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Review #26, by HPManiacs And just when everything looks like it's going to be alright...

26th August 2013:
NO! HE DIDN'T DO IT!!! HE'S LYING!!

Is it strange that sometimes I just want to yell to non-existent characters while I'm reading? No? Good cause I do that a lot haha. Update soon so I can see what happens!

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Review #27, by AlexFan And just when everything looks like it's going to be alright...

26th August 2013:
First of all, the way that James says that he likes Aimee is so romantic it rivals Shakespeare and second of all WHAT THE HECK IS THIS!

This is not okay! I can't even anymore! I have lost the ability to even! Aimee, don't run out on James, he didn't almost kill Daniel, he's lying! Since I'm the reader and I know that James' confession is false, I'm angry with Aimee -even though I shouldn't be because she has a right to be angry- because James is just trying to protect her brother, he didn't actually do it!

This is when you know that a guy cares about you, they take the fall for a crime to protect your family member, not their family member but yours.

I hope that everything gets figured out in the next two chapters because if everything ends on a bad note and James and Aimee don't get back together, I will probably cry.

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Review #28, by Delusionist And just when everything looks like it's going to be alright...

25th August 2013:
I did not think it to be possible, but I start to hate Dan even more. If I was neraly killed in a car accident caused by Mark I would have probably accussed him, too. But saying that it was attempted murder... this is a thing Dan would most certainly do. (DramaQueen)

Poor Aimee :( But I'm sure she will have a talk with Mark and then realize just how much James loves her! Thus I'm not worried about her. And James? A true Gryffindor!

About my pregnancy theory (wich I do not believe in anymore):

PRO:
- Aimee has gained weight
- sick feeling after Sandwich
- Feeling ill more recently

CONTRA:
-Aimee has gained weight, but due to healthy eating
- Aimee smokes and Drinks alcohol (she doesn't know yet that she's pregnant, but I like to believe you would be a model author and set a good example
- Protection (If her brother has met such a fate from an one-night stand she is probably very careful; then again she was drunk...)

But somehow I do not think Aimee is pregnant, because you only have two chapters left (wich I am looking forward to :D ) and there wouldn't be any space left for yet another major plot change.


I really enjoyed your Story so far and had a fun time reading it :D So now I'm eaerly waiting for the update! Keep going, you're doing great :D

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Review #29, by Delusionist Ex-boyfriends' families tend not to like your new boyfriend, I've discovered.

25th August 2013:
No no no no no no NO

Please tell me, that she is NOT pregnant with Dan's child! I can already see it coming. and James wouldn't mind, because he loves her.

Or I do interprete too much here and she just feels down because of Dan... but that sandwich gave her a bellyache...suspicious

I'm such a delusionist that I still believe in happy endings. And that includes a happy small Potter-Woods Family. If she had Dans child everybody would know that Aimee cheated on Potter while they were already "dating". Including the press and they'd make Aimee's life hell.

The reason I would disapprove of a "Dan-Baby" is a) because I love James and b) loathe Dan (no one should treat his girlfriend like a random maid).

But it's your story and I'm happy with whatever outcome there is, because your story is not a cliche story and I appreciate that very much. I wouldn't mind though if the ending includes a happy Potter-Wood Family.

Well, I guess I'm going to find out whether she's pregnant next chapter.

Oh, and by the way: I love your story, your characters (except for Dan...he's a prick) and especially your style of writing. Keep going, you're doing very well!

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Review #30, by dreamingaway And just when everything looks like it's going to be alright...

24th August 2013:
OMGMYHEARTISGONE. How could you!!?! !)1. Making Dan a huge snitch 2. Have me fall in love with James' new person thingy then send him to jail and 3. Freakin make Mark freakin do such a freakin evil thing!! update now. My needs have not been satisfied though you have been putting more romance (which I love). And have I mentioned how good this story is?!?! PLEASE UPDATE BEFORE I. *insert threatening threat of all threats*

Love love love shocking end too such a good chapter xxo ;) :) ;) 10/10

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Review #31, by StellaRose And just when everything looks like it's going to be alright...

23rd August 2013:
Wow. I guess I understand why you had James take the blame but still...wow! I'm guessing he did it because he thought he'd get off easier than Mark?

While we're on the topic of Mark, I'm still really confused about his and James friendship. Were they friends at Hogwarts and then lost touch? Otherwise, why didn't James know more about Mark? The kid, his job... I was confused about why Mark came to James in the first place about the car accident and Dan. Was it only because James is dating is his sister? Their conversation just made it seem as though they were better friends than I thought they were.

Besides that minor part, I really do love your story. So addicting!

I hope you update soon!

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Review #32, by house elf And just when everything looks like it's going to be alright...

