Goof job on this!! :)

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touching story :D i really enjoyed it and i will definitely check out some of your others!

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Great story, loved it. I can't wait to read more of your work. :D

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Hi! I love your story! You are such a great author, and I would be honored if you read and reviewed my stories saying things that would help me improve! The stories are A New Love and Daddy's Little Girl. Thanks so much!

~honeydukes101

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This chapter put tears in my eyes! In fact, the whole story has! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters.

P.S. Your use of the English language could be improved upon. But generally it's pretty good! :D

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Only one word can describe this story: AW! (Cute puppy noises)

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Lovin this so far! Good job!

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The simplicity of this story is wonderfully refreshing. Almost every other story has all this drama and frankly, sometimes it gets tiring, which is why I like this story so much :)
It's like the base of all Lily-James fics. By the way, you're particularly amazing when it comes to writing endings, I think I've already mentioned this. Anyway, wonderful chapter!
~classicblack

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Nice job! The wonderful simplicity of this story is great!
Until next chapter (last one, *sniff sniff*)
classicblack

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Broom cupboards always solve everything :) The ending was amazing, as usual. You always end it with me wanting more. Great job!
Until next chapter,
classicblack

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Well done! I actually enjoyed the whole friends thing and now I'm gonna go play that game, hahaha. Only 3 chapters left!
Until next time,
classicblack

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Well now I'm twice as excited to read the next chapter. I liked everyone's different perspective of Christmas. Well done!
until next chapter,
classicblack

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Actually, I do hate Ethan. I always knew I'd hate him from the first chapter, hahaha.
There's always a break up- make up part in every Lily and James story, so I forgive you. The nice thing is that I know they'll get together in the end. Well done!
Until next chapter,
classicblack

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This is a such an adorable story, I can't help but smile. Another well-done chapter! It's so refreshingly simple compared to many of the stories I've read recently.
Until next time,
classicblack

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Wow you've done it again. Completely blown me away with the ending. Well done!
Until next chapter,
classicblack

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You are amazing at endings! The last two especially, I loved. I like that Jenna said that and I actually hope she and Lily will become friends! Nice chapter!
Until next time,
classicblack

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That's absolutely adorable! "Lily was the one he saw" I actually loved that!
Great chapter!
Until next chapter,
classicblack

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See, if I had a boy like James, and he'd just told be that, I probably would have yelled "Oh sod it all!" and kissed him full on the lips again.
It's a good thing Lily's not me, or this story would be over, haha. Oh and I forgot to tell you that I really liked this chapter and that I'm very glad that Sirius and Leah are together.
Until next chapter,
classicblack

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Oh! I loved that ending, even if it was a bit cliche, haha. I've found in almost every Lily-James story I've read she's kissed him and then they haven't ended up together, so I didn't expect it for a moment.
Well done!
Until next chapter,
classicblack

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I don't know. For some reason Leah gives me a 'way-too-innocent' for Sirius Black vibe. I'd rather he went for Erin, she's much more sarcastic, haha. Even thouh they already went out.
Unitil next chapter,
classicblack

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Woah there. That was dramatic. And short, haha. Spanking good chapter!
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classicblack

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Oh gosh. Lily! I'm ashamed of you! Chickening out is not cool!
Nice chapter. Well done!
Until next chapter,
classicblack

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Sirius Black feeling guitly? Hwhat?! Nice chapter! I like that the chapters are relatively short and the story is 20 chapters. That means I won't feel as bad for ignoring my own story because I'm reading yours, as I'll be finished quickly :)
Until next chapter,
classicblack

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Life lessons from James Potter: Section One- Relationship advice, hahaha
I liked this chapter. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Until next chapter,
classicblack

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I like how Lily and James are both not eating, but thinking about two opposite things. Lily's sad she's returning to Hogwarts for the last time, and James is happy he's returning so he can see Lily.
Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Until next chapter,
classicblack

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