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Review #26, by Grant Intervention

30th January 2014:
Well I certainly hope you get married and enjoy your honeymoon. I can't wait to read more though. I'll be an expectant fan, not so patiently waiting for the rest of the story. I'm sure theres lots more where this came from!

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Review #27, by Hena Intervention

5th January 2014:
This story is so incredible and I can't help but feel exactly how the character's are feeling too. It broke my heart reading about Harry! Please include some Ginny and Harry soon.. I am completely hooked to this story :-). I hope to read the next chapter very soon, I cannot wait for it to be uploaded!

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Review #28, by Infinityx Reunion

30th December 2013:
Hi there! I'm here for the fourth day of 12 days of reviewing challenge.

I love the way you've written this chapter. It's interesting to see that the setting is the very next day after the battle. You've covered all the main aspects in this chapter really well and it has a good flow to it.

I love all the scenes between Ron and Hermione as well as those between Harry and Ginny. There are some intense going on there and you've captured them really well.

The whole confusion that Harry feels in the morning is brilliant. He's just the type to have a million thoughts going through his head at once and I love the way you described all of that.

I do feel there should have been a greater emphasis on the grief that everyone feels, as well as the guilt within Harry. I really like Ginny's personality in this chapter though and it really sets the feel for the coming ones.

Overall, I think it was a really great start, very well written. :)


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Review #29, by queenwombat Intervention

17th October 2013:
Love this chapter, i think we were all waiting for this day. I would really appreciate an update but i understand how life can get crazy so just try your best k

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Review #30, by queenwombat Intervention

22nd September 2013:
i will never give up on this story i love it more than anything it one of my all time ginny/harry fics ever

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Review #31, by PotterGirl94 Intervention

20th September 2013:
Thank. God. Finally! But this chapter truly was amazing. Loved it to pieces. Its great that Harry is finally getting his life back together. And I am so happy for Ron and Hermione! Ron has always been slightly overshadowed - its great to see him shining for once.

Although, at this moment, I don't actually want to see Harry and Ginny together. I understand why readers are desperately waiting for them to come together but I personally feel that this is not the right time. I mean, Harry has only just started seeing sense. And I am a bit angry at Ginny for enjoying life when Harry was in such a bad shape. I think Harry to should take some time to be single again, put himself in the line of fire and just make sure he does everything he can to make amends for his recent behavior. I want to see a bit of the old Harry, you know? The one who would gladly die for his friends.

And I know I am mean - but I really wanna see Ginny suffer a bit!

Anyway, those are just my thoughts. I cannot wait to see what you have in waiting!

As for your writing, I love the attention to detail. After all, it is the small things which make a good story!

Congratulations!! You really must be busy with your wedding in a month. I really appreciate that that you still took the time to update :)

And while I understand why the next chapter may be delayed, frankly, it hurts to wait for it! post it as soon as you can :)


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Review #32, by Phillip Intervention

19th September 2013:
Get. Harry. And. Ginny. Back. Together. Pronto.

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Review #33, by headoverharry73 Intervention

18th September 2013:
Yea! You're back!! :) Congratulations once again on a great chapter. This made my day. I love your creativity and writing style. Everything flows so beautifully and really paints a picture. All of your chapters are well worth the wait. :)

All the best wishes on your wedding next month. You deserve all the happiness in the world for sharing your gift of writing with all of us. Cheers!

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Review #34, by Aurorofthelight Intervention

18th September 2013:
Thank goodness for a new chapter!! I was beginning to think you had given up plus I was having bad withdrawal symptoms! This is such a great story and this was a great chapter! Thanks for sticking to it!!! :D

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Review #35, by Amanda1226 The Things We Do For Love

29th August 2013:
I love your story! I have re-read it twice now while waiting for an update :) SOOO excited for the next chapter! Your creativity is fantastic and so true to the characters, and your writing style flows so well... Please please please update soon!!

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Review #36, by Zac ramesh The Things We Do For Love

14th August 2013:
Really like what u've written so far... Of all the fan fiction I've read yours is by far the best.. The only thing I don't like is the Harry ginny fall apart... It's not in line with Harry's character to doubt Ginny even for a second( that's more like Ron) .. And the Harry we've known would never risk his friend's lives like this solely coz of recklessness.. Pl let Harry and Ginny get back together and salvage Harry's reputation.. After all that he's been through he's always remained of pure heart and he deserves better ... But overall kudos to you for the excellent work looking forward for the chapters to follow.

