if i have the heart to actually kill him yet, but aimee does deserve better, you've got that one right.

ellie :) xx


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Review #27, by LittleMissPrincess My new apartment is officially the greatest place on the planet.

19th March 2013:
ohh i really love this chapter (:
james/aimee all the way!
but god dan is so annoying, why wont he just leave her alone?

Author's Response: aw, thank you so much!
i'm thinking jaimee - it's a regular name & a couple name.
and he wont leave her alone because he thinks he "loves" her.

ellie :) xx


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Review #28, by I hate dan !!!!! It is never a good idea to go to dinner with the should-have-been in-laws.

23rd February 2013:
this is such a good story but dan is such a brat and I really really hate him. Your an amazing writer really you are and Aimee is one of my favourite characters ever like really, so she can do so so so much better than dan who is a huge twit ! Update soon plzz :D

Author's Response: ahaha, that's a pretty good way to describe dan, actually. hit the nail on the head, there. thank you so much! you're so sweet. the update is out now, i'm just extremely behind on answering my reviews. ty so much!

ellie :) xx


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Review #29, by MERLINEXISTSWITHINMEFOREVER My new apartment is officially the greatest place on the planet.

23rd February 2013:
I LOVE THIS NEW JAMES.
And please let them kiss more...
And I loved what he said to Aimee before kissing her- it made me laugh, but it also seemed kind of adorable xD I don't know how, but it did.
JUST WRITE MORE MEEP.
And ditch Dan- please, he is annoying and is a little like Edward Cullen in the way that he breaks into her house all the time...
Just saying...

Author's Response: ME TOO ME TOO ME TOO.
and they're not going to kiss too much, haha.
well james can be very funny & sweet when he wants to be - he just doesn't want to be very often. i like that line too ;)
I AM WRITING MORE.
the next chapter, which has just come out, has more dan action :)
ty so much for the review, and i'm so sorry for the late response!

ellie :) xx


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Review #30, by xxxxx My new apartment is officially the greatest place on the planet.

23rd February 2013:
James is so starting to like Aimee!! Is he not?
They would be cute together, I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: i'm thinking he is too, my dear. she can be nice when she tries.
and the next chapter is out now! ;)

ellie :) xx


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Review #31, by Courtney Dark My new apartment is officially the greatest place on the planet.

16th February 2013:
Oooh I loved this chapter! All of your stories are so amazing-you really are an awesome writer, full of unique and original ideas!

I love the chemistry between James and Aimee and I love their different social statuses as well. This was a brilliant chapter and I hope you update soon.

Courtney:)

Author's Response: aw, thank you so much :) i'm not 100% sure whether they're always original or awesome, but you're so lovely for saying so :)

james and aimee grew up in very different places and that makes them different people. i think it makes it a bit more interesting.

ty so much for the review, and i'm so sorry for the late response!
ellie :) xx


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Review #32, by Serendipity1234 My new apartment is officially the greatest place on the planet.

16th February 2013:
Oh James definitely likes her. He's so cute :) I like him a lot better when he's occasionally cheerful too. And happy Aimee is great too. I'm so happy that's she's finally getting a life -getting a job, living somewhere nice, and maybe moving on from Dan. It's also nice that she's not just caving in to him every time he contacts her. He really is a piece of work. I really wonder how this meeting is going to go...whether she's going to stand up for herself some more or cave to him again.
I also like seeing them with James' family, though they didn't interact much in this chapter.
Update soon :)

Author's Response: ahaha, whether james likes her or not is still a little bit up in the air - even james himself isn't really sure what's going on with aimee, because they're together so often but they hardly know anything about one another. i like writing happy aimee, too, it's so much nicer than writing miserable aimee. ty so much for the review, and i'm so sorry for the late response!

ellie :) xx


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Review #33, by helpwillalwaysbegiven My new apartment is officially the greatest place on the planet.

16th February 2013:
Ou la la is James starting to grow feelings for Aimee, perhaps? I love this happy-James and this happy-Aimee! It's so nice to see them NOT having a go at each other all the time. And their kisses in this chapter... omg cute. Can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the amazing work!

Author's Response: i think it's nicer, too - it's so much nicer to write a teasing james and aimee than ones that are always at one another's throats. haha, the next chapter has been uploaded now because i'm such a slow coach, and there's more jaimee kisses ;) ty so much for the review, and i'm so sorry for the late response!

ellie :) xx


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Review #34, by al0h0m0raa My new apartment is officially the greatest place on the planet.

