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Review #26, by KeyWitch22422 Hear All About It

22nd February 2013:
well, he's in love with Ginny OBVIOUSLY xD
Great Chapter from a Great Writer
waiting for updates :)

Author's Response: Yes, yes he is, but Harry is shortsighted sometimes (not necessarily from his glasses) and he has trouble understanding that.

New update should be in the queue soon!

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Review #27, by TheHallow Hear All About It

21st February 2013:
Okay! I haven't reviewed yet because i have been so engrossed in reading this story! Please keep going! I loved how you ended it with a sweet note on Harry and Ginny. But I think you should add some opposition to the PEACE, some people might not like restarting a Wizengamot. I think that you shouldn't make it too similar to the 2nd Continental Congress, (Idk if you live in America but that is a part of American History) But that you should totally be creative with it and let PEACE fly! I REALLY REALLY love this story!

Author's Response: No problem, I'm just glad that you did review. My plan is for PEACE to have some opposition, someone to throw them back so they only get so far forward, but I'm working on who/what would be the right opponent. Mostly what kind of character should I have for-fronting the opposition group.

I am American, and it is actually really sad that I can't recall the 2nd Continental Congress. History is my favorite subject, and I know the 1st Continental Congress, but I have no idea the 2nd and it's really bugging me. (Going to go look it up right after this.)

Thank you so much for reviewing and I hope I can put the next chapter in the Queue in the next day or so!

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Review #28, by Magicalis Writer All I Ever Wanted

28th January 2013:
AHHH. Poor Harry! Reading on... you're an amazing writer, by the way.

Author's Response: It had to be done... Sometimes I post chapters and I'm like, uh, was that good, so it's good to see that you enjoyed it.

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Review #29, by Magicalis Writer Moving Away

28th January 2013:
I liked the sort of darker theme. It's something that I was wanting to do, but I couldn't bring myself to do- I can see Harry shutting himself away after the war, and drinking. This next chapter might be my last for tonight, but I'll hopefully remember to come back and read a few more chapters tomorrow!

Author's Response: It was a hard chapter to write but for myself to do justice to the story I felt I had to do it. I'm glad you think it's realistic.

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Review #30, by Magicalis Writer It Wasn't Just Me

28th January 2013:
Another great chapter! 9/10, and continuing!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!

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Review #31, by Magicalis Writer A Long Way Coming

28th January 2013:
I love it! I saw it at first, and since it seems so... well.. angsty, I had to! I'm not logged in, so I'll have to type in my Pen Name, but I'll continue reading!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Each review means so much so thank you for just taking the time!

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Review #32, by Lilo Lily Louise Woods You Can't Stop Us Now

26th January 2013:
I really like this story I feel bad for Harry though
Maybe you should make the chapters longer
Long live HARRY POTTER x I'm his biggerst fan my room is Harry potter my walls have him on it so does my bed PS ur grammar needs improvement I love this thanks again

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing and your vote of confidence. I think making the chapters longer is what I struggle with a lot because I want to make the chapters flow but still I want to have a lot of stuff in them. Grammar is always a problem for me because I just write and then forget about this thing called proofreading, whoops, but thanks for the input!

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Review #33, by HedwigAndDobby Nice to See You Too

24th January 2013:
I really like that Patunia cares about Harry, I always imagined she would. I also really love your way of writting:)
There were a few places where you put they instead of he or him but that was it. Loved it!

Author's Response: I figured that once you lived with wizards for a year and were in danger, Petunia would have a greater appreciation for her sister. Then she would look at how she treated Harry and how Dudley had changed and herself have a change of heart.
Thanks for telling me about the edits, any help like that is appreciated.

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Review #34, by kspence Nice to See You Too

8th January 2013:
great story, looking forward to the rest of the story.

Author's Response: Thank you and I will keep writing, not sure when the story will be done but I have all intentions to finish it.

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Review #35, by sgtpitviper2011 No Rest for the Weary

27th November 2012:
I suggest using posthumously instead of post-mortem.

Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion. Now that you say it, it makes much more sense and once I get the story down I will go back and change it.

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Review #36, by gubbar Old and New Friends

23rd November 2012:
Your story is awesome, thanks for writing and updating:)

Author's Response: It's my pleasure. I continue to do it as long as they're are readers who want to know what happens next.

