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Review #26, by WhiteFeather I love my job.

25th December 2014:
I have been waiting for this story to appear for ages! Thanks for updating :) Louis and Ava's relationship is deeper now and you can see them developing feelings, & it is really well written!

Author's Response: I know that my updating time is horrible - so sorry! But I hope the chapter made up for it? Maybe? Especially now that their relationship is growing? Anyway, thanks for the lovely review! ♥

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Review #27, by justawillowtree I hate my flat.

25th December 2014:
okay, so i know that this for the wrong chapter, but i just read your most recent chapter (and promptly forgot to review on that one, whoops), and then i decided to reread the whole story because i love it so much. ;P

anyway, your writing is so unbelievably perfect, and i love how your grammar is on point 100% of the time, and the storyline is so much fun. :'D ava is possibly one of my favorite characters ever (the sarcasm you wrote for her just made my day), and louis comes close after her.

keep updating, please! you have no idea how long i've waited for this particular update, and i think i'm going to go mad if i wait some more. :P

but the progression throughout the story is so cool, and you pull it off so well. her backstory is so angsty and so well-done and not at all cliche and i just get so excited reading about her life.

once again, sorry about reviewing on the wrong chapter; my excuse is that i have an awful memory. but your story is stunning and i hope you keep writing more.

Author's Response: Awww you're rereading? Thank you loads ♥ I'm so glad that you love it.

*blushes* You are too kind. My writing is /definitely/ not perfect, but thank you anyway! I have had a lot of fun with the storyline and Ava/Louis. I love them both to pieces.

I will! Next chapter is almost done :) I wouldn't want you to go mad, now would I?

I actually had her backstory planned out since the beginning (thus the way she acts), so I'm really glad I finally got to share it :)

Oh no it's no problem at all! I don't mind. Thank you so much for the amazing review (even if it was on the wrong chapter) ♥

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Review #28, by TheEighthHorcrux I love my job.

25th December 2014:
I love you so much for updating. I liked reading more about Ava's past. It gave me more insight. Thanks for such a wonderful Christmas present :)

Author's Response: And I love you so much for reviewing. I've had this part about Ava's past planned since the beginning (thus the way she acts), so I'm glad I finally got to share it :)

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Review #29, by StrawberryStorm I love my job.

25th December 2014:
The best christmas gift eveeer!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it :)

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Review #30, by TheEighthHorcrux I like the rain.

4th October 2014:
It's been exactly 1 year since you last updated. You can't give up. I love this story too much. Please update :(

Author's Response: I know and I'm so sorry BUT the next chapter is in the queue right now! Wooho

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Review #31, by helpwillalwaysbegiven I like the rain.

18th January 2014:
Omg I hope you haven't given up on this story! Louis is such a charmer and I love Ava's personality and I really hope they both figure out their problems and get their ish together soon because they are SO DARN CUTE! Pleeeaaase update soon, it's been ages!

Author's Response: I haven't given up on it! The next update is in the queue now, in fact :) They really do need to figure stuff out because they drive me CRAZY ugh they're so perf for each other. Thanks for the lovely review ♥

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Review #32, by Crescent Moon  I like the rain.

1st November 2013:
It's taken me ages to get round to reviewing but here it is.
I really like this chapter, it's great that Ava and Louis are starting to talk more rather than argue (though they do tend to get a little err... distracted in the middle of their conversations).
I can't wait to see what's going to happen next, is there going to be more of Matt and Parker in the next chapter?

Author's Response: It's okay - it's taken me ages to get around to responding.
They have seemed to work things out a bit, haven't they? (Still need to learn how to keep those hormones in check, though...)
There will be more Matt in the next chapter, and hopefully a little bit more Parker at some other point in the future!
Thanks for the review ♥

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Review #33, by Raven The Bookworm I like the rain.

20th October 2013:
Are you going to be writing more of this, because it is really an amazing story. I love it to death. Very funny too.

Author's Response: Yes, the next chapter is in the queue now! Thanks so much for the review ♥

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Review #34, by RavenHairedGirl I like the rain.

15th October 2013:
I love this story so much, so I am literally begging you, please update soon! I love Louis and this whole little world, with the diner and everything. I am hoping the Weasley- Potter's may make an appearance... So yes please update, update, update!

Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much! The next chapter is in the queue right now! Some of the Weasley-Potter clan may in fact be appearing in the future... You'll just have to wait for that, though ;) Thanks for the review!

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Review #35, by DracosGirl012 I like the rain.

4th October 2013:
Louva! I like it! This was a good chapter and I can't wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm hopefully going to update soon :)

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Review #36, by FleurDelacourAndEverybodyElse I like the rain.

