Awww, the movie day with Lorcan was so cute. I think Lorcan is very adorable and he seems to care a lot about Rose. Until Scorpius makes his grand entrance I think i will ship ROse/Lorcan!Author's Response: Lorcan is pretty adorable, I have to say. :P Rose and Lorcan- a lot of people ship that! :P
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Freddy is still acting suspicious. Something is fishy about Lyander too. The plot might get very complicated soon.Author's Response: Freddy and Lysander hey? And yeah, the plot does get complicated soon...
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There is a traitor! there is a traitor! OMG. is it Fred? I hope not. The old man is very mysterious, indeed. Dom is so angry all the time. I wonder what happened. I wish Scorpius didn't get kicked out of the group and I hope he comes back soon. I really like the bromance between Scorpius and Albus. Would love to see what happens next.Author's Response: Yes there is a traitor! The man is very mysterious, and I can neither confirm or deny any of your suspicions, but I LOVE to hear them :P
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Wow. I can't believe I didn't start reading this story sooner. I stumbled across this story so many times. I saw this story in the dobby nominations and decided to finally read it. I have a feeling this will be a epic journey.Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you decided to read it- it may very possibly be an arduous journey :P The Dobby nominations I've got for HAT are overwhelming. I'm so surprised, and happy :)
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JENNY. What is up with Lily? I was kinda hoping to find her, and why's she taking a stroll? They're kinda on the run, she needs to be hidden you know... Kinda dumb don't you think? And I'm guessing Theo isn't the werewolf... Sads. But you mentioned the moon! So I'm kinda hoping the next chapter includes that werewolf I've heard about.
Hmm, I'm actually quite excited for this next action scene, will there be a lot? The whole chapter maybe? I'm wishing for a bit much aren't I? Action scenes are a bit hard to make long. :P Anyways, I'm excited for the next chapter! :D
Mike.Author's Response: YES NEXT CHAPTER IS THE WEREWOLF GAWD MIKE CALM DOWN.
I'mma only joking. You'll have to read on to find out, yus? :P Moon and werewolf stuffs, YES. Next chapter, fo sho. I promise. And a massive action scene. I hope I don't let you down! :D Report Review
Your endings are always my favorite, just because it's when everything exciting happens and they always make me want to continue reading really badly. Especially this chapter and it really makes me sad that there's only one more until the next update. You can also count on me to sit there and bug you with various PM's, Skype Messages, and profile comments (On multiple sites) to write, write, write! :P Ah but seriously, HE'S ALIVE. And Rose too! I freaked for a bit. I was like "NO! SCORPIUS!" but then he breathed and I was like "Yay!" So yeah, the grave-digging thought was hilarious by the way. And the private detective, IS HE THE WEREWOLF? Sorry, I mean, I read wolves a while ago but I have to question ONE of the mysterious OC's that pop up...
This chapter was so actiony and so awesome and like fun and stuff. I adored it. :P
TO THE NEXT ONE!Author's Response: I am so glad you like Hattie, Mike, and I just wanted to tell you that really quick xD Please bug me, because if Hattie ever falls by the wayside I'll be really sad.
Rose and Scorpius are both alive, innit great! The PI isn't a werewolf. I think. I dunno, ask Sam, I borrowed him from her story! :D
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Huh. So his name is just coincidence? Carrow's I mean. And no! D: Not Scorpius and Rose. Also that dream at the beginning was a bit trippy. Like Whut. Anyways, I thought Scorpius was being real nice to Rose then he just up and ends up "dying" I'm sure he didn't die, I mean, he doesn't right? I might hate Draco with a passion but I tend to really like Scorpius... Rose better get out too! I mean, she is the main character, and it'd suck if you were just like "Oh, she died. Woo! Story over" Well maybe not suck if you pulled it off in a nice, question-answering way. :P
TO THE NEXT ONE! This was brilliant by the way.Author's Response: No, Carrow is related to the Carrows we know, don't worry :P
Trippy dreams filled with significant meanings for the win! I love 'em. Oh, no, Scorpius is dead? Whaat? :O Why wasn't I informed about this?
