{reviewid: 2760185, reviewer: 'HPG'}
27th December 2012:
I have hazel eyes, and gosh, everyone calls me a goody two shoes. I can deffinately realte to Alice in so many ways...
Author's Response: Haha. Same and I hate when people call me that.
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{reviewid: 2750637, reviewer: 'ILoveYouChristopher'}
5th November 2012:
AW! I cried a little at the end! This story is amazing!
Author's Response: Lol. I'm glad that it had that effect on you.
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{reviewid: 2750636, reviewer: 'ILoveYouChristopher'}
5th November 2012:
Oh no! This is not very good .. Poor Allie ...
Great chapter! I really enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Thanks for the... fifth time. Don't worry, you're reviews are still making me grin stupidly.
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{reviewid: 2750632, reviewer: 'ILoveYouChristopher'}
5th November 2012:
I love this chapter! People are going to find out and I am glad that things are going good for her and Draco
Author's Response: I'm not going to lie, when I got on and saw all your reviews, it kind of made my day. I love when people review. Thanks so much :)
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{reviewid: 2750503, reviewer: 'ILoveYouChristopher'}
5th November 2012:
AW! OH MY GOD! I just love this chapter! It was so filled with emotion ... you are a great writer in my eyes! Great job!
Author's Response: Aw, shucks, folks, I'm speechless. Thanks again.
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{reviewid: 2750368, reviewer: 'ILoveYouChristopher'}
4th November 2012:
I love this chapter! I get excited to read the next one and the next one! This story is great! Good job!
Author's Response: Thanks again.
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{reviewid: 2750367, reviewer: 'ILoveYouChristopher'}
4th November 2012:
I really enjoyed this chapter! It was fun to read! I really like how you place your words and how nicely the flow together!
Author's Response: Thanks lots. I'm glad you liked it. I tried to make it a fun story.
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{reviewid: 2750356, reviewer: 'Nikki%20Howard'}
4th November 2012:
I can't believe it ended! It was the cuttest story I ever read!
XOXO, Nikki
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I had a lot of fun writing it and am also sad that it's over.
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{reviewid: 2750259, reviewer: 'ILoveYouChristopher'}
4th November 2012:
:Love it so far!
Author's Response: Thanks so much :)
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{reviewid: 2749746, reviewer: 'Rainystrawberry12'}
| Review #35, by Rainystrawberry12 | Epilogue |
1st November 2012:
Great story! Thanks for writing... A&A forever!!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
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{reviewid: 2749345, reviewer: 'leakycalderin'}
30th October 2012:
I already love it! I can tell it's gonna be god and I have all day to read it! I also love how the chapter titles are songs. "Heat of the Moment" was my brother's favorite song for a long time and there are lots of songs I really like in it! It just gives it a unique edge. Well, lovely writing and can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. And congrats, you're the first person to notice the songs for chapter titles... or at least the first person to mention it. I hope you like it :)
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{reviewid: 2749317, reviewer: 'Saga'}
30th October 2012:
EH! :D
An even happier ending! I Just knew he was going to propose as soon as I read "Officially, we went there for dinner, but off the record, I had another motive." and it made me so happy! I've really started to care about Al and Allie and I think that they are just perfect for each other. I know I shouldn't think of fictional characters as real people but I do and. that's why I'm so happy about the whole thing.
I loved your story and even though I'm sad that it's over I think that it ended where it should. A longer fanfic would just feel... weird.
So this is it, thanks for giving me something to read! :D
Author's Response: I think of characters as real people, too, all the time. It makes reading a lot more enjoyable, but I'm always super sad when the book ends. Thanks lots for reviewing :)
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{reviewid: 2749313, reviewer: 'Saga'}
30th October 2012:
NAW! :3
Everything works out! :D
James and Al are so sweet!
That was pretty much all I wanted to say. :) (Oh, I love happy endings...)
