holey fucking shit, this is honestly like the best story i have ever read. it is amazing and u are awesome

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This chapter actually made me cry. And I'm not the emotional kind. I've been following this story for a long time, and this ending wasn't what I expected.

It was better.

I really have to congratulate you. This was a magnificent story with so much detail, and I loved it from the moment I read it. Usually, when it comes to Fanfiction, I look at one-shots because most long stories drift off in the middle, leaving a gaping hole which I hate to stare at. However, this story never disappointed me. There was a beginning, a middle, and an ending that made absolute sense. Although I know that coming from a stranger this may not seem like a lot, but you must absolutely continue writing. This story was crazy good. And I never say that if I don't mean it.

Keep writing. You are simply amazing. :)

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i really really enjoyed this chapter!! It's so freaking AWESOME

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Be more confident with yourself! Your stories are AMAZING

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I feel like story was very logical and COULD TOTALLY BE A GOOD MOVIE.

I was so entertained from beginning to end. Hell, I may have even cried a couple times and got butterflies. Truly truly great story. It was full of real lessons that most stories should contain. :)

Congrats! I really hope you make another one!

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This made me laugh so hard! :)

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Best story ever. I love it.

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AHH!!! AMAZING! I LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter!! I have always been rooting for Addie and Albus, and the way you did it made it very realistic. Addie needed to stop being so impulsive and grow up before coming back to Albus. This chapter made me so happy! Absolutely love this story! :)

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NO! I can't believe this is the end!
I absolutely love your story. The characters, the plot, your writing and the mood you created. I'm sad that this is all over :(

This chapter was the best. I could not think of a better way you could have ended this story. I'm relieved that they finally got together. It was adorable and cute and perfect. For a second i thought you were going to make Addie be with Caleb. I was about to scream :)

I can't stress enough how amazing your writing is :) Please continue writing other brilliant stories. I'd really love to read them.

My last review.
~LoVe_Sirius

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You are actually my favorite author right now. This story keeps giving me butterflies! Keep it up!

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FUCK! That was amazing! How could you do this to me?!?! AGGHHH

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i absolutely loved this chapter! :) Especially the fact that Addie and Albus didn't get together immediately. Also, that Addie moved to San Fran. Most people just keep them with their besties, but this was different, it was good :)

EEEP! James and Annelise got married! Yay! I'm really glad you showed the wedding because i absolutely ship them :D

As a teeny point of criticism - i felt that you moved the Addie-Albus relationship a bit too fast in the end! I mean it, i felt that a little more talking i guess would make it more realistic! I mean, i don't think Addie is someone who would sleep with someone without really talking things out you know? I mean they did, but a little more would have been better!

Anyway, overall i really liked the chapter! I hope you update soon! :D

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omg i absolutely loved this chapter so so much!

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Wow, that was amazing. I'm from Northern California, and I LOVED the part about The City. I can't wait for the epilogue! You're amazing!
-Claire

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THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! I HAVE WANTED THEM TO END UP TOGETHER SINCE THE BEGINNING!

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YAY.
...about time woman.
LIFE IS GOOD

CAN'T WAIT FOR THE EPILOGUE.

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Hi,
I began reading this fanfiction since it had 17 chapters, I was always eager for the release of the chapters. I think that the way you write is awesome. I hated when Addie left Albus. I also thought it was over. I didn't want it to end like that but then I searched this fanficion again and saw it had another chapter and thought that Addie would find another man but then I began reading and felt so happy. When I got to the part in which they kiss I yelled so loud that my mum cam into my room and told me to shut up. I didn't care and kept yelling and swearing loudly. I couldn't help it :) I was extremely happy about it. I really wanted to read how Addie and Albus shagged but well at least they are together now. I loved your story and I hope the next chapter comes out soon.
Thanks for sharing this amazing story,
Love always
J.W

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oh. my. god. ITS FINISHED! with only an epilogue left. i was freaking out when i was reading the first half of the chapter, coz i legit thought they weren't going to get back together; but then at the wedding and the feelings and just. WOW. GREAT CHAPTER. LONG. BUT GREAT. it was really good and i loved how they both grew up but they still loved each other, it was like...AWW THATS SO SWEET. and james and annalise were sooo cute...those vows? absolutely adorable! i can't wait for the epilogue...is it gonna be like al and addie married or something? or their wedding? or just them being together? i dunno. but that was great. I LOVED IT! great chapter, great story and i just. WOW. :D

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This Is A Good Story Great Story Can't Wait For The Epilouge

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Aw, thank you so much Cat! I was happy to help :) And for the record I thought this chapter was executed spectacularly. I loved everything about it! I am so happy for Addie and everything that's happened to her. Brilliant job!

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This was the best (almost) ending to a story I have read. I really do love it. And I'm so sad that this story is coming to an end. I never want this to stop, but every story has it's end and that's how that should be. Can't wait for the epilogue!!
Thank you for this amazing ride :)

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CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S (almost) OVER. Amazing chapter, they're back together and are all grown up. I'm really going to miss this story.
10/10

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Aw. It's hard for me to believe this is over. I love this story and I'm glad you continued to write this and didn't give up. I also think this chapter was perfect. It is so cute that I can't even. I LOVE LOVE LOVE James and Analiese and this was more than perfect. So thank you for writing this and I can't wait for the epilogue. And I can't wait to continue reading perfect and off limits and whatever else you write in the future. Have a lovely day.

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finish it!! quickly!!! I'm dying of not knowing whats happening!

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ummm.. i think ur using the eff word too much though.but otherwise,i just can't get enough!

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