OMG! I'm so sorry, but I thought that I had reviewed this. Obviously not. I read this ages ago, but just had to come back and review it.
This is such an epic story and I love it so much! The characters are so well told, and the their personalities are quite relatable. The plot is so wonderful, and at pretty much the end of every chapter, I was just left wanting to read more. Thankfully, the story was finished and I could read it all. Unfortunately, it also means that ITS ACTUALLY FINISHED!
I still can't believe that its finished, even though I read a while back.
I was wondering whether you would be writing a sequel? Because you certainly should (if you have an idea :p)
You're an absolutely amazing author, and I wish I could write like you!
Thank you so much for writing this, I'm so glad that you did.
Good Luck in the future and please keep writing, because you are siriusly awesome!
P.S. I'm doing a project on fanfiction on what makes either an interesting, popular or inspirational fanfic. If you don't mind I would love to include your story in it :) If you have any recommendations of fanfics that would fit into either one or more of those categories, I would love to know:)Author's Response: Thanks so much! I don't know about a sequel... I just have no ideas. Sorry :( But as for using my story, feel free, if I'm not too late with telling you.
P.S. Your review are so amazing. Thanks for making my day :) Report Review
omg, omg, omg! I can't wait to read the next chappie...
Thankfully this story is complete:)
-iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Yes, as Dory said "Just keep reading." Haha. Report Review
AH! Finally! They work things out. Sort of.
OMG HARRY!!! WHATS GONNA HAPPEN?! AGH!
-iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Read and see. Haha. I'm glad you enjoy it. Report Review
That was so clever of Ron! I really didn't expect that siriusly.
I just feel so sorry for Allie, even though it IS a misunderstanding...sigh
Lovely chapter...really enjoyed it and I think you are a great author.
-iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Thanks lots :) That means a lot. Report Review
Omg this was such a sad chapter.:(
So much misunderstanding!!!Ugh.
Gonna read the next chapter to find out what
happens.sorry for the short reivew...
-iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Yeah, but I love happy endings, so it'll be alright. Report Review
WHAT?! WHY WOULD ALLIE NOT ADMIT THAT SHE LOVES HIM???
But then she did, so that was ok hehe:)
I love this chapter btw
Omg I could actually imagine Ron's face when he saw Rose kiss Scorp haha. I would give anything to actually see his face though:)
-iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Lol. Ron would be as red as his hair, I'm sure, if we could see it in real life. Report Review
Naw! I love James and how he's so caring, its so adorable. HE'S JUST SO CUTE! And when Claire said that she would be happy to come to the Burrow, he was just so cute...cuteness overload! hahah
"You love me?"
Oh, that was intelligent, Alice. Bloody genius, you are.
omg i love that!
Great chapter:) Gonna go review the nest one
-iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Haha. Thanks. And Allie really is a genius with words ;) Report Review
omgg haha Al is hilarious! He's so awesome! Stealing his father's moves...well he didnt really do it himself but you know what i mean...:)
That 'talk' that Allie gave James was so cute and such a nice thing to do.
I really love this story and the characters!
-iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you like it. All of your reviews made me so happy :) Report Review
AGH! SCORP LOVES HER!
This is so cute and adorable...thank god he didnt die or something, that would have been too much for me...
Woohoo! Al and Scorp are friends now:)
I just love this story so so much :)
-iatevoldysnose xoxAuthor's Response: I liked the idea of them being besties. It just sounded like a good idea after the family rivalries. Report Review
OMG THEY'RE GONNA DIE! HAHA SPASSING HERE!
Al is so cute when he's "in love", like when he wanted to hold Allie's hand haha :)
Their date was going so well...until deatheaters came!
I MEAN SIRIUSLY? THEY HAD TO CHOOSE THAT FRIGGIN DAY TO COME TO HOGSMEADE!
I really didnt expect that...
Love this story so much! And your writing style and the characters and omg like everything :)
-iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Lol. I know, right? What a coincidence. Report Review
At first Allie was a bit thick though i understand why...I mean she thought he was playing with her feelings...
But he finally asked her to Hogsmeade! *smilinglikecrazy*
But does this mean he lost the bet? Or is it just accident coz it wasnt his fault?
And the deatheater part! Omg hope nothing bad will happen :(
-iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Thanks. And I know it's confusing. I've been thinking about changing the name of the story, but I just don't feel like having to re-do the banner. Report Review
Omg, omg, omg! I didn't expect really expect that but it was so good! He told her that he loves her :)))
omg! I cant stop spassing!
I'm gonna go now and calm down and think over this chapter before reading the next one :)
-iatevoldysnose xoxAuthor's Response: Hahaha. Thanks lots! Your review make me smile! Report Review
Naw! Al will wait for her!
HIS HEART WILL GO ON!
But siriusly? Why did he kiss that bimbo? Urgh! If i was Allie I wouldnt forgive him easily haha...just saying but he's got some explaining to do, even if she doesnt want to hear it...
-iatevoldysnose xoxAuthor's Response: Absolutely. I picture her as kind of irrational when it comes to Al, so she tends to do stupid things and not hear him out very well. Report Review
It was good that Al had thu guts (or whatever) to apologize to Allie :)
And James just always makes me laugh. He's such a prat sometimes though haha
And Allie and Al's kiss...naw!
And when she helps him after the match!
Omgg so many good moments in this chappie(:
-iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Thank you. Lol. James IS kind of a prat, but I had to have prat-ish-ness somewhere in there. Report Review
My new favorite story!!! Please write sequel or spin-off on another character. I have no complaints about this story and I judge easily. It was perfect. With action, romance, fluff, and humor, It is too cute a story. Keep writing!Author's Response: Oh, wow. Thanks. You just made my day. I will think about a sequel, but the timing is kind of hard right now. Report Review
NAW! It was so cute when Al had his arms around her :)
But seriously, he went too far when he said those things about Allie and Neville...But i guess he was just angry.
-iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Yeah, I figured that Albus might have his dad's anger issues. Report Review
OMG this chappie was great!
SNOG BUDDIES LOL!
AND AT MIDNIGHT . NAW! Author's Response: Hahaha. Thanks. Report Review
This chapter was really good :) Albus is awesome, even if a little big-headed...
Really enjoyed this:)
-iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Thanks. And he is, isn't he? ;) Report Review
I love the story so far :) only read this chapter haha but def gonna read the next
Ive read another where james jnr and the oc hate each other but there seems to be more than that...;)
Its called Clash if you havent read it and want to (:
Anyway, just wanted to let you know that this story is really good and cant wait to keep reading
-iatevoldysnoseAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review and the recommendation. Will do. Report Review
I love this so sooo soo much!!!
ehhhehehhe. I just get so happy reading this!
You should write a sequel!!!Author's Response: Thank you :) I might, but at the moment I'm working on a Marauder Era story. Report Review
That Potter deserves to suffer that arrogant, conceited, git.
._.Author's Response: Oh, he's not so bad. Haha. Report Review
James takes after his grandfather. xDAuthor's Response: Yeah. It's so cliche, I know, but I like him that way. Report Review
Wow. Just wow.Author's Response: Haha. Thanks. Your many reviews made my day! Report Review
Why must ALL characters ask what could possibly go wrong??? xPAuthor's Response: It make everything so much more dramatic :P Report Review
I am smiling and smirking so badly. xDAuthor's Response: Lol. I'm glad you like it. Report Review
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