It's finished (sob).my favourite Hpff I can't believe she chosen Ron over Draco :( I can't wait for the sequel :) thank you so much for an amazing fanfiction plz ALWAYS keep on writing 10/10 x granger_Author's Response: You :* I love you and your reviews! She did im sorry! But if she had chosen Draco, i most probably wouldnt have thought of making the sequel- so everything does happen for a reason ;) Thank YOU so much and please keep reviewing :) xx Report Review
I really wanted to read this story because I was intrigued by the premise. Unfortuately, I was forced to abandon the effort because your punctuation is consistently, horribly wrong. You must include spaces after periods and commas, for example, and that's the most basic rule I can imagine. Unless your formatting has been corrupted, you have omitted that standard throughout your work, rendering it indecipherable. Please work with a beta reader; learning how to punctuate properly is essential, whether you write for fun or work.Author's Response: Im completely aware of the punctuation problem. I was a new writer at that time so I was clueless in that department, or in any in that case. Like ive said for other reviews, I will be editing the chapters that have wrong punctuation like i did for The Other Reality- that one's punctuation has been fixed and the errors have been fixed. You could check that one out if youre interested. This one will definitely be edited so Im sorry for the inconvenience caused but i do know if these mistakes and from, i think, chapter 9 onwards its been fixed. So Ill be going back. Im very busy now days so perhaps if youre still interested, you could check back soon :) Report Review
I cannot belive this story is over! It is amazing, I love all of your stories!Author's Response: Thank you so so much :) xx Report Review
Oh Rey.IM SO LOST NOW. why did I ask for a spoiler? Oh well x3 you'll still were beautifully. Author's Response: Hahaha you asked for it marni :P Thank you ^^ Report Review
whoa ! draco and hermione need to be together ... there meant to be ! and ron and pansy are perfect together you can see that ! but scorp needs a mother like hermione but i love your story please write more :)Author's Response: thank you so so so much! And everyone thinks the same as you :) The question is- how will it end up like that? Haha keep reading and thanks again x Report Review
I like this chapter, and can't wait to see what happens after Draco tells Hermione that he 'loves her'. Can't wait for more!Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter should be up in a day or two :) Report Review
is ron still alive, someow I think so. Jason just seems to jealous and attentive in some ways, yet not sure cause he really isnt protecting hermione or the kids per se.Author's Response: Keep reading and you'll find out soon enough who he is ;) Report Review
Wow!!! This was such a deep chapter...it was beautifully written. Keep on the great work :)
-ScriptieAuthor's Response: Thank you so so much :) Report Review
Aargh WHAT!? omg they have a car accident :0 please you HAVE to update TOR real fast...this chapter is really emotional! What's going to happen to dramione now that rose and Scorpius are together :s I can't believe therez only one more chapter left please update soon definately 10/10Author's Response: Yes they doo ;) Ive sent the chapter in for validation so hopefully it'll be out without any delay! Hmmm, you'll have to just wait and see in the next chapter! Dont worry, there's the sequel waiting for you guys (Y) xx Report Review
Aargh WHAT!? omg they have a car accident :0 please you HAVE to update TOR real fast...this chapter is really emotional! What's going to happen to dramione now that rose and Scorpius are together :s I can't believe therez only one more chapter left please update soon definately 10/10 Report Review
Shelli with ur review! djla;jlksjmsla,xjfkdl;s WHOA just amazing. I can't even speak. That chapter left me speeechless! Omg NOO DONT END! THIS WAS MY *VERY FIRST* FANFICTIONS IVE EVER READ! EVER! When u posted the FIRST chapter ive been following it ever since. When this is ended i'll print the wholeee thing out and read it all over again! Ive already printed some out! :) BUT OMG DRACO SAID HE LOVED HERMIONE SKJLA;j kJZSK HFDJA;" kifd j;a fd;oamfdsa;,jfkda nfhds FINALLY! YES! and im guessing she told him she loved him back? Haha OMG scopius and omg if hermione and draco get married or like get together and so does scorpius and rose.. then.. then. INCEST! Scorpius and Rose will b step siblings. ah.
The funeral scene made me bawl my eyes out. NO why did this happen *crycrycry* :(
The scene with draco's father was amazinggg I loved to see the change and impact the second war made on him and its nice to know that he has emotions and feelings and stuff too. So sweet,
Im looking forwards to see more Dramione! This is absolutely perfect!
