I really love this story, I've been reading non-stop for about three hours! I don't have much criticism to throw your way (apart from the odd miss-spelling or jumbled sentence, your only human, I forgive you :)) but the way Dumbledoore repeatedly said "Isn't it./?" at the end of his sentences confused me a little. Was this just an error that went unnoticed, or were you purposely intending for him to say the phrase, for added effect? xAuthor's Response: Thank you so so much! Ahh damnnn, sorry about those :/ Yes, i think it was for effect haha, can't remember why i'd do that now, sorry!
Thanks again :D xx Report Review
A truly beautiful story. It shall forever have a special place in my heart :)Author's Response: Thank you so much :') x Report Review
ITS OVER AND I'M BAWLING MY EYES OUT WHY MUST IT END.
You are such an awesome author; I will be following your account for any future work. You truly are outstanding, and I love you.
JEANIE OH MY GOSH THIS IS THE LAST TIME I GET TO SIGN A REVIEW FOR THIS STORY BRB CRYINGAuthor's Response: Ahh thank you so so much, jeanie :') I love you to.
Ill be posting my new story's chapter soon so you have something to look out for! ;) x Report Review
OMG.. i cant believe this finally over. Yes, i remember the time you first told me about the storyline for this. how we spent an entire day talking about RitchBitch.. Oh the good times. I'm sure you're gonna come up with many more amazing ideas to write about and i hope ill be the first one to hear about those as well :DAuthor's Response: HEY YOUUU. Thank you so much and haha, yesss.
Thank you and I'll be sharing with you alright ;) xx Report Review
That was so excellent!Author's Response: Thank you :D Report Review
The actor who you couldn't get a name of for aaron is ulliel gaspard,hope it helped :) he is so damn hot! They always use him as blaise zabini in the youtube dramione videos.
Anyways, i love this ♥ u r such a good writer and i am so upset that the story is over:'( u should make more dramione stories like this. Best fanfic ever!Author's Response: Ohmygod THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOUUU! :D
Ahh thank you :') I will be posting a new one soon plus you could check out the one's Ive finished or am working on on my page! x Report Review
Awesome is all I can really say about this story! I've loved reading every bit of it, and I can genuinely say I'm going to miss seeing this pop up in my updated favourites.
I thought this was such an original Dramione, which is something very hard, so kudos for that!
I've just loved how you changed these characters, into something so realistic, and I found that this story was just wonderful, and I'm going to miss it!
I can see you hinting at a possible sequel from the A/N, and the epilogue, so perhaps all isn't lost!Author's Response: Thank you so much (: Im so so glad you enjoyed it, realyyy.
Hmm I might not do a sequel, actually :/ Perhaps a one-shot on it but not a full-on sequel. But I HAVE begun a new story! So you can keep a look-out for that! :) xx Report Review
Finally it's done!! Im happy that you made effort to finish such good story :) i really like your story and i think you are awesome! Hahaha.. Keep writing and i promise i'll keep reading!!! :DAuthor's Response: It iss! Hahah i wouldnt, COULDNT, not finish it!
Thank you so so much! I promise ill keep writing, do keep reading! xx Report Review
OH MY GOD! I COMPLETELY THOUGHT THAT THIS EPILOGUE WAS PERFECT! I FOUND THE RELATIONSHIP WITH MATILDA AND AARON SO SWEET! AND THEN ALSO THE COUPLE OF CASSY AND NATHAN! AWW! ANOTHER THING DRACO AND HERMIONE! THE MOST BEAUTIFUL COUPLE IN THIS FANFICTION! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THEM! I LIKE THE USE OF THE LINE 'Forever and Always' - IT'S SUCH A GOOD LINE FOR THEM! (IT ALSO REMINDS ME OF THE SONG 'FOREVER AND ALWAYS' BY TAYLOR SWIFT; I LOVE THE SONG! THERE ARE ALSO SOME LINES WHICH I THOUGHT WERE MY FAVOURITES:
"Time flies." She said, lacing her fingers with his and leaning back against him. "Soon they'll be getting married and having children of their own."