12th August 2013:
I really adored this chapter! :D Two couple names that I can think of: Lava (pfft...), and Avis. Strangely enough, that's what comes out of combining their names together... :P

Author's Response: Ahaha, thank yoouuu ♥ Oh, really? Is that how you come up with couple names? I never would have guessed... :P /sarcasm

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Review #37, by xMsFiggx I like the rain.

10th August 2013:
I liked reading a chapter of just the two of them. They still seem a little unsure about what's happening, but they also seem to think it's the right thing for them right now. I liked seeing them spend time together. It was a happy chapter :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked reading it :) They're definitely both very unsure of what exactly they're doing, and even if they don't know what it is, it makes them happy. And that's what matters, right? Thanks for the review!

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Review #38, by anna_thee_potterhead  I like the rain.

1st August 2013:
Wow! I love it so far, the dialogue, and plot. Ava can sometimes get on my nerves, but the story is still really good! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think all characters can get a bit annoying at points seeing as they're human, but hopefully she's not too bad! An update is coming very soon :)

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Review #39, by no1britishHPfanx I like the rain.

31st July 2013:
Louva! Keep writing love it! Made me cry at some bits! How old are they? Update sooon!xx

Author's Response: That's a popular one :) I'm definitely going to keep writing, so don't worry. Ava is twenty, about to be twenty-one, and Louis just turned twenty-one. An update is coming very soon!xx

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Review #40, by wildberry I like the rain.

31st July 2013:
Wonderful story! I loved "Shenanigans" and "And All That Jazz" and this story is amazing as well. I like Ava, but I do think that she just needs to get over Ian already! Honestly, she's called Louis Ian, like, five times already, and while I understand that she's heartbroken, I'm gradually starting to lose sympathy for her. I mean, Louis Weasley is offering her everything she lost, and she just thinks about Ian all the time. It makes me a little upset, but other than that, the story is absolutely perfect! I think it's cool how Ava has blended in with the Muggle community, but still uses magic. Louva is adorable, though I'm not quite sure if it's right to call a couple who constantly gets drunk and does... certain activities "adorable," but oh well. I can't wait for an update! You are an amazing writer!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like all my stories :) She does need to get over Ian, but there's a lot about their relationship that you don't know yet (aka a lot of things that make it hard for her to move on). There's also a reason for her moving into the Muggle world, too! Haha, well I think they're adorable anyway :) An update should be coming soon! Thanks a ton!

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Review #41, by silverashes I like the rain.

29th July 2013:
Speechless. I am speechless. I had good intentions on going to bed early tonight, but your story ensnared me and here I am still awake. It was worth it though. I cannot wait to see what happens next. I LOVED this chapter. I think it might be my favorite so far because I just love how easily the two of them get along. I really hope nothing else bad happens to break them apart. It might break my heart. I just love them so much it makes my heart hurt. Please update soon! I'm dying to know what will happen! Thank you for writing such an exceptional story. This made my entire day so much better!

xx Rachel

Author's Response: Awww :) Thank you so much ♥ I'm sorry I kept you up so late, but I'm glad it was worth it! They really do get along very well, which is why this was such a fun chapter to write (even though not a lot happened). The next chapter should be coming very soon! I'm so happy that I could make your day better :D

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Review #42, by Hannah I like the rain.

29th July 2013:
First, Avis. Second. I LOVED IT!!! OMG IT WAS GREAT! 10+ FOR BEST CHAPTER IVE EVER SEEN. Hurry up with the next chapter please!!! :D

Author's Response: I like Avis too :) AHHH THANK YOU SO MUCH! THAT REALLY MEANS A LOT TO ME! The next update should hopefully be coming soon :D

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Review #43, by silverashes I like my flat.

29th July 2013:
Stop, stop, stop! I can't even handle this story. It's abolsutely brilliant. I'm crying from excitement. Honestly, this has to be one of the best stories I've ever read. I adore Louis to no end. Absolutely adore him. He breaks my heart. I'm really happy that Ava is starting to get over Ian...though Ian breaks my heart as well.

I think I nearly died at the whole last section of this chapter. Ava and Louis just fit together so perfectly; just like puzzle pieces. Hopefully Ava can overcome her heartbreak and Louis can finally tell her how she feels (in English). This is the loveliest story I've ever read! I'm so happy I found it(:

xx Rachel

Author's Response: Aww, thank you babe ♥ You are far too kind to me and I do not deserve it. I am, however, very glad that I have somehow tricked you into loving this story.

Well, I'm glad you didn't die! They are kind of perfect for each other, aren't they? :') But they've both got stuff to work on until any sort of fluffy romance can happen.

Thank you for the lovely review ♥

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Review #44, by silverashes I hate my life.

