I just basically had a fit from laughing so hard. This is so far on my top five favorite stories. Holy crap. Report Review
Oh my gosh, I'm going to cry!!! 1 more chapter??? Why?!?!?! I mean, I'm glad Addie moved on and life is good and her parents and family and everything, but Al!!! What about Al!!! Is there going to be a sequel? It's like a piece of my life is going to end. I'll just have to keep re-reading the story and your other stories until you make more. But other than the possible explosion of my life, that was a FANTASTIC chapter :D Report Review
It was pretty good.. Could you please get Addie and Al back together? Love your Fanfic tho! Report Review
Aldie !!! Nobody else than Al !! Waiting for next chapter !!! Report Review
I've only just started reading your story and it is so addictive! I read it all in a day! And throughout it all my heart keeps breaking and then mending for Addie and Al. They're so perfect for each other.
I like how you managed to weave everybody else's stories and love lives into the story really well. You really add individuality to them so they seem almost like real people.
The quote you put in a while back about having twenty seconds of courage was really inspirational and I refer to it regularly. It's like my motto now.
In your AN you said that there was only one more chapter left. Please tell me I didn't read that correctly. Your story has been really well written up till now and I would hate for the end to be just loosely tied up. I probably wouldn't even mind if you left it at a cliffhanger and wrote a series. But Addie and Al have to end up together! They belong to each other. The same goes for James & Analiese, Alice & Will, Scorpius & Rose, Caleb & Anna, Mary & that other Hufflepuff (I forgot his name as... And even though they're not together I ship them. They're so cute! Excuse my fangirling there.) I can't really say the same for Dom and Lysander or Louis and Paige because you haven't really gone into detail about them. It would be nice if you did though. And Scorpius and Addie's cousin who's gay? I've forgotten his name but maybe he could come back into the picture and you could mention things about his relationship with Lorcan?
I have mixed feelings about Addie's biological parents... I like her "new" sister. She seems cute. I'm glad that her biological parents are in the story though. It gives a fresh type of drama compared to most stories. And I felt so sorry for Matilda when Cormac was talking about his new family and she was crying. My heart broke for her as well.
This is such an amazing story. You're an awesome writer and I'm pretty sure there will be no other Al/OC story that I read that is better than this one. And I'm sorry if you actually read this and had to read my fangirling and rambling. I hope or was helpful for you though.
I SHIP ALDIE! Report Review
Only one more chapter! I can't believe it's almost over and Al and Addie aren't back together :( But I guess if he has moved on she has to do the same. And hopefully there will be no more hooking up with Fred because that won't make things better for her.
Love her friendship with Rose. I will miss this story!! Report Review
I really love Rose and Addie's friendship! It really portrays what true friends are like. You point out each other's mistake and not just mindlessly support them.
Blargh. Addie and Al! Love each other already! D: There better be some Al and Addie emotional talk next chapter! I'm watching you...
*creepily sneaks away*
*creepily comes back* - UPDATE SOON! :D Report Review
Hello! I'm glad that Rose put Addie in her place and gave us a new perspective of the whole mess since we've only been seeing from Addie's POV. I really like this story and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed it before. When I started reading this story I was addicted right until the latest updated chapter. You have combined all the overlapping side stories really well. Anyway, I can't believe its nearly over. Can't wait for the next chapter :) Report Review
I think it is mature of Addy to move on, because it seems like she's done with being completely reckless and impulsive. BUT I really want her and Albus to end up together. I liked them as a couple and I want them back together!! :( Great chapter though! Love this story! Report Review
Thank you for the nice distraction, I really needed it. Good chapter too :) Report Review
Brilliant chapter! Her life is really full of crazy madness :) I really do hope that the next chapter involves a bright side to Addison's life. Hopefully ALBUS will be there.
ONLY ONE MORE CHAPTER? Am i reading incorrectly? Please tell me there isn't just one more chapter left to this story. Please do not make a cliff hanger:( I'll cry and cry and cry all day long. I NEED ALBUS TO BE WITH ADDISON! :D
Haha. anyways, I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm glad you updated fast :D please update the next chapter soon :) I absolutely love your story and i love the way you write. You are an amazing author so never stop writing these amazing chapters :D
~LoVe_Sirius Report Review
If Addie and Al don't get back together , I will actually cry :'(
On a more positive note, your story is like my favorite one on here, awesomely written- please update soon! :) Report Review
This is making me sad.
ALDIE FOR THE WIN.
Fraddie is okay I guess. But Aldie. Seriously.
I legit felt my heart stop when I saw this on the queue. I really really like this story, but your plot bunny is making my head spin. In circles. Like a crazy top.
I love her interaction with Cormac, and I wish that ALDIE would just get back together. I share your love for T Swift, but We Are Never Ever Getting Back Together is NOT the way I want this to go. Please?