"Now you're just making me feel old." Draco chuckled. "Just enjoy the moment instead of thinking about the future."
"You brought it up." She protested, a smile playing at the corner of her lips.
"And I apologize." He said, letting go of her so she could come stand beside him. The entire yard was lit up with floating lamps and the full moon was high up in the sky, bright stars accompanying it. Soft, melodious music was playing all around them. He looked at her to see her smiling at him. "What?" He asked, his arm around her waist.
She smiled, looking up at him and staring into his shining blue eyes. "I love you, you know that?"
"I might be aware of the fact." He smiled back at her. "I love you too." Draco said, leaning down and kissing her softly. "Forever and always."
"Forever and always." She repeated, kissing him again, the smile refusing to leave her face.
I ALSO LIKED THE ENDING WITH DUMBLEDORE. ^_^ WHAT ELSE CAN I SAY? YOU ARE JUST AN AWESOME WRITER AND I HOPE TO SEE MORE OF YOUR WORK SOON! OH, AND THERE ARE ONLY TWO STORIES I HAVEN'T READ FROM YOU YET, WHICH I'M GOING TO READ RIGHT NOW BECAUSE I'M PRETTY SURE THEY ARE AWESOME STORIES TOO, JUST LIKE THIS ONE AND YOUR MANY OTHER ONES! JUST TO LET YOU KNOW, THE STORIES ARE: 'The Sixth Sense' and 'Bloodlust'. I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO READING AND REVIEWING THE BOTH OF THEM!
*takes a deep breath* I think I'm pretty much done. That was a lot of capslock, :P. I apologise, but you know, sometimes I can't stop.
Also, one more thing, this is The End yet The Beginning of many more! ^_^
I'll see you in your other two remaining stories which I'm gonna start reading today! ^_^
Until then, au revoir! :DAuthor's Response: HEYY YOUUU. hahahaha omg that is one LONG review- left it for the last :P So many feels of brilliance :') I swear you guys are out to either kill me or first inflate me ego to the point where it cracks my skull and THEN kills me. Honestly.
Thought id let you know, Ive got a story that Ive started and it's fluff/humor :D Hahha ill be posting it soon after i update Bloodlust!
Yes it is the end yet the beginning :)
Thank you so much and I shall be posting soon, so look out ;) xx Report Review
An incredible story! Really amazing It actually has saddened me to tears that it's over :') I have so many good memories about reading this story and im sure, VERY SOON I'll read it all over again! Thank you for your wonderful writing and keep going xoxoxox 110/10Author's Response: Thank you so much :'') Ahhh all of you are making me so emotional, fuosnfewreogunewuign.
Thank you again and I will post a new story soon for all of you! x Report Review
i can honestly say that i would never in my wildest dreams wanted malfoy and hermione to get together but u have made me love them! this story is hands down the best fanfic ive ever read and i was up until 11.30 last night because i couldnt stop reading. You have written it so cleverly and true to the characters, and i wish you had written more! i wish you could explore deeper into this version of a dramione romance but that would probably complicate it too much so where you stopped was probably a good point, but it still makes me sad that the story is over...when this story ended i felt the same pang of emptiness as i felt when i finished the final harry potter book and just kept thinking 'what do i do with my life now?' for months! i am never going to be able to read harry potter again without thinking of your 'other reality' and the potential that dramione had.