21st August 2013:
This was a rather awesome chapter. The cuteness. The unexpectedness. The... DRAMA. :D

I did notice you accidentally jumped from past tense to present quite a few times which was a bit distracting, but besides that the chapter was perfecto and I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: thanks, doll :D

and i've noticed myself that i've been doing that a fair bit. see, i'm writing one story in present and one story in past atm and i'm always writing between the two by accident. i'll have to get better at it.

thanks, babe

ellie :) xx


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Review #33, by Serendipity1234 And just when everything looks like it's going to be alright...

21st August 2013:
Wow, only 2 chapters to go? I can't believe it's ending! AND THEY FINALLY GOT TOGETHER. HALLELUJAH. They are so cute together. But why would he take the fall for Mark? I know they're friends and Mark has a child, but I can't see this working out...Dan said it was Mark and aren't paparazzi photographing James all the time? He's the one who got the call and told Aimee and...he's not going to get punished for this, confession or not. Mark wouldn't let him take the fall and I'm sure Aimee will figure out he's protecting her brother. But why did he do it? Did he not want her to be mad at Mark? Why?
I really liked all the James and Aimee moments in this chapter.
Update soon!
(still crossing my fingers Dan will somehow die.)

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Review #34, by Ms V And just when everything looks like it's going to be alright...

20th August 2013:
TWO CHAPTERS!!! PLEASE LET THERE BE A SEQUAL. I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! And they just admitted to liking each other.

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Review #35, by simran And just when everything looks like it's going to be alright...

20th August 2013:
HWAAT SS? I WAS JUST GETTING HAPPY AND THEN BOOM WHAT THE FUCK

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Review #36, by anon And just when everything looks like it's going to be alright...

20th August 2013:
JAMES. NO. STOP.
oh god why?!!?!???
and now aimee's going to hate him more than anything. AND they were so happy.
adsfwghsjsksl i just feel so sorry for everyone right now.

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Review #37, by Emily And just when everything looks like it's going to be alright...

19th August 2013:
OH MY GOD
NO
OH MY GOD
NO
W-o-w I was not expecting that. The title of the chapter gave it away, but I just thought Dan was like going to wake up and be like, "Aimee, I love you dearly!" and then she'll be stupid and go back to him.
Please make this okay omg I love Aimee and James together.

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Review #38, by helpwillalwaysbegiven And just when everything looks like it's going to be alright...

19th August 2013:
HOLY. SHIT. JAMES! You Gryffindor, you :( Omg Ellie please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next!

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Review #39, by Voldys_Moldy And just when everything looks like it's going to be alright...

19th August 2013:
ASDFKDNCKSDNVKVDSVS.
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ASDGKDACKSDNKNGg
OH MY GOD. I CAN'T EVEN. I JUST. I CAN'T. WHAT. HOLY. MY. WHAT. THIS. CAN'T. HEAD. IMPLODE. ARSGSDHFAFSDAFM.
Do you see what you've done to me? I can't even think! I can't English! I JUST FREAKING CAN'T HANDLE THIS, OKAY?! WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?
James! God! Argh! I'm really starting to like the guy, and he and Aimee were so cute and I never say that about anything except for baby animals and oh my God oh myGodOMFG. ADSKFSNDC.
I am so upset right now! AH. GAH. URGH. MEUH. I FEEL LIKE DORY BECAUSE I'M MAKING WHALE SOUNDS AND THIS ISN'T HEALTHY.
Why did he do that! Why, James? Why are you so stupidly Gryffindor and gah! Okay, Mark: I'm depending on you now. But, like, I want Aimee to find out that James didn't try to kill Dan and I want her to know the truth, even though that's going to kill her, but at the same time I know that Mark can't go to jail because what would happen to Jack? BUT. BUT WHAT IF. WHAT IF NO ONE WENT TO JAIL. WHAT IF DAN ACTUALLY DID SOMETHING COOL FOR A CHANGE AND HE WAS JUST ALL, "I'M NOT DEAD AND MARK'S MY HOME-SKILLET SO I DON'T WANT TO PRESS CHARGES."
PLEAAASE? I really like that idea. Because then everyone's happy (except for Dan because he's rotting in some hospital ward but I don't even care) and Aimee and James can live together and have lots of, ahem, fun (AND OH MY GOD THAT STORY ABOUT THE SQUIRREL I DIED NOT EVEN KIDDING) but no kids because I just can't picture James not throwing his child out the window when annoyed with it and Mark can marry that Muggle girl and Jack can have a mother and everyone will be happy and WEEE!
(Just so you know, this chapter clobbered my feels and so I am not quite sane right now. Even less so than normal.)
Pretty please update soon because my heart is going to implode and I need to know what happens!

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Review #40, by Solo And just when everything looks like it's going to be alright...

19th August 2013:
It was all going so well. I was smiling. They were smiling. They were having a good time (eh eh nudge nudge). Everybody was happy. Then, wham! Hit us with that. Now no one happy.

