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Review #26, by DragonsInDisguise My Girlfriend is Going to be Okay

8th July 2012:
Okay, so I just want to say thank you for updating this story! Yay *mini dance* and I do have some names, I don't really have a set first and middle name but I'm thinking Scarlett, Alex(andra) or Violet (Petunia, Lily, it fits in with the flower theme). And the next time you update I'll probably be in Mexico. Crossing my fingers my aunt has Internet :) thanks again

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Review #27, by AriPotter My Girlfriend is Going to be Okay

8th July 2012:
I think that they might use part of Holly's name for her middle name, because even though she is slightly insane, she has been there ever since the beginning, and she truly is a great and loyal friend. Also, it will make it up to her if they decide not to make her the godmother. As for the first name...that's a little more difficult. Hopefully something original though. There are way too may renamings in this family. Loving the story, and please update soon!

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Review #28, by Dizzy73 My Girlfriend is Going to be Okay

6th July 2012:
Hoorray! You updated! I glad that Jack and James finally have a bro moment :) I hope Amy and the baby will be alright!

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Review #29, by RoseWeasleyMalfoy1996 My Girlfriend is Going to be Okay

6th July 2012:
I love this story and your doing great on it. Cant wait for the next chapter!

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Review #30, by potterbookworm My Girlfriend is Going to be Okay

5th July 2012:
You're back! I've reread this story at least 5 times while waiting for an update. I think the baby's name should be either Sarah Holly Potter or maybe Erin Holly Potter. My reason for these names is because I think she needs to have a fairly simple name. Her life is going to be hectic enough with out her needing a wonky name to go with it. Also, for the middle name, this last chapter showed to James and everyone else why Holly is such a good friend to Amy. We got to see another side of Holly that is very caring and loyal to her friends. On another note, I think the guy Dom thought pushed Amy is Jason. I hadn't actually thought about him being the one to do it. I think it is going to be Veronica. After reading through the story many times, I realized that she would be crazy enough to push Amy. Anyway, I loved this chapter because it had important events even though the whole thing was in one place.
Update soon!
-potterbookworm

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Review #31, by Ilovedaniel My Girlfriend is Going to be Okay

3rd July 2012:
FINALLY!An update! I love that Jack and James made up. yaay :) Now on to the names!
I dont remeber if you said the gender but i have both!
Boy: Liam James Potter (I was saying Liam James from One Direction but James is in it so, sorry, One Direction ruiend my social life. lol)
Girl: Anabelle Lily Potter
Hope you liked the names!
10/10
- Ilovedaniel

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Review #32, by Hope's Mom My Girlfriend is Going to be Okay

3rd July 2012:
An update! I am glad that Amy was stirring by the end of the chapter. James and Jack made up, too! I wonder if Amy will remember who pushed her? I assume the baby will be okay? Thanks for the update.

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Review #33, by Phoenix_Feather49 My Girlfriend is Going to be Okay

3rd July 2012:
ARGH! Thank god you updated, I was DYING! I kept staring at your page, making a little silent plea for you to update... Anyways, thank you very much :D

It was a great chapter, I love these "filler" ones. So glad Jack and James made up! Oh, and the suspense is killing me about the (this sounds lame) "pusher". Please update soon!

I love this story, just thought I'd let you know. You're a great author and this story is awesome :)

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Review #34, by Crescent Moon  My Girlfriend is Going to be Okay

3rd July 2012:
I loved this chapter.
It was great to have a James POV and I'm so glad he's getting along better with Jack.
I really can't wait too see what's going to happen next and if the baby will be okay. :)

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Review #35, by rainstormsatnighttime My Girlfriend is Going to be Okay

3rd July 2012:
Just... you're just... it's amazing. Amazing chapter once again =) I loved Holly in this chapter, and the way that James really saw her for the first time, I loved the way that Adam brightens every mood, I love that Jack apologised and they were both just... wow it was amazing. The way each individual character's reaction was written was perfect. Great chapter =) xx

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Review #36, by potterfan310 My Girlfriend is Going to be Okay

3rd July 2012:
Literally screaming with joy to see that it has been updated :D It's made my day.

Aww Holly,she's so sweet yet insane at the same time.It was a him who pushed her? I wonder who...?

N'aww Jamesie loves her. I love him he's so adorable. I glad he and Jack made up and YAY Amy wakes up! Hope she's ok.

Cannot wait for the next one :)

I've kinda forget (my bad) whether it's a boy or girl or if you didn't say so anyway here are names for LBP (I think it's a girl that's why there are more girl names than boys .

Names - Holly Mae, Jack James (or James Jack), Florence Amy (Florrie for short), Lily Mae, Tyler Jayce, Scarlette Hope, Nevaeh lee, Alix Faith (Ally), Harry Lewis, Isabelle Grace.
If you would like any more name ideas PM on the forums (Potterfan310).

10/10
-Potterfan310

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Review #37, by hogwartsfavoritecoupleh My Girlfriend is Going to be Okay

3rd July 2012:
nkzjfnvkdfv YAY You updated! It literally made my day, this chapter was so good:) Can't wait for the next one update soon:))

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Review #38, by lynnnnyl My Girlfriend is Going to be Okay

3rd July 2012:
OMM! I NEED MORE!!! I can not wait for the next one!!