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Review #37, by Kathleen Rebuilt

26th October 2012:
More please! I love it :)

Author's Response: I'll do my best, very glad that you enjoyed it. Really means a lot that you enjoyed it.

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Review #38, by Aurorofthelight Rebuilt

13th October 2012:
This has been a brilliant story so far and I always look forward to the next chapter! Keep them coming!

Author's Response: Thank you! NaNoWriMo is happening and in case you haven't heard of it I suggest you search it, and I usually use the month of November to work on Original Fiction, so updates might be a bit slow. Sorry about that.

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Review #39, by Meg A Long Way Coming

6th September 2012:
Great Story! I'm super excited to read more! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! Another chapter is in the queue so there is more on the way!

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Review #40, by harrypotterfan12345 Try to Stand in My Way

26th August 2012:
thank you so much for updating :) Completely understandable about school, I just started again too so I think everyone is going to be busier. I really liked this chapter it was interesting to see him in training. I was a little confused about what exactly happened when he went in the room to talk to guy who asked for him. Did Harry stun himself? Or did he make the other guy stun him as a distraction? Either way it's a good chapter lol :) And I love the fact that he is going back to godric's hollow it seems really fitting. It isn't super flashy and he won't always be in the spotlight, but he can still be around his roots. Again, thanks for updating :)

Author's Response: Love the feedback. Harry gave the ministry man a fake wand and then stunned the man which would be against, in my mind, regulation to have a wand in interrogation. I will, at some point go back to rework it to make it a little bit clearer, and thanks for reviewing!

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Review #41, by Lauren All I Ever Wanted

5th August 2012:
One of the best stories I have ever read, keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Review #42, by robin What's On the Line

20th July 2012:
I just found your story and I've read it through and i must say it's great! It is just about how I imaginated the harry potter story to continue:) keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I love that you find it realistic because that's one of my main goals with this story.

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Review #43, by GinnyGryffindor What's On the Line

20th July 2012:
Love it. Make a sequel.

Author's Response: Thanks and yes, I do plan on there being a sequel.

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Review #44, by harrypotterfan12345 I Can Explain

16th July 2012:
thank you so much for updating :) I really liked how this chapter was both a little bit of drama but also some fun. I'm glad that Ron had come around to being okay with Harry and Ginny dating. What was George trying to tell Harry though? That he is good for Ginny? Can't wait until the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I do hope that everything is flowing well, and you did guess it. George is trying to tell Harry he thinks that he's the only boy that he would be okay with Ginny being with. Thank you so much.

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Review #45, by yukikiralacus Close to the Home

8th June 2012:
Can't wait til Ginny find out Harry's cuts on his arms. I can't wait for more! update soon please!

Author's Response: The next update is in the queue and your questions should soon be answered.

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Review #46, by harrypotterfan12345 I Have One Wish

25th May 2012:
thank you so much for the update :) I really liked this chapter. I wish Ginny would just get on board with her and Harry dating though. What's holding her back? She knows why he had to leave her last time and she knows that he loves her. So she should just accept it soon. I am glad that Ron is okay with it now though. That's a good sign. Harry being an auror and having to go away for that could make things tough though especially since Ginny will be at school. We'll see. Again, great update :)

Author's Response: I love the feedback. Your question could be answered in the coming chapters and I hope that you keep reading. Thank you so much!

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Review #47, by yukikiralacus This Won't Be the Last Goodbye

23rd May 2012:
Nicely written! I liked the ending of the chapter. Is anyone going to confront Harry about drinking firewhisky and (maybe I'm mixing up with another story:cutting?) UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Author's Response: Same story! And there is going to be some interesting developments on the whole alcohol and cutting in the coming chapters.

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Review #48, by yukikiralacus Let Me Get This Straight

7th May 2012:
Can't wait for more! I'm curious how Harry and Ginny get back together. I love stories where they get back together slowly not immediately. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Author's Response: I love the feedback! I agree with you that stories that have Harry and Ginny get back together at the beginning are a bit unrealistic. An update is coming soon, I promise.

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Review #49, by Person Let Me Get This Straight

5th May 2012:
THIS STORY IS AWESONE! please write more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm working on getting the next update out soon.

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Review #50, by Hopeless You Can't Stop Us Now

28th March 2012:
That was pretty good! I still see a few spelling errors here and there, but overall your writing is improving! Glad you got your muse back too. I would love to you carry this through to the end!
Nice job, Hopeless

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I would like to see this story finished too, and I think I can do it.

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