But on the other hand your writing is excellent and I can't wait for the next chapter no matter how much I'm screeching in frustration, so well done!

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Review #41, by WottersAreHotter And just when everything looks like it's going to be alright...

19th August 2013:
OH. MY. GOD.
YOU DIDN'T JUST DO THAT
If you're going to leave such a big cliffhanger than you gotta update SOON

Amazzing story!

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Review #42, by hermionestwin7052 Ex-boyfriends' families tend not to like your new boyfriend, I've discovered.

29th June 2013:
Great story .. and what a cliffhanger here! Keep posting!!

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Review #43, by carosquiggle3003 Ex-boyfriends' families tend not to like your new boyfriend, I've discovered.

6th June 2013:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I started reading all of your stories after I read Being Summer, and they're all so amazing! where do you get all the ideas from?!?!

anyway. thankyou for writing c: know that i love you xoxo

P.S. Can Aimee please be a little nicer to James? I'm lame, i know, but i get kinda sad everytime she shoots him down...

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Review #44, by hanna Ex-boyfriends' families tend not to like your new boyfriend, I've discovered.

2nd June 2013:
holy mother of god
this is amazing on every possible level
and kiind of messed up too
wow
you HAVE to write more as soon as is humanly possible, preferably sooner

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Review #45, by Hpfan12 Ex-boyfriends' families tend not to like your new boyfriend, I've discovered.

1st June 2013:
Oh my this is getting so dramatic!!! I want Dan to be ok but I want her to be with James. And oh my goodness her brother!!! He shouldn't have left Dan like that but I hope Aimee won't be too angry with him. Stuff is getting crazy!!

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Review #46, by lightyoureyes Ex-boyfriends' families tend not to like your new boyfriend, I've discovered.

20th May 2013:
I am absolutely in love with this story! Please update soon, it's one of the best I have ever read, I love your writing style! I'm not one to review stories, because with most I can always spot mistakes or things that are poorly written, but yours is amazing, I'm really enjoying it!

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Review #47, by DracoAndTheMalfoys Ex-boyfriends' families tend not to like your new boyfriend, I've discovered.

19th May 2013:
Hello! This is my first review on this story so I just have to say that I've read 17 chapters in like 4 hours and it's just so addicting! My favourite character has got to be Ginny and Molly as my second favourite ;D
MY main thoughts whilst reading this was;
'...well that escalated quickly!'
But yeah, awesome chapter! I have a feeling that Dan will most likely die, since I feel like Amiee has accepted that there will be no way her and Dan can get past this point together. I'm still not too sure how I feel about the James/Amiee parts together. I can't wait to see how Amiee finds out how her brother (sort of) tried to kill Dan and how she responds to it all.
Overall, a very dramatic chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next :D
Bye :3

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Review #48, by dracoisadaddysboy Ex-boyfriends' families tend not to like your new boyfriend, I've discovered.

13th May 2013:
This is the best fanfiction EVER, please don't take too long between chapters, I'm going insane here !

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Review #49, by Serendipity1234 Ex-boyfriends' families tend not to like your new boyfriend, I've discovered.

7th May 2013:
Still kind of hoping that Dan will die, though the chances seem slim. I'm really proud of Aimee though for that whole monologue she had in the hospital ward. She's really starting to figure things out be strong. You keep saying that James isn't even sure if he likes her and blah, blah. But I know he does, even if he doesn't realize it yet. He clearly cares about her in some way for always being there for her. And he's also clearly attracted to her. So maybe his feelings aren't exactly strong, but there's something there. He just doesn't know it. Or won't face it. And the same goes for Aimee but I'm convinced she likes him a significant amount. I think they're almost friends.
James and Mark being friends doesn't really surprise me because for whatever reason I kind of assumed they would be on friendly terms, at least. They played quidditch together so they have something in common, a bond, memories, etcetera. I do wonder why neither of them has mentioned that they're actually friends to Aimee, though. That's sketchy.
And I feel bad for Mark. He acted on instinct while he was panicking when he left Dan behind. Yeah, it was rotten of him, but I don't think he would ever do something like that again. Sort of like Finny and Jean in "A Separate Peace". I don't know if you've read that? It's good, I read it freshman year. But at the same time, though I feel bad for Mark since I really do think he's a good guy, he deserves whatever comes to him. Sure, the situation affected his behavior, but he put himself in the situation. He planned to do something he knew was wrong. And he had to have known there was some sort of risk involved. He wanted to rough Dan up a bit and went to far. His intentions were never good...I guess everyone has a dark side.
Update soon!
(You should write soaps -you would make millions ;) )

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Review #50, by Hedwig_Pie Ex-boyfriends' families tend not to like your new boyfriend, I've discovered.

5th May 2013:
amazing. i left an epic review before, but it got deleted, so i cbb to write it again; but just thought you should know i loved this chapter :D

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