So to sum it up, I LOVED YOUR WRITING AND I THINK YOU DEFINITELY HAVE MORE THAN WHAT IT TAKES TO CONTINUE IT AS A CAREER, and i cant thank you enough for opening my eyes to this side (or version) of Draco! i love him now, how weird!Author's Response: Thank you so so much. Wow, I think my greatest accomplishment then is that Ive made Draco and Hermione a believable couple to people :') I believe in them so Im glad I got people to do that too1
Thank you so much and awww, it's not completely over though. At least, I mean, Im going to have a lot more stories to come so do look out for those :D UALRGNFIURN THANK YOU wowww. Hahah this review's made me feel so brilliant :') xx Report Review
OMG!!! I love you! N of course I absolutely love this story! Such a brilliant ending but its over :'( I couldn't help but tear up. BTW Perfect chapter for valentine's day ;). Thank you soo much for sharing this amazing story with us. Im gonna miss reading all this. And thanks for adding me in ur A/N. :DAuthor's Response: Awww I love you too :') Thank you so so much and yes, it is hahaha
Thank you again and hope you read my new story too ;) xx Report Review
wow! i cant believe it... i will never be able to read another hpff again and not be disappointed, nothing compares to this!!!Author's Response: uneiuwneiuonwrg wow. thank you so so so much, that makes me feel so unbelievably happy :'D xx Report Review
Wow, this is probably the best fan fiction ive ever read! ive never seen one so well written, and true to what the characters are actually like! good job, keep working :)Author's Response: Thank you so much :) xx Report Review
I am an abused child, emotionally and physically, for 16 years. Those 4sentences Draco said made me cry. Hitting you for showing too much emotion, throwing you into the pits of your fears, slapping the tears off your face... i dont know if u speak from experiance but you sure as hell did your research if notAuthor's Response: Oh my... I don't speak from experience actually.. Im so sorry, I don't know what to say wow. I just.. wrote it :/
You're so very strong and if its any help, please don't ever ever give up because you're absolutely brilliant and you deserve everything thats good in the world, not this.
I don't know if you will, but if you do need to talk or anything at all- Im always here (: hpff_feltonlewis at hotmail dot com, in case.
Do take care xx Report Review
ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL! BRAVO! BRAVO! I SWEAR THIS IS MY FAVORITE FANFIC AND IF I HAD AN ACCOUNT ON HERE I WOULD LIST IT AS SUCH, BUT AS I DONT I CAN ONLY KEEP SAYING BRAVO AND HOW MUCH I LOVED IT! BEST DRAMIONE FANFIC. IT SHOULD GET AN AWARD!Author's Response: Im just going to reply here because you reviewed a lot haha :P
Thank you so so so much hahaha, I'm so glad you enjoyed it :DDD xx Report Review
NO NO NO NO NO!! HOW DARE YOU! HERMIONE IS GOING TO BE SO CRUSHED THAT SHE LOST HER BABY!! AND WHAT ABOUT MALFOY?? WILL THEY BE ABLE TO BE TOGETHER?? BACK IN THEIR OLD REALITY BLAISE AND PANSY HATED, UNDERLINE *HATED* HERMIONE!! Report Review
EEEPPP! OMG OMG OMG LUCCCIUS!!! Report Review
Wow!!! This is definitely the best harry potter fanfic I've read!! Great job my fellow Indian ;DAuthor's Response: thank you so much ;) Report Review
Ok I did not expect that.
I really don't know what to say.
I loved the story really,
But the ending . Well it's not one that I would have seen..but it fits.Author's Response: Im sorry it didn't work for you :S It was what i thought would be right. But I'm glad you gave it a chance and loved the story otherwise :) x Report Review
SOBBING SOBBING SOBBING SOBBING SOBBING OKAY YOU'RE FABULOUS I LOVE YOU ASDFGHJKLAuthor's Response: HAHAHHA I LOVE YOU TO :') Report Review
In my opinion, you couldn't have ended this story any other way and it was definitely perfect!! Thank you for sharing this story as it was definitely one of my top favorite stories!! GREAT job!!Author's Response: Aww THANK YOUUU :) xx Report Review
An absolute fantastic ending cant wait to read more of your book. Great job!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! xx Report Review
IT WAS AMAZING!
i am in tears.
it was the best fanfiction i have read till date...
just love it :* :* :* :*Author's Response: THANK YOU :'')
Thought it was a great end to something that was really fun throughout... nothing quite like it..
Great times reading and enjoying your stories..
Interesting author's note..Author's Response: Thank you so much (: x Report Review
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