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Woah. Character development. Nice! I quite liked the background and I absolutely loved it when Rose wrote down her, Scorp, and Al's suspect profile things. It was hilarious! Especially Al's. I laughed actually, which is a task when I'm reading humor :p Kudos to you! So, I kinda wanna read the next chap now so short ramble for you :PAuthor's Response: Character development is awesome. I enjoy it loads. And yay I made Mike laugh! (and not by being a bad Jenny on skype!).
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Woah. Abnes is mean, I was kinda hoping the thingie wouldn't work and they'd be innocent. Eh, I suppose the action makes up for it by a long shot. ;) Action is my favorite thing evar! And no, that is not a typo. Anyways, I'm kinda amused at the fact that Scorpius is engaged to a Muggle. And Rose's thoughts on it are quite amusing as well. Oh silly Scorpius. :P
Anyways, that's all I have to ramble for now (Can you tell I'm getting kinda tired? Busy day today)! So I'm off to chapter 11! :DAuthor's Response: ACTON IS MY FAVOURITE THING EVER TOO. (no typos). If they were innocent, what would have happened to the story?
Scorpius and Rose are hilarious together, so I enjoy sticking them in great situations :D
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Woah dude, woah. So they're sitting in Prison, Abnes Carrow, I think he could be the parent of Amyscus and Alecto? Maybe? He probably is maybe, I dunno... Am I being dumb? xD Anyways, AH. I don't actually have much to say, except I think Hugo is the traitor now :o But why would Hugo send his sister to jail? Maybe it's someone else cause they need to blend in... Hmmm, I have my thinking cap on. Anyways, to the next chapter! :PAuthor's Response: Abner could be the parent of Amycus and Alecto, except he calls his children 'daughters'... :P
Hugo is the traitor now? Cor, Mike, make your mind up :D Thinking cap on!
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:O I'm sure the :O face is all over my reviews, what is this the 5th I've had it start with? I don't even know. Anyways, WHATTT? I can't believe you'd have them arrest ROSE. I'm not even sure why they NEEDED that gargoyle to be honest. Psh, I woulda just left it.
Anyways, Spirant is a nice incantation for that charm :D I didn't know if it had one to be honest, so it's cool that you made that up. Also, Arthur for Hugo's middle name was a good call. :p Anyways, WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN? SERIOUSLY? AH. THE SUSPENSE. *ahem* To chapter 9!Author's Response: yeah, you are very shocked :O
It's not my fault Rose got arrested! Those Aurors just attacked her! I TRIED TO STOP THEM, I REALLY DID.
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Oh Dom, as much as I hate you you probably aren't the traitor. I want you to be though so I can laugh when you're caught. Anyways, Poor Vic :( sad times. And for a second I though Ted was gonna for and I was screaming in my head "DON'T YOU DARE. NO NO." anyways, yeah. What's gonna happen to Rose and Scorp? They're like... Stuck. D: again I'm on the phone so short ramble :P to the next one!Author's Response: Why do you hate Dom? Meanie pants. You are a horrible person :D I love you anyway, no worries.
Rose and Scorp are stuck... well, they'll just have to figure something out, won't they? :P
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Omg! What's gonna happen? :O who's the traitor! I'll say this like 50 bajillion times but I can't tell who is the sneaky little traitor! D: I need to know! Ahh! Short ramble (can't call these reviews can I?) cause I'm on my phone :P to the next one!!Author's Response: I CAN'T TELL YOU AND I'M SORRY, MIKE! ;( Report Review
OMG. Don't steal the cats dude, never threaten to steal a cat. We cat-owners would get on ya. :p Anyways, resuming the freaking out, OMG OMG OMG OMG. WHAT? Sad face I already know who Carrow is but still! Seriously? I'm so excited. What was the poison/bug/thing? :O Why isn't Teddy sick? Or was that just me not reading it correctly? Rose got lucky there, eating takeout and such.
