her thoughts are bloody funny.
its actually something you would be thinking, am I right.Author's Response: You are definitely right - I think a lot of my own character is reflected in Harmony :) x Report Review
your writing style is really witty and humourous and awesome.
I really like how the story is progressing- not too fast or slow :)
keep it up xAuthor's Response: Thanks for the feedback - I love getting these reviews. I'll try to maintain this, I guess, if it's what the readers like. :) Report Review
gaaah, i really like it! update soon!Author's Response: thanks, will do x Report Review
What does harmony look like? There hasn't really been a description other then she is short. Thanks! I like your story!
P.s.-Read my fics!Author's Response: I'll get on to that... :) thanks for reviewing x Report Review
Like it! Well written, nice story, great descriptions of her emotions and battling her memories. I like it.Author's Response: Thanks, I was scared that I'd screw up the memory bit, but I'm pretty happy with it :) Report Review
i readed all your chapters in the one night i love the story cant wait until you post more chapters ! :)Author's Response: thanks, keep reading and reviewing :) Report Review
story of my life.
please keep writing.
imacullenpottergirlAuthor's Response: thanks, will do x Report Review
that was really intense.. I'm glad you introduced Dom's character here :)
LOL at the 'get in there'
you are a funny cat.
xxAuthor's Response: thanks dearie :) Report Review
can you start to give little flashbacks into her past so there's a glimpse into her past? I want to know more about her!
James Potter Author's Response: should be a few coming up soon :) Report Review
I should be doing an ever so important science assignment right now, but instead I'm reading this over and over because there's no next chapter.
PLEASE SUBMIT NEW CHAP :)Author's Response: You know, I've never thought much of science. Next chapter will be up soon, I promise!
Maybe you should do your assignment now.. x Report Review
the title and chapter content really match :)Author's Response: thanks love, keep reviewing! x Report Review
can i just say, once again, you writing style is so fkn funny.
keep it up!Author's Response: I'm glad I amuse you! x Report Review
that was a lot of sexual tension in one chapter..
i liked it.Author's Response: I always find that a bit of sexual tension makes life interesting. x Report Review
Hey! So I just read all of those chapters and ...I really like your story! Your write well and it's intriguing. Because I don't quite get why she "can't" go out with James. Or what her mother/parents are like. When she asked "When did I become this person?" -Damn James for interrupting her thought process! ;) Anyway, was that before Hogwarts. Has she always been this lonely at school?
I wonder why James doesn't make more of an effort to get to know her (and why start only now?). Why only ask her out, instead of becoming her friend? Boys...
Anyway, I'll definitely keep on reading. This is good. Cheers!Author's Response: this made me smile :)
the idea is that she's always been this lonely at school, and James has always been that annoying kid who constantly asks her out. x Report Review
CONGRATS ON YOUR FIRST REAL FIC EMMA!!
I loved the oneshot, and i know this is going to be just as good :) James Sirius Author's Response: thanks love, means a lot :) x Report Review
Amazing. Really that's about it. I can't wait to hear more:) I'm kinda wanting to hear harmony play the piano though (I play so u better make it really amazingly good!) I also lIke how her name is like the exact opposite of her life :P write more super duper quickly!!!Author's Response: Echogirl! thanks for reviewing again :) Wow, i don't play piano, so I'm kind of nervous about writing that scene...
Initially i just liked the name Harmony, but I realised the irony and I think it sort of makes her character a bit more bitter and sarcastic. Which I like :) x Report Review
I read it this far and keep it going !!! It's really good. I like harmony's character and I'm excited to find out her skeletons. But I do want to see more into James' character everyone displays him differently .Author's Response: Harmony's pretty complicated, and I'm working on James :) Report Review
stumbled across your story and I love it so far :)Author's Response: thanks, keep reading :) Report Review
I love your story so far! I've only just started to read it today :D
James seems so cute but good on Harmony for saying no to him. Everyone needs a bit of rejection in there life ;)
I love the fact you didn't make her do anything stupid while drunk. As it seems so much more realistic to me that way XD
I saw your author note and thought I have to review this now! I do normally review stories which I like but I feel so tired but your AN made me want too :D
I have figured out normally if you have a banner on your story it is more likely to get more reads =D So you might want to pop over to TDA and get one =D
Anyway I love you story so far and I'm rambling...Over tiredness makes me ramble ;D
Oh and update soon :D
~BlameItOnTheNarglesAuthor's Response: I think you're right, we do all need a bit of rejection in our lives. :) Thanks so much for responding to my AN, this review made me smile so much; I really appreciate hearing all this from you.
I'll look in to getting a banner :)
Oh, and rambling is fine. I do it a lot. Not only when I'm tired. x Report Review
really great chapter, cant wait to read the others!Author's Response: should be up soon! Report Review
great story so far! Can't wait to read more! Keep on writing :)
~EchogirlAuthor's Response: thank you so much, it really means a lot :) Report Review
I am enjoying your story. Looking forward to the next chapter, and hoping it comes swiftly. Hint, hint. :)Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'm kind of in the process of going back and changing a lot of what I've written, so hopefully the next chapter will be up soon! Report Review
Wow, great chapter, amazing story and fantastic writing and character development :D 89789313435753442319788/10 (at least)
Great start, update soon :DAuthor's Response: thanks heaps :) xx Report Review
Oooh, History Repeats Itself! I loved it. Please update soon. Just saw one teeny mistake. It is four students to a boat, not two. Just thought you ought to know.Author's Response: thanks for that :) glad you liked it x Report Review
Love this, can't wait for more :'DAuthor's Response: hopefully you won't have to wait long :) Report Review
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