oooh snape! I am really intrigued now. I also think its really great how lily and rose both have flower names and snape is drawn to that and their red hair. interesting. I am very curious to see how this plays out. IF snape is introduced again later.
this story just has us asking more and more questions haha its torture! I liked this story at first but this chapter took it up another level. I did get confused about the 'spots' thing though. that could be because I read the chapter so quickly. I am not sure how spots relates to the kitchen? haha I feel kinda stupid at the moment. my interpretation is he is just calling her something because he doesnt know if she has said what her name is. and the thing he is referring to from the kitchen is that because it appears that snape is trustworthy and he is a slytherin then he really is NOT trustworthy. (because he said you can trust the slytherins that you know are untrustworthy). so whats my grade on understanding? A- maybe? B? haha sorry for the long review I am kinda rambling. avoiding homework.
great chapter. cant wait for the next one
btw I read the answer to my last question in the review. thanks so much for replying :)Author's Response: Don't worry, you've pretty much got it. Malfoy's calling her Spots in case she hasn't told Snape her name. There be more on his choice of codename next chapter ;) The trustworthy thing was kinda right, basically Snape has his wand pinpointed on Rose, but Scorpius wants her to turn her back on the wand so she can get away. What he was referring to in the kitchens was that she should trust him that it will be ok if she turns her back on the wand. And she does :) Ooo, this next chapter, which is currently sitting in my word document, is going to be good. Like sexual tension up to the ceiling good. Sorry, I'm taunting you a bit ;)
Thanks for the review and have great day. Report Review
loved it as always!! update soon please!!
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Ooo! This has to be one of my fav chapters. Scorpius was seriously h.o.t in this one. And their little episode in the kitchens.The one thing.hm the one that Scorpius could do to Rose that would make her hate him? I think I have an inkling on what that might be. I so cannot wait for the next chapter. I want more of this! Now. And Spots, aw. I presume he called her this so Snape wouldn't know she really was a Weasley? Theories. I am in love with this story! See what you do to me! Report Review
Lets think, the one thing he can do to Rose... Make her blush beet red if he wanted to. He was going easy on her in the kitchens. lol
This was a fun chapter. Scorpious got to flex his Head Boy muscles. And Rose got to make a new friend in the past. Oops! Report Review
Love it! Would it be rude to ask for another chapter like now?? Report Review
YAY A new chapter! :D
I am really confused about what happened with chrissy and rose during lunch. she is angry with her... I gathered that. but I didnt get anything else.
btw I am SO happy with what you changed the story description to! I think the addition of the timeturner sand is very very important when it comes to getting viewers. I am so excited for you and cant wait to see the reviews come flying it once people see this story :)
do you think you could comment on this review and explain what happened with chrissy and rose? or at least what was meant to be understood by that? I will check this review often to see if you end up replying. :)
cant wait for your next chapter.Author's Response: The Chrissy and Rose thing is pretty much meant to confuse ;) Point is that Chrissy is angry at Rose for something, in her own special way. Rose doesn't delve into that much, presuming its just Chrissy being Chrissy. But...I'm being really bad now, is it a coincidence that she's off with Rose the day after she and Harrison had that nice chat? Food for thought.
Thanks for the review, have a nice day :) Report Review
ah! LOVE IT. Awesome. Loved Peeves! You made me love Peeves. (shakes head at your ability). Please update. They have to get together. 10/10 all the time! Report Review
I really really love your story!!! keep on going :))Author's Response: Next chapter should be out soon! Just finishing it off. ;) Report Review
Poor Rictor! I swear he didn't mean to that...Rose really is an idiot when it comes to guys ;) Did love this chapter, little confused by the ghost thing, but I think I've got it now. I cannot belive Zabini threw a party! That's what Edgar was trying to tell Rose! Aw. Looking forward to the next chapter for more Rose and Scorpius love xxx
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This is really good! Noticed you hadn't updated in a while. Please, please do! This story is really something. Read it all the way through last night and I think your on the tip of something big... Its one of the slow romances, which are always the best and agree with some of the other reviews on here that Rose and Scorpius's relationship is practically brimming with sexual tension.
I am enjoying the characterization of the other characters as well. Broody Albus. Playboy James. Eccentric Chrissy. Thoughtful Harrison. I love the way you're not overwhelming us with the Weasley/Potter family and introducing characters slowly so we get a feel for them.
The time-turner plot is an ingenious idea. Really, I've read tons of them, but nothing like this. You've worked your story into the main canon really well.
Rose and Scorpius. It reminds me of some of the more darker Dramione Stories. Their relationship is violent but its taken me a few chapters to realize they are so good together! Rose is much more compliant and generally a nicer person when she's with Malfoy (perhaps because he's so bad!) and Malfoy seems to love dissecting her and their relationship. Rose seems to have a thing about always being right as well and think Scorpius puts in her in place sometimes. I cannot WAIT for this relationship to progress!
