I liked the wedding scene and Peters indiscretion, and Sirius' attack of the green eyed monster was an interesting situation. I found Lily's comments to Remus about childbirth disturbing, it was ok when she was ranting about it to James but lecturing Remus about pain? Perhaps she wasn't thinking straight, having given birth and all, but at twenty one I am sure Remus already knew what pain was once a month. One other little thing, and it is a little thing....Harry would have been born with blue eyes. Caucasian children are all born with blue eyes, which then changes to its real colour later. I really liked how you have portrayed Lily's exhaustion, and its is sweet of James to want to make her feel better. Loved the ending though, very funny :D

Author's Response: aah, I didn't know about the eye bit. *is not caucasian* and thank you for telling me about that. I'll change it whenever I get around to it. I appreciate your review and comments, thank you! Take Care!

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hahaha james doesn't know how to make him stop crying. why do Lily and James have a phone? do they live in a muggle neighborhood? I never knew. this is a good story, no mistakes, pretty well written. good job!

Author's Response: Lily and James have a phone? *ish confused* haha, kinda funny that I don't know my own story. I'll look back on it in a few. Thank you for taking your time to review. Take care!!

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This is great!!!!!!!!!!!!! 10.

Author's Response: Yay! Thank you!

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Wow, this story is hilarious. The ending was beautiful, it goes for all fathers, not just James! Wonderful job!

Author's Response: Haha! Thank you for your review! Yeah, there are some fathers that believe a woman's work is easy because they're taking care of a child. Wrong, right? Thank you for stopping by! Take care!

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This story is so cute! Remus, James and Sirius are very well written, very much in canon. You only have a few grammar problems but that can be taken care of. Baby Harry is so adorable! Stupid James, he left his own son! I bet Lily wouldn't have been happy with that. Good thing Remus found him. Anyway, I just kept on rambling, update as soon as you can.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, it seems that everyone has been telling me to watch out for grammar problems but it has been already beta-ed...so trust me there were bound to be more if it hadn't been. Maybe I'll send the chapters later to another friend who is a nazi with grammar and punctuation. But Nomikkin will get them first. Anywho! James wasn't stupid for leaving Harry...he was just careless! Haha! I'm already working on the next chapter but its less than 500 words and my goal is 5K. Thank you for reviewing! Take care!

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This is a really nice story; I can see that you have put a lot of hard work into this. The way you have written and described the baby Harry is simply adorable. All the characters as far as I am concerned are perfectly in canon. The emotions have been written really well for all of the characters. Though each of the chapters are pretty long they make good reading. Don’t worry about not being humorous enough; I think the story is really funny; I really liked the parts where Sirius is forced to have a shower….. and ..James trying to give Harry his food and then later on when Sirius gets pink hair thanks to Harry’s talents with a wand… there are a lot more great moments in this story. Now for the itsy bitsy teeny errors that I found: There are small spelling errors and grammatical errors scattered here and there. Also, I think you tend to write long sentences maybe you should make them a bit shorter as it gets confusing some times. If you just go through the story a few times I am sure you will find them on your own. Please inform me when you update this story and do update ASAP. And Sorry for the really late review!

Author's Response: Wow, long review. Awesome! Thank you for seeing that I've put a lot of work on this fic because its 1)a 5K word per chapter 2)about a baby meaning I had to do research and 3) I'm no parent so creating a story with 'original' predicaments for the three Marauders' is a tad bit hard. Thank you for mentioning the error, I'll remember that in the future chapters and about the long sentences...I'm working on that at the moment, trust me, so perhaps shorter sentences in the future chapters? I'm already working on the next chapter and I'll be sure to contact you when I've updated. Thank you for your awesomely long review!

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This is a really nice story; I can see that you have put a lot of hard work into this. The way you have written and described the baby Harry is simply adorable. All the characters as far as I am concerned are perfectly in canon. The emotions have been written really well for all of the characters. Though each of the chapters are pretty long they make good reading. Don’t worry about not being humorous enough; I think the story is really funny; I really liked the parts where Sirius is forced to have a shower….. and ..James trying to give Harry his food and then later on when Sirius gets pink hair thanks to Harry’s talents with a wand… there are a lot more great moments in this story. Now for the itsy bitsy teeny errors that I found: There are small spelling errors and grammatical errors scattered here and there. Also, I think you tend to write long sentences maybe you should make them a bit shorter as it gets confusing some times. If you just go through the story a few times I am sure you will find them on your own. Please inform me when you update this story and do update ASAP. And Sorry for the really late review!