And I'm sorry, first I tell you to "update soon" and then I don't read it until now. *slaps self*
~Saga
Author's Response: Yes, shame on you for not reading. Haha. Just kidding. I'm glad you like it and thanks for reviewing :)
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{reviewid: 2748852, reviewer: 'Lumos_x'}
28th October 2012:
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, it was very cute!
Author's Response: Thanks so much :)
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{reviewid: 2748825, reviewer: 'HPFan'}
28th October 2012:
Aw, I didnt want it to finish! :( Brilliant work, btw! Fantastic!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review!
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{reviewid: 2748652, reviewer: 'AlexFan'}
27th October 2012:
So this is the end of this story? Is there going to be a sequel to it or something?
Author's Response: I hadn't thought about a sequel. Probably not.
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{reviewid: 2747314, reviewer: 'Lola'}
20th October 2012:
Zi love this story! Aw it's so cute and everything! Finally they realised about the frog issue! Aw aw I'm fangirling so much right now! Congratulations on writing such and amazing story! I look forward to the Epilogue! Well done again!
Author's Response: Thanks lots :) I'm still writing it. Sorry for my slowness. It'll be up this week :)
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{reviewid: 2746891, reviewer: 'Anon'}
18th October 2012:
It's is amazing! I just finished to chapter and am completely gripped!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I want to get the epilogue up soon and then it's over. I'm glad you liked it.
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{reviewid: 2746464, reviewer: '%22I%20love%20you%2C%20too.%22'}
16th October 2012:
Awww. I have been waiting for that since the start. It's really adorable. When will the epilogue be up? I'm excited. Merlin! I'm excited over stories. I am getting too addicted to this. I still love this story. You're an amazing writer. Thank you for bringing us such an amazing story.
Author's Response: It'll be up in a few days. Thanks so much for your review. It totally made my day.
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{reviewid: 2746389, reviewer: 'AlexFan'}
15th October 2012:
So wait, is Allie's hand stuck under the chandelier or has it been completely cut off?
Author's Response: Allie is stuck. I need to go back and correct a few things, so I'll probably write that better... Thanks :)
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{reviewid: 2746321, reviewer: 'BBWotter'}
15th October 2012:
YES YES YES YES YES YES YES! OMR I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS MOMENT FOR SO LONG! (wipes away tears of joy) my broken heart has finally been mended, thank you thank you with ALL my heart x
Author's Response: No, thank you for your review :) Unfortunately, it's pretty much done. I just have the epilogue to write and it is finished. Thanks for sticking with me :)
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{reviewid: 2745693, reviewer: 'Saga'}
12th October 2012:
Not another cliffhanger! D:
Well, I don't mind the cliché and Al and Allie and Harry were all so sweet adorable and brave... It could have been nice to hear a bit more about when Alice was tortured from Albus' point of view. Still great chapter apart from the CLIFFHANGER! I can't wait to see what will happen so update soon! (as always) :)
~Saga
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I updated already so it should be validated soon. I've been really bad about it, so I'm so proud of myself right now. And, I understand that sometimes I make people seem too nice.
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{reviewid: 2745473, reviewer: 'HarryPotterFanatic'}
11th October 2012:
Great, but its a bit short? Cliffhanger again!!! Put the next one up sooon! Good luck and well done!
Author's Response: Yeah, it is pretty short, but I couldn't think of anything more to fit in. I'll revise the story when it's done and I'm in the middle of the next chapter right now. Thanks for the review :)
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{reviewid: 2744495, reviewer: 'HermioneGranger'}
6th October 2012:
PUT THE NEXT CHAPTER UP QUICKLY! You're killing me! hahah, well done btw.
Author's Response: Haha. I updated, so it should be validated soon. Sorry for the wait.
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{reviewid: 2743669, reviewer: 'Shindig'}
2nd October 2012:
GAH CLIFFHANGER I AM SO SO SO ANNOYED RIGHT NOW! Gr.
Anyway. An otherwise brilliant chapter!
Shindig :D
Author's Response: Haha. Thanks. I've been trying to write, but I've been really busy, so I warn you; this will take a while :( Sorry, but thanks for reading and reviewing!
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