That is one of the best i have seen. Good JobAuthor's Response: Thank you very much. Glad it pleased you.
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Coffee may be taking over now, but do take into account the fact that the Battle of Hogwarts took place around June 1998 and that the magical population is rather 'traditional' and the caracters are never depicted drinking coffee by JKR. Be that as it may, I may have got carried away by stereotype here, so I do apologize for any offense you might have taken for my "tea comment". None was intended.Author's Response: I never take offence at a review, unless it gets personal, and that hasn't happened yet. I think the problem you are having is letting go of canon. Try to separate but not distance fanfiction from JKRfiction. I hope that makes sense. Report Review
Oh, I just loved it! I'm rating it 9 out of 10 (this rating stands for the whole ff, not just this chapter) and I'm taking that point off only because some Americanisms like "numbnuts" and the fact that they are all British but you depict them drinking coffee a lot, when sense would pont out that it should be tea. On the whole, I think there were some really great parts (for example, making Victoire be born on the anniversary of the Battle of Hogwarts, thus explaining her name and the bet between Fred and George. I enjoyed it an awful lot. Thanks!Author's Response: Thank you! The word you pointed out may be an Americanism, but we do use it in the mother country. Tea drinking is not popular amongst the younger generations these days. Coffee is takin' over.
I didn't decide that Victoire would be born on the anniversary of the battle. JKR did that.
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Fred and George's bet made me cry my heart out. Seriously, I just had to put my glasses down, bury my face in my hands and cry for a couple of minutes. I'm only just camlming down. What a touching moment. Congratulations!
(also, as a comment, don't you think all the double marriage thing is a bit rushed? I mean, it took like 7 years till Harry and Ginny had James so I would have thought that maybe their marriage would have taken at least 2 or 3 years after the Battle of Hogwarts. Not criticising, just sharing my view on the matter)Author's Response: I keep making people cry, I should stop that... or then again maybe not.
You may comment all you want, that's the main reason for having reviews.
The weddings were meant to be 2 years later, that gives Ginny time for a Quidditch career, before James comes along.
Thank you for taking the time to leave your thoughts. Appreciate it.
My last review was for 12 chapters and this one is for the whole story..
other than a few odd partials and the odd grammer/spelling mistake, it is a supurbly thought out and wrote story..
i enjoyed it from chapter 1 to chapter 25 and to be honest wish it was another 25 chapters long(can't be too greedy now :) ) ..
i hope to see more from you and this is the only story to make it to my fav storys and will be saved for later rereading :)
Thank you for taking your time and sharing your wonderful imagination in the JK Rowlin universe that is Harry Potter
You are also now in my fav authors along with GreenGecko
again Thank you for the enjoyable time spent imersed in your story.
SpudAuthor's Response: Thank you so much Spud, I'm glad you saw it through to the end and enjoyed it.
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AWSOMME I LOVED IT Author's Response: Thank you Shania, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks also for the review. Report Review
This is the perfect story. I don't like the first chapter, but I love your description of the wedding.
Keep Writing!Author's Response: Thank you for persisting after you read the first chapter, and for leaving this review.
I'm still writing.
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All in all it was a well written story. I found it very entertaining. You may disagree with some of the decisions the characters make, but it's your story so that means you decide what they should do and it's a good story. I enjoyed reading it.Author's Response: You finished it already!!? I'm glad you enjoyed it. If you want to be even more confused by Hermione, may I suggest you read 'Beautiful when she smiles'. It's what happens when Hermione doesn't go back to the Burrow.
Thanks for the review and for taking the time to post it. It's appreciated. Report Review
Again I don't understand Hermione. She spent weeks crying because of Ron's departure, and suddenly she forgot all about him. Isn't it Ginny she's mad at?
Anyway once again, great writing, the story is very well written, wether you agree with the plot or not.Author's Response: Ginny's response really messed with her head. She just wasn't expecting it. I think you might be in for more confusion in the next couple of chapters.
Thanks for the reviews and the compliments. I hope I hear from you again. Report Review
I'm not really sure I understand Hermione's motive for leaving the Burrow. She s´should by now understand the Weasley temper, especially Ginny's. And even if she gets surprised she to me at least seems very head-strong and should be able to tell Ginny her mind, instead of just leaving.
But other than that, very well written and I look forward to reading the next chapter. Report Review
That was the best one of them all. an i have read a few !Author's Response: No reviews for ages and then two in one day! Great!!!