When this ends my purpose of being on fanfiction will be OVER this is my favourite FAVOURITE fanfiction in the whole entire world! Well after this ends, ill be looking for TOR! Aww they will get in a car crash! Im so excited for both stories!
I hope the next chapter is just as amazing as this, if not, better! Hahaahaha
This is great. And thank you for this amazing story that has been a big part of my fanfiction exxperiance. This story made me check the website every single day!
And this is the story that inspired me to write my ownnn story, so thank you for the inspiration also. This story just makes me cry. Thank you for sharing your talent with the rest of the fanfiction community. When this ends i will cry for days, but nevertheless i still can NOT wait for the last chapter, and to see where draco and hermione's relationship goes. This has been a great experience to read this amazing story of my favourite ship.
Thank you, and I still love this story. It has progressed SO much from the first time I read the first chapter. And yes, there is love at first sight, because the first day i read this story i couldn't wait for more! So keep up the amazing work. I will miss this story so much when it is over, but it will b a part of my fanfic experience that i will NEVER forget. Some stories ive finished and I forget about it, and have to reread it plenty of times. I KNOW this story i will remember forever because it is so amazing i am going to cry again. I love this story and you are the most talented writer i know. Thank you for this amazing story. You have made dramione grow from a random pairing that I love, to a actual couple that I can clearly imagine while reading this story. The couple symbolizes so many other couples. And I thank you for making dramione so much more believable and real. I love this story. Keep writing. I dont want it tooo end 10/10Author's Response: Hey shelli :) If you noticed, i responded to everyone's reviews, except yours. It wasn't an accident by the way. It was entirely on purpose- I wanted to save this for last so that i could take time and respond to it :)
Honestly i didn't find Funerals that great but I'm glad that you like it! Your review is iuanfiunvuerytvreyutv (quite literally too :P ) Yes, you've been reviewing my story/stories for as far as i can remember and I'm so thankful for that. Your reviews mean SO much to me, you have NO IDEA. Hahaha silly girl! You know how much i need to sit and edit the first, some, 12 chapters? :O The punctuation is, simply put, crap. I have to edit everything yeugh! So if you need to, hehe, print it after I'm done. Its up to you though :P
Did she say that she loved him back? -.^ Perhaps. Perhaps not. Let's see ;)
I LOVED writing Lucius and Narcissa in this one ^^ i LOVED portraying them as nice people rather than cold hearted.
Awww dude! This isn't the end! Theres always the sequel as i said! Their Reason To Live will be bigger and better and i promise you it will be more brilliant than this one! :D So its NOT the end! Im glad you're following TOR too :*
Im so glad that i was able to inspire you into writing as so many stories have done for me so I'm so happy that i was able to be one of those writers.
My writing has gotten SO much better thanks to all of you and your reviews! :) Im glad you'll never forget it and that was my purpose from day one i guess. Im so happy i could bring Dramione where it has reached in your heart and I'm glad you think i could make it a solid more believable couple (Y)
Thank you so much again and I love love love you :) xxx This is NOT the end. ps: Incase you need anything, anything at all idk you can contact me here. it's completely safe if others see it too because it's my fanfic account and i have nothing personal here
hpff_feltonlewis at hotmail dot com ;) x Report Review
hello :) i have been reading both your stories avidly since the beginning.i really love how you have brought about such emotion and drama into your stories. it really inspires me. i have been through a great loss recently and for some reason when i read your story the pain seems to soothen. i really appreciate you helping me through this tough situation . thank you.Author's Response: Oh my god... Im really touched. I mean, I had NO idea that my stories did so much :O I dont know what loss you faced but I am so so glad that my stories helped, seriously. I am so happy that my stories do that for people and this review is one that will REALLY inspire me and encourage me to write better and never stop. Thank YOU so much. And no matter what, you always have my stories to turn to (: I hope everything in your life works out again and you come out stronger than anything. I dont know you but I have a feeling you'll be able to get through anything :') xx Report Review
Um, did you skip chapter 19? The story jumps and doesn't ever mention who was killed by the killing curse at the end of chapter 18 and I noticed there is no chapter 19 in the list.Author's Response: hi! omg no i didnt skip it.the thing is that a staff yesterday realized that the format was wrong so they removed it and now there's a gap between chapters. im so sorry! it'll be back really soon. When you see it on the Draco/ Hermione page, its most likely to be back. God, i didnt realize this would happen but i have no control over it :/ Im so so sorry! Please dont stop reading and if you come back its sure to be there once again. Lord, im so sorry again. Report Review
ARGH I HATE YOU BIG TIME I JUST FINISHED GRIEVING FOR RON AND YOU BROUGHT HIM BACK AFTER HERMIONE WAS ACCEPTING THAT FACT ANY WAY IT WAS A LOVELY CHAPTER
P.S i've never written anything lovely apart from wot you saw and i really love this chapter and othersAuthor's Response: hehe sorry dear ;) Thank you so much :* ^^ Report Review
Your amazing. and I can't believe that just happened.