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Review #37, by e The Things We Do For Love

12th July 2013:
I have been waiting months for an update! Please please please update soon!!

Author's Response: Hello - sheepish reply time! I haven't given up, I promise! There is definitely more to come:-)

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Review #38, by headoverharry73 The Things We Do For Love

1st July 2013:
Hey Sophie! I'm waiting with my fingers crossed for another update. It's been two months since your last posting, so you know what that means - you owe us two chapters back to back! LOL Looking forward to your next update. love ya!

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Review #39, by ladymblack As You Were

30th May 2013:
I'm a horrible reviewer, and I fully admit it. I was initially hesitant with this story, but the characters seemed in line with what they should be, and I found myself interested in what would happen. You've really come into it at this point. Your punctuation gets much, much better with each chapter you post, and I find myself less distracted by it.

With that said, I thought that the whole thing with becoming an animagus was really amazing, and I gobbled it up. I realize that that was from the last chapter, but I figured I'd mention it here.

At the end of this chapter, you mention "fun and games at Grimmauld Place." Was that a nod to the story by Gaurwen? It was one of the first stories I found on this site, and I still read it every now and then. If it wasn't, you should definitely check it out.

Also, to respond to a previous review, I don't think that Ron's behavior was, in any way, out of character. Even though he'd given his "permission" at the end of HBP, it was clear that he was still struggling with the situation. After the fiasco on Harry's birthday in DH, I too would expect that Ron would have a difficult accepting that his sister is an adult witch capable of making her own decisions and choices. Maybe that reviewer should re-read the books, since he or she clearly hasn't read them thoroughly (wink, wink). I always think that telling someone to go back to the books during a situation regarding interpretation is ridiculous. Even if the reviewer saw something differently, that doesn't make your interpretation incorrect or wrong.

I look forward to reading more, and I will try to let you know when something catches my interest again.

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Review #40, by robbo The Things We Do For Love

24th May 2013:
I like how in the end ron just proposed. Guess being in a tight spot gets one piorities straight. With the way things are i dont see anyway back for harry. Look forward to the next chapter

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Review #41, by Ranger As You Were

10th May 2013:
You need to go back and read canon. Ron never had a problem with Harry and Ginny going out. He got mad at Death Hallows because Harry broke with Ginny and then was making out with her.

Which is really reasonable. Ron is badly out of character here.

Author's Response: Hi, Ranger - I respectfully disagree. This plot point is about human nature, and is entirely consistent with both canon and what we know of Ron's character.

Ron has always been protective of his sister, and although he was accepting of her relationship with Harry, he was always worried that he would hurt her. That is why he got angry in Deathly Hallows, and that's why he gets angry in this chapter.

He sees their relationship getting very serious, which raises the stakes for him - the potential for Ginny to be hurt is so much higher, and he is concerned that she is being take advantage of. His reaction is entirely natural, and will be familiar to big brothers the world over.

Thank you for reading this far, and for taking the trouble to leave a review.

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Review #42, by harryhermron The Things We Do For Love

6th May 2013:
Glad to see your wrote. I am worried about
Harry and Ginny. Harry is destroying is life.

Author's Response: Hi there - yes, Harry's in a spot of bother, but don't worry - he will be able to fix it in due course. Thanks for reading and reviewing.

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Review #43, by MatNat098 The Things We Do For Love

5th May 2013:
I read all 29 chapters today. This is amazing. I love how you don't make it so that Ginny and Harry have a perfect relationship. I can't wait for Ron and Hermoine's wedding. Do you know when chapter 30 should be out. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: All 29?? Wow, I'm flattered! I'm so glad you've enjoyed it, and I hope to see you back for more:-)

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Review #44, by headoverharry73 The Things We Do For Love

3rd May 2013:
I just read through your replies to this chapter's review and I'm so happy to hear you were busy planning your wedding. I wanted to ask you how that was going the past few months, but I hadn't heard you mention it in a while and I didn't want to mention anything I shouldn't, so I'm glad you did! :) If you don't mind my asking, when's the date? You already got my review for this chapter, so this is just my "best wishes" note for you!