So glad you enjoyed the story. Thank you for taking the time to comment. Report Review
Nice. I love it. When will you continue their life. What is your auther name?Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm not planning on writing a follow up, I'm afraid. Although I am in the process of a one-shot to fix a problem in this story, concerning Ron, Hermione and Robbie (yeah I do remember that Robbie is dead.) I dont know how long it will be. Report Review
Very wierd very wierd indeed!Author's Response: I assume you mean 'weird' and er... what is? Report Review
Such a sweet ending to a wonderful story. I enjoyed reading this, and I cried several times...in a good way, of course! You are an excellent writer!Author's Response: Thank you once again Starkidoakes. If it made you cry, does that mean I did it right?
Thanks for your compliment *blush* Report Review
excellent fic, I'm glad you included some action and somewhat dark magic wizards to switch up the moods .. I have to admit I didn't enjoy the bit with Robbie but understand it all the same as it added another dimension to the story and kept it from becoming stale .. By the end I was close to tears, gahh harry and Ginny are the best! CongratsAuthor's Response: Thank you very much. Robbie appeared because I would rather have Hermione paired with anyone but Ron. I left them together in he end. I had to get it off my chest tho' so I wrote, Beautiful When she Smiles'.
Thanks again. Report Review
i loved every single minute of it! :))
such a cute tearful ending :')Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
Just wanted to thank you for not only writing this story but for completing it. It was very well written and your updates were timely. I've read an untold number of stories written on this site and the greatest disappointment is unfinished stories. Please continue with your writing and I look forward to see new ones from you in the future. ;-)Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I absolutely agree with you about unfinished stories. I find it very annoying and frustrating. My remedy, if I find a story that hasn't been updated for, say five years, (there are a couple in my favourites list) is to finish it myself. Of course, I can never post them for others to read. HPFF would rightly take a dim view of that.
I am continuing to write and the first episode of my next one is in validation now.
Thanks for the review and for taking the time to post it.
It's rare that a fan fic brings me to tears, this is one of those occasions *sniff, sniff* what a beautiful ending to a wonderful story.
I want to thank you for taking the time to write this so I could enjoy it - and I did very much.
Take care, HopelessAuthor's Response: Colleen, how can you call yourself 'Hopeless' when you write reviews like this? Thank you very much.
I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I hope you'll read more of my stories and review those too. Report Review
Kinda sad to see it end, but you ended it perfectly! And now I must ask a question, is there going to be any kind of sequel?Author's Response: As I said to H4NA in response to a previous review, I have been toying with the idea of a one-shot sequel. There is something I wold like to fix, but I have my doubts as to whether I can make it work. I've started drafting and blocking it out. At this point in time my answer has to be, I don't know if there will be a sequel. I'm glad you enjoyed this one though.
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AMAZING ENDING!! I LOVED EVERY WORD OF IT!!!
btw I cried when Fred, James, Lily, Sirius, Dobby, Hedwing and Dumbledore show up. (snif sniff)Author's Response: I get a warm glow from reviews like this. Thank You. I contemplated leaving the 'loved ones' scene out. I was worried it might be a bit too 'fluffy'. I don't know whether I'm happy about making you cry or not. You seem to have enjoyed it, so perhaps not. Thanks again. Report Review
OMG use the pond! That's hysterical :) and perfect that you ended the chapter with it too. You captured Rita Skeeter perfectly - she is a cow. Prof McGonagall's comments were a hoot - overall this was a very funny chapter. And of course so well written.
So glad you wrote Vernon out of the story - such a loser!
Thanks, Colleen aka HopelessAuthor's Response: Thank you very much for your kind comments in this and your previous reviews. This makes the 8th review you have left for this story. Bless you for that. it makes the hours of pounding the keyboard worthwhile. I hope you enjoy chapter 25, it's the last one. Thanks again. Report Review
There were so many things I liked about this one. Kreacher and the sledgehammer was brilliant idea!
The talk that Ginny had with her dad was very touching and Ron saying he could handle Hermione made me laugh right out loud.
Excellent job, Hopeless Report Review
Great game play! This chapter flowed very well. I enjoyed it very much. I saw that the story is now completed, I am going to have to savor the last few. Report Review
I loved the very end, it had a sense of being blessed. Miracles can happen in the Potter world. I enjoyed reading your story, and hope to see another soon. Blessed Be...Author's Response: The next one won't be long. It's a totally Ginny short (3 chapters) story. i'm glad you enjoyed this one. Thanks for taking the time to review. I appreciate it. Hope I'll hear from you again. Report Review
This is SUCH a good story! I like their humor :) Is it really ending next chapter? :( 10/10 :))Author's Response: Sorry, but it is the end. I was toying with the idea of another chapter because there is one thing I would like to fix, but I'm not sure I could make it work in context. I'm currently trying to work it out as a one-shot mini sequel. (Along with four other stories. I currently have cooking.) Glad you enjoyed this one. Hope to hear from you again. Report Review
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