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Review #39, by Emily My Girlfriend is Going to be Okay

2nd July 2012:
If she has amnesia I may just kill (not literally) somebody. I will probably shout a lot of nonsense and "WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCKS" if she has amnesia.

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Review #40, by pretty please My Sister Needs Help

1st July 2012:
love it just reread it again please update soon

Author's Response: The next chapter is in the queue. So sorry it took so long. It's just up to the validators now :)

Thank you for reviewing

nmegirl


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Review #41, by PearlsDream My Sister Needs Help

29th June 2012:
Okay, I'm going to beg here...

*gets down on her knees and puts on her puppy face*

Please, please, please don't leave it like this. I understand college/school/work/life can get in the way but... this story is so good and I just want to know what happens! :) I check this story way to often for my own good, and every time it's a bit disappointing that there is no new chapter.

Hoping that you'll update soon, I'll keep checking.

x
PearlsDream (to lazy to sign in)

Author's Response: Next chapter is in the queue. I'm so sorry for how long it took! I never thought I'd leave a chapter this long.

Not sure when it will be up. Queue closure from the 1st to the 7th so, I don't know. It's up to the validators now.

I'm so happy that you like the story enough to check up on it so much. It makes me feel doubly guilty. If that's even a word.

But there is a new chapter for you to look forward to. But like I said, it's the validators turn now. I'm not a trusted author.

Thanks for reviewing

nmegirl


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Review #42, by KellyMarie My Sister Needs Help

23rd June 2012:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE! ITS KILLING ME! Can't wait to read the next chapter! (:

Author's Response: So sorry! Chapter 55 is waiting for validation. Not sure how long it will be but I've uploaded it.

Thanks for the review

nmegirl


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Review #43, by ksham10 My Sister Needs Help

10th June 2012:
AH PLEASE UPDATE ITS KILLING ME! I loovvveee this story, you're an amazing writer!! I hope the baby's ok :( PLEEAASSEE! Ok. That's all. :) update soon please!

Happy Writing!!

Author's Response: So sorry for the length of tiem in between this and the last chapter. But the next chapter is waiting to be validated. Not sure how long it will be.

Thank you for reviewing

nmegirl


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Review #44, by Angelwithoutwings1470 My Easter Holidays Are Over

9th June 2012:
AHHH Chace Crawford is one HOT guy ;) Haven't been reading this book (even though i LOVE it) in a while as it takes you ages to upload :P xxx

Author's Response: Yes he is ;)

I'm so sorry! Next chapter is written and posted into the queue, so it's just up to the validators now.

I will never leave a gap this big again between chapters. I feel so guilty. But my course doesn't finish until august, and i leave for placement at 6 in the morning and don't get back until 9 at night. :(

Sorry for the excuse as well. I am trying my best.

Thank you for the review

nmegirl


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Review #45, by hpfan412 My Sister Needs Help

27th May 2012:
Update soon! Please! It's killing me! I NEED to know what happens! (:

Author's Response: So sorry for the wait. Chapter 55 is waiting in te queue. It's up to the validators now.

Thanks for reviewing

nmegirl


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Review #46, by harrypotternextgen My Sister Needs Help

24th May 2012:
I love this story! please update soon :)

Author's Response: So sorry for the wait in between chapters.

Next chapter is just waiting for validation.

Thanks for the review

nmegirl


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Review #47, by DraculoraMalfoy11 My Sister Needs Help

22nd May 2012:
I absolutely love this story!!! Please let us know that the baby is okay!

Author's Response: Chapter 55 is waiting to be validated.

I apologise for how long it took.

Thank you for reviewing

nmegirl


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Review #48, by enchantedx My Sister Needs Help

20th May 2012:
Yay! review number 800.
I know your busy but...when is the next chapter coming? :/

Author's Response: So sorry for the wait. Exam time and essays are killing me. And on top of that, my uni hall's internet went down :(

I know it's not the best reason for not updating, but i will never abandon this story. I hope all my readers will see this response and accept my apology.

Everything is handed in though, and exams are over, so back to writing :) Next chapter will be up within the week!!!

Again, really sorry to everyone for the length of time they've had to wait.

Thanks for reviewing

nmegirl


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Review #49, by Katie V My Sister Needs Help

13th May 2012:
erthyjukikguthterw! I love this story!!

Author's Response: I'm glad :) next chapter in the queue.

Sorry for the wait

Thank you for the review

nmegirl


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Review #50, by beccalovesbiebsandpotter My Sister Needs Help

2nd May 2012:
Oh my god... YOU. ARE. KILLING. ME. Jack and James.. FINALLY! And then Amy.. I think I might start to cry.. Hope she and the Baby are ok! :)

Author's Response: I don't mean to. sorry for the wait as well. I am a bad person. I will never do it again.

Chapter 55 is waiting for validation.

Thanks for reviewing

nmegirl


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