This was amazing! Just - I have no words. The only reason you got a 9 is because it ended.

Author's Response: Thank you!!! Although - Chapter 19 isn't the end. It's just the end of Part 1 . . . sorry 'bout it.

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hysterical. really...

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Hey!
This is a great story and yes I only just read it but I honestly could not stop reading it once I started.

I love the ideas that you have used and the plot is great.
I was really sad when I finished this chapter because I could not continue reading and figure out what will happen next. Such as did the vow break because they all thought she was lying to them? Or did that not count because she technically did not tell them herself?

Regardless of those to answers, I feel the need to tell you that you need to update immediately or I will... I will. Well I am not sure yet but it will be something very bad.

Thanks for your excellent story that I enjoyed reading and please update soon.

-B

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I would have updated sooner, except I was on vacation (*_*) so . . . an update should come soon. I hope the next chapter answers your questions.

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Excellent. It's a good way to put how they found out into the story. Spacing a little weird, though.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll check out the spacing issues, thanks for bringing it up :)

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Oh it's getting really interesting now! Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm already close to being finished with Chapter 20 :)

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What?! How can they be mad at her?! I mean..they found out she's the girl they made miserable! *sigh. Oh well. Update soon! :)

Author's Response: I know, I know. It's not over, though. I promise :)

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Too short, but I love Al's point of view. Write more quickly.

Author's Response: Haha. Easier said than done.

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This chapter was BRILLIANT!!! GOOD JOB!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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This was REALLY good :) loved it! The suspense toll is too high. you're killing me :P

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

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This is really good so far. The change, was cool, from most hated, to most liked. GREAT JOB!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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LOVEEE:) ur amazing, update sooon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much:)

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Please update. Ooh love this story.:)

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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Wait he's in seventh year and she's in second i.e a seventeen year old dating a twelve year old what is wrong with you!?

Author's Response: They're not dating. I never said that, You're just speculating.

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Like the Al's point of view. You should add more of it

Author's Response: Thank you! I'll think about it . . . maybe. I'm not really sure that there'll be anymore situations where it's needed :)

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HEY! This WAS short. Meanie.
Just thought I'd remind you, but earlier in the story you said she went to Salem, just a reminder.

But YAY. Al and Delilah, lovey dovey stuff! :')
Happy times that is.

Author's Response: Haha I'm sorry! I promise 19 will be nice and long for you.

And thank you thank you thank you THANK YOU for pointing that out!!! I'm going to fix it right now! You are a friggin life saver!

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Omg. Please update ASAP. This is brilliant!
I literally read the whole thing in three hours. Dom. Is. Flippin. Hilarious.
Delilah better not die or break Al's heart. Otherwise, there would be no point living. I can't see any way out of the unbreakable vow though.
Just make it a happy ending! :)))
Xoxo

Author's Response: I'll try! Thank you!

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UNBREAKABLE VOW?
wow. harsh

Author's Response: Yeah. I felt like beating up my characters that day :)

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WHHATTT? NO NO NO NO!!! not sweet little lauren!!! awww no!! update soon!! this is so good!!

Author's Response: Haha thank you :)

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OMFGG! I LOVE YOUR STORY! LAUREN IS... OMGG!!! And turning off the caps lock key... Ok we're ready! I love you nd your story so amazing! The songs you pick are wonderfully perfect for each chapter, not to mention, holy fuck woman! You can write! loll kay bye new chapter really soon please!

Author's Response: Haha this review made me laugh. Thank you!!!

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I was a tad confused at the start with all the different code names but I got it eventually...
Thanks for updating! Why was Lauren poisoned?! Is cuz like someone secretly loves aiden and wants to get Lauren out of the picture? Um that's probs not it...
Anyways only 7 chapters left?! Wow so keen to read more soon!

Author's Response: the code names are supposed to be confusing. I've evidently done my job :) Yes, only seven chapters left . . . I'm a bit sad. Exchange is my first novel and I'm happy that I've almost finished, but I'll miss writing it.

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So ... are you going to make Aiden and Lauren Aiden&Lauren? Because, honestly, that would be somewhat strange.

Author's Response: Yes . . . it would be somewhat strange, wouldn't it? I'm kind of on the fence about Aiden&Lauren . . .

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Thank u for FINALLY updating!! Some best friend u r for making me wait FOREVER for this! Well anyway, I like where it's going :) I really do love Lauren and aiden ;) glad to hear Delilah isn't gonna die in the end, but I also don't want her to go through with her vow. I really wanna know how it ends and it would make me so very happy if u could maybe update faster? Please? For your best friend? :)

Author's Response: Haha your WELCOME. Ungrateful . . . this takes a long time :) I need to make it good, stupid :)

Letting you know how it ends fast isn't very fun for me, though >:) *Evil laugh* So no I can't update faster.

~Delia

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My oh my, an Unbreakable Vow. This is certainly going to be interesting...
Nice chapter!
Happy writing,
classicblack

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

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It was actually fabulous!
Just an editing note that bugged me: make sure to press enter everytime a new person speaks instead of putting it all in one paragraph!
Really, though, it was a pretty good chapter. I can't wait to see how Delilah handles everything- I truly hope she doesn't just go and forgive Al for everything, that wouldn't be a good story at all haha
Happy writing,
classicblack

Author's Response: Yes, I've got that all edited, I just have to post the chapters :)

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Wow! I actually really loved this chapter.
It's got the right amount of funny to slightly even out the depressing aspect of her life. Can't wait to find out her name!
How in the world did Harry and Ginny go so wrong with Al?
Honestly, I can't wait to read the next chapter.
This is gonna be great- I can feel it.
Happy writing,
classicblack

Author's Response: Well thank you! I honestly have no idea how Harry and Ginny screwed up with Al that much.

I hope your feeling is right!
~Delia

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