Richie is kinda interesting, I wonder what his role in this story is. Personally, I think he's a bad guy pretending to be a muggle that plays football and gets lots of girls. But that's just me. Anyways, next chapter wooo! :D This is amazing Jenny, AMAZING.Author's Response: Cat-lovers beware... Rose is on the loose and in a kidnapping mood :D
Yeah, Rose got lucky by being disgustingly unhealthy :P
You think Richie is a bad guy? Interesting :P
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Celine Dion makes me think of Tanya now, so I giggled when she was mentioned. Anyways, o, what's all this up about? Hmm, Could it be Lorcan? C'mon you're making this too hard! Wait...
Could there be multiple traitors? :O What if there is? WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN JENNY, WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN? I NEED TO KNOW! *Ahem* Yeah, so I kinda liked this chapter, needs more popcorn though :p Jk, it was brilliant like the other's I've read. So, here I go to the next chapter! Cause my reviews are rambles. :D
CHAPTERRR FIVE HERE I COME *Flies away*Author's Response: Ohh, Tanyuh :D
It could be Lorcan, or it could not be. It could be multiple people, and it could not be. I love being mean :P
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Woah. Is it Lysander? Dang this kinda took my "It's Fred!" idea and blew it away... Maybe it is Fred though! List of Mike's Suspects: Everyone except Rose. It's a very good list. Teddy better not be a traitor, he doesn't seem to be the traitor but with that floo issue he could be... But then he did get pushed out of a window.
WHO IS IT? AH. I'll continue to suspect just about everyone until I figure out who. Ahh but as much as I liked this there were a few mistakes. I'm pretty sure at some point you wrote "mike" instead of "mic" it's not me, it's a microphone. :p Also, there was a point where you only wrote h instead of he. Also, I'm only pointing these out to make you mad. I FOUND GRAMMAR MISTAKES WITH JENNY HAHA. I'm so mean, I'm sorry :p
To the next chapter! :DAuthor's Response: I CAN'T TELL YOU WHO IT IS! :P Although, I will tell you this: you are right with one of the people on your list :D
I will cry if you point out grammar mistakes, I really will ;( How do you know it wasn't you?
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*Ahem* Hi I'm here to do my really long "Lets read all of HAT and review it all right now!" thing :p So while you should be off doing podcast reviews I'm reading hat *CoughYouBetterBeReviewingPodcastsCough* :P
Anyways, is it Fred? :O Who's the man? I'm pretty sure I know cause the link I got here was one for a Dobby nomination for "Best Villain" so you know.*whistles* But I'm excited! Anyways, I really think it's Fred just cause that phone bit, you know, the traitor. Maybe it's Dom, she's mean... Or Scorpius since he couldn't be there? Hmmm I'm sticking with Fred.
Anyways, I chuckled a few time and then I was like "Aww..." When the chapter was over, but there's like... 12 more to go so woo! :D
I'm off to the next chapter now :P
Mike.Author's Response: I AM REVIEWING PODCASTS, I SWEAR! :D
I am so pleased that you got here from a Dobby nomination, I'm squeeing. And I have a massive smile on my face. Like, YAY *dances*
Fred, Dom, Scorpius, GAWD, who knows, eh? Weeell, I do, but still :P
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Really good! Oh Richie's back! I have to say that I'm kinda happy about this, and I don't know why. I think it's because it makesthe whole who-she-loves thing even more complicated.
I really like Theo. And really trust him.
Tracey is nice, but there's something creepy about her. For a while I thought there was something going on with Roxy, because Theo said that she didn't want to go with him, but then when the Lily thing surfaced everything seemed to chang slightly.
I don't know if I think it's Lily. Because if Theo is trustworthy (pressumably he is) then he wouldn't have saved her, she would just become a danger to them if she is the spy.
I still have to say that I am honestly not sure who it is, and in other stories, that would be ob-vious by now. I like that there's still that constant mystery in the story as other thing begin to unfold.
