{reviewid: 1875867, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
25th March 2008:
ha! i hope james gets one over this nasty piece of work!
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{reviewid: 1875865, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
25th March 2008:
hmph, i would've punched cole too!
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{reviewid: 1875860, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
25th March 2008:
nice twist.is the daughter going to be as terrible as her mother i wonder?
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{reviewid: 1875406, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
i hate this kid cole, what a prick
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{reviewid: 1875400, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
there is always someone/something waiting to ruin things!!
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{reviewid: 1875390, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
thank goodness. that was a good read
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{reviewid: 1875381, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
um lily, that was a rubbish reason for breaking up with james who is blatently madly in love with you!!
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{reviewid: 1875377, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
argh...how much unhappiness can two people endure?!
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{reviewid: 1875372, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
hahaha...that poem was hilarious!
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{reviewid: 1875335, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
urgh, venus is a horrible person! cannot wait to find out more.
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{reviewid: 1875324, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
you've written her so well, i can't stand her. she reads as an umbridge type and the red nails remind me of a rita skeeter type. what a combo!
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{reviewid: 1875303, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
finally, some happiness!!! hooray
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{reviewid: 1875290, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
their drunken dialogue was priceless!!
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{reviewid: 1875274, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
the chemistry between james & lily is amazing so get them back together!!!
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{reviewid: 1875266, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
that was very un-lily like
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{reviewid: 1875255, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
voldemort's dialogue is unrealistic to say the least but the rest of the chapter is good, as usual!
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{reviewid: 1875248, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
i wasn't too fussed about the locket james gave to lily, it was a bit modern! however, how on earth did voldemort get into hogwarts? and why would dumbledore be so easily taken in by malfoy? great story so far!!
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{reviewid: 1875236, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
ugh, that was creepily good!!
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{reviewid: 1875222, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
woah, katy just invented a new level of impulsiveness!!
reat chapter to read however
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{reviewid: 1875213, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
loved the inclusion of another prophecy and it was nicely worded. good stuff!
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{reviewid: 1875198, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
exciting! poor james though :(
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{reviewid: 1875180, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
halle ought to get over a couple of jealous girls; poor sirius! and poor remus & katy. they need to talk.
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{reviewid: 1875164, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
really like the way you tied in wormtail going to the dark side, he really would be that easily led astray!
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{reviewid: 1875136, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
bad lily for snooping round, but hooray for the end result! this chapter made me grin alot!
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{reviewid: 1875078, reviewer: 'napoleonsolo'}
24th March 2008:
so much love going on in gryffindor tower! bit mushy, but enjoyable none the less
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