excuse me if I do chapters in groups. you hsvr Rita down to a T.. lol and the way things can get confused is so very easy to do and realistic. sgsin zi likr your writing form , can see not recomended change. zi also understand not telling Harry cause he is Ron's best bod... charlie is new to the picture and seems like he could be good for Hemione, but hate to see him hurt, cause we know it is going to be Draco. Just a lot of blab, blab before it happens, will be interesting in how it unfolds. she is indeed a character. I think she cna hold up, but those preganant women can be dangerous and unpredictible and very vunerable. I hope you extend to Hermione some inner strength to deal with all her challenges in a way not to have her bed hopping as in other stories, I did like Second chances dearly.. whether you read these late reviews I have no idea. but please excuse that I do nto respond to each chapter,, bravo again,,Author's Response: I do read these! Thanks!!! :) Also I'm okay with multiple chapter reviews. You are awesome! Report Review
like a whirlwind of oops.. hermione can't get abreak. I am enjoying it so far, and hope I will at the end. I hate to see Hermione made into a less virtuous person than I like to believe er to be. Human we all are, but it is nice to have someone to set goals by. Hope hers is not to tarnished. As uaual your writing is smooth and flows nicely from one even to the next. Report Review
aww fwed i love it you need to write a second book girl ya got skillsAuthor's Response: Thanks!!! I have a second fic on here, waiting on validation, and third one in the works, so you are set for some time :) Thanks so much for the review and kind words! Report Review
I really appreciate that you do not completely ignore Draco & Hermione's past as some authors are want to do. Love this story!Author's Response: Thanks! I think personally that Draco and Mione's past completely makes their present! Anyway I'm glad you are enjoying Mondays! Report Review
Yowzah! This chapter was great. I frowned (poor Draco!), then smiled the whole time. Thank you for writing!Author's Response: LOL I loved writing Monday's it was so much fun to play with how the characters reacted with each other and to make them ask for or do things they wouldn't normally! :) I'm glad you liked it! Thanks so much for the review! Report Review
oh my goodness! i can't stop crying. T.T poor hermione!Author's Response: Oh dear, I'm sorry! Hermione will be okay, please don't cry. I hope you feel better after reading more... Report Review
This has been one of the greatest, funnest, loving, best and emotionally written story I have read on harrypotterfanfiction!
I love the way you write. I couldn't stop reading and was hooked 'till the end!!!
I love your story and I would give you a 100/10 rating if it was possible!!
J.R.Author's Response: THANKS!! This has made my day, and since I am reading it on a Monday that is saying something! Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked my story! I am working on another called Chance Meetings, if you want to you can check it out, it is a bit different... Thanks again! Report Review
just finished your novel and i have to say it was awsome. the lats chapter wa kinda funny. so much has hapend and so many charicters. bravoAuthor's Response: Yes, so much had happened! Thanks for reading! :) Report Review
I hope the nasty Rita Skeeter breaks out in boils! Gr! (I also find it odd that I feel such animosity for a FICTIONAL character, just goes to show what a good story and author can do!)Author's Response: Ha! I agree, I was re-reading the 4th HP book not too long ago and I was like 'no fair' 'what?!' 'what a git!' Ha sometimes you just have to forget it isn't real... Report Review
So like a soap opera! :) I must like soap operas because I really like this story!Author's Response: hee hee must like em! I hadn't thought of that but yes sort of like a soap opera... :) Report Review
I think your description of Hermione getting sick was great, 'cause I feel nauseous myself! (: Seriously though, I like it so far and it is a great first chapter!Author's Response: Not good that you were nauseous, but woot woot on my description... :) Thanks! Report Review
YES! Libra beat Lucas out! That makes her the oldest! Sorry just had to get that out I love the storyAuthor's Response: I know when I was writing that I was like girl power she is so going to beat him!! :) Report Review
Hahaha he got punched. And poor HermioneAuthor's Response: LOL and yes Report Review
Ok chill out don't worry I'm reviewing
I really love the story
I have read it before and finished it so this is my second time reading it :)Author's Response: wow! Thats very awesome and flattering that you are reading it again! Thanks!~ BTW love your reviews, they make me smile! Report Review
Loved thus story! Loved all the different points of view. Loved the plot. Loved it all. Nicely done.Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate your review, and if you haven't read my other fic I am updating, it is called Chance Meetings! :) Thanks again. Report Review
I loved, LOVED this chapter!Author's Response: Thanks! It was super fun to write, and a bit time consuming but fun anyway, the bachelorette party is a fun one too! Thanks again! Report Review
ok i know my name got you confused but where did the date chapter go? i cant find it...but otherwise i luv your story u should write more dramione stories cuz u r rlly good at it
Dramione 4evaAuthor's Response: I went to investigate the missing Chapter 15 and apparently someone reported my chapter as needing to be toned down, this same chapter after I wrote it was rejected 4 times.