Hey! If the traitor is already ob-vious and I am just to dim to realise who it is yet, give me time and I will figure out eventually. ;)
I am so happy that some of the gang got back together, even if it was only for a short time. Hopefully they'll all be back together soon.
Gonna go read chapters ten and twelve and see what you've edited.
Keep up the amazing work!!
padmoonyfoot7: over and out!! ;PAuthor's Response: YAY RICHIE IS BACK *evil eevviill laugh*
And good, Theo is awesome. You should probably definitely check out 'Her Hero' too :P
Tracey was just a device to help ScoRose out- she's nice, don't worry!-, and you'll have to find out with Lily in the next chapter :P
I think that the traitor was obvious, but now I've tried to cloudy the water some. Hopefully I'll give you some more possibilities soon :D
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Well first I thought it was Scorpius, and then Lorcan, and then Roxanne, and then Lily, and then back to Scorpius, and then Albus, and the Hugo, and then Roxanne again. But now I'm stuck between Lily and Roxanne...Author's Response: Ahahaha, this made me laugh so much :) I'm so glad I've kept you guessing! (I know, I'm cruel)
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That was a little exciting, I wonder if they will get the Richie guy out?
see you next chapter :)Author's Response: Well, who knows :P
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hey Jenny, I've been away for a while dealing with real life but I'm coming back soon. The standard of your writing is as high as ever. I've missed it a lot. The story continues to be a superb read. Well done.
I'm nearly ready to dust off Hr/Rob.Author's Response: Hey! I was wondering where you'd got to :)
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THEY'RE STILL IN JAIL D8 D8 D8 MEEP! JENNEH, YOU ARE JUST THE MASTER OF ADVENTURE AND ACTION AND MYSTERY AND HUMOUR EVEN IN DARK PLACES. So many feels!! *throws self on ground and sobs*
And there are so many hints and plotty bits and threads and I HAVE NO CLUE WHAT WILL LEAD ANYWHERE. I only have time to be overwhelmed by your awesomeness. SO MUCH STUFF, like how will Carrow being told by Harry link in? Why is beeping Hugo not there? Who slipped Rose's lockpicks in to her?
Plus what have they been doing in there? I'm thinking probably not just idly chit-chatting, since Dom did promise to bust them out and Rose has her lock-picks, but THERE'S SO MUCH SUSPENSE. And the coldness (figurative and literal) of the ending really added to the chilly scaredness of what's going to happen next.
I love how you've described everyone as staying in their usual roles, though! It really gives us a sense of camaraderie, though Carrow's bit was even more confusing than usual. I really want his backstory 8| Author's Response: *picks up crying Lotteh and soothes her with a review response*
I'm so so so sad I can't really answer your questions, especially when they are so delicious :P hopefully, though, I shall be tying up all the plotty bits and hints and threads by the stories end, so everything should be awesome. Kinda. :P
I can't give it away though! Also, I tried to make them all still be in their own roles! So YAY! Thanks for your beautiful reviews, Lottie *hugs*
SO MUCH EXCITEMENT. SO MUCH PAIN. IT IS VERY HARD FOR ME TO STAY AND WRITE THIS WHEN I WANT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT SO BADLY! (Especially since my laptop /officially/ hates you and deleted my first attempt at a review on this chapter, YAY~)
THE BREAK-IN. WAS. AWESOME. It was such a clever idea to have the Fraternity hiding the exit key in plain sight - as a literal key - which Rose could work out! And the time-limit really ramped up the excitement and confusion and FLAIL FACTOR. Plus it was good to meet James again, and see more of Scorpius!
