I love this story! Please please please keep writing!Author's Response: Don't worry, after an extended abscense, the Clan are going to be back and better than ever (hopefully!)
Thanks for the review :D Report Review
It was so great reading the three new chapters all at once. I think you're still doing a wonderful job and I remain very excited about the story, characters and also the romance. The romance is nice and in between the lines, not forceful, I really like it. The brief kiss was amazing. I love moments like that.
And I'm still really enjoying Rose's narrative even though the story got a little darker than it was at the beginning. And so the plot thickens! I can't wait to read more and see how their attack on Abner's house works out. By the way, congratulations about the Dobbys. You deserved all the nominations, I really wanted this story to win something. Report Review
THEY KISSED! Ah I love you and this story!Author's Response: Yes, they did :P
thanks so much! Report Review
Ah! The dramatic irony in this piece - it is not only EXTREMELY fustrating but also very well written as to make you feel so annoyed at Carrow and Rose - it certainly had me screaming my head off at the computer screen.
The relationship between Scorpius and Rose is also very well written - casual and relaxed, like they both don't have to try hard to be around each other but yet go together nicely - therefore making it easier for them to slip in to a romantic relationship *wink wink hint hint*
Every chapter has you wanting more, with both cliffhangers big and small. The whole Lily werewolf thing has me intrigued, and I'm desperate to see how you play that out, and who knows about it too.
Woo! Another highly enjoyable and awesome chapter to read, thank you :D Report Review
Honestly, it's no problemo with a late update. Your action-packed chapter more than made up for it.
Ahh! Rose and Scorpius kissed?! Awesomeness! But that part where she broke his fingers? Poor dear. He really can't have been expecting that. All the same, happy new year to the clan!
I love Rose's plan. She's right, they've been divided and conquered. But if they do it together, they're sure to succeed. I widh them the best of luck.
I'll be sad to see this end. Hattie has been an amazing, awetastic, twisty-turny, unique, fun and action-packed adventure, and i'll really keep coming back to read it, even when its finished.
-Akansha. Report Review
Aw caught in a kiss. Glad they made an escape. Good quote, :)Author's Response: I am a sucker for cliche :) thanks for reviewing! :D Report Review
Oh, the love I have for this story is huge. I've missed it so much, but I forgive you after reading this awesome chapter. :D
I hate Marcus. That's kind of a given really, but it had to be said. Also, Yorkshire + Marcus' boss + Zach + Zach's alias = SAME PERSON??? Is it? :O
It would make sense for Zach to help them in jail if he wanted them to come to him, unless Carrow's got his house. Or it's a different house in the same place. Because I'd assume Carrow would be there, too. I've kind of confused myself, but I can't wait to find out!
I am now completely lost as to who the traitor is, and I've given up, but that's okay because I like the surprise (please don't be Lorcan or Louis, where is Louis? I hope he's okay. And Hugo, is he still safe with Theo?)
Ah! Rose kissed Scorpius! Now he should get that divorce and Rose can play step-mum when the kid is born. Aww. :P
This was amazing, Jenny. Cannot wait for the next chapter. :D
Sam. Report Review
Yay a new chapter and a bit of a Scorp and rosey sesh :) wooohooo. Im so looking forward to the next plan and i absoloutely love the last line because it reminds me of Alice in wonderland :D please write some more soon
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yayy, rose and scorpius finally kiss!
this story just gives me the oceans 11 vibe all the time lol
keep up the writing!Author's Response: Oh, Ocean's Eleven, (and Twelve, and Thirteen), I love you immensely :) Thanks for reviewing, and I thought it was about time they had a quick kiss :P Report Review
I absolutely hate that this is a ScoRose because it's currently my least favourite overrated ship, scorpius is a total weenie in this fic and every other aspect of this story is so damn brilliant that putting those two together is like a crime against nature. BUT SERIOUSLY THIS IS SO GOOD! I've never read a fic where EVERY wotter is a deranged criminal and it's so strange to get my head around but when I did it was just so interesting! you're fantastic at the whole action type scene, extremely entertaining to say the least, and even though I'm not quite sure where this is going I'm looking forward to finding out :DD
keep writing! :) Report Review
aaah who's the person?! and Lily's a werewolf! ~plot twist~ but it works quite well really.
I like Rose's hair ;) I'm loving all the Rose/Scorpius
Considering all of the things I'm still wondering, I'm going to assume you have a plot :P But I think it's definitely still believable! This is a rubbish mcrubbish review but I just caught up on three chapters and I'm really not meant to be reading any hpff stories yet - I've nearly finished with my super busy time (YAY!). So that's why I'm not even logged in :P
Loved it as usual and CONGRATS ON ALL THE DOBBY NOMS! I looked at the sections and even though I haven't voted for anything yet I'll be voting for you! :) Report Review
Of course you have a plot. I haven't a good idea of what it is. Thats why you are such a great writer. And the characterisations are just superb. This was another excellent chapter.
Oh and I spotted a spelling mistake. Report Review
Thank you! You and your story are awesome.
This chapter was really good and seems to be changing a lot of thing.
Everything is linking together - the files under the matress - it all fits like a puzzle. Have you the whole story planned out or do you just write stuff when you feel like putting it in? Because if it's the latter, then you have an amazing memory!
They're gonna take the rest of the family and leave Rose&Scorpius, that's clever, but will they know that it's a trap and come up with a better plan?
My mind is buzzing!
Keep up the amazingly fantastic work!!!
padmoonyfoot7: over and out!
