:O wonder wats ganna happen in the next chapter??? Anyway the story is really gOod and its funny.Author's Response: Haha, you'll just have to wait and see ... I'm going to give you the hint of brooms ;) and thank you :) Report Review
I really like your writing style and plot line so far! :) Anya seems smart and funny. Al is still a bit of a mystery... The girls are grand, as usual. I can't wait for next chapter!
Everything would be absolutely brilliant if the story just got a touch of editing and if the chapters were longer. Editing: have someone (or yourself) proofread it again before you post it or possibly get a beta. (Not sure how to do that.) It just needs some punctuational fixes - really simple stuff. The chapter length, however... I feel like you could combine three of these chapters and be perfect. Right now, each chapter has, like, one or two scenes in it. There can (and, in my opinion, should) be, like, twice that many, at least!
Overall, really nice work! Thanks. Eagerly awaiting your next update :D
-CatAuthor's Response: Hey, thank you and I'm glad you like Anya she's pretty cool and I love writing the girls! They're so much fun! I'm hoping to delve a bit more into Al soon as he does seem quite mysterious. I'm hoping to get the next chapter up this week but unfortunately the que is 7 days :( so i'm sorry for the wait!
I know once i've finished writing I plan to go back over it, to be honest I tend to write really late at night which is why the grammer and spelling is a bit rubbish! I will bear it in mind for the next chapter though! And I'm hoping to make the chapter lengths longer, i've just finished my big exams so should have more free time now :) I'm really glad you like it and I will get to work on the next chapter asap :D Report Review
Oh, poor Anya. XD
With friends like that... My gosh.Author's Response: They are a bit of a handful! XD Report Review
I love it!! Update soon!!! :) xxAuthor's Response: Thank you :) and i've put the next chapter in for validation so should only be a couple of days ;) xx Report Review
I can't wait until you update and I think it's quite obvious who Albus fancies.Author's Response: Thank you, this is my first ever fan-fic so I hope I don't disappoint you. And I will be updating very soon, just got to get it validated. :) Report Review
And the mystery begins and sounds like Anya is a bit of denial about her crush on Al Report Review
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