Your probably getting annoyed by me now but oh well :)Author's Response: Hehe im not annoyed at you AT ALL Infact i love you right now :P Ive jumped 5 reviews thanks to youu and I'm so happy because you like my story (: Thank you again! Report Review
I cried for blaise :( so sad. I hope that draco yelled the killing curse at Lestrange. ygzdhjzghjvghvbhjd. you kill me. Report Review
I feel like Hermione. I'm torn. You write this so well and its such an amazing idea. I cant believe you made this up. Author's Response: At times, thanks to reviewers like you I can't believe it either. Thank you so so much! Report Review
Omg stop being so good. like uhg. this is amazing. I feel so bad for hermione nowAuthor's Response: Haha thank you ^^ Report Review
I seriously love you. Really, you are amazing. I read the other reality then was so exited to find out you wrote about what happened in those 7 years. I'm so happy I found this one too. OMG RON RARARRARSDKJHOEFLJGFHGIHG:KUJGC. I want draco and Hermione to be together but Ron! Now I hate you. I'm sorry. jhsfajkhzajchja I need to keep reading this. Author's Response: Hahaha I love you too, but don't hate you ^^ Yess, the whole deal with Ron kind of shook most of the readers :P Report Review
You still manage to amaze me with your writing skills. Every single time, I hope to see an update on either this or the other reality ASAP - I love both of your stories!!! XXAuthor's Response: Thank you sooo much :D I will update ASAP :) Report Review
interesting choice for who is harmed the most in this chapter. one question though, what does hermione think about ron and pansy together?Author's Response: Thank you so much :) And they aren't exactly together-together but might be just like Draco and Hermione and since there's so much tragedy going on, no one's really noticing it except Ginny. You'll see Hermione's thoughts though properly in the next chapter! Report Review
Ah FeltonLewis noo! I was crying the whole entire time this is so sad omg:( Nooo pansy ahh and i feel so bad for hayley with pansy unable to speak or hear, will dead, her father dead ah :( this is so sad im still crying no my life is over
This chapter was soo sad and well written id never hav imagined all of this! :( Wah
I hope things get better:(
And this story ive been following and reading for as long as ive been on fanfiction and it was my first fanfiction i read and im so glad its gotten so detailed and long and amazing
This chapter is going to have me crying for days:(
Please update as soon as u can bc i need 2 no what happens next ah !
Well this was an emotional chapter! Wahhh:'(
but very detailed chapter ! I cant wait for more 10/10 -shelli
PS. STILL CRYING MY EYES OUT
hahaAuthor's Response: Gahhh this is so unbelievably big for me- everyone is so emotional for this chapter :O All my reviewers that is. And the characters. And me. but you know what i mean.
Your life isn't over! There's still the sequel and another chapter or two!
Thank you so so much :) And don't cry too much please! BREATHE SHELLI!
I will update asap don't worry! TOR will still come next thoughh! So you'll have to wait till thats up as well.
Haha thank you again xx Report Review
Seriously does everything really happen for a reason..feltonLewis how could you?! pansy lost her hearing and her ability to speak also her father :( I am literally an emotional wreck its unbelievable keep up the good work I love EHFAR no matter what haha 10/10Author's Response: Im sorry! It had to be this way! :/ Thank you so so so much though :) Report Review
I thought i was made of stronger stuff, you just broke me.
I feel so bad.
Draco is crying.!
I can't bear it...:'(Author's Response: Oh wow, i didn't realize it would be THAT bad! Hope you liked it though! :) The next chapter will hopefully be better :) Report Review
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