BROWNIES! xxx oh and awesomeley coolioo fandabidoosie story!!! :D xxx Report Review
BROWNIES!!! I love Elizabeth, she's so mcuh fun Report Review
I really enjoyed reading this story, it was really well written and the storyline was really good too :) Report Review
well, i prefer brownies Report Review
Aww. That was cute. I loved this story! But why will she see everything in twenty years? Just her kids? 10/10! Report Review
I loved this story! The ending just didn't feel like an ending though. I still want to know what happened between Ashley and Sirius and Sirius and Elizabeth. I feel like there should be more of a climatic resolution between Elizabeth and Remus too. Anyway, I can't wait to read more of your stories! Report Review
Aww that's a sad but happy ending. I really enjoyed reading this. Is there going to be a sequel? 10/10 ~Dramionedrunadrinny Report Review
There are no words. Goodbye Elizabeth. 10/10 Report Review
I litterally just squealed in joy and did a little jig in my chair! YAYAYAYYY their back together! wooopp, but of course i'm very upset you ended the story! Booo >:(! I loved it so much (but i dangerously remind myself daily of Elizabeth, also can't wait for the epilogue so i can hear about Ashley and Siruis... Hint Hint. Please tell us i really really want to know! Great story, i will be missing it! :) xxx 10/10 Report Review
Oooh I can't wait till the epilogue. Please update it soon 10/10 ~Dramionedrunadrinny Report Review
Oh no!! Poor Remus!! I can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: The next chapter has been sent in. :) Report Review
Great chapter! I can't wait to see how Remus responds. What did he want to talk to her about though? Update soon!! 10/10 Report Review
GAHHH, hm. remus is confusing me imensly, I loved it when they were together though they were so cute! :) Update soon please?! Report Review
Awww how sad for Remus. And how nice for Elizabeth. They threw her a party. I really like this story it's really interesting. Please update soon 10/10 ~Dramionedrunadrinny Report Review
This is fantastic! I cannot wait to see how Remus reacts to Elizabeth knowing and more of her reaction. Ahh. There's just so much going on that I want to know more about. Like why was Lily emphasizing her birthday? Why did Sirius cheat on Ashley (is there actually a point to that or did you just want them to break up)? Please update soon!! 10/10Author's Response: Well, Lily was just emphasizing the word birthday... Just because. (Honestly, I really just think I wanted to do that. >.>) I sent in the next chapter! Report Review
Holy crap. That is intense. Wow. I had planned on reviewing to say I was sorry for being busy and neglecting to read and review your story, but then you threw that last kiss in. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I really love Elizabeth's and Sirius's friendship. It's really refreshing since in other stories, the girls are always all over Sirius. 10/10 I'm going to continue reading now!Author's Response: Hi. Thanks for the review! It's fine that you've been busy, I get quite busy too! But thank you! Report Review
Woah! I discovered this fanfiction the other day and it AMAZED me. Please update soon because the suspense is literally killing me 10/10 ~dramionedrunadrinnyAuthor's Response: Hi. Thanks for reviewing! I've sent in the next chapter! Report Review
This is a brilliant story! I love all the characters and stuff xDAuthor's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review. I love the characters too. They're fun to write. :) Report Review
O. M. G. This is so good update soon please wowowow okthnxbyee! (PS: I might have written other reviews for this as Catherine. FYI.)Author's Response: Oh, okay. Hi! Thanks for the review! Report Review
Hello!I just read your story and also favourited this:D I'm loving it...You have got weird sense of humour but i am L.O.L!!I loving Beth ...I mean Elizabeth!Ha ha! The story is intiguing as on now...there are mistakes do check once!And one thing I want to say is instead of writing "XYZ" put a line or page break! Waiting for your update! Cheers, Su 9.5/10Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for your review! It's very nice of you to say. I'll be sure to go back soon and edit my mistakes. -Manderley Report Review
I'm almost crying! So sad. Ash&Sir are perfect and so are Reems and LizziAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you like them! Report Review
I love this story, its so funny! But this chapter, everything just seemed to go wrong in Elizabeths life! :( So depressing, can't wait to hear more, please, please update soon! :) xAuthor's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I have a few chapters done, so they'll be up shortly! Report Review
Oh, the DRAMA! Well written! Not very funny, but what do you expect for a chapter like this? Very good :) ...Hmm, and an update soon to fix all these sad issues? I think yes.Author's Response: Thanks! I have this story finished, I just need to post the chaptwers now. Report Review
I love it! Update soon! Report Review
Dun dun dun... Jealousy! I love this story. Like, a lot. This was another fantastic chapter! Thanks so much!! :) Report Review
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