I love this story! Keep it coming! I'll be reading every chapter

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This is a really good story, I love the way you've built all the characters up and the plot. It is really good!!

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OH. MY. GOD. I love this story! It's so amazing!! There aren't that many good Regulus/OC stories but this... this is absolutely wonderful! I love it! I really like Russel, but I'm sad that her parents died. With all the threats that were being made against her you would think Dumbledore would have been proactive about that! I can't wait for more, update again soon please!! 10/10! =] ~

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Hi, I really like the story so far. It's great to think of a story about a black and a muggle born. I can't wait to see what happens between Mr Black and Katherine. I will tell all my firess about this story. Kitty Potter :)

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I'm sorry, I completely forgot to update when I read the story earlier, so I might as well do it now:) I absolutely love this story!!! I like Ann and Sirius' relationship, it amuses me. And I really can't get over how wonderful Regulus is, I am so mad that he is a fictional character because otherwise I would so want him a bf. Love the story!!!

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Another great one :) so sad though! I hate Ann aha, but I guess I understand why she's so upset. Can't wait for the update.

Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked this chapter. I have the next couple written so the updates should be pretty consistent. I think Ann is going to develop into one of those characters you love to hate. Thanks for reviewing (:

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please let someone deck ann. she desrves it and i want her to learn her lesson that se isn tthe tuff ass she thinks she is.

Author's Response: Sirius has gotten pretty close to doing just that lol, but it's important to remember that she just lost her parents and that her and her sister never had that great of a relationship. Ann is going to be a character that everyone loves to hate. Thanks for reviewing!

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Ann! So wonderful! I love Regulus I thin you have done a great job with him. Super excited for the next update!

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Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter.

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Ah! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Also, I smiled when I read the lyrics! It takes me back to 2009 when I saw The Killers live in Miami.

Again, can't wait!

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It's a good start! And an interesting pairing as well. There are far too many Lily/James, Lily/Sirius, Lily/Remus stories in this world for my liking. With this story, you will be able to take a whole new look at this time period from a different angle, and put your own spin on it! It seems like a good start in this respect, well done!

I think you just need to make sure you are not switching between first person/third person because it can be a little jarring for the reader. You started in third person by calling her "Katherine" and then started saying "I did this" etc. You really need to decide what style you are going to write in and stick to it.

I thought Regulus' characterisation was really good. He seems cold and heartless at the moment, but there is definitely potential for him to open up as a character. I will be interested to see how you change the ending of the story (is he going to stay alive?). I just hope you consider that sometimes being kind to your characters is not being kind to your writing, and can sometimes dampen the emotional impact of the story. I also thought you could have made Sirius' opinion of his brother a little more nuanced instead of just "he's evil" seeing as they were brothers and we know that Regulus wasn't evil.

I hope I haven't been too harsh but I really do think this has a lot of potential and I will read some more chapters!

Author's Response: Don't worry you aren't being harsh! I really appreciate any and all feedback. I hope you like the next chapters and you continue to read the story! Thank you for reviewing (:

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its a shame there isnt more storys about regulus but you;ve portrayed him very well i cant wait to read the next chapter

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This is so sad!!! I really can't believe how much I love this story and how much I can't wait for updates!!! I love how you portray Regulus, and I love how sweet all the moments are with him and Katherine.

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DRAMA! Awesome chapter, I love Regulus! I have been suspicious about whether or not Sirius has feelings for Kathrine, but this chapter totally confirms it! I can't help but wonder if Kathrine would leave Reg for Sirius? I don't think she would. But then I can't help but feel bad for Sirius, I mean, its not like him to actually like a girl for something other then her body. And then as soon as he likes a girl, she ends up with his brother!
Again, awesome chapter, keep up the amazing work!

~Limwen

Author's Response: I'm glad you picked up Sirius' feelings before this chapter, I was really worried no one would. As for future relationships I'll say this. I LOVE Katherine/Regulus, but I don't see Sirius' feelings going away for Katherine anytime soon.

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This is an amazing story and I absolutely love it!!! I can't wait to read more when you update! And I totally love regulus, he is one of my favorite characters.

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It's really good, I think the Christmas chapters will be great.

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I liked this chapter a lot. Regulus and Katherine are REALLY cute together!!! Hahaha Christmas with Sirius and Regulus is definitely going to be interesting/eventful lol. Can't wait for the next chapter =)

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Another FANtastic chapter! This should be a very interesting Christmas. . . :D

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Something about your story is so damn addictive. I'm so glad I found this! Please update soon :)

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It took some time but, I think I finally like Regulus and Katherine but I still feel Remus needs someone.

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Awesome chapter! Please update soon!!!

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YAY! THEY ARE TOGETHER!!! :D Awesome chapter!

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Another awesome chapter!

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Hey! Awesome story, I've been looking for a good Regulus/OC story! Again, awesome chapter!

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I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

The only problem is the spacing, but maybe it's just my computer.

Still, I can't wait to read more.

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