28 Reviews Found

Review #26, by Gabriella Hunter Fail Safe Ways to Charm Witches

10th June 2012:
Hello!

I'm back after your lovely review for "Memories" of course and I'm glad to see this second chapter! And you told me that I write the twins well? Oh, pishposh! I think I couldn't wipe the grin from my face throughout that entire conversation with the boys teasing Bill! And nice touch with Georgie (?) saying that that thing about living on a cottage by the sea. Great, great! I really like that you're doing different POV's on this, I'm excited for more from Bill, I really like the way you've written him. He's so laid back and cool, which is why I modeled an evil Malfoy boy after him in my story "Growth"! Always been a girly fan of Bill, for obvious reasons. Hehehe. Anyway, I have no complaints other than it didn't last forever but I'm expecting more! Don't disappoint me! :D
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hello again! Thanks so much for another really kind review! As you very well know, I enjoy writing the twins too much not to stick them in. I'm glad you liked their conversation with Bill (and you're right it was george who said about the cottage by the sea!) and I actually rewrote it about three times to get it right! I've always been a girly fan of Bill too (sigh) and thought it was about time I wrote about him! Chapter 3 is now up, and rest assured, there will be more to come!!

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Review #27, by Gabriella Hunter The Third Task

7th June 2012:
Hello!

Back again and I'm sorry that I didn't read this sooner. I was always rather curious to know what and why with this pairing (I didn't dislike them though) and I'm so happy to see this! Anyway, I really like how you've written Fleur, she seems as haughty and sure of herself as she was in the book. And her descriptions of Hogwarts were snobby but hilarious, I'm sure it doesn't compare to Beauxbatons! I wasn't sure if you were going to stray from the book but I liked how you introduced Bill in her eyes. Magnificent! I totally got what she liked about him, he's probably as different from her as Malfoy is for Harry. Perfection. Can't wait for an updat on this. Let's see...for yours truly, its going to take a minute for "This is Audrey Tang" but you can read this short story about our dearly beloved Georgie, its called "Memories" on my site if you want.
Anyway, looking forward to more from you! Inform me immediately!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Hello again!

Bill/Fleur is very different from what I normally write (as you very well know) and I decided to give this one a go and see what kind of a reception I got! Chapter 2 is now up and chapter 3 is awaiting validation so I hope you check them out and tell me what you think! I'll go and read 'Memorie' right now.you know I can't resist poor Georgie!


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Review #28, by Elizabeth Martin The Third Task

5th June 2012:
I've never really read any Bill/Fleur before, but I really enjoyed this! Your descriptions were vivid, Fleur's thoughts were so funny and I loved all the little anecdotes and the whole Roger-Cho-Harry-Hermione-Krum-Cedric-Fleur-Ron thing going on! It was really interesting how Fleur originally might have had feelings for Cedric, but that all changed when she first saw Bill. I'd really love to read more of this (will the next chapter be more about Bill??) and I really hope you continue this on. It'll be fun to see how you think their relationship will develop!

Author's Response: Hello again Elizabeth, thanks for taking the time to go through so many of my stories, I really appreciate it! This is my first time trying to write Bill and Fleur before, and I'm still not exactly sure what I think of this, but I'll continue with it to see what'll happen! The next chapter is awaiting to be validated, and it will be focusing around Bill.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing and i hope you continue to enjoy it!


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