Author's Response: Wow, long review. Awesome! Thank you for seeing that I've put a lot of work on this fic because its 1)a 5K word per chapter 2)about a baby meaning I had to do research and 3) I'm no parent so creating a story with 'original' predicaments for the three Marauders' is a tad bit hard. Thank you for mentioning the error, I'll remember that in the future chapters and about the long sentences...I'm working on that at the moment, trust me, so perhaps shorter sentences in the future chapters? I'm already working on the next chapter and I'll be sure to contact you when I've updated. Thank you for your awesomely long review!

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wow! that was FANTASTIC! you say you aren't good with humor BUT i found myself giggling very often throughout the entire chapter! (especially the part when lily says to james about not sleeping with her ever again! haha.. that was great) i think that you portray the maurders very well and very "lifelike" i'm loving it so far and can't wait to read more! much love, ~wandofwillow

Author's Response: Thank you!! Haha, Its a bit tough to keep the Marauders' in character but I'm glad you found them in the right character. I've never seen myself writing humor so its a bit hard so I'm happy you found it funny at some points. Thank you so much for your review!! Take care!

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wow! that was FANTASTIC! you say you aren't good with humor BUT i found myself giggling very often throughout the entire chapter! (especially the part when lily says to james about not sleeping with her ever again! haha.. that was great) i think that you portray the maurders very well and very "lifelike" i'm loving it so far and can't wait to read more! much love, ~wandofwillow

Author's Response: Thank you!! Haha, Its a bit tough to keep the Marauders' in character but I'm glad you found them in the right character. I've never seen myself writing humor so its a bit hard so I'm happy you found it funny at some points. Thank you so much for your review!! Take care!

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Very good job! A few little mistakes grammar-wise here and there, but nothing too major. I really enjoyed this, keep up the good work. I think you portray the characters very well, they seem to be just how I would picture them! Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you for your inpute! Still grammar mistakes? Eek, thank you for letting me know. But trust me, I bet there were more before Nomikkin got a hold of this chapter. Makes me glad that you think I kept the three Marauders in character considering we don't know much of James or Remus' and Sirius' attitude before James' and Lily's murderer. Thank you for your review! Take care!

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awwwww that was a nice chapter. I can't believe they lost the baby! NOOOO. hahaha. Anyways, I don't really have any constructive critism for you. Besides the fact that maybe the banner is a bit too serious for such a light story, but that isn't important. Anyways, it's a lovely comedic story. wonderful job!

Author's Response: I actually like the banner, perhaps like you said a little too serious but if you think about it this is only a few months before the Potter's are murdered so we should keep that in mind. Haha, I actually enjoyed writring about James and Sirius forgetting about Harry. It as fun! Thank you for coming by and reviewing! Makes me happy!!

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wonderful chapter. QUITE a few laughs. Like i said before, nice and refreshing ideas.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you find it refreshing. I really hate using old ideas so that's why it takes me longer to create a chapter. ^.^;

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Ooo! wonderful begining! I love your ideas, they're nice and fresh. I loved the Siruis being jealous/sad, i loved the 'harry's a girl not a boy. You set yourself up wonderfully for the next few chapters. Awesome job.

Author's Response: Yay, thank you for coming by and reviewing. I had to make Sirius sad/jelous because he was 'losing' his best mate to a girl. Haha, I always had the idea that they believed that they were going to have a girl at the beginning and poof! a boy! Thanky ou for reviewing!