(see all those exclamation marks?!) Report Review
Hello! I really loved this! It's a really interesting story so far, and I love how you've characterized all the next gen Potters/Weasleys/Lovegoods/Malfoy. And, of course, the whole concept of the story is really interesting and unique! I'm curious to see how they break into Hogwarts! That's not going to be easy! And I'm also curious as to why they need a statue from the Room of Requirement... I'm loving this story so far, and can't wait to read more! Wonderful job! 10/10
Cassie :) Report Review
SDJLAF:HALKSJS SO GOOD. UPDATE SOON. i love this story! good job :) Report Review
Woah. Wait. I just discovered this story and read it beginning to end, and it leaves off without telling me what Rose found? Argh! Update soon please!Author's Response: Sorry! :P (I lie, I'm not really) Thanks so much for the review, it really means a lot that you read AWLL of it just now, it is really quite long...
Thank you! I'll try to update soon :D Report Review
Despite whatever, i'll never stop believing you actually have a plot. So far, your writing's been fun, steadfast, fascinating, and a great journey, overall. I quite love it. And I do believe things will come together, eventually.
This chapter was one of the lighter ones in the story, and I liked it a lot. I love the idea of a blue-haired Rose, and Scorpius as her hairdresser. Can we have a CI of a blue Rose? :)
Btw, Another Cliffhanger? I have started wondering about the mystical cave in your brain, where you store all these edge-of-the-seat endings...
-Akansha. Report Review
Ok, so, just saying that i'm very, very sorry.
You gave such a kind R&R to my story, and i'm
reading this chapter just now. I'm terrible, I
Secondly, all those awards, omg! You have been
rightly nominated for them, and I hope you win
them all, coz this story has had some real
great action/adventures, mysteries, villains,
and of course, jaw-dropping plot-twist. I'm
still new to this, so I dunno how to vote on the
forums, but if I could, I definitely would vote
for your little Hattie baby. It's the best.
A sequel for HAT?! I'm grinning ear to ear, coz
i'm all too eager to read it. It'll be epic, I can
Once again, best of luck with the Dobbies! :)
Off to read the next chapter,
PS. The last line was another one of those
famous jaw-dropping plot-twists. Honestly,
how do you do it, girl? Report Review
I'm meant to be getting ready to go meet my friend, but I'm reading this instead. If I'm late and she waits for me for ages because of me reading this story then I regret nothing! :-D
I love their cover up story! it's so funny :-D I bet the Taxi driver loved that story! :-D aww that's so sweet that he didn't charge them.
I love that Scorpius's family bring up Hermione punching Draco to annoy him hehe.
I love the even Ron still laughs at it hehe it was a very good achievement of hers.
Look at them trying to be newlyweds, they should get married themselves and then they can be newlyweds and be in love with each other forever!
They're so funny together pretending to be happily married hehe.
Oh the papers were explained! Finally I kept trying to think of what they were for.
Oh it's Abner, *Yells at him* I hate you Abner you big meany!!
They're hiding at Hogwarts? That would be hard to find them in, I wonder where in there? Maybe the room of requirement?
Oh no how do they all know about Cardiff? Who's the traitor?
No a kidnap plot! This story has so many awesome things going on at the same time I might explode from the shere amazingness of it!
Haha her hair is blue! :-D Should we be concerned that Scorpius is so good with hair?
haha oh my Albus and Scorpius had a goth phase? oh how cute!! That would have been so funny to see!
Who's name and address is in the folder? I need to know now! Why must you have so many cliffhangers? I love them but still why? i need more awesomeness!
I will happily be waiting on your next chapter! Report Review
I think they had a good time in the taxi coming up with a background story. Funny Rose decided to just be married and keep it simple. Report Review
Cliff hanger! How will I survice until the next chapter???
Loving how the whole thing is shaping out! xAuthor's Response: ahaha, I'm sorry! Maybe go read some more of my stuff :P *wink wink*
Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
GAHAAH!!! That's my word for you.
I realize you have a plot in there somewhere, but it's absolute TORTURE trying to figure it out. I still think it's Lupin but whatever, and I still don't think it's Lily or Hugo.
BUT SERIOUSLY?! Are you like trying to give me an aneurism? This is why I never read mysteries :)) they make me all antsy!
On a more positive note, I love this novel :D Report Review
This is incredible still, don't worry! Great new chapter. The bit at the end when Scorpius interrupted her reading the name and address was just enough to keep me well and truly hooked.. Who's address was it?!?
I really love this story. It's so original and captivating. I hope Rose and Scorpius find everyone, and that no one dies! Thanks so much for sharing :) Report Review
One word review.Totally AWESOME. (yeah, yeah I know thats two words. So shoot me.) Will have my vote in every Dobby category. Why do I bother writing?Author's Response: Thanks :) You write because YOU'RE AWESOME AT IT! Thank you for sticking with Hattie, and me ! Report Review
I didn't see that coming.
So, amazing story. I nearly skipped my tutorial this afternoon, I was so engrossed in this story. It's gripping, it's original, it's intense, and it's amazing. And I don't really have any other words except that this is what fanfiction is all about and this was every kind of brilliant in the known universe.
10/10, sorry for not reviewing the other chapters, and you're my hero.Author's Response: considering that I read nearly every single thing of yours, this review means the WORLD to me, it really does. Thank you so much! I am immeasurably happy that you like my story, and no, YOU'RE my hero!
Thanks for reviewing! *squees* Report Review
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