15th February 2013:
I started reading this story at the beginning of last year when it was on about chapter 10 and I wasn't sure how much I liked it-I did definitely like it because I love all your stories hehe-but I wasn't sure if it was as good as my favourite, Being Summer... but holy crap it is sooo good! I love James in this story as much if possibly more than in Being Summer! all I have to say for this chapter is FAB FAB FAB and keep it coming hehe

Author's Response: i was exactly the same about this story in the beginning, you know, when i was writing it. it was about chapter 8/9/10 when i actually started to look forward to writing it. i actually prefer this james to being summer james, haha, so we're the same on that count ;) the next chapter is up now because i'm so slow atm! ty so much for the review, and i'm so sorry for the late response!

ellie :) xx


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Review #35, by silver_coloured_moon My new apartment is officially the greatest place on the planet.

14th February 2013:
Yay, go Aimee! I loved this chapter, things moved forward for Aimee and James which I was squealing about :) I just don't like Dan. Nope, no Dan love from this girl. I think that James likes Aimee and Aimee will (eventually) like James and Dan can just... go away. Amazing chapter as always Ellie, so glad it was updated so quick!

Author's Response: i'm so glad that you liked the chapter :) they're finally making progress which is nice to write, you know. i was bored writing the same thing all the time. and i think i'm yet to meet one person who says they like dan, haha. ty so much for the review, and i'm so sorry for the late response!

ellie :) xx


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Review #36, by Loop My new apartment is officially the greatest place on the planet.

13th February 2013:
IM EXCITEEEDDD



Great Chapter! Incredible even!!! Please update soon!!

Author's Response: WHO I'M GLAD

thank you so much! the next chapter is out :D

ellie :) xx


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Review #37, by FallenAmaranth My new apartment is officially the greatest place on the planet.

12th February 2013:
Darling! An update! I have to say, I really do adore your stories, however this is quite possibly my ultimate fave! Closely rivalled by 'Daddy's Girl' of course ;)

I've just read this for the second time, the first was at 1:39AM this morning(exact, I know) but my screen was turned toward my bed and I couldn't review it there and then because I'm far too lazy to get up and fetch my keyboard. :D

Can I just say, the whole 'Aimee-blindfolded-and-James's-breath-on-her-neck' scene I ABSOLUTELY LOVED, I mean, come on they're starting to be nice to each other and he found her a job and she kissed him!! I know you know all this because you wrote it, but this chapter made me SO happy. Not just because I've been wanting to read BANG for so long, but because there were so many sweet moments between Aims and James(HA! Rhymes!) and also I WANT HER FREAKING APARTMENT!

The new one, obviously, not the one with mice. (Speaking of, I swear there's one in my house somewhere and all the cat does is sleep!)

I might have mentioned this once or twice in a previous review, but in case you'd forgotten, I really dislike Dan. With a passion. What is he playing at, not using correct grammar when he's texting? Honestly, he's worse than my mother! ;)

Nah, but really, I hope Aimee neglects to mention where she's moving to, until he ends up running out of post it notes. I really liked his mum though... :)

Why does he continue to pester her anyway? She's obviously in another relationship(not a proper one but he doesn't know that, and they're gonna get married anyway so what does it matter. By the way I don't care if they do or don't in your story, BUT THEY WILL ANYWAY, when you're not watching)

I feel like this review has not been helpful to your writing in the slightest, although now you know what one corner of the inside of my head feels like...

Although, I do think it'd be a bit better if the WANTED ad was in italics, but that's it :D :D :D

Ugh, I loved this, and you're SO speedy with updates that I almost want to marry you.

Almost ;)

EMILY :P

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Review #38, by Hedwig_Pie My new apartment is officially the greatest place on the planet.

12th February 2013:
OMG, I WAS GIGGLING AND LAUGHING THROUGHOUT THIS WHOLE CHAPTER BECAUSE IT WAS FREAKING AMAZING.
she got a job? she got TWO POTTER KISSES! PROGRESS? I THINK SO.
i am seriously in love with this story and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE QUICK! PLEASE!

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Review #39, by AlexFan My new apartment is officially the greatest place on the planet.

11th February 2013:
No Aimee, no, you do not want Dan, you want James. Say it with me, you want James.

Oh my gosh I loved James in this chapter, he was just so damn nice (well, for James anyway) and I can already tell that he likes Aimee now for real. It's just painfully obvious to me!