Overall I love this story! A few grammar slips ups that look more like typos, but god this is good...scarily good. 58 reviews now...by the time this story is finished I think you'll be in your 200s easily ;) Report Review
I really love this story! I just found it today and I'm hooked! its such an original idea with the time-turner stuff...plus, most of the Sco-Rose stories (or the ones I've read anyways) like to make Scorpius into a sweet little Potter tag-along, so you're view of him as an arrogant, smirking, sexy-beast Slytherin is very refreshing. In short, you're an awesome author & please, please, PLEASE update soon!Author's Response: Good! You find him sexy! I was afraid that people were put off by his arrogance and general dislike for everything and everyone. I personally love him. And the Potter tag along thing did make me chuckle, he is no such thing. And the smirking will keep on coming...thats a promise.
Thanks for that lovely review! ;) Report Review
Wow that teacher is a b***hAuthor's Response: Rose agrees with that comment. ;) Thanks for your review. Report Review
!OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOGOGOMG Report Review
more insight into scorpius's past and why he behaves the way he does. thankyou! :D
I look forward to finding out more in the future :) Report Review
harrison does like rose doesnt he?
poor scorpius :( now I see why he wants to hate rose so much. he was bullied so much that I think he thinks that it would be easier to just hate people and keep those defenses up so he doesnt get close to anybody. it makes life for him a whole lot simpler. however I dont think he really hates her.
this is a really interesting plot twist. I love it! maybe you should include something in the description of your story after what you already have such as "a potion and time turner gone horribly wrong". hahah that sounds really lame but something including a time turner will really attract attention from people just skimming over the 'next generation' stories.
just my two cents. Report Review
the plot thickens
oh malfoy, if he really wanted to get inside her head he should be smart enough to not get himself into trouble too. he is slipping up. something is clouding his judgement ;)
anyways this is review 52 :D
good luck and I hope you are having a great dayAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for your very dutiful reviews ;) Glad your liking what your reading, next chapters will be here soon... Report Review
jeez. as much as I should be expressing sympathy for rose over her injuries I still feel annoyed with her. its a little bothersome that she always thinks she is right but thats okay. flaws are what make a charector become a person.
I think you have 50 reviews now like you wanted :D success! I am glad to helpAuthor's Response: Yes! I knew it was possible :) And I think you did play a big part in that, so heaps of thanks and what not.
I agree with you, Rose is annoying, quite stuck up and often wrong. But she is the most fun to write ;) Report Review
you know I actually believe that Rictor is interested in her. I dont think things will work out at all but its good to see her reaction to him.
there is one thing that kinda bothers me. you wrote;
"“Thank Merlin”, Chrissy exhaled as I sat on the same sofa in front of the blue fire. “I thought you’d eloped with Albus”. "
I have no idea what to think about that. I mean they are cousins. . I trust that you know what you are doing though :)Author's Response: Rictor Haven is like a puppy Rose kicks. So i do feel sorry for him, but I feel more sorry for Rose, as she never fully realizes what she's doing ;)
Albus and Rose. Albus struggles with normal relationships because he thinks everyone is just after the fame that comes attached to him. Rose is the only one who knows what he's going through and hates her family because of that.
In no way is their relationship romantic (as Chrissy assumes).
But its that very dependent relationships that some people struggle to understand. Albus feels like he can only talk to Rose. Rose would risk anything for Albus.
I've found people can often mistake these feelings for romance - it's not.
Hope that clears things up a bit ;) Report Review
I wonder. will the meaning behind what harrison smelt in the love potion come in anytime soon? or was it just to add some detail? maybe I am just reading into everything too much. since this is my second time around reading these chapters I am trying to pick up new information hehe
also I am really surprised this chapter didnt get any reviews!
so I am honored to be able to add one :P Report Review
HmmmM I too would like to know the answer. what exactly is James planning now that he is officially removed from head boy?
I like the irony of the ending with the bag of roses.
good job :) Report Review
I cannot belive I've just scrolled straight past this story before! Awesome, thought I'd let you know. I can't describe how this is different from other Rose and Scorpius ones, I can't put my finger on it, but it is and its so good. Maybe its beacuse their both as horriable, but funny and charasmatic as each other. Little disturbed by her relationship with Albus, but I can see you plan to sort this out. Rose is awesome, I want to die on top of Scorpius, you've made him so bad there's no need for the fag behind his ear. Looking forward to the next installment. Report Review
O m g this is totally awesome PotterrificAuthor's Response: Aw! Thank you ;) Report Review
bloody hell its amazing as ron weasley would've said :) no i really love it, its really catchy and not a typical romancy thing. which i really like :) anyways just wanna say keep up the good work and even though i said its not typically romancy and you put a bit of romance in??? anyway thankyou! xxAuthor's Response: Romance is on its way. I promise ;) Thanks for your review, glad you enjoyed the story. Report Review
I saw your request for reviews and thought I'd add to the collection. Beautifully written and different story from all the other Rose/Scorpius fanfictions. Looking forward to next chapter so please, please, please, update as soon as you can, I spent the whole of last night reading this, I should have been sleeping, but this was worth it :) Report Review
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