This whole story is fantastic, you write the characters so well, I love Spencer, she's very real. The wait for new chapters never matters because they are always so amazing, and this one is no exception. You're a very talented writer!

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I LOVE it. Spencer's character reminds me much of myself... I tend to word vomit quite often. You make her character so surreal and I really do like Freddy's character. You make him exactly the way I picture him myself when I'm writing about him. I hope Robyn's character will come around and Spencer and her will stop fighting, but I do love the fact you put the argument in the story. Until then, I hope to see more chapters soon. It's wonderful so far!

XOXOXO

~ LilyLou

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Me too, I'm in such trouble for not updating, but at least yours wasn't as long of a drought than mine... I loved this, it's so funny that nearly the whole chapter was in the loo :D lol They're adorable.
Thanks for the update!
Wish me luck updating my own stuff.
Great job!

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cant wait for the next chapter.

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just read the chapter and it was fantastic! :)

James and Spencer are officially the world's cutest couple. Just saying. Like I wanted to crawl into the bathroom with them just so I could witness their cuteness.

AND OMG! SPENCE IS GUNNA MEET THE FAMILY! I am literally so excited to see how you portray all the characters. Especially Dom. So please tell me she will be at the party. Wow i'm just so excited and you're an amazing author I couldn't stop laughing during this chapter and

UGH YOU'RE PERFECT OKAY? BYE :)

-Rebecca

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I cannot describe in words how much I love this. I need it to live and breath! I've burst out laughing quite a few times and my mom's looking at me like I'm crazy. By the way, what are you studying in collage?

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A bathroom? They (or James really) decided to have this conversation in a bathroom. Wow. I have to say that I did not see the conversation in a bathroom coming...

And Spencer! Her reaction was the best!

And he decides to take her to Hogsmeade as the first place (after the bathroom of course). This should be exciting.

Anyway please update soon!

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Another wonderful and funny chapter! Great description for apparation and her reaction to finding out the secret seemed hilarious and typical of her. Can't wait to read about her reactions to Hogsmeade!

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i love your story(:it's just so awesome and i never know what to expect when i read the next chapter

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OHMEHGAWHD.

I just... I don't know how to say it correctly.

Love this story.

It makes me crack up sometimes and sometimes want to shield myself in the embarrassment I feel in the atmosphere. I just... Love it. This plot line couldn't have been more perfect! And it is so wonderfully written. I think this is one of my new favorite fan fictions on this site. :D

NEVER STOP WRITING!

Love,
Sarah xxx

(10 / 10)

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ahh it was well worth the wait,its still definatly one of my favorite stories on here,i cant wait to see how spencer is at the party!

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I'll have you know I squealed when I realized you posted another chapter. Squealed. In a crowded Starbucks.. So worth it(: Great chapter! I'm all giggles now that she knows what he is, oh the possibilities.. I like that she hit him for the warlock 'lie'. Ugh, they are so cute together! "It looks like I got really lucky." Wonderful(: Thanks sooo much for updating. Pretty please don't take a million years before posting the next chapter, with a cherry on top.

Also, I really hope Spence does not spew all over Harry Potter's birthday cake. Actually, I'm already cringing at whatever shenanigans might go down at that party(:

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update soon please.. omg he finally told her yay

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I've been waiting for this!! I love this story. Great chapter, too. I really like when they're long. James and Spencer are just so adorable. Spencer is hilarious too! I'm really looking forward to her meeting the family and I think it's really sweet James wants her to. He must really like her if he's so eager ;)
Update soon!

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WOW! She took the news well. Thank god they didn't have a fight. It's nice to have drama free storie once in a while. This is a brilliant story. Please update ASAP. James and Spencer are so cute together it hurts. Please dont make them fight. This story is tooo cute. I LOVE IT!

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WOW! She took the news well. Thank god they didn't have a fight. It's nice to have drama free storie once in a while. This is a brilliant story. Please update ASAP. James and Spencer are so cute together it hurts. Please dont make them fight. This story is tooo cute. I LOVE IT!

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YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!
i just want to read the whole story now sigh
i love how cute spencer and james are i ship jencer so much

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OMG I LOVE THIS!! YAYAY!
HOORAY FOR UPDATING!
even though, i already read the first bit (yes, i was the one that asked you on tumblr ehehhe) i didn't expect the end to be so amazing!
i really really love this chap and this story, and james and spencer, and all their awkwardness and that was a perfect description of apparation and this is really the best thing ever like actually.
(:

merry christmas!

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OH MY GOODNESS!! :D I love this story so much and I'm so glad you finally updated! James is adorable and Spencer is hysterical.
This chapter was really great and I hope you update soon! :)

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This was absolutley awesome!
Thank you for your lovely writing Jess ;)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the chapter and my writing! I'll try to update soon :D

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First of all I love your disclaimer at the end about not owning playdoh ;) sounds like something Spencer would say, I wonder who you base her character on, ahaa.
Secondly, I really enjoyed this chaper and it was well worth the wair, I love the character of Spencer so much because she is simply so relatable. Finally found someone as clumsey as me! people say clumsey is cute but when it come to a certain extend such as Spencer and myself, it is just an embarrassment :P
Next, loved James in this chapter but I'm really missing the cheeky chappy that teases her, very clever of his to plan it all though, shows that he's not just a pretty face after all. Also, I've forgotten how old James and Spencer are? obviously James is older than 17 butI just can't seem to remember, care to tell me? :D
Lastly, I really can't wait for the next chapter! please include Freddy again, I honestly miss the way that you characterise him like no other fan fiction I've read, also can't wait to see how Spencer uses this to get back at him one way or another, just the simle threat :P
Anyway, sorry for such a long note, and thankyou for writing such a lovely chapter, UPDATE SOON! :D
Sora

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I've been waiting for this! I loved the chapter and Spencer's reaction was priceless! I can't wait to see Spencer meet the Wotters!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Sorry again for the wait, but I'm really glad that you enjoyed it! I'll try to update soon :D

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oh James wants her to meet his family!! that's so cute! That will be HILARIOUS. Freddy will probably make things awkward and she'll blush and go all red like she does when she's embarrassed. and she finally knows he's a wizard! It's good she didnt make a big deal about it and freak out. she got annoyed about how he lied to her about her guessing he was a warlock! that is why Spencer is so cool. OMGOSH PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I LOVE THIS STORY. I LOVE SPENCER AND JAMES. AND YES JUST UPDATE!

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This made me so happy. Well done for writing another amazing chapter. :) xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! :D

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Eek! Exciting-ness! At least she took it better than I thought she would. And I loved the part where she pushed him away and called him a liar because she had called him a warlock and she was so close to guessing right. Ugh! I love this story. And the whole chapter was hilarious, especially the bit in the loo and how James said he'd look like he got lucky, haha, it made me laugh.

I can't wait for your next chapter update! I hope it's soon! But I know better than anyone how long it can take to update a story, I'm terrible at it myself.

Anywhoo, good job on this. I did notice some mistakes... like I think somewhere you used despite when I think you meant desparate and there was something else, I think before that, but I can't remember. Other than that, you're writing is amazing and you're awesome and I'm going to end this rambling review here.

xxEnigmaticEyes16

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