Of course, I could be wrong about him liking Aimee (I'm hoping that I'm right though!)

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Review #40, by Hannah My new apartment is officially the greatest place on the planet.

11th February 2013:
JAMES AND AIMEE ARE FINALLY GETTING SOMEWHERE!!

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Review #41, by Hannah My new apartment is officially the greatest place on the planet.

11th February 2013:
JAMES AND AIMEE ARE FINALLY GETTING SOMEWHERE!!

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Review #42, by aquabluez17 My new apartment is officially the greatest place on the planet.

11th February 2013:
ooo!! I wonder if Aimee is starting to actually like James! She did seem friendlier in this update and if anything she is more tolerant now which is a BIGG deal :P

I really do hope the whole Dan thing blows over soon and that Aimee makes a choice since he is kinda annoying and possessive and she deserves much better like James :P

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Review #43, by Courtney Dark It is never a good idea to go to dinner with the should-have-been in-laws.

20th January 2013:
Hey there!

Wow. This is amazing chapter. In saying that, all the chapters of this story are awesome, as are all the chapters of your other stories-I honestly think you are my favourite author on this whole site!

You are great and creating funny, likeable, many layered characters in such a short space of time. I loved Dan's family (in a 'OMG! They're so horrible sort of way) and Molly was just awesome in this chapter. I loved the way she just barged on in to a strangers house!

The conversation between James and Aimee was really sweet and I am glad they are growing closer at a good pace, while still constantly arguing. I feel super sorry for Aimee and hope she can get her life back into control-and I am looking forward to seeing what happens at the Quidditch match!

Courtney:)

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Review #44, by Georgia It is never a good idea to go to dinner with the should-have-been in-laws.

19th January 2013:
Ok, so I'm probably mistaken about this, but I can't help but feel like there was a small hint at the beginning of this chapter - third paragraph to be precise - to a future plot that, if I've assumed correctly (which I probably haven't) is a massive gamechanger-plot-twister. Oh God I'm not sure how I feel about this...

Anyway amazing chapter love Aimee and James, Dan seemed annoyingly cute and it made me want to sob and as always I love Molly Weasley to the greatest extremes, (yay).

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Review #45, by the ghost reader It is never a good idea to go to dinner with the should-have-been in-laws.

19th January 2013:
I like this chapter, yeah its really good to hear aimee's past. Keep going. Like this story so much. :)
And yeah do update Being Summer fast please!!
waiting for your updates...

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Review #46, by Serendipity1234 It is never a good idea to go to dinner with the should-have-been in-laws.

18th January 2013:
Poor Amy!! She really is such a sweetheart :) I love her. And I love Lois! She's so funny and I love that she appreciates how Amy is such a nice person and stands up for her :)
And James and Amy are sort of becoming friends ❤❤ sharing secrets and talking and he was happy to spend some time with her. That might be pushing it but he didn't just leave her a message on her cell phone. He wanted her to come over and called Molly looking for her and was surprised that she wanted to leave and seemed to kind of want her to stay...he likes her. He must. I mean he was thinking of getting her an apartment in his building. If she lived in the same building they would definitely cross paths a lot. I just know he likes her. Even if it's only a little bit.
Update soon!

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Review #47, by AlexFan It is never a good idea to go to dinner with the should-have-been in-laws.

18th January 2013:
I knew there was reason that I liked Molly! I just loved how she barged in there and was all "hi, she's dating someone else, bye!"

I think that was probably one of my favourite parts in the story. Anyway, the ending was really intense and it does suck that Amy had to do all of that for her mother and her mother just forgot about it. I mean, you'd think you'd remember your child giving up their life to keep you alive or something.

Anyway, the ending was really sad and depressing but hey, at least I know more about Aimee now!

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Review #48, by JJtheNerdfightingStarkid Maybe he's different, but he's probably exactly the same.

15th December 2012:
Awwh. James had better stay and make sure she's alright before he leaves! This chapter made me really like Aimee/James, and I don't want it ruined already!!

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Review #49, by Polyjuice_Pixies I seem to be bordering on becoming a psychopath.

3rd December 2012:
I can usually tell whether I'm going to like a story by the summary, and I knew that this one wasn't going to disappoint me. I love it! I can't wait to read more :)

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Review #50, by blackzero Maybe he's different, but he's probably exactly the same.

30th November 2012:
This is one heck of a love triangle with six sides.

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