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honey, of course you have to continue with this story! there's no doubt about it! i really do look forward to your next chapter, so keep it up! okay? okay. lol. i love how James freaked out when he discovered that he didn't have the little fuzzball within his grasp. and i seem to notice a pattern. every night he puts Harry to bed, he says that he'll always be there for him or that he'll protect him, it's so cute! i love it! so please don't let me down, and continue on! much love! ;) ~nomikkin

Author's Response: I will continue. In fact, I already have the next two chapters planned out. All I have to do is actually sit down and write them. But at the moment I'm being lazy and drinking a frapuccino. Haha! And yes, I'm trying to keep that pattern because it shows that James would do everything for Harry and as we all know he died trying to protect him meaning that he kept to his word about doing everything for him...even giving his life for Harry.

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It's interesting to see James, Remus, and Sirius trying to take care of poor Harry. I think I read the beginning of this before because it seems very familiar. It's good that the chapters are long, I hate short chapters. The incidents with Harry are really funny because the boys are still childish themselves. I can't believe James left Harry on the bench! What an awful father! Good thing Remus found him. I'd make mention of your grammatical mistakes but you already know about them. They kind of detract me from the story, so it's something that's top priority for you right now. I know you said the first chapter was beta-ed, but I still caught sight of quite a few grammatical errors. I see Lauren made your banner too. I love the banners she made for my stories, she's really talented.

Author's Response: First of all, thank you Forsakenphoenix for coming and giving me this long review. I like long chapters too that's why I'm trying to make each chapter in this story about 5k each because its a short fic. I love Acappella's banners. Anywho, thank you for reviewing and for not making me cry. Haha! Take care!

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I thought it was brilliant! I loved it I haven't been around a baby in a long time... I hope you continue! ^.^

Author's Response: Thank you! I haven't actually been around a baby either...well, if you count two ours with my little cousin then yes. But still...I don't know what babies do so I had to research. I'll continue, dun worry. I'll get on working on the next chapter as soon as I finish my frapuccino. Yum.

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lol, this was hilarious. lol. i loved the ending. there are, however, a few common mistakes that show up regularly. like missing commas, capitilizations, things like that. if you'd like you can e-mail me and i can be a beta reader for you, fix your mistakes and all. lol. just a suggestion. i know that when you write out your own story, it's hard to go back and re-look at it, you know examin it for all the mistakes, so if you'd like, i would love to be the "outside reader" and would love to fix the stuff. but only at your permission. i completely and totally understand if you want to decline. anyways, e-mail me anytime, Nallair1@comcast.net. great job. i'm moving on to the next chapter, which might take me a while to get through what with how long it is and my own stories to write. lol. much love! ;) ~nomikkin

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for stopping by and reading it! Yeah, grammar seems to have something against me so I'll email you later today with the info. And yes, I did make the chapters long...all three chapters about 5k words...not so much fun writing them than reading them I suppose. Anyway, take your time and write your own stories. Take care!

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I love this story and it's defintely going on my favorites list when I log in!

Author's Response: Hiya Dobby. I'm ubber glad you liked i!!t And thank you SOOO much for adding it to your favorite list.

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Heyy! I definitely think you should continue this story! It's so cute! I really really like it! =D

Author's Response: Yayness, I'm happy that you liked this story. I will, perhaps, update this fic in a few months because I'll be working on my other fic. ^_^

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Oh goody since it's long past August I suppose the story is given up on. Oh well good story.

Author's Response: Well, believe it or not I'm updating! Ah, the power of having a little baby cousin...we should all thank her for making me keep writing this fic!

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I absolutely loved Remus' lime of "I'll take care of the chrildren... and Harry"

Author's Response: Haha! Yeah, I liked it too. In fact, that line was already written before I started writing the fic! Thank you for reviewing!

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that is great so far. I cannot wait to see what you have in store for these men in the future.

Author's Response: Ah, there will be many surprises for those three *evil laugh* and I'm going to enjoy writing them! Thank you for reviewing!

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Author's Response: Hahaha! Thank you!!

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Its so cool!!! please continue i'm begging you!!!

Author's Response: Haha! Don't worry, I decided to not abandon it! Thank your for your review!

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This is an awesome story so far...I love when Remus and Sirius have to take care of Harry, because I love them 2!!

Author's Response: I also love those two! Remus is my favorite out of the two. Reading and writing about baby Harry is fun because you get write or torture at least some of the Marauders! Thank you for your kind review!

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