And Rose, y she so awesome? At getting information especially? Teehee Molly's report was fabaroo and then that contrasting with what the security bloke said, I was just wondering why some of the stories matched up until SHIZ WENT DOWN IN THE NIGHT D8
omgomgomg it was absolutely fantastic writing when you built up Rose's annoyance at her phone - wait, no, Scorpius' phone - why are they ringing - HOLY SHI- - HUGO - BETRAYAL - THEY'VE GOT HER. There were just so many feels and emotions and ASDFGHJKLQWERTYUIOP
^that was me becoming a big blob of squees and derps
SO IMMA READ ON NOW OK, TOO MUCH LOVE OVERWHELMING ME. Oh and I got my lil Gryff sister reading this too [/randomness]Author's Response: Hello again! :D I am very flattered that your laptop still classes myself and Helen together xD
I'm glad you liked the break-in, and the break-out; I was a bit unsure of Rose's plan to start with, but I'm glad you like it, it's growing on me too. And James and Scorpius *swoon* :P
Molly's report was pretty fun to write, and OHMYGOSH YES. Stuff went doown xD I can't possibly reply to the awesomeness that is the next bit of your review :P Squees and derps for the win :D
Thanks so much for the review, and I'm so glad you've recommended Hat! I'll keep a look out for her in the CR, thanks! :)
SO MUCH EXCITEMENT AND SADNESS... SO MANY FEELS~~ Ohh I love all the planning/adventure bits, but the injuries and death add this deadly element to the whole thing which remind us about how it's not just a game :'(
It's so sad about Teddy and Victoire's baby, I just hope so much that they will be able to channel this in a better way somehow D: Bo, but it was a good idea of Rose's to carry on with the plan anyway, it throws the baddies off their trail if they go ahead with it! (I hope, anyways...)
SO MUCH EXCITEMENT WITH THE DIVING, though I wonder how the Fraternity/Carrow will use the water and vaults - if they'll even know the Clan are there - and if not, who didn't know! I love seeing everybody's jobs in action because you make them all gel smoothly together to get the job done. (I'm totally trying not to sing Bob The Builder after that last sentence, though).
But Scorpius! Why does Lorcan not like him?! I'm very glad Rose brought him along, and that she's trusting him - it makes it all more interesting when there's so much tension to work around and create awkward moments in - and now they're trapped inside the vault... yeesh, good thing Lily's a criminal mastermind :P
SO MUCH AWESOMENESS, JENNEH, AND I LURVE IT :3Author's Response: OH, THE FEELS! :3 Unfortunately, it's not a game. *mimes dying dramatically*
Teddy and Victiore's baby- that was horrible to write, it really was :( it didn't even get a chance at life, and I really hated doing that.
But, yeah, OMG DIVING. Ro-ohse Weasley (can she fix it) Ro-ohse Weasley, (yes she can! ish). Thanks for that tuune. xD
And I'm afraid I know exactly why Lorcan hates Scorpius, and I'm not telling you why >:D
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Depressingly, my computer deleted my first review of this chapter, which it only ever does for Helen's stories besides, therefore it knows how much I LOOOVE this story! Just go along with my awesome logic; I'm sure my laptop is magical, ok?
ANYWAY, LILY! DOM! SCORPIUS! ROXANNE! MORE WEASLEYS! AND SO MUCH PARANOIA I AM STARING CREEPILY OUT MY WINDOW AT ANYONE I CAN SEE. It's so awesome, all this secret agent and info stuff, but I can't help wondering if Lily's hiding something in all this mess, if it's her way of protecting documents more importantly than in a safe. Is she leading the Fraternity? And what's up with Dom?!
I did feel sorry for poor Rose hiding away from her family :( Although it was really cool, quick thinking, to have her shielding the Homonum Revelio! And then locking herself in a cupboard? It was like ninja!Rose :D
AND SHE KNOWS THERE'S A MOLE, THIS IS GOOD. But bad because so much suspicion! Eep I do hope more Lorcan and Scorpius come into it soon, especially with this death note, which makes me think about that phone call from the first chapter (or two, I cannae remember) and wonder about Scorpius again.
IT'S JUST VERY EXCITING~Author's Response: I'm flattered by your computer's mischievousness :P
The Weasleys and the paranoia! OMG. *stares creepily* Lily has hidden something in the mess, and Rose found it. But, did you? :P
thief!Rose is a ninja, which is amazing.
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