I love that she's maturing now, and I'm going to cry when this is over. Sequel please? Report Review
Oh my god
I CAN'T, I really just argh
I'm so torn right now. Like, honestly, Addie moving on is really realistic and stuff and agh but OMG ALDIE HAS BEEN MY OTP SINCE I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHEN AND IF THEY DON'T GET BACK TOGETHER I THINK I JUST MIGHT DIE. ESPECIALLY AFTER THE WHOLE THING WHERE AL WAS UPSET OVER ADDIE REMOVING THE NECKLACE
Okay I'm going to go cry in a corner now. Love youuu Report Review
Hey bro, financial lit chickk here, and even though im not actually in financial lit, I figured I'd let you know.. this was awesome as usual:D I'm so so so soo sad we're almost done! How are you even gonna end it? Al and Addie are still gonna have their happily ever after right? You said only one chappter left but that doesn't seem to be enough for aldie to get together forever. Please please please don't tell me its gonna be one of those "took a deep breath and decided to move on for good. It was time to start my new life. THE END." It cant be one of those, I'd cry, I ship Aldie so hard, you dont even know man. Lol, okay love you, you fluffy unicorn you Report Review
Hey Cat! I really liked this chapter, it had a lot of really great parts to it.
I really liked Rose's speech to Addie. I think it was just what she needed to get started in the process of moving on. I think it helped her to accept some of the mistakes she'd made in the past. There was one part I didn't agree with, that being some of blame Rose placed on Addie for her past with Al. It really isn't Addie's fault that Al spent several years kind of pining over her because he never made any attempts to be civil or kind to her, so that part is really his fault. But other than that, Rose was pretty spot on - if a little harsh, but necessarily so.
It's nice to see Caleb again. I always did like him, even if I didn't like him dating Addie. He's such a cool, nice guy and I think he's exactly the kind of support that Addie needs while she tries to straighten her life out.
My favorite part, though, was Addie's conversation with Cormac. I loved how she was assertive about the fact that Draco, Astoria, and Scorpius are her real family. Blood doesn't always equal love. I hope that Addie will be able to get to know her biological family better while still maintaining her strong relationship with her real family.
And now I'm in a dilemma. Because there is a part of me that doesn't want Al and Addie to work things out and get back together. Because I think it shows a more realistic portrayal of life - which I love - and it shows that you can come back from heartbreak without reestablishing a relationship with the person that broke your heart. But on the other hand, I've been shipping Al and Addie for a while and I really want them to work things out. I don't know which one I want more!
Once again, really great chapter! I can't believe this story is almost over!
-Laura Report Review
Update, Update, UPDATE!! Report Review
Hey wow so new chapter!!
I really really liked this one and basically all its content. This freddie/addie thing is a plot twist I really enjoy and even though I don't know what I wish for it to debelop into I think you have made it very interesting. I also like the idea of Addie letting Al go, although I hardly believe it will be the end.
Fantastically written! Report Review
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE!!! I am so hooked and cant wait another day!!! I was so upset bout Addie giving back the necklace as his bday gift. *crying* :( Ur such a good writer so please update.
Thanx Report Review
Alright. I am basically going to restate everything every commenter has already said. Great story, I really like it. Please update soon, I don't know how long I can go without knowing what happens in the end. Last, PLEASE GET ALBUS AND ADDIE BACK TOGETHER. PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE.
Sorry I got all needy up there but they seem perfect for each other. Report Review
these last two chapters made me cry!!! it's so sad! this is my second time reading this story and it still makes me cry! I. Love. It. Report Review
I read this entire story in a day! I'm amazing, and super entertaining. I got sucked in the first chapter. Going through all the laughing and crything with Addie, it really makes the reader feel as if they are part of the story =D I'm sad that there's only two chapters leff :( but do update soon!!! I can't wait to read what unfolds in the next chapter! Report Review
You end this, I end you. JK, maybe.. Report Review
Are you Fucking kidding? It's Amazing! Keep Writing More! Report Review
Update!!! Please, please, please, DEAR LORD, update! I literally just stayed up for the ENTIRE NIGHT reading this story, only to find that it was not a finished story (I should really start looking first if that's part of my criteria), and that NOW I have to wait to discover the happy (or not so happy) ending!!! THAT'S TRAGIC NEWS!
But, since I love this story, I will stop going nutters about the fact that you should totally update... ASAP... now... updated yet?
I love this story! It's fabulous, and one of my absolute favorites! I have fallen completely head over feet for your characters and the plot and the love and the CUTENESS! :D Also, Albus and Addison... together... now. please? :( AND...I sincerely hope that this Lana person falls off a deep cliff into an ocean of sharks! I mean... HONESTLY, where did she even come from!? I understand that Al can't exactly mope around forever waiting on Ads to stop being a bint, but really!? ANOTHER WOMAN AFTER THAT CONFESSION?! LOW BLOW MAN.
And Fred?! This is just a no-no! I mean, sure, it could happen. If she wasn't already BONKERS for Al!!! They belong together! The cuteness of them makes me insanely insanely happy (not that I wasn't insane before, but the happy definitely came from their cuteness...)!
BUT YEAH :| I guess I got weird enough and expressed all my feelings in a short-ish and concise-ish kind of way... so that's satisfying...
By the way... in case you forgot.
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! :D
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