Author's Response: Oh wow - thank you! It is in October. I can't believe how much stuff there is to do! But all going really well:-)

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Review #45, by M. Quintana Vidaurri The Things We Do For Love

2nd May 2013:
Love love love love love your story! I really like reading a fanfic that is both well written and has a plot planned out, not just random happenings in very chapter that don't seem to follow a storyline.
I'd love to see a bit more of Teddy and George, though. They just seem such fun characters.
I loved the description of Ron's nerves and his failed attempts at a proposal. I think you've captured him the best out of all the characters, although Ginny and Krum have been very much as I pictured them as we'll.
I wish Harry could be a bit more powerful and do some cool things, but I guess he's not in the best state of mind at this point in the story. Hope he goes for something both romantic and magically impressive for trying to win Ginny back soon.
Anyway, I just wanted to congratulate you and ask for more to come soon. :)

Author's Response: Hello! Thanks for taking the time to review - I'm so glad you're enjoying the story:-)

I used to hate writing Ron, but the more I do it, the more fun it gets - I'm pleased you think I'm doing well with him

Don't worry too much about Harry - let's just say that life is about to turn a little for him!

I really hope you'll stick around for the rest of the story, and it would be great to hear from you again.

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Review #46, by Shannon The Things We Do For Love

1st May 2013:
Only just found this and read all 29 chapters today! You are an amazing writer ! I just can't wait till ginny and harry get back together Arwhh it is so sad that they have not been together for so long when they are meant to be together :( and again it's an amazing story I definitely cannot wait for chapter 30 : D xxx

Author's Response: Hi there! Wow, all 29 chapters in a day? That's some committment! I hope you stick around for the rest of the story, and I'm really pleased you've enjoyed it so far. Thanks for the review!

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Review #47, by Aurorofthelight The Things We Do For Love

1st May 2013:
Another brilliant chapter! I'm alittle worried about Harry's only appearances lately being as a lush. I hope you have better plans for him. Glad Ginny turned down Krum - would've been a mistake. Hope Harry doesn't lose Ron and Hermoine's friendship after this latest fiasco! As always, love the story and can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hi there, and welcome back! Harry's back in the next chapters, and let's just say - he's about to get just the shock he needs to turn things around:-)

Thanks for sticking with me, and I hope you continue to enjoy Evolution!

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Review #48, by marauder5 The Things We Do For Love

1st May 2013:
I'm so glad that Ginny turned Viktor down. I really thought that she was going to figure out her feelings for Harry after that, but I guess she's still a bit confused. At least she's getting there. I hope we'll get to see more of Harry in the next chapter. He really needs to get his act together and fix things with Ginny, because they are obviously meant to be together.

Hermione is not stupid enough to fall for that! She's not known as the cleverest witch of her age for nothing, is she? I'm so glad that everything worked out, and that Ron finally got to ask her! I'm so exited for them :)

I hope you'll find time to write the next chapter soon. I really enjoyed this :)

Author's Response: Hello:-) Yes, Ginny has a little way to go to resolve her feelings. Deep down, she knows - but she's very stubborn:-)

And Harry is about to get the kick he needs to sort himself out, so keep your fingers crossed for him:-)

Glad you enjoyed the proposal - I hope you enjoy the wedding as much! Hint hint:-)

Thanks for sticking with Evolution, I hope you continue to enjoy it!

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Review #49, by kayt The Things We Do For Love

1st May 2013:
Great to see an update! You almost had me feeling sorry for Krum there. Well done Ron! he's so not in Harry's shadow anymore. Speaking of chapter maybe? I look forward to seeing what/who kicks him back on track.

Author's Response: Hello! It's so great that you take the time to read and review, I really appreciate it:-)

Yes, Harry is back in the next chapter - and let's just say that the kick he needs is not long in coming either:-)

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Review #50, by headoverharry73 The Things We Do For Love

30th April 2013:
Yea, you're back! :-) I've been checking for new posts almost every day and you made my day when I saw 29 Chapters at the top of the page instead of 28. Woo hoo!

Great chapter again! I love how this is going. You're such a creative and talented writer. I'll be waiting anxiously for the next update. :-)

Author's Response: Hello! I'm so flattered you've been waiting for an update - I love it when people keep coming back, and I'm so pleased you enjoyed the chapter.

I'm really sorry for the delays - with being busy at work and organising my wedding, I don't have as much time to write as I would like. But Evolution WILL get finished, I promise! It just might take a while:-)

Thank you again for reading and taking the trouble to review - it really does make my day!

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