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Review #26, by Lisa Sunlight

20th June 2012:
Hello. Great story! I've never read one with Neville before, not that I don't love him. This was very passionate for only 500 words, you really did an amazing job!

Author's Response: Hi there! Thanks for stopping by!

I've never written Neville before either, but I've always found him interesting, and it was fun to divert a little and do something kind of fluffy and sweet since I write dark angst so often. I'm very glad that you enjoyed this :)

Thanks for your sweet review!

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Review #27, by WitnesstoitAll Sunlight

20th June 2012:
So, I saw the link to this in your status and thought, "huh, I'll have to read that some time tomorrow." But then I hear how cute it was and couldn't resist giving it a quick read before I signed off for the night.

Omg. This was so cute. Everything about this moment was so perfect and sweet and (to steal the title of the one-shot) fleeting. Neville Longbottom always has a way of stealing my heart, and I adore reading things when he and Hannah are well written -- and oh my were they well written here.

I almost can't believe how short this was, you managed to capture quite a lot in these few words... and that is quite the accomplishment! I loved the description and pretty much everything. The bit about Neville asking Hannah to the Ball just after Ernie had was brilliant.

Gah. So much cuteness, you'll have to excuse all the rambing in this review.So well written... it makes me wish you wrote more of them.


Author's Response: Oh, my, who did you hear from? Haha. I'm glad you came by, though, and I apologize that this response has taken so long.

Neville is quite the little prince, isn't he? I had never tried them before, and had been tempted by it for quite a while, so I just did. I'm so glad that the characterization, imagery and plot worked for you, even considering the brevity of the piece. I might just have to return to fluffy Hannah/Neville later on :)

Thanks again for this sweet review!


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Review #28, by Toujours Padfoot Sunlight

20th June 2012:

Such a light, lovely, loving one-shot, and you used the perfect characters for this tone, and vice versa. Neville is so amazing, and to have this brief insight into his life with Hannah made me feel all warm and fuzzy. Their life feels so happy, with the daffodils and him reading Hogwarts: A History and how she doesn't want him to wake up because then he'll have to leave. They're such a cute couple.

The first paragraph, by the way, is homg, so gorgeous. It's the perfect description of giddy, wonderful love. You really nailed it.


Author's Response: SARAH :D I know - the fluff, the fluff! I write so much darkness, and the fluff is dangerous. It's so addictive. -clings desperately to her angst-

I'm so glad the description worked for you and that you enjoyed the lightness of this little piece.

Thanks for your sweet review :)


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Review #29, by ariellem Sunlight

20th June 2012:

Unfortunetly in some strange turn of events no matter how many times I logged in I couldn't actually leave a review.

So I love Neville/Hannah, I think they are grossly unappreciated, and this one-shot just proves my point of how great they are, I mean this

Oh, Neville. I am your savior, too.


He waited patiently, and he won me with simplicity.


He is unexpectedly normal, and his grandmother always says that I will make the prettiest bride.

This was amazing! :)

Author's Response: Hi! :) Sorry this response has taken ages!

Neville/Hannah is cute, and I've been wanting to try my hand at them for a while. I imagine I'll be back sometime in the future to write a longer story. I'm glad you liked this little one-shot, and thanks for your kind review :)


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