I thought I had made all needed changes, but apparently not, so I had to go back in and make the changes and hopefully this time it will be validated and left alone.
I assumed that once you put a warning that it is for 18+ the mention of certain things was okay...but it isn't. So that is what happened to Chapter 15.
I do know that if I am not careful they can take my account off, so I just made the changes and hope that it is okay.
Also I did post another fic called Chance Meetings also a Dramione, so check it out, and thanks so much for reviewing! Report Review
I loved this story! :) I like the way things ended.
A sequel would be awesome!Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you liked my story, and I am still debating on a sequel...I have another different story posted called Chance Meetings...check it out if you want. Thanks for the review! Report Review
i love this story but i cant find chapter fifteen can you try putting it up or just e mail me the chapter at heartsrock33 @ live . comAuthor's Response: Hi! Sorry you can't find ch. 15 :( I will email it to you, but I'm pretty sure it is loaded and posted, I went and checked and it was still there...Thanks for the review, and for reading! Report Review
Very cute. :) I really enjoyed your story. Even if you don't write a sequel, you should definitely keep writing! :)Author's Response: Aww thanks! I have posted a new story...Chance Meetings... Thanks for the review! Report Review
Nooo, not the end! I want more! :) Keep writing, you're so good! Lots of love from Sweden ;)Author's Response: I was actually kind of sad when I finished, and really I added an extra chapter just because I wanted more of my characters :) I have posted a new story, so check it out...Chance Meetings...
Thanks for the review, and for reading! Report Review
It's a bit short. I've always felt chapters should be longer. kyou continue where you left off in the next chapters, but you could have just continued here. I don't really like the pregnant bit. I mean I know it could happen, but taking away all the hopes and dreams of hermione is really not something I like to see happen. I'll still read though. It's easy to follow.Author's Response: I understand the frustration of short chapters, two reasons why that happened...first off mostly because it sounded like a good place to stop, so I did and as I was writing and posting as I went, I stopped and posted instead of waiting until I had written more.
Also if I wanted more suspense I stopped a chapter to then continue on when your attention and curiosity is peaked. Usually when I write I try to keep the word count fairly close in each chapter. So that is part of the short ish chapters also.
I know it is hard that she found out about the pregnancy, but this is a Dramione, so of course you can imagine that Draco is going to step in...Anyway I hope you continued to read, and that eventually you enjoyed my story...
Thanks for the review, and for reading! Report Review
i love your story! it is my fave story on this whole website! it is so amazing and i think you should write more strories cuz u r amazing at it! im sad tht this story is over but i think u wrapped it up very well so thank you very much for writing this frickin amazing story! thank you thank you thank you thank you
~Dramione 4evaAuthor's Response: You are welcome x3 ;) Hee hee loved your review! Also I did just upload another fic, called Chance Meetings, another Dramione, if you wanna give it a go then let me know what you think! :) Thanks again for the review! Report Review
Dude. you are like the bloodiest best freaking writer ever, i totally adore this fic and holy god it is impressive. thanks for the ron thing, i never liked that particular ginger :/
this deserves a 20 out of 10, but sadly i can only give ten. thanks again for writing something so amazing :DAuthor's Response: Wow! Love your review, it seriously made my entire day!! (Also love your pen name) I hope my future writings do disappoint!! Thanks so so much for the review, and for reading! I'm working on something new, so give it a go once it is validated!! :) Report Review
It was such an amazing read!!! I couldn't stop until the end, it's one of the best stories i've read in a long time. thanks for giving me such fuzzy moments reading this! :)Author's Response: You are very welcome! I am so glad that you enjoyed my story, I truly am! I am working on something new now, so look out! Thanks for the review! Report Review
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