30 Reviews Found

Review #26, by malfoy godess chapter four: the kiss that changed it all

18th December 2011:
awww james and elisabeth i was waiting for this to happen! jane seems like a big b***h i am so excited for when scorp finds our i cant wait to see how you have him react (hopefully like a true malfoy!) fred is growing on me!!

Author's Response: i am going to assume you mean sarah when you say jane and yes that is what i wanted people to think about her, james and liz are so cute and when scorp finds out i promiss it will be worth the wait
~moony_elisabeth_harry


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Review #27, by malfoy godess chapter 3- lessons

18th December 2011:
first of all i want to say leah kills me! she reminds me of my best friend i love her character! scorpious seems like he has a dark side to him, i cant wait till the true malfoy in him comes out. james is so sweet to teach elisabeth i like the way you put together this chapter im egar to read more!

Author's Response: haha leah is a fun character to write i tryed to make her like a mix of luna and nevile i think i ended up creating a whole new character and im happy with her. and yes scorp has a dark side we will see the malfoy in him come out in the coming chapters thanks for your review!
~moony_elisabeth_harry


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Review #28, by malfoy godess chapter two- memories

18th December 2011:
this was a sad chapter i like to think that collin is the kind and happy older brother we all have, james should not blame himself for collins death! who knew centaurs could be so mean!

Author's Response: the insparation for collin came from my older brother, he is exactly like collin im glad that my vision is getting across. oh and the centaurs became agresive after the war due to lack of land and disturbance from the death eaters
~moony_elisabeth_harry


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Review #29, by malfoy godess Chapter One: back to hogwarts

18th December 2011:
this sounds so fun and interesting i am excited to read more ! p.s i love the way you wrote james i love his character!

Author's Response: thank you i am also quite happy with james thanks for your review
~moony_elisabeth_harry


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Review #30, by MademoiselleAnnaleise Chapter One: back to hogwarts

17th October 2011:
This is cute, but maybe you should consider getting a beta reader as there are quite a few grammar and punctuation mistakes in both the chapter and the summary.
Good luck, xo

Author's Response: thanks and i know about the mistakes thanks for the advice the review and the read :)

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