29th July 2013:
*sighs* This is perfection. Honestly. I absolutely adore the characters: Ava, Matt, Louis...ESPECIALLY Louis. I love how you've portrayed him as a snarky rich boy, but slowly he's unraveling and he has so much more to him. Awe I hope nothing goes too poorly for Ava and Louis because I really like them together!

xx Rachel

Author's Response: *squeals* Thank you. Honestly. I adore you for your comments. And character development has always been the best part of writing to me, so I'm glad you're enjoying it~

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Review #45, by batsoulini I like the rain.

23rd July 2013:
The chapter was perfect! Full of fluff! I was smiling the whole time! I like the drama, don't get me wrong, but i needed an fluffy break!

Hope you update again soon! :D

Greeting from sunny Greece

Author's Response: Awww, thank you! I had fun writing the fluff. 'Twas a nice break.

The next chapter is in the queue!

Greetings from sunny California :)

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Review #46, by Serendipity1234 I like the rain.

23rd July 2013:
I wrote you a review but my computer crashed and it didn't save :(
This was a cute chapter and I liked the fluff :) I liked seeing Ava have a good day and have fun with Louis. She was kind of mean to him in the beginning but she's gotten a lot better. This chapter showed she does have some feelings for him but she in unwilling to face them. And I can't hold that against her, since she just had her heart broken big time. I like Ava a lot and I hope we learn more about her past soon because I'm really curious and I think it would make me understand her a lot better!
That's basically everything, I think, that I said before.
Update soon!

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Review #47, by Nero the Ninja I hate the rain.

23rd July 2013:
Can I just say you're the best writer I have ever had the luck to come across... I hate to ask but have you ever been in a similar situation to Ava? Because the pain, the grief, it seemed so real. I felt her pain, and it was like I WAS her, like she was me, and just... holy crap. You're on the same level as Jo herself dude. Fucking brilliant. Keep it up.

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Review #48, by Penelope Inkwell I like the rain.

20th July 2013:
Aw, I enjoyed this chapter a lot :D

I think you’ve crafted your characters really well. Sometimes it’s so hard to find balanced characters--either they’re, like, irritatingly, impossibly perfect with no discernible flaws (or at least no interesting ones), or they have so many flaws that they’re completely unlikable. Ava and Louis, on the other hand, are flawed in a way that sort of makes them more likable. They keep you on your toes, and Ava, under all her bluster, really seems to have a good heart. But her snark keeps her intriguing and fun. In so many stories, the moody girl with the good heart is relegated to a supporting role, but I think Ava makes an awesome protagonist! And Louis is really well-layered as well. There’s still so much mystery to both of them, but everything we’ve found out so far makes perfect sense.

I had never before thought of how awful it might be from a Veela’s perspective! Sure, things might be easier for you, but you’d never know if people really liked/loved you, or if it was your supernatural physical mojo at work. That adds so much depth to his character, and I feel like we really see it at work in this scene. He really opened up before (Well, kind of. Largely in French, but still). And now he’s sort of backtracking, trying to regain some control and play it off, because he’s falling for her. But he already doesn’t trust normal relationships, let alone going after one with a girl who is still hung up on her ex! least, that’s what I’m seeing. I could be wrong.

And Ava! I just love her all the more after these last few chapters. You can tell that she really loved Ian, and she let him go because she thought it was best for him. And it sounds like it was a hard situation for all involved, and whether or not she did the right thing is sort of a moot point to argue, but to me the most important part is that she TRIED to do the right thing, even though it obviously really messed her up. And then she did it again the second time, even when she already knew how badly it would hurt, because she had experienced it before. She was willing to break her own heart to save someone else from suffering, and was willing to be the one to make the hard decision. A lot of her character shined through. And then this scene, of course, was as well-written as ever, and it was a nice, cute, fun respite from all the (also excellently-penned) broken heartedness that has been going on.

Still loving it. Your writing is really, really good, and this story is so interesting. Please update soon.

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Review #49, by marieluz I like the rain.

19th July 2013:
I'm basically in love with this story. Usually the stories I read are while the characters are attending Hogwarts and magic is actually involved, but this is unique.

I think this is the first NextGen fanfic I've read where it takes place in the Muggle world and there's minimal talk of magic, or the Weasleys/Potter. And that's kind of refreshing.

And I must say, Ava is one of the most dramatic characters I've seen in a while. Man, how does Louis put up with her? I'm guessing he really likes her or he wouldn't let her keep sticking around. He is too sweet!

I am tired of Ava running back to Ian.. hopefully that last time is actually ya know... the LAST time. Because Ava and Louis are too cute together, if only they gave each other the chance.

Please update! I'm very curious as to the backgrounds of the oh-so-mysterious Ava and Louis... it's been killer not knowing.

And a ship name? Hmmm... Maybe "Woore"? Pronounced like "war"? Because they're always fighting, LOL.

Great chapter, great story!

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Review #50, by Loving_Sirius_4eva I like the rain.

19th July 2013:
Cool :) Another chapter please.


Author's Response: Thanks :) The next chapter is coming soon!


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